1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（7）及答案【2014高考英语湖北省汉阳市联考试题】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）请根据以下提示并结合一个事例，就“潜能无限”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。As we all know, ones potential is limitless. Especially in times of crisis, you can never imagine how powerful ones potential will be. Therefore, its unwise to set limits to your potential.
2、注意：1） 不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；2） 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数120以上。 【参考范文】Potential is limitlessIts universally acknowledged that a persons potential is limitless. When exposed to various pressure or challenges, many people will be sceptical of themselves, thinking they are incapable. Perhaps, never have they rea
3、lized how powerful a persons potential will be.An interesting story will never fade from my memory though I heard of it many years ago. An injured soldier was informed that he would spend his rest life on the wheelchair. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in drink every da
4、y. It never rains but pours.One day, hardly had he got out of a pub when he was robbed by three guys. Unwilling to give in, he struggled against them, however, which set off the robbers anger and therefore they set fire to his wheelchair. Just when the big fire was endangering his life, he suddenly
5、jumped out of his wheelchair and ran through a whole street swiftly. Then he stopped to take breath, only to find that he should walk and even run normally.The story makes me firmly believe that our potential is limitless. Consequently, its of vital importance for us to spread the wings of our mind
6、and grow our potential to the fullest. 【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） Li Yong, once a good student, became a very disappointing one. Having realized that, he carved some encouraging words on the desk to show his determination, which gave Li Hua a mixed feeling. Li Hua, a good friend of Li Yongs, was moved b
7、y his words, for the words showed he has realized his fault and decided to change. It also shows he is responsible and can face his mistakes bravely. However, curving on a desk is not right at all. If I were the desk, I would tell him: the knife carving hurts me and makes me look ugly. As the public
8、 property of our school, you should love me. You said action speaks louder than words. Why not keep the words in mind and take actions to behave well? As teenage students, we must remember that study comes first. So I often help my classmates with difficulty so that we can make progress together. Al
9、so we should encourage each other so as to make our class a better one. Only in this way, can we be good students in school, and make great contribution to the country in the future. 第二节：一、读写任务评分原则1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 短文概括5分 主题写作 20分。2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容
10、的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点 1. 以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。2. 然后以约120个词就李勇的做法发表你的看法，内容包括： (1) 李华为何因李勇的行为而感动，并说明其理由； (2) 假如你是“课桌”，你想对李勇说什么，为什么？ (3) 作为学生，你是如何为班级做出自己的贡献的？三、各档次的给分范围和要求：项目分值评分标准概括5按照要求概括了原
11、文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用
12、词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。
13、4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【2013界广东省三模】书面表达（满分25分）就学生该不该带手机的问题有许多不同的看法。现在许多学生用手机，他们认为使用手机是一种时尚；另外用手机和家人、朋友联系方便；但是一些学生违反学校
14、规则把手机带到班里，在班里就能听到手机铃声。一些学生甚至在班里发短信。最后请谈谈你的看法。根据上面的汉语提示写一篇120词左右的短文。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 作文：本文属于给出汉语提示的半开放性的写作。成文时应注意以下几点：1. 内容表达要条理要清晰。正反对比分明；2. 内容要点要齐全；3. 注意人称和时态。时态用一般现在时，人称用一、三人称；4. 注意使用关联词，使文章顺畅、自然。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句式。 【参考范文】One possible version:Im a senior high student. Now many students us
15、e mobile phones .They think its a fashion to use mobile phones .Besides, its very convenient to get in touch with their families and friends by using mobile phones. But some students break the rules in class. They bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones
16、 in class. Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phones.In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge .Therefore quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons .Those with mobile phones shouldnt take mobile phones to the cl
17、assroom . We are supposed to concentrate on our studies. The school should make a rule to forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom. 【2013界广东珠海市高三上期末质量监测】基本写作（共1小题；满分15分）高中学生特别是高三学生熬夜现象很广泛。某高中在200名学生中就睡觉时间做了一次抽样调查，结果如下：25名学生在晚上1点左右睡觉；150名学生在12点左右睡觉；25名学生在11点左右睡觉，高三学生没有一个人在11点之前睡觉。晚睡的
18、结果就是晚起，早晨7：20学生就需要进课室开始一天的学习，可是很多学生直到7点才起床，没有时间吃早餐就匆忙进课室。不少学生因为疲劳在上课时睡着了。请根据以上内容写一篇短文，表述学生的睡觉情况和晚睡的不良结果。参考词汇熬夜“stay up late写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）A survey, done among 200 senior school students, shows that it is very common for senior school students, especia
19、lly Senior 3 students, to stay up late. *150 of the 200 students (surveyed) go to bed around 12 oclock at night, 25 students go to bed as late as 1 oclock early the next morning and only 25 rest as early as 11 oclock, none of whom was in Senior 3. *Staying up late leads to getting up late. *Though s
20、tudents are required to start a days work at 7:20, many of them get up as late as 7 oclock in the morning, and then hurry into their classroom without breakfast. *As a result, some of them are so sleepy in the day as to fall asleep in class.【评卷建议】基础写作：要包括全部内容约10个信息点。因为内容充足，比较好写，难点只在如何把这些内容组合成5句话，因此句
21、子的组织结构成为重点。1-5分：只写出极少内容或部分相关词汇。6-9分：写出大部分内容，语法错误很多。10-12分：写出几乎全部内容，有部分语法错误。13-15分：写出全部内容，很少或没有语法错误。【2013界广东珠海市高三上期末质量监测】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）The train was forced to slow from 200 kilometers per hour to 120 km/h, a police officer with the Shenyang railway public security bureau told Xinhua News Agency. Th
22、e smoker, a 23-year-old from Dalian, was fined 200 yuan ($30) for violating regulations. Smoking is strictly forbidden on high-speed trains, even in the toilets, washing rooms and connecting areas between cars, Xinhua quoted the unidentified officer as saying. Smoking can trigger fire alarms or even
23、 cause a fire on the train. Violators may be subject to warnings, fines or administrative detention for disturbing order on public transport facilities, he said. On Saturday, the first day of the Harbin-Dalian high-speed railways operation, a passenger was found smoking on a train to Harbin, capital
24、 of Heilongjiang province, leading to a deceleration of the train, railway police said. The next day, a passenger in his 20s smoked in a washroom on a train also heading for Harbin, triggering the fire alarm. His actions nearly resulted in an emergency braking, according to Zhao Yang, chief conducto
25、r on the train. It is not uncommon for smokers to cause trouble on bullet trains. On Jan 11, a bullet train traveling from Shenzhen to Changsha was forced to brake after a smoker activated the emergency braking system. The halt delayed more than 20 trains. In December 2008, a passenger was given thr
26、ee days detention because his smoking caused a bullet train from Tianjin to Beijing to automatically brake just a minute after it had departed Tianjin Railway Station. 写作内容1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词写出你看完这篇报道后的想法，内容至少包括：（1）吸烟可能对公共安全造成的危害和对他人的影响。（2）你对在公共场所“吸烟”的看法。写作要求1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得
27、直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）The passage reports a fact that a smoker smoked on a high-speed train and caused it to automatically slow down abnormally. Some more cases are offered to show that smoking on a bullet train causes trouble and danger to others
28、.As is known to everybody, smoking is very common in China. Almost everybody just considers it as a personal affair and does it at free will wherever they feel like it. Not only do people smoke in their own homes, but they also smoke in almost every public place, from their offices to the theatre. T
29、hey feel it their private freedom, and few regard it as an offense to other people. But I do think smoking is not a personal affair but a social problem. When one smoker is enjoying his smoke, what he produces in his smoke affects the surroundings. He is at the same time forcing the people around to
30、 smoke second-hand. I once read a news story that a tourists smoking caused a fire on the top of Mount Huangshan. And I frequently read about fire disasters in homes or factories caused by smoking. I quite agree that trouble-making smokers should be severely punished with a view to cutting down smok
31、ing. I suggest that smoking be banned in all public places.【评卷建议】读写任务：内容概括要表达出吸烟造成火车减速的具体事件并总结出吸烟给高速列车造成麻烦和危险。表述部分主要表达读完此报道后对于吸烟危害的思考，可包括对吸烟很广泛的客观现实的认知，必须表达吸烟对他人的危害，可包括使别人被动吸烟、引发火灾给别人造成损失、导致火车延误给别人造成麻烦等，必须表达个人对于在公共场所吸烟的看法。内容概括：1-3分：句子正确但只有部分要点或有全部要点但句子的拼写、语法错误多。4-5分：句子正确、包括全部要点、字数不超过40。表述部分：1-5分：只写出极少内容或部分相关词汇。6-10分：内容少，有部分句子，拼写、语法错误较多、字迹潦草。11-14分：内容多，但不够连贯，拼写、语法错误较多，字迹清楚。15-17分：内容充实，叙述清楚，但拼写、语法错误较多，字迹清楚。18-20分：内容充实，语句连贯，没有或极少语法错误，字迹工整。- 9 - 版权所有高考资源网
