1、书面表达记叙文 书面表达议论文 书面表达说明文2014湖南卷 Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My magic_”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。内容：1说明设计理由；2介绍新功能。注意：1. 词数不少于120；2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【思路点拨】 题目中的英文提示虽然提到两个词，但是给考生自由发挥的空间却非常大，它的主要要求是介绍科技创新方面的发明，
2、并就此说明设计理由，介绍其新功能。因此本文的体裁是说明文。考生首先应该确定文章的标题，然后说明设计理由和介绍新功能。One possible version：My magic penPens are necessities for every student. So we are all familiar with them. I designed my pen. On the one hand, its easy to carry. On the other hand, its used not only for writing but also for other important as
3、pects.Firstly, I put some batteries in the pen and fix a light bulb, so when it is dark on my way home or to school, I can use it for a flasher. I wont be afraid of darkness any more. Secondly, I fix a tiny clock in the pen, so I can know the time and I dont have to wear my watch. At last, I put a s
4、harp knife on the top of the pen. I can either use it for cutting things or even protecting myself when I come across danger. Such is the pen which I designed. Isnt it useful and attractive? 【亮点点击】 本文语言规范，条理清楚，脉络清晰。过渡性词汇，如firstly, secondly, at last, on the one hand, on the other hand等的贴切使用使文章意义更连贯，逻
5、辑更严密。 本文总体上讲不失为一篇优秀的习作。 书面表达应用文2014安徽卷 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的真实信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that y
6、oure having such a bad time at the moment._Yours，Jamie【思路点拨】 本篇作文为写回信，为一篇应用文，但其格式已经给出，格式问题无需考虑。主要要求考生写出正文。审题时，需要解决好如下问题：一、写什么？这一信息包括在试题的背景介绍和内容要点两个部分之中。写信的背景：署名为Worried的同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。内容要点：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提出建议并说明理由。二、如何写？这包括两个层次的问题：首先，文章的布局谋篇，哪个先写，哪个后写。按照常理，应该先“表示理解并给予安慰”，然后再“提出
7、建议并说明理由”。其次，解决好形式与内容的统一。“表示理解并给予安慰”主要是论述，为说理。“提出建议并说明理由”主要是说明，建议或指导别人如何做，通常使用祈使句等表示建议的句型。本篇作文兼有议论和说明。三、时态、人称、词数等。本文的基调为现在范畴的时态，人称以第二人称为主。注意在行文中使用一些高级句型，提高作文档次。词数要求为120左右。【参考范文】Hi_Worried，Im_sorry_to_know_that_you_are_having_such_a_bad_time_at_the_moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those
8、periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting you
9、r anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of your anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I
10、hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours，Jamie2014江西卷 假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school？”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。1. 学会学习：方法、习惯等；2. 学会做人：真诚、友善等；3. 其他方面：考生自拟。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone! It is my honour
11、to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school._Thank you! 【思路点拨】今年的书面表达仍然属于半开放型作文试题，话题为学生所熟悉，要求考生以“高中阶段学习什么”为主题写一篇120词左右的发言稿，要求向高一学生传授高中三年的学习和生活体会。写作前要注意审题，由作文的要求可知，此篇文章首先应该抓住三个主要内容来展开写作，即如何学习，如何做人及其他方面；然后确定时态，由本文的内容可判断，本文应该以一般过去时为主，兼有一般将来时。考生同时应注意使用各种句式以及衔接词，尽量使文章语
12、言丰富，表达流畅。One possible version：Good_morning,_everyone!_It_is_my_honour_to_be_here_to_share_with_you_my_opinions_on_what_to_learn_in_senior_high_school.In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective met
13、hods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teache
14、rs and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.No pain, no gain. I am sure that with y
15、our great efforts, you will enjoy a colourful and fruitful life here.Thank_you！2014新课标全国卷 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：住宿 accommodation【思路点拨】 本文是一篇书信应用文。文章内容是李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，看到广告后感觉广告里有一些问题没说清楚，想要给校方写信咨询有关事项。考生要注意信的格式，还要注意时态的选择，即以一般
16、现在时为主，兼有将来时，人称用第一人称。注意恰当地使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅，还可以使用一些高级句型和词汇来提高作文档次。【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam，I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad，and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English course.First，when will the course start
17、 and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.You
18、rs faithfully，Li Hua2014新课标全国卷 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1. 家庭；2. 工作；3. 业余生活。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._【思路点拨】 本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面来畅想十年以后的自己。文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。参考要点：1.十年以后的生活和现在完全不同，会成为一个成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至
19、有了可爱的孩子。2.希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一名程序设计师。工作顺利，和同事相处融洽。3.在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳、登山等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。考生要根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【参考范文】I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future.
20、I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twentyeight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer. Ill enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Ill do a good job in whatever I
21、 do. In my free time, Ill continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, Ill travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colourful.2014辽宁卷 假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活创意无限(Innovations on Campus)”为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文
22、形式用英语写一份书面通知。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：校园campus创意作品innovation颁奖prizegiving【思路点拨】本文采取以图画为载体的方式实质考查提纲类写作，这与以前单纯提纲类写作相比难度有所增加，难点在于考生容易遗漏图画中所列要点。但此图画中文字描述较多，难度自然下降。由于体裁是通知，所以应较多使用灵活变化的短句，而少量使用长难句。图画中所列的要点较多，考生要注意点与点之间的合理有效结合。本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意语言力求
23、准确、简洁。根据图画的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 One possible versionNoticeAn exciting event “Innovations on Campus”is around the corner. Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.Note th
24、at your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prizegiving ceremony? Sure! Itll b
25、e held from 15：00 to 17：00 on June 18. So dont miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions, call Li Hua at 44876655.Come on, everybody! Its your show time.Student Union2014陕西卷 假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作
26、要求写一篇欢迎词。 写作要点：1. 表示对客人的欢迎；2. 介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等)；3. 表达对客人的祝愿。写作要求： 1. 词数不少于100；2. 称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear American guests，_【思路点拨】本题是应用文写作，体裁是写欢迎辞，是篇材料作文，且文体格式已经给出，因此在审题环节主要从以下几点着手：(1)主体时态：一般现在时；(2)主体人称：第三人称或第二人称；(3)写作要点：欢迎客人；“英语周”活动；活动目的；活动内容；祝愿。在审题结束后要注意表达的准确性，行文的逻辑性和句式、词汇的多样性，尽量使用多样化的词
27、汇和句式，并注意写作的层次，恰当地使用连接词和过渡性词汇，以增强文章的逻辑性和可读性。最后就是要注意书写的美观和标点符号的准确使用，避免拼写、标点等较低级的错误。【参考范文】Dear_American_guests，On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show t
28、oday. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The show will begin at two oclock this afternoon at t
29、he Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.2014四川卷 假设你是李夏，你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知：1. 考试日期与科目； 2. 考试准备情况；3. 考试时的状态；4. 对试题的感受； 5. 可能的考试结果。注意：1. 词数1
30、20左右； 2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：高考college entrance examinationDear Sam，Thank you for your concern. _Best wishes!Yours，Li Xia【思路点拨】 今年四川省的写作仍沿用往年的半开放式作文形式。本次写作以信为载体，要求考生介绍自己参加高考的相关事宜。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不需要考虑信的格式，只需审出此文要点：1.考试日期与科目；2.考试准备情况；3.考试时的状态；4.对试题的感受；5.可能的考试结果。考生
31、在写作过程中可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯并满足词数的要求。考生还可以根据行文的需要进行分段。One possible version：Dear_Sam，Thank_you_for_your_concern. Well, Im now taking the onceayear college entrance examination. We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th, on the first day of which Chinese and maths will be tested, the second day
32、geography, history, politics and English. Over the past ten months, we have been busy in preparing for this examination. Besides listening to teachers carefully in class, we often study deep into the night. Therefore, I believe I can succeed.At first, I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed do
33、wn because Chinese and maths, I came to realize, were very easy and English is my favourite subject. So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college. Best_wishes!Yours,_Li_Xia2014天津卷 假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。 请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍与本
34、地生活相关的信息(如气候、 饮食等)；3. 介绍本班情况；4. 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。注意：1. 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；2. 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实、行文连贯；3. 词数不少于100; 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。参考词汇：交换生 exchange studentDear Chris, Im Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven._Yours，Li Jin【思路点拨】 随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。
35、考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段表示欢迎，第二段介绍本地的生活，第三段介绍本班情况，以及为促进友谊Chris要做的一些事情。第二、三两点是作文的重点内容，需要多用一些笔墨。2. 时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】Dear_Chris，Im_Li_Jin,_monitor_of_Class_One,_Grade_Eleven. Im very delighted to learn that youre coming to our class to
36、study with us next term. I, on behalf of the whole class, welcome to China warmly. It is a great honour for me to tell you some information relevant to the local life. First, our traditional foods are steambread and rice. I hope you can get used to them soon. In addition, the climate here is very si
37、milar to that in the USA, so there is no need for you to worry about it. Now Ill introduce our class to you. Our class is made up of 52 students, all of whom are hardworking and friendly. There is no doubt that you can get along well with them. Our teachers are kind to us and treat us as their frien
38、ds. Last of all, I would appreciate it if you can do something, such as helping us practise our spoken English, and introducing something about American culture, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries. Looking forward to seeing you.Yours，Li_Lin_2014浙江卷
39、学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100120个词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。Dear Mr Wang，_【思路点拨】 从文章体裁分析，这是较典型的推荐信写作，主要让考生就图书馆需要的两种书展开叙述，同时写出推荐的理由。所以考生要根据自己的思路，先要表明写信的目的在于推荐书，然后补充一定的推荐理由，最后还要提出希望得到图书馆的认可和赞同。文章可以从三方面入手：
40、第一部分说明写信的理由；第二部分重点讲述推荐书目的理由；第三部分简要地进行感谢，希望得到认可。在写作过程中，要注意好词好句的运用，如使用give some suggestions, arouse the curiosity, in addition to, recommend, not onlybut also等重要的词汇词组。句式要多样，如可以用独立结构Knowing that our library is going to；主语从句What we need most are popular；表语从句That is why I recommend another；状语从句Ill be gla
41、d if you can等。One possible version：Dear_Mr_Wang，Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand scie
42、nce subjects better and arouse our curiosity about science discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspirations. That is why I recommend another category of books, literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts, fascinating stories and languag
43、e. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours_sincerely，Li_Yue 书面表达夹叙夹议文2014福建卷 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no lo
44、ss of enthusiasm.”Sir Winston Churchill内容要求：1你对该引语的理解；2你的相关经历；3恰当的结尾。注意：1短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3词数120左右。This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_【思路点拨】 本文要求表达出“对成功的理解”，属于议论文，同时还要求写出“相关经历”，故可以理解为这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。根据提示和要求可知，文章应分为三个部分，也就是三个段落，分别为：一、如何理解该引语；二、相关的经历；三、切题的、恰当的结束语。考生们写作时还要注意：1
45、. 第一、三段的时态应以一般现在时为主，第二段以一般过去时为主；2. 注意恰当使用连词，使文章自然、流畅。3. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高文章档次。One possible version: This_quotation_from_Winston_Churchill_tells_us_that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts
46、through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give u
47、p when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it.2014湖北卷 请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。S
48、mall things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：1.无须写标题；2除诗歌外，文体不限；3内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例； 4文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；5词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【思路点拨】我们所做的微小的事情对我们的社会能产生很大的影响，这告诉我们要关注生活中的小事。该作文属于夹叙夹议文，在描述的过程中注意使用合适的事例。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段式，第一段根据提供的句子提出自己的观点
49、；第二段通过事例证明自己的观点；第三段再用一两句话回归主题。第二段是本文的重点内容，需要多用一些笔墨。2. 时态：以一般过去时为主，辅以一般将来时；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当地使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文的档次。【参考范文】It isnt hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society. I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to
50、the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten years old was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent
51、her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.2014山东卷 某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。A friend in nee
52、d is a friend indeed. Where theres a will, theres a way.注意：1. 词数120150; 2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。参考词汇： 谚语 proverb 【思路点拨】 本篇写作要求是根据谚语写一篇短文，对于山东的考生来说是个新的题型，类似于湖北的高考写作，是半开放的文章，所提供的信息内容贴近学生的生活，学生有内容可写，难度不大。写作该文章时应用第一人称，时态可用过去时和一般现在时。文章可分三段来写。第一段解释谚语的含义；第二段描述体现谚语的个人经历；第三段总结你对谚语在生活中的理解。注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。 11山东、北京、天津、云南、贵州、江西 六地区试卷投稿QQ 2355394694
