1、第3讲 增加细节的六种技巧在英语书面表达中,增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中,考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容;在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容,否则很有可能造成内容不充实、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。适当增加细节内容,能够使习作流畅、丰满,达到应有的表达效果。1.增加同位语或定语从句(1)I am Li Hua,_(我们学校的学生会主席)./_(来自中国的一位交换生).技法探究素养提升chairman of the Students Union of my schoolan exchange student from China(2)I w
2、ant to have a pen friend,_(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).(3)On the Internet,people can seek information about their favourite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well,_(既省时又省钱).(4)To begin with,the theme of the show is Environmental Protection,_ _(这不仅有意义而且很有趣).hopefully a girl with interests similar to minewh
3、ich is both time-saving and economicalwhichwill be not only meaningful but also interesting2.列举具体的实例来补充说明(1)First,the mountain has the unique marvelous wonders,_(比如,黎明时冉冉升起的太阳和日落时的红色的晚霞).(2)In the past two weeks,we have had the cultural communication in many aspects,_(比如,在生活、学习,体育运动,文学艺术等方面).such as
4、 the risingsun at dawn and rosy clouds at sunsetsuch as life,study,sports,literature,arts and so on3.添加与所给信息有关的原因,结果,条件,让步,手段,目的等内容(1)_(因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣),I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.(2)_(为了获得一些实践经验),Im planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.(3)_(由于我有过丢身份
5、证的经历),I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional cultureIn order to get some practical experienceSince I have the experience of losing my ID card4.内容适当具体化(1)The activity will be held _(具体时间、地点)(2)I know the owner is Steven _(相关身份信息)(3)Whe
6、n I received the dictionary,I found that _(具体存在的问题,如错印、缺页等)from 9 a.m.to 10 a.m.on April 11 in Classroom501.from England,aged 38,married.there were some misprintsand pages from 23-45 were missing.5.表达感受,评价,愿望,倡议等(1)I think it is a good chance to appreciate local operas,_(这必将有助于你学到更多的中国文化).(2)We can
7、set out early,_(以便我们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书).(3)There are quite a few missing pages,_(变得无法使用).which will surely helpyou learn more about Chinese cultureso that we can have more time to read and select booksmaking it impossible to use6.补充功能性(交际性)语言(1)_(如果你能帮我这个忙,我将不胜感激).(2)_(期待着你早日回复).I would greatly appreciat
8、e it if you could do me the favourLooking forward to your early reply【技法点金】增加细节打造美句1.从单句练起对照不同类型的作文题,先从开头句写起,保证句子不出错。在阅读范文开头句之后,开始就每种类型的练习题,模仿着写第一句,一次写5篇以上的作文的开头句,再参考范文,加以改正。开头句练习23天后,再练习主体内容段。如此以23天为一个周期,每个周期内只专注练习一个句子,这样慢慢完成对于全类型作文的整体训练。2.积累好的词句及学会连贯、自然的表达积累英语作文中有亮点的表达方式,并且对精彩写作手法或句式进行13次仿写。在写作中添加
9、细节时,学习站在对方的角度,合理增加内容,使表达生动和准确;或者根据生活常识适当添加实例,切勿画蛇添足。每一种拓展内容的方式都要在写作练习中去尝试使用12种,连续练习6篇写作,才能逐渐掌握详略得当,重点突出,合理拓展的写作手法。3.积累并背诵交际性功能句型文章有文体类别,不同的文体都有不同的写作格式或语言特征。总结不同文体的功能性句型,它们不仅符合语言表达习惯,而且在写作中也起到了事半功倍的作用。【过关检测】(2020淄博三模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友James对中国敦煌艺术展很感兴趣,来信向你咨询。请你给他提供一些建议,内容包括:1.参观前的准备;2.邀请他来体验。注意:1.词数80左右;
10、2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear James,_ _ _ Yours sincerely,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear James,You have asked me for my advice with regard to Dunhuang Art Exhibition and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.Youd better surf the Internet to gain a general knowledge of the history and culture of Dunhuang in advance.You will feel shocked if you could see this amazing art.Id like to accompany you to visit Dunhuang and I am willing to share further details about this issue.I hope my suggestions will be of help to you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
