1、 全国高考英语应用文写作president 主席,总统the Student Union 学生会donation 捐献on behalf of 代表hesitate v.犹豫environmental protection 环境保护plastic bag 塑料袋environment-friendly 对环境友好的a variety of 各种各样的rubbish 垃圾advantage 优势;好处charge v.收费cover v.涵括;覆entrance fee 入场费,门票the college entrance examination 高考subject 科目make every e
2、ffort to do sth.全力以赴做某事nervous 感到紧张good grades 好的成绩social activity 社会活动society 社会1.Id like to know something more about.我想知道更多关于的信息。2.I am writing to ask for more information about it.我写信来询问更多关于它的消息。3.By the way,do you need any other help?Please dont hesitate to letme know.顺便问一下,您需要其他的帮助吗?请不要犹豫,随时告知
3、我们4.There are some pieces of information that Id like to share with you.有一些消息我想要和你分享。5.I have made every effort to prepare for the exam for years.多年来我竭尽全力准备这次考试。6.The most significant thing you should keep in mind is that.你需要记住的最重要的事情是7.There is no doubt that I will get good grades.毫无疑问我可以取得好成绩。1.I
4、am writing to ask of information about the EnglishContest.1.of改为for2.I am writing to you in the hope that I will be told aboutthe meeting to be held the next month.2.删掉next month前面的the3.I would grateful to receive a promt reply.3.would后加be4.Thank you for your kind to have done me a favour.4.kind改为ki
5、ndness5.It would be greatly appreciate if you could provide us withsome details.5.appreciate改为appreciated6.I want to ask whether the guides will provide accommodation for we.6.we改为us7.We want to choice the Ice Mountain route,which willtake four days from July 31 to August 3.7.choice改为choose8.Another
6、 point I still not sure is what the price is.8.I后加am9.Firstly,Im curious to know about that the coursearrangement.9.删掉that10.I would also want to know the time schedule of thesecourse to see whether Ill have time to visit other places inAmerica on weekends.10.course改为courses;或者these改为the/this【2014全国
7、新课标1卷:夏令营信息咨询】假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。参考词汇:住宿accommodation 满分佳作(一)Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend asummer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad,and Id like toknow something more about your six-week English cours
8、e.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there perweek?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course andwhether accommodation is included.Would there be host family oruniversity dormitory?I am looking
9、forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua满分赏析第一句进行自我情况介绍,第二句点明写信的目的。这样显得大方得体。考生切记不要只完成广告询问的内容,否则书信就显得唐突了。后面的咨询点用到了First,Besides等连词,条理清晰。在问住宿类型时,考生提出了自己的选项:是住接待家庭(host family)还是大学的宿舍(dormitory)。是很适度的拓展。满分佳作(二)Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua and I am a student from China.I saw youradvertise
10、ment on the Internet and I would like to attend the six-weekEnglish course you offer during my summer vacation.I am writing toask for more information about it.First of all,Id like to know when the classes will start and howmany students there will be in a class.Second,how many course hoursper week
11、will there be?Third,how much is the course?Finally,whattypes of accommodation will you provide?Personally,Id prefer aquiet room where I can sleep alone.Is this possible?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,Li Hua满分赏析第一段进行自我情况介绍,点明写信的目的。这样显得大方得体。考生切记不要只完成广告询问的内容,否则书信就显得唐突了。后面的咨询点用到
12、了First of all,Second,Third,Finally,等连词,条理清晰。在咨询住宿类型时,提出了个人的喜好。Is it possible显示了意见咨询的语气,并不是要求的语气。【2015天津卷改编改编:咨询对方的需求】作文原题假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。(1)自我介绍;(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;(3)询问对方的其他需求。参考词汇:学生会 the Student Union作文翻译 亲爱的Chris,我是李华,中国成
13、都中学的一个八年级学生。作为学生会的主席,我想和你谈谈代表我的学校捐赠图书的事情。有这么多美国学生喜欢中文,我很高兴。当然,我猜学习它就不那么容易了。其实,为了帮助你们学好中文,我们会捐赠300册关于中国传统历史的图书给你们班。有了这些书,我希望你们都能够知道更多中国历史和文化。顺便问一下,你们需要其他帮助吗?请不要犹豫告知我。你的,李华Dear Chris,This is Li Hua,a grade eight student from Chenguang Middle School,China.As the president of the Student Union,I want to
14、 talk with youabout the donation of books on behalf of my school.Im very glad that there are so many American students loving Chinese.Of course,I guess it is not so easy for you to learn it.Actually,to helpyou learn Chinese well,we will donate to your class 300 books which areabout traditional Chine
15、se history.With these books,I hope that all ofyou can know more about Chinese history and culture.By the way,do you need any other help?Please dont hesitate tolet me know.Yours,Li Hua【2008安徽卷改编:回复环保购物袋使用的咨询】作文原题假定你是李华。David是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣,来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信,主要内容如下:1.感谢他的关注;2.简要介绍相关情况;3.谈谈你的
16、感想。参考词汇:环保购物袋environment-friendly shopping bag关注 concern作文翻译 6月8日亲爱的David,在你的信中,你问我关于在中国环保购物袋的使用的事情。以前我从没有想到你知道中国这么多事情。嗯,这里是一些相关信息。塑料袋对我们来说十分方便,但是它也可能造成我们称之为“白色污染”的问题。由于人口是世界最多,中国用的塑料袋也是世界最多,这导致了污染。面对这个问题,政府决定鼓励人们使用环保购物袋而不用塑料袋,环保塑料袋没用了可以被处理,希望这能有效地减少白色污染。其实,我赞同使用这种购物袋,因为它们不仅能够保护环境,还能节省自然资源。毕竟,我们应该保护
17、地球,这样才能有一个干净的地方生存下去。你的,李华Dear David,In your letter you asked me about the use of environment-friendlyshopping bags in China.It never occurred to me that you have knownso much about China.Well,here is some information about it.Plastic bags are of great convenience for us,but it may also causewhat we
18、call“white pollution”.Having the largest population in theworld,China uses the most plastic bags in the world,which contributesto pollution.Faced with this problem,the government has decided toencourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags,whichcan be treated when they are of no use,inst
19、ead of plastic ones,hopingthis can effectively reduce white pollution.Actually,I approve of the use of such bags due to the fact that theycan not only protect the environment but also save natural resources.After all,we should protect the earth so that we have a clean place tostay.Yours,Li Hua【2005全
20、国卷:咨询旅行事项】假定你是李华,正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。参考词汇:牛津 Oxford费用 feeDear Sir/Madam,.Yours,Li HuaDear Sir/Madam,Im writing for more information about the day tour toLondon.As a student at Oxford University,Id like to know ifyou have any special price
21、 for students.As for the moneyyou charge,does it cover the entrance fees for visiting theplaces listed?What about lunch?Is it included?Or do I needto bring along my own food?How long will the tour last?Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day,Id like toknow the time to return.Besides,is t
22、here any time forshopping?I really want to have a look at the big stores inLondon.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【2014四川卷改编:高考介绍】假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况,请根据以下要点回信告知。1.考试日期与科目;2.考试准备情况;3.考试时的状态;4.对试题的感受;5.可能的考试结果。参考词汇:高考 the College Entrance Examination Dear Sam,Thank you for your con
23、cern.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【2014四川卷改编:高考介绍】Dear Sam,Thank you for your concern.The College Entrance Examination,which includes four subjects,is on June 7th and 8th.There are somepieces of information that Id like to share with you.To begin with,I am under the impression that I have made everyeffor
24、t to prepare for the exam for years.In addition,what may interestyou is that I am really nervous and uneasy when taking the exam.Lastbut not least,the most significant thing you should keep in mind isthat most of the questions are a little bit easy if you are well prepared.As far as I am concerned,o
25、nly by studying hard can you succeed.There is no doubt that I will get good grades.Best wishes!Yours Li Hua【2007四川卷改编:告知高考暑假安排】假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信,询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根据以下要点,用英语回一封信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。1.休息;2.读书;3.陪伴父母;4.参加社会活动。参考词汇:高考 college entrance examination社会活动 social activities Dear Henry,Im glad to r
26、eceive your letter.Best wishes!Li Hua【2007四川卷改编:告知高考暑假安排】Dear Henry,Im glad to receive your letter.Its a pleasure for me to tell youmy plan of this coming summer vacation after the College EntranceExamination.First of all,a good rest is needed because I do feel tired afterthe hard work of all these
27、years.Of course,Ill do some reading for fun,and for knowledge as well.Whats more,Ill spend some time stayingwith my parents,chatting with them and doing some housework.Theyve done so much for me,you know.Finally,if possible,Ill takepart in some social activities so thatI can know more about thesociety.Best wishes!Li Hua 全国高考英语应用文写作