1、写作任务你校英文报将推出 Famous People 专栏，现面向全校学生征文。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍美国科学家托马斯爱迪生(Thomas Edison)。生卒年份18471931 主要经历及贡献童年时因善思好问被视为愚笨，退学后自学成才。一生有 1 000 多项发明，比如电灯、留声机(phonograph)等。注意：1词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作指导一、审题定调本写作要求介绍一位名人，属于记叙文的写作范畴。介绍名人的关键之处在于突出其主要经历和贡献，介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。二、谋篇布局此类文章一般采用“总分总”模式，对名人的生平、
2、主要事迹和贡献进行介绍，使读者对其有一个较为清晰和全面的了解。针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：第一部分：总体介绍(包括生卒年份、主要功绩等)；第二部分：介绍主要经历及贡献；第三部分：总结全文并发表评论。三、组织语言第一部分：总体介绍普通表达高级表达.was born in.and died in.He was a great American scientist and inventor.,who was born in.and died in.,was a talented(有天资的)and brilliant(杰出的)scientist and inventor.第二部分：介绍人物
3、的主要经历及贡献。普通表达高级表达 When he was a child,he liked to ask a lot of.and was regarded as silly.After he left school,he learned by himself and won great success.,he made every effort to do scientific research and invented.like.Some of them have changed the world.When young,he was considered to be foolish,o
4、wing to his preference for asking.After leaving school,he educated himself and achieved great success.,he devoted(致力于)himself to scientific research and came up with.inventions like.,some of which have had a lasting influence on our life.第三部分：总结全文并发表评论。普通表达高级表达.was really a great scientist who inspi
5、res us to work hard and try our best to realize our dreams.was really a distinguished(卓越的)scientist who inspires us to follow our heart and try our best to pursue(追求)our dreams.1给某人留下好印象：He leaves a good impression on/upon.She makes a good impression on/upon.He leaves me a good impression.2介绍优点：He i
6、s enthusiastic and full of energy.She is an active lady.She is very patient with.He has the following advantages.【范文展示】普通范文Thomas Edison was born in 1847 and died in 1931.He was a great American scientist and inventor.When he was a child,he liked to ask a lot of strange questions and was regarded as
7、 silly.After he left school,he learned by himself and won great success.In his lifetime,he made every effort to do scientific research and invented more than 1,000 things like the electric light and the phonograph.Some of them have changed the world.Edison was really a great scientist who inspires u
8、s to work hard and try our best to realize our dreams.高级范文Thomas Edison,who was born in 1847 and died in 1931,was a talented and brilliant scientist and inventor.When young,he was considered to be foolish,owing to his preference for asking strange questions.After leaving school,he educated himself a
9、nd achieved great success.In his lifetime,he devoted himself to scientific research and came up with more than 1,000 inventions like the electric light and the phonograph,some of which have had a lasting influence on our life.Edison was really a distinguished scientist who inspires us to follow our
10、heart and try our best to pursue our dreams.实战演练假定某英文杂志的 Famous People 栏目向中学生征集稿件，请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文，介绍中国古代著名教育家、哲学家孔子并投稿。生卒年份公元前 551公元前 479主要经历及贡献儒学(Confucianism)创始人；三岁丧父，母亲将他抚养长大；靠自己努力成为中国第一个私塾教师；其学说对中国社会有深远的影响。注意：1词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。One possible version：Confucius,who was born in 551 BC and
11、died in 479 BC,was famous around the world as a philosopher and educator.When he was three years old,his father died and he was brought up by his mother.Confucius managed to become the first private teacher in ancient China through his own efforts.Word of his great knowledge began to spread.His teachings are called Confucianism.Confucius has had a great influence on Chinese society.People today still study many sayings and ideas that Confucius taught to his students about 2,500 years ago.
