1、一、写作方法十句作文法 主题句第一段（开头） 扩展句 主题句 扩展句 扩展句第二段（正文） 扩展句 （要视内容而决定扩展句的多少） 扩展句 扩展句 扩展句第三段（结尾）结尾句二、注意事项1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点主题。2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。4. 通常采用一般现在时。5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。三、总分法自己写自己要遵守的规则总：先提出整体问题分：具体叙述相关情况【常用句型】In my opinion.I dont think.You should/s
2、houldnt do.Youd better (not) do.Its + adj. + for sb. to do sth.【典例】随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，成为手机控一族。假定你是某校学生，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，向某英文报社投稿，谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。手机控的表现沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天、看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现手机控的危害对健康不利，影响学习你的建议注意：1. 内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；3. 90个单词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Today, m
3、any people, especially young people, are phone freaks. They _参考词汇：手机控a phone freak 焦虑anxious(adj.) 沉迷于be addicted to【解题思路】第一步：判断主题对手机控一族的看法。第二步：定时态一般现在时；定人称第三人称为主，第一人称为辅。第三步：列提纲：(1) 手机控的表现沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天、看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现等；(2)手机控的危害对健康不利，影响学习等；(3) 你的建议（一至两条）。第四步：组句成篇。学科&网【佳作展示】Today, m
4、any people, especially young people, are phone freaks. They are addicted to playing mobile phones. They often use phones to chat with others, watch movies, play games, listen to music or take photos and so on. In fact, they will be anxious without phones. However, it does harm to their study. Becaus
5、e they spend too much time playing with phones. They cant have a good rest. They dont have time to do their homework. They cant get good grades. In my opinion, we must use it in a right way. If we take it to school, we mustnt use it during the class. And remember that study is our first work.（一）假如你是
6、第二中学的一名初三学生刘红，你要写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend，告诉他你遇到的问题，并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息，写完这封信。姓名刘红星座 爱好Gemini, (curious, outgoing) 听音乐，看动作片，偶像是成龙最喜爱的颜色green (energetic, new life), orange (joy, success)存在问题父母管得很紧，几乎不给时间玩；迷恋上网聊天，经常晚回家，不能准时交作业；学习成绩越来越差，父母要求你放弃上网，为此很苦恼。目前需求希望得到建议。注意：1. 词数90词左右。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。2. 信中须包括
7、所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。Dear Sigmund Friend,My name is Liu Hong. Im a Grade 9 student in No. 2 Middle School._Can you give me some useful advice? I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Liu Hong（二）新来的班主任张丽想了解班里同学的情况。假如你是王慧，请你根据下面的内容要求，给她发一封e-mail说明自己的情况，并请她给你提些建议，要求80词左右。开头和结尾已经给出
8、，不计入总词数。内容要求： 学习任务重，睡眠不足，缺少体育活动，同学间缺乏沟通和交流； 在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。Dear Ms Zhang, Im very glad to write to you _Best wishes Wang Hui（一）Dear Sigmund Friend,My name is Liu Hong. Im a Grade 9 student in No. 2 Middle School. I am Gemini. Im curious and outgoing. My favorite hobbies are listening to music and
9、watching action movies. My idol is Jacky Chen. I like green and orange best because green stands for energetic and new life and orange for joy and success.But now I need your help. My parents are so strict with me that I have no time to play. I am crazy about chatting on the internet, so I often go
10、home late, in that case I cant hand in my homework on time. Because my scores become worse and worse, my parents ask me to give up surf net. I am very upset. Can you give me some useful advice? I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Liu Hong（二）Dear Ms Zhang, Im very glad to write to you.I ha
11、ve a lot of trouble these days. For example, every day I have a lot of homework to do. I dont have enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk or play together. When I get back home from school, Im not allowed to do many things, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet or listening to my favorite music. I dont know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions? Best wishes. Wang Hui6
