1、Section Writing 景点介绍类说明文写作技法指导1景点介绍类的文章就是对某一地方的自然环境,或对其过去、现在及未来的状况进行描述,向人们展示该地区的风貌,包括其地域特点、位置、人口、面积等。2抓住该地点的基本特征。介绍地点,目的是让人明白无误地了解它,并且给人留下深刻的印象。因此写作时要首先抓住其基本特征,即该地点区别于其他地方的标志性特征。3要遵循一定的写作顺序,使文章条理清楚、中心突出。介绍地点通常采用空间顺序,即按照事物的空间存在形式,从外到内、从上到下、从前到后依次介绍或说明,反之亦然。4适当地运用描写,以增加文章的文采,使写作内容更能打动读者,达到最佳的表达效果。积“黄金
2、”词句,写高分文章1I cant wait to tell you something about the famous Tang Paradise in Xian.我迫不及待向你介绍西安著名的大唐芙蓉园的一些情况。2It covers an area of 1,000 mu,including 300 mu of water area,and the construction of it costs 1.3 billion yuan.它占地面积为 1 000 亩,其中水域面积为 300 亩,共耗资人民币 13 亿元。3It is a clean and beautiful city with
3、 trees,flowers,and green grass everywhere.城市清洁美丽,树木花草满城。4The beautiful town is located/situated on the west of the lake.这座美丽的小镇位于湖的西部。5Sydney is the biggest city in Australia,which has many places of interest,among which is the Opera House.悉尼是澳大利亚最大的城市,有很多名胜,悉尼歌剧院就在其中。6Our school,which takes up 63 s
4、quare kilometers,is very large in size.我们学校面积很大,占地 63 平方千米。三步写作规范题目要求以下是临沂王羲之公园(Wang Xizhi park)的简介,请根据以下内容要点写一篇 80 词左右的短文。1王羲之公园位于临沂市东部;2在王羲之公园中可以领略书圣(calligrapher)的早期生活以及欣赏王羲之的书法;3可以在公园出口处的戏院里欣赏表演;4在戏院后面的美食街(the Eating Street)可品尝各种各样的食品;5入场费为 30 元,活动费全免。第一步:搜索单元词汇1消遣;娱乐 2欣赏3独一无二的4各种各样的5入场费amusemen
5、tappreciateuniquevariousadmission第二步:巧用单元语法和句型(一)翻译句子1王羲之公园位于临沂市东部。Wang Xizhi park in the east of Linyi city.2它是一个休闲娱乐的好去处。It is a good place.3另外,你可以在戏院里欣赏精彩的表演。_,you can _ wonderful performances at the theatre.is/lies/is located/is situatedfor relaxation and amusementBesides/I additionenjoy/appreci
6、ate 4它在公园的出口处。It is near.5那里所有的美食都很可口。All the food there is.6所有的美食很便宜。All the food is.(二)根据所给要求,用以上句子完成句式升级升级一:用定语从句连接 1、2 句the exit of the parkdeliciouscheapWang Xizhi park,which lies in the east of Linyi city,is a good place for relaxation and amusement.升级二:用定语从句连接 3、4 句升级三:用“not only .but also.”连
7、接 5、6 句升级四:把上句改为倒装句Besides,you can appreciate wonderful performances at the theatre,which is near the exit of the park.All the food there is not only delicious but also cheap.Not only is all the food there delicious,but also it is cheap.第三步:连接过渡成篇Wang Xizhi park,which lies in the east of Linyi city,
8、is a good place for relaxation and amusement.You can get there by bus easily.In this park,you will learn a lot about the early life of the great calligrapher,appreciate the different styles of his unique handwriting.Besides,you can appreciate wonderful performances at the theatre,which is near the e
9、xit of the park.You may just go there on foot.If you are hungry,walk to the Eating Street to treat yourself to the various food of different flavors.Not only is all the food there delicious,but also it is cheap.Traveling in this park wont cost you too much.The admission fee to the park is 30 yuan,and all the activities in the park are free.Why not come to enjoy yourself at Wang Xizhi park?You are sure to have a great time.“单元加餐练”见“Unit 5 单元加餐练”(单击进入电子文档)“单元质量检测”见“Unit 5 单元质量检测”(单击进入电子文档)谢谢 观 看