1、专题五 书面表达江苏高考书面表达近五年考情统计年份题材体裁类型2019外国交换生来学校访问，欢迎仪式上是否应该穿传统服装议论文读写2018对消费排名的看法议论文读写2017电影票房收入变化的原因及对其走向的看法议论文读写2016阐述你对网络投票的看法议论文读写2015交通法规的意识与理念议论文读写命题分析分析近五年江苏考情可以看出，江苏高考书面表达的题目设置场景越来越具有真实性，与生活实际联系越来越紧密，内容包括日常生活、学校生活、社会文化等方面。所提供的材料既有读写式的文字介绍也有图表，信息量大，这对考生的材料分析、概括提炼能力要求很高，同时具有一定的开放性，既便于考生写出紧扣主题的个性化内
2、容，又能防止考生出现逐字逐句翻译，忽视主题的做法。试卷怎么评江苏高考书面表达评分标准及解读评分标准第五档2125分完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档1620分完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误主要是因尝试使用较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到
3、了预期的写作目的。第三档1115分基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。评分标准解读(一)如何理解“覆盖所有内容要点”评分标准中对考生所要求的“覆盖所有内容要点”，就是要求考生在写作时要认真审题，确保要点“全而不漏”，要点全面是作文得高分的必要条件。(二)如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”这里所说的“应用了较多的词汇”，是指词汇使用的多样性，如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。(三)
4、如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构”“较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性。毋庸置疑，单调的句式和结构、长度相近的句子会使文章呆板单调，缺乏生气和活力，而灵活多变的句式则使行文丰富多彩、生动、自然、流畅。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映出作者的语言运用能力。(四)如何理解“上下文的连贯性”评分标准指出，书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯性”，并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑”。此处所说的连贯性，是指段与段、句与句之间以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排，做到在文意与结构上层次分明、条理清楚、
5、连贯流畅。高分怎么得内在美多得档次分，外在美赚取印象分一、内在美1要点要齐全根据评分标准，漏掉内容要点会降低得分档次，因此写作时要列出要点，避免遗漏。2用词要得体用词讲究准确、得体。写作用词时需要考虑身份、语气、风格等因素，也要考虑词义的褒贬。3错误要避免近几年低分作文中出现了很多错误，像审题错误、词汇错误、语法错误和中式英语等，这些都是妨碍我们得高分的绊脚石，应尽力避免。4词汇要高级高级词汇的选用不仅能给人新颖的感觉，而且能彰显考生扎实的语言功底，从而使阅卷者给出高分。5句式要多样考生要想使所写的文章凸显文采，就必须写出几个漂亮的句子来，为文章增添色彩。6衔接要自然衔接过渡词可以使文章结构紧
6、凑、前后连贯，能很好地起到穿针引线的作用，使逻辑更严密。二、外在美1分段要合理近两年江苏高考的作文范文及高分作文，绝大多数分为3个自然段。第一段：30词左右的摘要；第二段：根据阅读材料所描述的某一事件或现象发表个人看法或建议；第三段：总结全文内容。2书写要美观书写整洁漂亮能首先给阅卷老师一个良好的印象，先声夺人。为使书写美观，书写应符合英文书写习惯，字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称，无涂改、增补现象。分析近五年江苏高考可以看出，高考书面表达主要考查读写任务型作文。读写任务型作文的写作内容一般分为两部分：写作内容一为摘要写作，即概括短文大意；写作内容二，就某个主题发表个人看法。“读写任务”是“读
7、”和“写”的有机结合，“读”的材料是为后面的“写”提供情景；同样，“写”也是对“读”的材料的思考和延伸。第一讲如何运用“七步作文法”读写任务型作文从审题到成文可采用以下七个步骤：第一步：仔细审题，明确题目要求通过审题明确文章主题、写作文体、写作内容、主要时态和主体人称等问题。其中主体人称，就是要确定主要以第几人称进行写作，需要考生特别注意。第二步：阅读短文，抓住内容要点记叙文的内容要点是：时间(when)，地点(where)，什么人(who)，原因(why)，做了什么事(what)，过程怎么样(how)，这是记叙文的六要素。议论文的内容要点是论点、论据和论证。其关键是找出主题句或结论句。若文中
8、有一分为二的观点，两种观点都要概括，不要漏掉其中一方的观点。第三步：概括大意，转述作者观点记叙文用自己的话将记叙文的六要素串联起来。但有时也不一定面面俱到，只需回答下列问题即可：谁做了什么事(who did what)？结果怎样(what was the result)？文章揭示了什么(不一定有)?议论文用自己的话表达论点、论据和结论句。第四步：顺承过渡，引出个人观点写了摘要后，用过渡句引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的故事。第五步：详写例证，论证个人观点记叙文编写与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事(亲身经历或虚构)。议论文在提出自己的观点后，再用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。第六步：得出
9、结论，注意前后呼应举完事例论证之后，要进一步概括归纳自己的观点，升华主题，并注意首尾照应。第七步：修饰润色，使其锦上添花一查人称是否符合要求；二查语法方面的问题，包括用词、时态等方面的错误；三查逻辑关系，看前后观点是否一致；四查是否使用一些较为高级的词汇和句型，如非谓语动词结构、with复合结构、定语从句、倒装句型、恰当的连接词、短语动词等。(2019江苏高考)请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Li Jiang：Have you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our s
10、chool next month.Su Hua：Yes，I have.Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.Li Jiang：But it seems people have different opinions.Su Hua：What do you think?Li Jiang：I think its a good idea.Its an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to intern
11、ational students.Su Hua：I agree.But we dont have to dress that way.Thats not our daily style.Besides, its not very convenient.Li Jiang：You see, its the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for.Just the right occasion.Su Hua：I prefer the school uniform.Its nice.Its also a better displa
12、y of our school culture.写作内容1用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；2在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由(不少于两点)。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。点拨第一步：仔细审题，明确题目要求1确定文体：根据写作内容第2点“在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由(不少于两点)。”，可以看出是议论文。2确定主体时态：本文为议论文，主体时态应为一般现在时。第二步：阅读上述对话，抓住要点根据写作内容和写作要求可以列出以下三个要点：1写出文章的摘要
13、；2谈你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装；3得出你的结论。第三步：概括大意，转述作者观点并引出自己的观点本文为分析社会现象类的议论文，写作时要首先提炼出文章的主题。根据摘要写出过渡性用语，引出自己的观点。第四步：详写例证，举例说明你(反对或者赞成)的理由(1)The traditional Chinese dress is a little bit strange to walk around in it.(2)We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. (3)The traditional Chinese dress cant reflect
14、the unique culture of our school.(4)The choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money.第五步：总结全文，得出结论The school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.第六步：加上过渡句、连接词，用上高级句式，使其锦上添花To begin with; Besides; In addition；Whats more; Last but not least
15、; on one hand; on the other hand; for one thing; for another .；There is no denying that .参考范文Li Jiang and Su Hua dont agree on what to wear when greeting the British students.Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.I prefer the school uniform to
16、the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. There is no denying thatthe traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, but it is a little bit strange to walk around in it.We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day.Besides, the traditional Chinese dress can
17、t reflect the unique culture of our school.From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school.Whats more, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.Therefore, the school u
18、niforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.(2019南京、盐城一模)请认真阅读下面的图文信息，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Sports classes are very important to students health and overall wellbeing. The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention stated that over the past three years obesity
19、in children and adolescents has doubled because of diet and lack of activity.A recent survey by the China Youth Daily showed that 64.7 percent of the 2,003 respondents found sports classes in middle schools unsatisfactory.The government has begun to address the problem. According to a guideline on h
20、igh school entrance exam reform released by the Ministry of Education in 2016, scores of physical education will be considered in enrollment for senior high schools.写作内容1用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2结合上述信息，简要分析目前中学体育课上得不够好的原因；3就如何改进目前中学体育课现状提出你的建议(不少于两点)。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整
21、，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文：Critical as sports classes are to students, approximately two thirds of the respondents of a recent survey are dissatisfied with them. Luckily, some measures have been taken to address them.The reasons behind this are various. To begin with, schools and even some parents are ind
22、ifferent to sports classes, which makes it possible for other classes to occupy sports classes. Besides, students are burdened with great academic stress, leaving them inadequate time for sports. Furthermore, imperfect sports facilities also lead to students low level of participation.Something must
23、 be done to improve the situation. First of all, the government should allocate funds to improve facilities for sports. Also, schools are expected to ease the academic burden on students and allow them to have more time to rest and develop their interest in sports. Meanwhile, professional sports tea
24、chers are supposed to be employed to ensure that students have adequate sports classes.第二讲如何写记叙文的摘要对记叙文进行概括时，要抓住原文的人物、事件、结果三大要素。有些记叙文的结尾有一个点题句，表达深刻内涵或故事带给人们的启示，在写摘要时也需把故事寓意表达出来。一、记叙文摘要的模板1没有寓意只单纯介绍事件的记叙文摘要模板(1)人物事件(2)人物事件结果2篇末有表示文章内涵的记叙文摘要模板人物事件结果启示二、记叙文摘要的写法要素串联法1寻词摘句，确定要素记叙文通常包含时间(when)、地点(where)、
25、人物(who)、事件(what)、起因(why)、经过(how)等六大要素。在阅读时要圈定这些要素。2整合信息，串联要素列出上述要素和关键词后，需要对其进行整合，把所圈定的要素按一定的逻辑顺序整合。在整合时要有所取舍，对于有助于揭示主题的主要信息，应该全部概括；而对于主题之外的内容要毫不吝啬地舍弃。3认真审题，注意表达表达时要注意以下三点：(1)确定人称：如果原文是第一人称，在转述时一般要改为第三人称。(2)确定时态：记叙文常以一般过去时为主。若记叙文中有作者从中得到的“启示”或“意义”等，一般用一般现在时表达。(3)确定词数与句数：摘要要求是“以约30个单词概括”，从近两年高考阅卷的实际来看
26、，满分作文概括的词数在2638个单词之间。受词数限制，概括部分一般用13句表达，以用2句最佳。句子过多，要么内容累赘，要么句式过于简单，均会影响表达效果。三、记叙文摘要的常用句式1The writer tells us his experience .2The author shares his experiences .3From the passage, we know that .4The passage tells us that .5In the passage .请阅读下面短文，然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。注意写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。(江苏高考)In recent
27、 years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast online votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”Li_Jiang,_a_high_school_student,_is_invited_to_vote_in_the_“Best_Police_Officer”_compet
28、ition,_organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He_is_deeply_moved_by_their_glorious_deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su_Hua_is_invi
29、ted_by_his_uncle_to_vote_for_his_cousin_in_the_“Future_Singer”_competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other s
30、ingers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.点拨第一步：圈定本文的要素(见原文画线部分)whoLi Jiang, Su Huawhatare invited to vote for othersresultone is moved but the other feels troubledtopicvote or not第二步：确定人称和时态人称：本文讲述了两个学生被要求投票的事情，应该用第三人称；时态：描述社会现象，主体时态是一般现在时。第
31、三步：串联要素，确定表达From the passage, we can see two students are invited to vote for others.One feels moved after reading the competitors stories while the other is put into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.请阅读下面短文，然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。注意写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。At the age of fortyfive, my usually wellordered li
32、fe became disturbed with changes. After twentytwo years of working for a bank, I lost my job. My belief has always been “Change is good, and change is progress.” I eagerly expected to step out of my comfort zone to do something new and different and having a positive attitude made all the difference
33、 in the way I looked at the future.First, I decided to return to college and graduate. With a little nervousness and a lot of determination, I attended evening classes, and became an adult student. Oral presentations were often required for one class. By nature, I am shy, and speaking in front of pe
34、ople terrified me. As I stood in front of the other adults with whom I shared a common goal, my knees were visibly knocking, and my heart beat fast. The next time it was easier, and soon I was starting to enjoy it a little. Later in the year, I even voluntarily interviewed a local reporter for an En
35、glish assignment, much to the amazement of my teacher. My confidence strengthened.Suddenly I was even grateful for the change and felt as if I could accomplish anything.参考答案：In the passage the author tells us how he faced life changes positively. Though he lost his job, his experience of going back
36、to college ended up being far more valuable.第三讲如何写议论文的摘要议论文包括论点、论据、论证三部分，所以在写议论文的摘要时也要扣住这三大要素。一、议论文摘要的类型1“观点对比”式议论文通常有两种不同的观点，而且都有各自的理由。写摘要时要将观点和理由按文章的顺序用简练的语言组织起来。2“观点论据论证”式议论文找出文章的主题句、论据以及结论，再用自己的语言进行加工处理。二、议论文摘要的写法主题概括法1找出关键词和主题句任何一篇文章都是围绕某个主题展开的，因此，许多文章中最明显的特点之一是有一个反复出现的中心词，即高频词，也叫作关键词。抓住了它，便容易抓
37、住文章的中心。一般来说，关键词通常是名词、动词或形容词。议论文通常用来讲明道理、议论是非、提出观点和看法。作者先正面或反面提出论点，然后用事实论证论点，最后以重申论点或提出建议的方式得出结论。议论文的主题句通常在首段或尾段，或者在各段的首句或尾句。2根据关键词和主题句进行概括根据圈定的关键词和主题句进行改写，用相应的同义词进行替换或进行句型转换，千万不能原封不动地抄写原文。变换表达的三种常见方法：(1)正话反说法或反话正说法You will not_succeed.You will fail.You cant_be_too_careful when driving.You should_be_
38、very_careful when driving.I cant agree with you more.I quite agree with you.(2)词性转换法The photo is of_importance to me.The photo is important to me.(3)句式变化法语态变换：Parents should give_children more praise.Children should be_given more praise by parents.简单句变复合句：Children should be encouraged more. This wil
39、l help them learn faster.Children should be encouraged more, which will help them learn faster.3整合要点，限制词数用相应的连词对各要点进行连接，使其连贯。整合中心要点，使用形容词、介词短语、非谓语动词短语合并、简化句子，使之符合概括短文内容要点的词数(30个单词左右)。请阅读下面短文，然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。注意写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。If_you_ask_people_what_makes_them_happy,_you_will_probably_get_many_diff
40、erent_answers_but_there_are_two_fundamental_things_that_will_ensure_happiness.The_first_part_of_what_makes_people_happy_is_growth. When you feel like you are improving your life, thats when you are happy. It doesnt necessarily mean that you have to constantly buy bigger and better things. You need t
41、o feel like you are growing on a personal level. You need to know that the essence of who you are is continually improving in some way. Keep looking for ways to make yourself better today than you were yesterday. This can mean different things to different people but the point is that you have to fe
42、el like you are improving and getting better as a human being as time goes by.The_second_part_of_what_makes_people_happy_is_the_sense_of_contribution. Everyone wants to believe that they were put here to do something great. As long as you know that by your being here, by doing what you are doing, yo
43、u are helping someone somewhere, it will bring you happiness.These are two ways of how to find happiness. Are these the only answers to what makes people happy? That depends on how you definehappiness.点拨第一步：圈定文章的关键词和主题句(见原文画线部分)第二步：根据文章大意可知本文为“观点对比”式议论文1人们的观点：People have different opinions about wha
44、t makes them happy.2作者的观点：Happiness comes from two fundamental sources.第三步：整合要点，确定答案While people have different opinions about what makes them happy, the writer thinks that happiness comes from two fundamental sources: the improvement of ones life and the sense of contribution.请阅读下面短文，然后以约30个单词概括下文的
45、主要内容。注意写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。Xue Zhaofeng, a professor from Peking University, reportedly has more than 170,000 subscribers to his online teaching course and could be making about 35 million yuan (5.3 million) a year.Xue is only one among the hundreds of online teachers making millions of yuan a month.Acc
46、ording to iResearch, an agency specializing in Internet data collection, the online education market was worth 156 billion yuan by the end of last year.Online education has also found mention in this years Central Government Work Report, which Premier Li Keqiang delivered to the annual National Peop
47、les Congress.We can thus conclude that online education not only has huge economic potential, it also enjoys government support.Online education is not without problems, though.Some online“educators”are extremely popular yet they hardly teach students anything useful.Worse, there is hardly any super
48、vision of online education agencies.A China Central TV report on Nov.17 said quite a high percentage of such agencies are being operated without the education bureaus knowledge.参考答案：With the availability of rich educational resources, online education is becoming increasingly popular, bringing onlin
49、e teachers and agencies a large fortune.However, online education has caused some problems worth paying attention to.第四讲如何写好句、段的衔接衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡(连接)性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的过渡(连接)性词语归纳如下：一、表示起始关系的过渡(连接)性词语above all， to begin/start with， today， now， nowadays， at pres
50、ent， currently， recently， generally speaking， according to， with the development of等。According to the graph, the boxoffice income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015.(2017江苏高考书面表达)To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner, so I am busy preparing for it.(2017
51、天津高考书面表达)二、表示时间顺序的过渡(连接)性词语firstly， first of all， then， later， in the end， finally， at last， after that， afterwards， since then， meanwhile， at the same time， soon， next， all of a sudden， at the weekend， in the meantime等。Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was
52、 well received.(2017北京高考书面表达)Firstly, I am expected to know about the polite language related to my service. Secondly, I am trying to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017天津高考书面表达)三、表示并列关系的过渡(连接)性词语and， or， also， as well as， both .and .， neither . nor .， not only .
53、but (also) .， either . or .， not . but .等。Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase.(2017江苏高考书面表达)Every day I spend some time taking exercise, learning order keeping as well as emergency solving so as to get ready for the upc
54、oming event.(2017天津高考书面表达)四、表示转折关系的过渡(连接)性词语but， yet， however， while， otherwise， on the contrary， though， although， even if/though， despite， in spite of， regardless of， on the other hand， except (for)， instead (of)， contrary to等。However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future.(201
55、7江苏高考书面表达)In spite of the largescale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.(江苏高考书面表达)五、表示因果关系的过渡(连接)性词语because， as， since， for， thanks to， due to， as a result of， so， therefore， as a result/consequence等
56、。Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.(2017江苏高考书面表达)So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty.(2017全国卷书面表达)六、表示递进关系的过渡(连接)性词语whats more， furthermore， moreover， besides， whats worse， still less， to make matters worse，
57、 worse still， on the one hand . on the other hand .， for one thing . for another (thing) .等。Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which pingpong and football, as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.(2018全国卷书面表达)Whats more, we can als
58、o hold a picnic party with the local people.(2017浙江高考书面表达)七、表示列举事实的过渡(连接)性词语such as， for example/instance， take . for example， that is to say， namely， as follows， in other words等。Firstly, there are all kinds of activities in the team, such aslearning the basic skills and speaking about experience.(2
59、017全国卷书面表达)The plan for the day is as follows: Firstly, its a custom to have dumplings on that day, so well make delicious dumplings with our own hands rather than buy some for them.(全国卷满分作文)八、表示观点的过渡(连接)性词语in my opinion， in my view， from my point of view， as far as I am concerned， as for me， person
60、ally等。Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river in China and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.(2017北京高考书面表达)As far as Im concerned, all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.(天津高考书面表达)九、表示总结的过渡(连接)性词语in shor
61、t， in brief， in conclusion， in a/one word， to sum up， in summary， all in all， on the whole， in general等。In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China.(2018全国卷书面表达)All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.(2018全国卷书面表达).用过渡词汇补全句子1Besides/In_addition/Whats_more/Moreo
62、ver (况且), the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless_of (不管) time and space.(江苏高考书面表达)2First_of_all/To_begin_with (首先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out the plan step by step.3I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse
63、/worse still (更糟的是), it got dark.4On_the_one_hand (一方面), they can sweep the tombs for the dead. On_the_other_hand (另一方面), they can go for a walk in the country in spring when the grass has just turned green.5In_a_word/In_conclusion/In_short/In_brief (总之), success is important, and so is failure, bec
64、ause its the mother of success.阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡性词语填空Aabove all， besides， meanwhile， for one thing， for another thing， personally， in a wordRecently, it has been a great public concern that the students lack selfprotection awareness.There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore lear
65、ning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all. 1.For_one_thing,_security comes first. Without security, we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents expectations. 2.For_another_thing,_protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students, which is ass
66、ociated with the happiness of every family. 3.Meanwhile,_it also helps to build a more harmonious society.4Personally,_in order to protect us students, 5.above_all,_we should strengthen our security awareness. 6.Besides,_when accidents occur, we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for h
67、elp. The government also plays a leading role in protecting students. 7.In_a_word,_only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony.Bin my opinion， as well， on condition that， as we all know， on the other hand， especially， soIts inspiring that a number of students
68、 will be admitted to colleges free of charge this year 1.on_condition_that they must work as teachers in their own province for more than ten years. I would like to be one of these special students. 2In_my_opinion,_receiving an education like that would reduce the expenses and enable us to make cont
69、ributions 3.as_well to our countrys education career. 4.As_we_all_know,_fewer and fewer people are willing to be teachers because of the low pay and hard work, 5.especially in the poor areas. It will be dangerous for the development of teenagers and children in our country. 6.So its necessary that l
70、arge numbers of graduates of high quality devote themselves to the education career. 7.On_the_other_hand,_teaching will be a valuable experience and it will make our lives meaningful.So, lets apply for that and try our best to make contributions tothe education of our country. C(2019 江苏高考范文片段)I pref
71、er the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it.We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day.Whats_more,_the traditional Chinese
72、dress cant reflect the unique culture of our school.From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school.Besides,_the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event. Therefore,_the s
73、chool uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.用增加适当的过渡语的方式修改如下习作下面这篇学生习作多用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。请你合理使用过渡词，将简单句合并，形成主次关系，把句中复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。TV and WebsiteTV and website are popular media. They have something in common. Both of them make money f
74、rom ads. Websites also have different sections. You may choose the one you are most interested in.They are different in many ways. Moving pictures are shown on TV with sound and interpretation. It makes you feel that you are just on the spot. The programs change every day. Professional TV reporters
75、do the report for TV.Some information on websites changes all the time. Not all of it is so updated. Everybody can write articles for websites rather than professional reporters.Every medium has its own features. It is hard to say which one is better. 修改后的文章： 参考答案：TV and WebsiteBoth TV and website a
76、re popular media. They have something in common; that is, both of them make money from ads. Similar to TV, websites also have different sections, so that you may choose the one you are most interested in.However, they are different in many ways. Above all, moving pictures are shown on TV with sound
77、and interpretation, which makes you feel as if you are just on the spot. Then, the programs change every day and professional TV reporters do the report for TV. Unlike TV, some information on websites changes all the time, but not all of it is so updated. In addition, everybody can write articles fo
78、r websites rather than professional reporters.In a word, every medium has its own features, so it is hard to say which one is better.第五讲如何写主题句进行读写任务型写作时，因为“写作内容”所列要点的顺序已具有内在的逻辑性，所以考生按照所给内容要点顺序写作即可，无需重新调整。一般是每个写作要点安排一段，且将写作内容的每个要点作为各段的主题句，放在句首。这样既符合英语的写作习惯，又可以避免写作时跑题或漏掉要点，并且层次分明，方便阅卷老师落实要点是否齐全。当然，如果所
79、给要点之间有非常紧密的联系，也可以安排在同一段内。总结近几年江苏高考真题和各地市模拟题，主题句模式可归纳为如下几种：一、直接翻译对不含提问性质的要点，一般将其译成英语即可，必要时可增加关联词。例如：1其他督促学生认真学习的办法。However, there are other ways to make students work hard.2中学生活和大学生活的差别。From my point of view, the college life will be different from the life in high school.二、回答要点主题句对要点提问做出明确回答。例如：1学生的
80、压力来源是什么？Nowadays, students are under great pressure, which mainly comes from their school work as well as peer relationship.2在小孩几岁的时候教他们理财？用什么形式理财？I think five to six is an appropriate age to begin teaching children money management skills.Parents may accompany their children to the bank and help th
81、em open an account in which they can save their lucky money.三、明确观点对带有一般问句性质，要求考生做出肯定或否定回答的要点，考生要明确表示支持还是反对、赞同还是不赞同、应该还是不应该等，或表明会不会做某事。例如：1你是否也埋怨过父母。As for me, I always complain about my parents high expectation on me and their ignoring my real feelings.2你是否赞同狼爸式的教育，并陈述你的理由。Personally I disapprove of
82、 what is advocated in the book entitled “Thats Why They Go to Peking University”， because I wonder whether the admission to a prestigious university has become the only marker of success in most parents mind, or rather, a full stop to parental duties.四、“重要”表达如果要点是“谈谈的重要性”，主题句则为“有重要作用”；如果要点是“谈谈有何重要意义
83、”，主题句则为“很有意义”等。说明必要、重要或意义的相关表达常用的有：We should attach more importance to sth.It is important/significant for sb. to do sth.Sth.plays a very important role/part in .Sth.is playing an increasingly important role in our life.People are coming to realize the importance of .The significance of .cannot be o
84、vervalued.例如：1谈谈独立的重要性。Inspired by the story, I suddenly realized the importance of independence.2谈谈在危急的状况下保持镇静的重要意义。First of all, keeping calm in an emergency is of great significance.五、表明看法对“你对的看法/态度”之类的写作要点，考生可用in my opinion/view, personally, as far as Im concerned等开头，直接表明自己的看法。例如：1你对父母溺爱孩子的看法。In
85、 my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for childrens development.2你对大学扩招的看法。As far as Im concerned, this tendency should be continued, as we need more capable people to contribute to the fastgrowing economy.六、引出经历由别人的经历引出自己的经历时可用以下句型来表达：It reminds me of the time when .It rem
86、inds me of an accident which happened several days ago.After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend who .The story above reminds me of one of my experiences .例如：1讲述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的经历(时间、地点和起因)。Sams story reminds me of my similar experience.2你(或你同学)的一次车祸经历。I also experienced a sim
87、ilar car accident.根据所给要点写出段落的主题句1要点：发脾气的害处。As_we_know,_getting_angry_not_only_does_harm_to_ones_health_but_also_has_a_bad_effect_on_the_relationship_between_people.2要点：我们能以木匠建房的态度去对待我们的生活吗？In_no_way_should_we_treat_our_life_in_the_way_like_the_carpenter.3要点：作为校方应该采取哪些措施避免此类悲剧(校园安全问题)的发生。More_lecture
88、s_should_be_held_on_safety_to_enhance_students_awareness_of_the_issue.4要点：你是否支持该校长的做法，并陈述理由。Im_completely_for_what_the_headmaster_did._Only_when_students_behave_well_can_they_create_a_good_environment_for_study,_so_its_necessary_to_suspend_the_misbehaved_students_and_help_them_to_behave_well.5要点：北大不
89、应该拒绝游客。It_surprises_me_to_learn_that_Peking_University_shuts_its_door_to_group_tours,_which_seems_inappropriate.6要点：越来越多的人又开始骑自行车的原因。Nowadays,_more_and_more_people_begin_riding_bicycles_again._The_main_reason_is_that_.7要点：你是否赞成文中对出国游学的看法？I_couldnt_agree_more_with_the_author./I_totally_agree_with_the
90、_author.8要点：日常生活中为了保护环境我们还可以做些什么？As_high_school_students,_we_are_supposed_to_make_great_efforts_to_help_protect_our_environment.第六讲如何写拓展句文章的一个段落通常包括主题句和拓展句两部分(有的还有结尾句)。其中，主题句一般位于段首，提出段落主题，确定段落发展方向及展开模式，而拓展句则用以阐述、论证、支持主题句的要点，使段落更加丰满。一般来说，围绕主题句展开拓展句的模式有以下几种：一、解释原因例如：在大城市工作有什么好处。Working in a big city i
91、s of course an exciting thing, which means better opportunities and more conveniences.Its easier to find a wellpaid job or a better platform to improve oneself.二、列举支撑点例如：我们如何做才能改善环境。If we want to improve environment then we need to change the way we behave.On the one hand, we need to buy appliances
92、that are more energy efficient and limit the amount of time we use them.On the other hand, to reduce the effect the greenhouse gases have on our atmosphere, we should plant more trees.三、举例例如：成长环境对学生的影响。Since students are brought up in different environments, they will have different habits and chara
93、cters, which will cause many conflicts in daily life.In such cases, these youngsters will often act impulsively, quarreling or even fighting with his or her classmates because of some trivial things.They may curse each other with hatred words or ask their friends to isolate these students.Whats wors
94、e, they may find some excuses to hurt, beat or even bully those who have conflicts with them.四、比较和对比例如：是不是越快越好？Is it the faster the better? Many people believe that the faster the better, because they can save time in this way.However, others including me hold the opinion that, in many situations, t
95、he result is far less than being satisfactory and quite often goes to the opposites.Haste makes waste.五、细化主题句例如：你所喜欢的体育项目对你的影响。As far as Im concerned, Im fond of jogging which is very essential in my life.On one hand, its not a rough sport and convenient to do every day, from which I relax myself a
96、lot and refresh my mind.On the other hand, it strengthens my suppleness, endurance and perseverance to deal with the difficulties in my study.六、引出经历例如：讲述你(或你的朋友)因为太多干扰而受到影响的经历。This reminds me of what happened when I entered high school as a Senior One student.I was so excited to find that there were
97、 various student organizations and afterclass activities for us students.It seemed that many groups were suitable for me.During this term, I was attracted whenever there was a notice from a student group and I was eager to find out more about it.As a result, I didnt spend enough time on my studies,
98、nor could I settle down to my homework every day.Consequently, I failed in an important exam.七、说明结果例如：你对国家“禁止商场免费提供塑料袋”的看法。It is necessary for the government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags. With this ban, shopping customers would gradually form a habit of bringing environmentally fr
99、iendly bags with them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be greatly reduced.根据所给主题句写出相应的拓展句1How to Get Happiness如何获得快乐 There_is_no_doubt_that_happiness_is_the_most_precious_thing_in_the_world._Without_it,_life_will_be_empty_and_meaningless._If_you_wish_to_know_how_to_get_happiness,_you_mu
100、st_pay_attention_to_the_following_two_points._First,_health_is_the_key_to_happiness._Health_is_the_best_wealth_(that)_a_man_can_possess._Money_can_do_many_things,_but_it_cannot_buy_happiness._Therefore,_only_a_man_has_good_health_can_he_enjoy_the_pleasures_of_human_life._Second,_happiness_consists_i
101、n_contentment._A_man_who_is_always_dissatisfied_with_his_present_condition_can_never_experience_happiness.2Treasure Time珍惜时光An_English_proverb_says_that_time_is_money._I_consider_it_wrong._Why?_Because_we_all_know_that_we_can_earn_money_but_can_not_get_time_back._For_this_reason,_we_may_say_that_tim
102、e_is_more_valuable_than_money._Many_people_do_not_know_the_value_of_time._It_is_indeed_a_great_pity._We_must_bear_in_mind_that_wasting_time_is_equal_to_wasting_your_life.3On Honesty论诚信There_is_an_English_proverb_that_goes_“Honesty_is_the_best_policy.”_It_shows_the_importance_of_honesty._Firstly, hon
103、esty is deeply valued by people from all over the world. People everywhere regard honesty as a virtue and hate a dishonest person. Secondly, honesty is the basis of interactions among people. People should treat each other sincerely and open their hearts to each other. Only in this waycan we build a
104、 harmonious society.4On Diligence论勤勉 There_is_a_saying_that_goes，“Achievement_is_founded_on_diligence_and_wasted_upon_laziness.”It_is_widely_accepted_that_diligence_will_bring_us_success,_wealth_and_good_luck._I_am_sure_that_a_hardworking_person_can_always_succeed_in_the_work_which_he_wants_to_do._T
105、his_is_an_unchangeable_truth._Idleness_is_the_opposite_of_diligence._It_is_the_source_of_all_evil._An_idle_man_only_enjoys_playing_and_making_pleasures._Therefore,_he_is_bound_to_fail_and_he_can_never_experience_the_happiness_brought_about_by_success.5Knowledge is Power知识就是力量 As_a_popular_saying_goe
106、s,_“Knowledge_is_power.”_With_our_country_developing_fast,_knowledge_is_becoming_more_and_more_important.First_of_all,_with_knowledge_one_can_easily_find_jobs._We_are_entering_a_new_age_of_information,_and_knowledge_is_needed_by_a_lot_of_jobs._In_addition,_more_knowledge_is_also_needed_to_make_our_l
107、ife_rich_and_fulfilled._Therefore,_we_must_try_hard_to_acquire_as_much_knowledge_as_we_can.6On Thrift论节俭 Thrift_is_a_virtue._In_my_opinion,_to_be_thrifty,_we_students_should_save_the_following_things.First_of_all,_we_must_save_time._To_save_ones_time_means_to_extend_ones_life._Then_we_can_devote_muc
108、h_more_to_our_country_and_promote_the_development_of_the_society._Next,_we_must_save_money._We_should_know_the_money_that_our_parents_give_us_doesnt_come_easily._It_is_full_of_sweat_and_hard_labor_of_our_parents._In_addition,_we_should_save_natural_resources,_such_as_water,_electricity,_paper_and_so
109、_on._Thus,_less_waste_and_pollution_will_be_produced_and_our_environment_can_be_beautiful_and_clean.In_short,_we_young_people_are_the_future_constructors_of_the_society._We_should_learn_to_be_thrifty_and_form_a_good_habit_of_thrift_in_our_daily_life._Only_if_everyone_realizes_the_importance_of_thrif
110、t_can_we_make_our_country_stronger_and_more_beautiful.7The Way to Success成功之路Strong_will_and_diligence_are_two_major_factors_of_success._A_man_of_strong_will_always_sticks_to_what_he_does_no_matter_how_tough_it_might_be._For_example,_Edison_failed_thousands_of_times_to_invent_the_electric_lamps,_but
111、_he_stuck_to_his_goal_and_succeeded_at_last._Besides,_we_should_know_that_theres_no_shortcut_to_success._Diligence_is_the_only_route_to_success._Without_diligence_no_one_can_achieve_anything.I_believe_where_there_is_a_will_there_is_a_way_and_that_success_belongs_to_those_who_can_make_constant_effort
112、s.8Living a Lowcarbon Life过低碳生活As_students,_we_have_the_responsibility_to_live_a_lowcarbon_life_for_the_purpose_of_reducing_greenhouse_gases._Firstly,_wash_your_clothes_by_hands_instead_of_using_washing_machines.Secondly,_dont_take_elevators_unless_it_is_necessary,_for_using_stairs_does_good_to_both
113、_your_health_and_the_environment.Thirdly,_remember_to_bring_your_own_shopping_bags_when_you_go_to_the_supermarket_and_go_to_school_on_foot_or_by_bicycle.9The Habit of Getting up Early早起的习惯I_totally_agree_with_the_author_that_getting_up_early_in_the_morning_is_a_good_habit_that_will_benefit_us_a_lot.
114、Just_like_many_of_my_friends,_Im_an_early_bird.I_benefit_a_lot_from_the_habit_of_getting_up_early._After_getting_up_early_in_the_morning,_I_have_enough_time_to_make_a_plan_for_the_work_of_the_day_and_do_it_more_effectively.If_getting_up_too_late,_I_will_feel_great_pressure_and_usually_cant_finish_my
115、_work_on_time.第七讲如何写结尾句文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：一、首尾呼应，画龙点睛把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。例如“如何处理好学习和课外活动之间的关系”的结尾：Thus, in my view, if we focus too much on any one, either study or afterschool activities will be negatively affected. But with the right balance, both can improve.二、重复主题句结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心
116、思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。例如“我更喜欢传统购物”的结尾：As for me, I prefer traditional shopping. It is really fun to go into shops and look at the goods in person .So traditional shopping is better than Internet shopping.三、重申主题例如“客观分析去外地读大学的好处”的结尾：All in all, Im fully convinced that to study in another city is really a go
117、od way to enrich ones life experience.四、自然结尾随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。例如“老年人应该得到的待遇”的结尾：Theyve already contributed a lot to their family and society, so they deserve love from us all.五、发出号召或呼吁结尾表示对将来的展望或期待读者投入行动。例如“乱扔垃圾现象”的结尾：In conclusion, peoples littering habit is turning our communities into a rubbish h
118、older. It is high time that we made joint efforts to solve the rubbish problem. Otherwise, we will live with rubbish in the future.六、陈述积极意义例如“对童年时期的生活有怎样的认识”的结尾：All in all, as far as I am concerned, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for c
119、hildren.七、提出解决问题的方法、建议例如“你对周围爱吃零食的人的合理化建议”的结尾：Its highly advisable that those who are crazy about snacks should eat snacks when necessary. Youd better have some healthy snacks, which is much enough to add the necessary calories or nutrients but will not cause health problems.八、表明决心例如“将来能上重点大学”的结尾：I
120、am convinced that I will be admitted into a key university if I put all my heart into study.根据提示完成相应的结尾句1如果有机会，你会就此问题对父母说些什么。(不要对我过度关注；爱就要放手)If I had the chance to talk with my parents about this, I would like to tell them that I can manage without their hovering over me! Id like to say to them, “Pl
121、ease_let_go_of_your_anxiety._Give_me_some_advice_just_when_necessary,_and_for_most_of_the_time,_let_me_think_for_myself._Your_love_should_never_be_a_burden_on_me._Love_me,_and_let_me_fly_with_it.”2你读了这个故事后的感受。(个人成长需要艰苦生活的磨砺；否则会像文中的蝴蝶一样实现不了目标)The story sets me thinking a lot. Our life is more or less
122、 like this. Sometimes, struggles_or_obstacles_in_our_life_are_a_must_for_our_growth. It is these struggles or hardships that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. Without these trials, _we_could_never_achieve_our_life_goal_just_as_the_butterfly_did_in_the_story.3保持好心情的重要性。(总之，只有保持好心情
123、才能快乐、健康地成长)When we are free of worries, we can become healthier, study more efficiently and get along better with other people. In_a_word,_only_when_we_have_a_good_mood_can_we_grow_up_happily_and_healthily.4呼吁人们多读书。(希望每个人每年都能读些书)There are books on every subject written for almost every level of unde
124、rstanding. Therefore, we are able to make our own choices. I_hope_everyone_can_read_a_certain_number_of_books_every_year. 5.根据你的亲身经历，你觉得朋友给你的生活带来了什么？(朋友给了我信任、理解和温暖；我非常感激我的朋友)According to my experience, I think friends bring_me_not_only_trust,_understanding_but_also_warmth,_which made me moved a lot.
125、 How_grateful_I_am_to_my_friend!考场作文，首先要求稳，避免过多的语法性错误，确保拿到及格分；在此基础上再润色升格作文，从词汇、句式方面提升写作档次，力争跨越五档线。第八讲如何避免常见错误少丢分一些考生写的作文虽然要点很全，但由于英语语言基础知识不扎实，语言不规范，结果言不达意、错误百出，让阅卷老师惨不忍“读”。在此阅卷老师提醒考生：即使你的作文不能写得漂漂亮亮、洋气十足，也一定要写得像模像样、硬伤不多！考前回顾“5大基本句型”表达准确是作文达到及格线的重要保证。要做到表达准确，考前再熟悉一下英语的五大基本句型是非常有必要的。1主语(用“”标注)谓语(用“”标注)
126、(不及物动词)该句型常用来表示主语的动作或状态。其特点为：句子的谓语动词能表达完整的意思。这类动词叫作不及物动词，此类动词后面不能直接跟宾语，但可以跟副词、介词短语、状语从句等状语。It will start from June 16th and last for more than a week.(2017全国卷书面表达)它将从6月16号开始，持续一周多的时间。2主语谓语(及物动词)宾语(用“”标注)该句型中的谓语动词常为及物动词，如果是不及物动词则要加相应的介词。作宾语的可以是名词、代词、动词不定式、动词ing形式、从句等。The_boxoffice_income_of_Chinese_m
127、ovies witnessed a constant increasefrom 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015.(2017江苏高考书面表达)中国电影票房收入见证了从2012年大约170亿元到2015年超过400亿元的一个不断增加的过程。3主语系动词表语(用“”标注)该句型侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样，谓语动词需用系动词(主要是be动词)，表语多为形容词，也可以是名词、介词短语、不定式、分词以及从句等。However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.(2018江苏高考书面表达)尽管这样
128、，但有时结果并不令人满意。4主语谓语(及物动词)间接宾语(用“”标注)直接宾语(用“”标注)该句型中的谓语动词必须跟两个宾语才能表达完整的意思。一个是表示人的间接宾语；一个是表示物的直接宾语。一般间接宾语在前面，直接宾语在后面。That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.(2017北京高考书面表达)那无疑给了我们一种很大的成就感。5主语谓语(及物动词)宾语宾语补足语(用“”标注)该句型中的谓语动词虽然是及物动词，但是只跟宾语还不能表达完整的意思，必须加上一个补充成分，如形容词、名词、介词短语、动词不定式、动词ing形式等。Therefore
129、, I would like you to join our schools table tennis team.(2017全国卷书面表达)因此，我想请你加入我们学校的乒乓球队。警惕考场作文常见的“3类错误”第一类词汇类错误1单词拼写错误误：By the way, hes a senior High School student named Lihua from Tian Jin, china.正：By the way, hes a senior high school student named Li Hua from Tianjin, China.2词形变化错误误：People throw
130、ed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.3词性不清错误误：During my summer vacation, I spent half a month in the country and played very happy.正：During my summer vacation, I spent half a month in the country and played very happily.误
131、：Doing a parttime job always effects study.正：Doing a parttime job always affects study.4词汇运用错误误：He opened the light after he entered the room.正：He turned on the light after he entered the room.5固定搭配运用错误误：Nowadays most parents attach much importance with education.正：Nowadays most parents attach much
132、importance to education.不少考生英语基础差，平时单词记不准，考试一紧张，就会出现拼写类错误、词形变化错误等。例如environment容易写成enviroment，succeeded容易写成successed，heard容易写成heared，writing容易写成writting等。解决这一问题的关键是在备考时多注意容易拼错或变错的单词，真正用心去体会。在词性方面，英语和汉语是有很大区别的，例如“我很熟悉他”，“熟悉”在汉语中是动词，但是英语中相对应的familiar却是形容词；在词汇运用方面，汉语“开门、开灯、开车”是同一个“开”，但在英语中依次应是open, tur
133、n on, drive。另外，词的搭配和习惯用法一定要牢记于心，不能想当然，例如lose heart意为“失去信心”，但lose ones heart 却表示“倾心”。 第二类语法类错误1时态错误误：When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed.正：When he came back, he found that his wife had gone to bed.2语态错误误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more e
134、ffectively in their adult years.正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.3主谓一致错误误：My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and so on.正：My hobby is widespread, which includes drawing, collecting stamps an
135、d so on.4比较级使用错误误：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting more and more smaller.正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smaller and smaller.5非谓语动词使用错误误：Comparing with other countries, the country pays little attention to the pollution.正：C
136、ompared with other countries, the country pays little attention to the pollution.6平行错误误：Then I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer.正：Then I put my book under my desk, opened it and started looking for the answer.7词汇冗余误：On one day, he went to the cinema.正：One day,
137、 he went to the cinema.误：More and more people entered into the hall, so it became crowded.正：More and more people entered the hall, so it became crowded.8否定式错误误：Not hesitate to ask me if you have any questions.正：Dont hesitate to ask me if you have any questions.据统计，语法类错误能够占到作文错误的60% 以上。其原因有二：一是按汉语思维进
138、行英语写作；二是对于英语基本的语法结构混乱不清。例如“我昨天看了一部影片。”应是“I saw a film yesterday.”，但若按汉语思维，“看了”应是完成时，有些考生就可能会写成“I have seen a film yesterday.”。这就要求我们在写作时多用英语去思考。另外，一定要熟悉基本的语法，例如在非谓语动词中，现在分词表示主动，过去分词表示被动，如果我们对此比较了解，就不会写出“Seeing from the building, the whole city can be seen very clearly.”这样的句子，因为Seeing表示主动，而此处应用表示被动的S
139、een。 第三类汉语式英语1纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序误：At this school studying, I really very happy.正：Studying at this school, I am really very happy.2句子成分残缺误：There are many students dont support the project.正：There are many students who dont support the project.3句子粘连误：The old man has two sons, both of them work in the same c
140、ompany.正：The old man has two sons, and both of them work in the same company.正：The old man has two sons, both of whom work in the same company.4主谓搭配不当误：He happened an accident yesterday.正：An accident happened to him yesterday.5动宾搭配不当误：They are trying their best to improve their production.正：They are
141、 trying their best to increase their production.6形容词和名词搭配不当误：We walked a far way before planting trees.正：We walked a long way before planting trees.7动词和副词搭配不当误：My grandfather very likes red tea and has it every day.正：My grandfather likes red tea very much and has it every day.8介词和宾语搭配不当误：Under the h
142、elp of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.正：With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.有些考生在写作时不能摆脱汉语的束缚，总是对找出的要点句子进行逐字翻译，写出来的往往是汉语式英语。想解决这一问题就要多积累和背诵英语句型，在动笔时进行套用。例如“直到我遇到你之后，我才真正体会到幸福。”，若按汉语思维，until应该位于句首，那么写出来的句子就只能是个病句。如果考生熟悉句式not .until .的强调句型的用法“I
143、t is/was not until .that .”，就能写出地道的句子“It was not until I met you that I knew real happiness.”。另外，英语毕竟和汉语有很大的区别，各种搭配也不尽相同，汉语中我们可以说“这辆车的价格很贵。”，而“The price of the car is very expensive.”就不是一个正确的句子，应改成“The car is very expensive.”或“The price of the car is very high.”。防范出现错误的“2个措施”写对句子是作文得高分的关键和保证。考场上要避免上
144、述低级错误，可采取以下两个措施：1确定主语英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语(祈使句省略了主语you)。动笔写句子前首先要确定主语，其次要特别注意汉语与英语的区别。例如：北京八月多雨。误：Beijing rains much in August.正：It rains much in Beijing in August.写得很匆忙，我们发现书中满是错误。误：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes.正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes (by us)点津英
145、文中主谓有时需要倒装，汉语则不需要。Only then did I realize how important it is to study English.2确定谓语动词英文中没有谓语动词就构不成句子，但谓语动词千变万化，稍不注意就会写错句子。在写句子时应特别注意以下几个方面：(1)注意及物与不及物动词的正确运用。误：The living standard of the people has raised in the past twenty years.正：The living standard of the people has risen/has been raised in the
146、past twenty years.(2)注意延续性与非延续性动词的正确运用。误：He has left his hometown for twenty years.正：He has been away from his hometown for twenty years.(3)注意一些不可用于被动语态的动词。误：Our school garden is measured ten metres long and eight metres wide.正：Our school garden measures ten metres long and eight metres wide.点津不要把强调
147、谓语动词当成是语法错误。正：Believe it or not, this kind of things happened in their school.正：Believe it or not, this kind of things did happen in their school.以下句子含有考生常犯的错误，请改正1It is high time that we do something to reduce traffic accidents.dodid或在do前加should2While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.在having前加w
148、e_are或the_doorbell_rangwe_heard_the_doorbell_ringing3Recently our village has taken place great changes.Recently_great_changes_have_taken_place_in_our_village.4Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight.areis5Eating at school is very convenient for students.It_is_very_con
149、venient_for_students_to_eat_at_school.6Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is his first time visit to the US？去掉time7The car hitted the old man and drived away.hittedhit;_driveddrove8I have two friends, their names are Tom and Jim.theirwhose或their前加and9There are many students a
150、re planting trees on the hill.去掉第二个are或在students后加who10At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic.swimmingswim.下面的两篇考生作文中均含有56处错误，请改正A(2019镇江高三一模)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。With their sauces and sachets of dried meat and vegetables, instant noodles were once the
151、 bedrock of Chinas convenience food, but their sales had declined drastically in recent years.In 2013, sales of instant noodles on the Chinese mainland surpassed more than 46.2 billion packets, according to the World Instant Noodles Association.However, by 2016 sales had dropped to just 38.5 billion
152、 packets.Zhang Xin, associate professor with department of economics and finance at Tongji University, says the shrinking migrant population has damaged the industry as they were one of the largest groups of instant noodle consumers.The explosive growth of Chinas highspeed railway networks turns out
153、 to be unexpected enemy of the instant noodles industry.“Trains were once an important market for instant noodles, but railway stations are ordering less and less instant noodles these days，” says Long Shuhai, an instant noodle distributor in Yunnan Province.The rise of food delivery has also played
154、 a role in the declining fortunes of the instant noodle industry.The instant noodle industry is trying to regain its lost glory through developing more flavors.It is also upgrading products to change peoples perception of instant noodles as a“lowend” product.写作内容1用约30个单词写出上文概要；2用约120个单词就“方便面能否重现往日辉煌
155、”这一话题，阐述你的看法，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。考生作文The sales of instant noodles have been declined sharply, which can be attributed to several factors, the decrease in migrant population is the chief one.However, the instant noodle industry is str
156、iving to revive.Such factors can be summarized as follows.Firstly, the migrant population consume instant noodles is becoming smaller and the consumption of noodles fall accordingly.Secondly, the railway networks grow rapidly, shortening peoples time on trains and making it unnecessary for them to h
157、ave instant noodles.Last but not least, food delivery is springing up, which allows people to order online whatever they want in no time.From my perspective, the instant noodles industry is impossible to be restored to its former glory.For one thing, with instant noodles considering junk food, peopl
158、e attach more importance to life quality and tend to choose healthier food.For another, the food delivery boom brings people much convenience and satisfies their diverse needs for diets.我来诊断句中：去掉been句中：isbeing句中：consumeconsuming或者在consume前加who句中：fallfalls句中：impossibleunlikely句中：consideringconsidered
159、B(2018江苏高考)请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Li Jiang 6 July, SunnyOur family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase.Two days ago, Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet.But the information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory.Confused, I simply based my decision
160、on the ratings.Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with.This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.Su Hua 6 July, SunnyThis morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area.We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into
161、 one of them.We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy.Mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste.I was puzzled.Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?写作内容1用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；2谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1写作过程中不能直
162、接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。考生作文Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, are easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.There is
163、 no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others judgment on the product or service concern. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, bli
164、ndly follow others advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected is that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It becomes a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase th
165、eir sales.Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.我来诊断句中：去掉第一个are；或者第一个are前面加which句中：they前面加but句中：concernconcerned句中：followfollowing句中：去掉is句中：becomeshas_become第九讲如何运用亮点词汇多增分一篇高考作文在阅卷时往往在1分钟内就被判定生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的句式表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的
166、词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！高考英语书面表达评分标准对第五档的要求有这样一段话：应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。我们可以从正反两方面来解读该要求：考生如果有意识地去使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇，在这个过程中即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可以不扣分，文章仍属于最高档次；相反，如果考生仅使用基础词汇和基本句型，不能体现出较强的语言运用能力，即使作文中无语法错误也不能给高分。这就要求考生尽可能盘活英语词汇，尝试灵活使用较复杂的句型和结构，使文章有声有色，从而提升得分档次。何为较高级词汇？众所周知，词汇本来并没有“高低贵贱”之分，
167、但某个词一旦得到使用，放在了具体语境中，使用得极为得当，体现了该词的美妙价值，为句子增色，让文章添彩，它就是较高级词汇；相反，使用时体现的价值平平，没有创意，它就是较低级词汇。这些高级词汇我都认识，我怎么不知道用呢？很多考生在写作的时候，往往想到某个意思，脑子中立刻出现的是像I think, important, show, because, more and more等等这些词汇，这些词汇在英语教学中，被称为第一反应词。所谓第一反应词，就是每个人第一时间反应出来的表达，而这些第一反应词往往是较低级词汇。很多考生的阅读词汇量远远大于写作词汇量，原因很简单，大家背了很多“漂亮”的单词，但是却从不
168、给它们“出镜”的机会，而是把这些第一反应词翻来覆去地用，这样的结果就是写文章时用词的质量一直上不去，无法提升写作档次。我们可以尝试翻译下面这两句话，自测一下你的第一反应词是什么，从而了解你的写作词汇量处于什么水平。1他是一名优秀的足球运动员。2这次会议非常重要。“优秀的”，“非常重要”，你最先想到的是不是“very good/excellent”和“very important”呢？如果是，那么你就中标了，你的“写作词汇库”需要马上更新了。下面对比一下你的翻译与高级表达的差距。1他是一名优秀的足球运动员。He is a very good football player.(一般)He is a
169、n excellent football player.(稍好)He is an outstanding/amazing football player.(更好)2这次会议非常重要。The meeting is very important.(一般)The meeting is of great importance.(较好)The meeting is of vital significance.(更好)至此，许多考生仍然感到困惑：为什么上面这些高级词汇我都认识，而我却没有想到用它们呢？我很努力地背了很多靓词妙语，考试时怎么一个也用不上呢？下面我们将为考生集中解决这一问题。一、增加靓词的“出
170、镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇。写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇，也就是上面所说的“第一反应词”。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背到的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会退变成陌生词汇。因此在考试之前，我们要做的事情就是，迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇。很多考生作文裹足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的“第一反应词”，背了大量的靓词妙语而不用。这是一种懒惰的表现。建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们
171、平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”。例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达，如“attractive”或“charming”等。再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult”，那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢？二、巧用4 招，实现由低级向高级的转化第1招：“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。I am very glad to hear from you.I am exceedingly delighted to hear fro
172、m you.(2018全国卷书面表达)My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them.My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them.(全国卷书面表达)I should be free any time after school next wee
173、k.I should be available any time after school next week.(全国卷书面表达)第2招：更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition.I know you once took part in a robotics competition and won the award,
174、so you must have accumulated much experience in it.On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition.I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.(2018天津高考书面表达)The boxoffice
175、income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015 .However, China witnessed a decline in its economic growth rate last year.The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to ov
176、er 40 billion in 2015 .However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.(2017江苏高考书面表达)We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have var
177、ious ways to deal with such a situation.(浙江高考书面表达)第3招：单词短语，巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。所以我们应把单词与短语巧妙互用。Generally speaking, your arrival shouldnt be later than the fixed time.Generally speaking, your arrival isnt supposed to be later than the fixed time.(2018全国卷书面表达)We d
178、esperately need your help.We are desperately in need of your help.(2018天津高考书面表达)Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which proved to be extremely rewarding.Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea
179、culture, which turned out to be extremely rewarding.(2018北京高考书面表达)We can look at this problem in many ways.We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有内涵)第4招：高级替代，低级淘汰也就是说，尽量用高级阶段学到的词代替低级阶段学到的词。The editing part after that was difficult.The editing part after that was tough.(2017北京高考书面表达)In
180、my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative effects on people and society.In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.(江苏高考书面表达)This summer I want to do a parttime job in a foreign capital company, through which I would like to broaden m
181、y horizons, get some working experience and meet more new friends.This summer I intend to take up a parttime job in a foreign capital company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet more new friends.(全国卷书面表达)三、注重积累，考前必背6组高级词汇下面针对考生的第一反应词，结合高考常考到的表达，为
182、大家总结出如下6组高级替代词汇：第1组：代替important的高级词汇低级Education is very important.高级Education is of much/vital/great importance/significance.低级A balanced diet is very important for us.高级A balanced diet is absolutely essential for us.低级Money is the only thing thats important to him.高级Money is the only thing that mat
183、ters to him.低级First impressions are very important.高级First impressions really do count.低级Childrens education is very important for Chinese parents.高级Chinese parents attach much importance to childrens education.第2组：代替good的高级词汇低级This is a very good place.高级This is a fantastic place.低级The view from my
184、 bedroom window was very good.高级The view from my bedroom window was absolutely breathtaking.低级This is a very good opportunity to learn about American culture.高级This is a unique opportunity to learn about American culture.低级The schools examination results were very good.高级The schools examination resu
185、lts were very impressive.第3组：代替make/cause的高级词汇低级His actions could make him lose his job.高级His actions could lead to him losing his job.低级The accident caused two passengers to die.高级The accident resulted in the deaths of two passengers.低级The floods caused the deaths of over a hundred people.高级The flo
186、ods were responsible for the deaths of over a hundred people.低级Daily shaving can cause a number of skin problems.高级Daily shaving can give rise to a number of skin problems.第4组：代替because/because of的高级词汇低级Weve reached our goal because of your great help.高级Weve reached our goal, thanks to your great he
187、lp.低级Because the money isnt enough, the project will not continue next year.高级Owing to a lack of funds, the project will not continue next year.低级Because of the pilots strike, all flights have had to be cancelled.高级As a result of the pilots strike, all flights have had to be cancelled.低级The fishes i
188、n the river have died because of water pollution.高级The fishes in the river have died as a consequence of water pollution.低级The restaurants success was mainly because of its new manager.高级The restaurants success was due largely to its new manager.第5组：代替very的高级词汇低级Selfconfidence is very vital to our s
189、uccess.高级Selfconfidence is absolutely vital to our success.低级Earthquakes are very difficult to predict.高级Earthquakes are extremely difficult to predict.低级His mother is a very successful politician.高级His mother is a highly successful politician.低级She looks very beautiful tonight.高级She looks extraordi
190、narily beautiful tonight.低级Raising money for the homeless has been very difficult.高级Raising money for the homeless has been incredibly difficult.第6组：表示“大小多少”的高级词汇低级My new job will be a big challenge.高级My new job will be a tremendous challenge.低级More and more Americans are curious about Chinese cultu
191、re.高级An increasing number of Americans are curious about Chinese culture.低级The shortage of teachers is a big problem.高级The shortage of teachers poses a major problem.低级We have made some small changes to the program.高级We have made some minor changes to the program.低级Most of the students are shortsigh
192、ted.高级The majority of the students are shortsighted.低级The policy benefits only a small group of people in the country.高级The policy benefits only a small minority of the countrys population.写作时在用词上不可随心所欲，绝不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的词语，也不能满篇堆积所谓的“高级”词汇，否则给人过分炫耀之嫌，得不偿失。一般来说，一篇文章能用好三五个高级词汇就可以了。另外，为能更好地“完成规定的写作
193、任务”，减少错误，特提醒考生在使用“高级词汇”时，一定要注意遵循“准确、恰当”的原则，一定要注意使用的场合，并不一定难词就是高级词汇，例如：一大早我们买了些圣诞礼物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents. (purchased太过于书面化，改为bought更地道) .请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1We all have the same chance.havepossess2More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.More_and_mo
194、reAn_increasing_number_of3The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.difficultchallenging4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.developpromote5I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.bearput_up_with6Would you please help me to turn d
195、own the radio？help_medo_me_a_favor7He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.decideddetermined/made_up_his_mind8Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of facetoface communication.causesgives_rise_to9When you are bored with the people sometimes, youd better find a quiet plac
196、e, listening to some classical music.bored_withfed_up_with10He didnt listen to what I said in the class.didnt_listen_toturned_a_deaf_ear_to11Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house.I_thought_of_an_ideaI_came_up_with_an_idea/an_idea_occurred_to_me12As soon as he arrived, h
197、e began his research.As_soon_as_he_arrivedOn/Upon_his_arrival.请用高级词汇提升下面考生作文中的画线部分考生作文(2019徐州、淮安、连云港一模)People always make resolutions on New Years Day to inspire them to meet new goals. While fulfilled aspirations bring happiness, many people cant make their resolutions work. Anyway, it is_important
198、 to make New Years resolutions when the calendar changes. At the beginning of a new year, resolutions can guarantee us a fresh start. Just as a saying goes, well begun is half done. Meanwhile, the_resolutions_can_remind_us_constantly and motivate us towards our goals.So_we_should_take_practical_meth
199、ods_to_realize_our_resolutions. Break our resolutions into a series of timebased steps and achieve them one by one. Also, share our resolutions with our family members who can regularly remind us. At the same time, assess and reward ourselves in time for remarkable progress that we have made. Im sur
200、e that we will make it with persistent efforts.升级作文People tend_to make resolutions on New Years Day to inspire them to meet new goals. While fulfilled aspirations do bring happiness, many peoplefail_to make their resolutions work. Anyway, it makes_sense to make New Years resolutions when the calenda
201、r changes. At the beginning of a new year, resolutions can guarantee us a fresh start. Just as a saying goes, well begun is half done. Meanwhile, the_resolutions_can_serve_as_a_constant_reminder and a powerful motivator towards our goals.Therefore,_practical_methods_should_be_adopted_to_make_our_res
202、olutions_come_true. Break our resolutions into a series of timebased steps and achieve them one by one. Also, share our resolutions with our family members who can regularly remind us. At the same time, assess and reward ourselves in time for remarkable progress that we have made. Im sure that we wi
203、ll make it with persistent efforts.第十讲如何使用高级句式创满分句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。考生在写作文时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！用英语表达某句汉语意思时，很多考生脑海里往往首先想到的是像“She walked out of the classroom and many students followed her.”和“The meal was very delicious, and we all enjoyed it very much.
204、”等句式，这些句式在英语教学上被称为“第一反应句”，和上一讲所讲的“第一反应词”一样，“第一反应句”指的是每个人第一时间反应出来的表达。很多考生背了很多妙语佳句，但一上考场写出来的句子仍然干瘪无力。究其原因，归根结底还是运用它们的机会少，无法把这些“消极句式”转化为“积极句式”。下面尝试翻译两个句子，自测一下你的“写作句式”处于哪种水平。1铃响了。2在学校里我学习的科目有语文、数学、英语、物理、化学和计算机。第一个句子你的翻译是不是“The bell is ringing.”，而第二个句子则是“I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemis
205、try and computer at school.”之类的表达？如果是，那说明你的写作句式仍有很大的改进空间。事实上，第一个句子翻译成“There goes the bell.”的倒装句式更加地道，也更显高级；第二个句式可以稍作改动，改为定语从句“The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.”或名词性从句“What I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics,
206、 chemistry and computer.”则更能吸引阅卷老师的眼球。一、平时多注意有意识地多运用背诵过的“高级句式”，变消极句式为积极句式消极句式是那些阅读中能读懂，但写作中不会用的句式，而积极句式则是写作中能运用自如的句式。在考前备考过程中，要有意识地把背诵过的句式尝试运用到写作中去，碰到一个句子时，要想一想有没有更好的表达句式。如把两个简单句合为定语从句，把一般句变为强调句等，更要看一下能否套用学过的句型，如“not .until .”句型、“so .that .”句型等。学会用英语思维，养成用英语句式写作的习惯。二、考前再强化用熟10大王牌写作句式，美化写作再增分在写作中，恰当地
207、运用23个高级句式是获得高分的必备条件。下面为考生推荐10种能有效提升写作档次的王牌句式，供大家选择使用，希望大家能够把它们烂熟于心，在考场上能信手拈来。(一)吸引眼球的定语从句定语从句有多种形式，引导词也有若干，但最容易掌握、最常运用的是as和which引导的非限制性定语从句。1表达“正如”这一含义时，我们常用as引导的非限制性定语从句，它常放在主句之前，有时也可放在主句之中或主句之后。常见的句式有：(1)As we all know ./As is known to all . 众所周知(2)As he pointed out . 正如他所指出的那样(3)As the famous say
208、ing goes . 正如名言所说As is indicated in the graph, the boxofficeincome of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.(2017江苏高考书面表达)As we all know, theYangtze River is the longest river in Asia and has so many attractions.(2017北京高考
209、书面表达)2which 引导的非限制性定语从句which 在引导非限制性定语从句时，可以指代某个单词，也可以代指整个主句，在从句中可以作主语或宾语。Everyone is welcome to watch the film, which tells about the development of our school.(2018全国卷书面表达)Papercutting is a traditional art form in China, whichhas a history of more than 1,500 years.(2017全国卷书面表达)(二)富有文采的状语从句在英语写作中，状
210、语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用可以有效地增加作文的亮点。Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.(2018江苏高考书面表达)Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.(2018北京高考书面表达)If you want to apply for me
211、mbership, you are required to fill in the application form and send an email to pingpong .(2017全国卷书面表达)(三)灵活实用的名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。其中what, that所引导的名词性从句是写作中常见的高级表达方式。what在名词性从句中作主语、宾语、表语或定语，而that在从句中不作任何成分，只起连接作用。在写作中如果我们能够把两个简单句合并为一个含有名词性从句的复合句，或者把一个简单句扩展成为含有名词性从句的复合句，对写作都是一种质的升华。He sa
212、id a lot at the meeting. His words were very attractive.What he said at the meeting was very attractive. One mans meat is another mans poison.What is one mans meat is another mans poison.He didnt turn up on time. It annoyed his boss.That he didnt turn up on time annoyed his boss.再如：There is no doubt
213、 that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.(同位语从句)(2018江苏高考书面表达)It is worth mentioning that our volleyball team won the championship twice in national middle school volleyball matches.(主语从句)(2018全国卷书面表达)Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice.
214、(表语从句)(2017北京高考书面表达)(四)重点突出的强调句型强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成：It is/was被强调部分that/who其他。在写作中，我们可以通过强调句型将句子提高到一个新的层次。Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us, which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward. Its our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us
215、, which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.The villagers didnt realize how serious the pollution was until all the fish in the river died out.It was not until all the fish in the river died out that the villagers realized how serious the pollution was.再如：It was because of their help that a
216、disaster was avoided.(2017浙江高考书面表达)To be honest, it is not because they hate voting but because they are divided between emotion and fairness that sometimes makes voters feel annoyed.(江苏高考书面表达)It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.(福建高考书面表达)It was with sincerity a
217、nd faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.(江西高考书面表达)(五)靓人一眼的倒装句式在写作中倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句式也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有：1“only状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。Only in this way can people from all over the world communicate easily and effectively.(江苏高考书面表达)2none, neither, nor, not, never, hardly, little, seldom等否定词，以
218、及由no构成的否定短语如at no time, by no means等置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.(重庆高考书面表达)3在so/such . that .结构中，当so/such .位于句首
219、时，其后的句子用部分倒装。So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected.(福建高考书面表达)4here, there, now, then, out, in, up, down, on the wall, in the room等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或介词短语置于句首，且主语是名词而不是代词时，句子用全部倒装。Just in front of our house stands a tall tree with a history
220、of 1,000 years, which is protected by the government now.(六)语意委婉的虚拟语气写作中虚拟语气的使用可以使表达更委婉，更具可读性。写作中常见的有以下几种：1wish型虚拟语气I wish that you could grasp this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.(2017全国卷书面表达)2if only型虚拟语气If only I could go back and reset my goals.(重庆高考书面表达)3(should) do型虚拟
221、语气To master Mandarin, I strongly suggest you (should) practice with Chinese people.(四川高考书面表达)4Its (high/about) time (that) .型虚拟语气It is high time that both children and parents took action to make small changes.(福建高考书面表达)5if 引导的非真实条件句Things would turn for the better if we could work out some particip
222、ation rules for people to obey.(江苏高考书面表达)(七)言简意明的非谓语动词恰当地运用非谓语动词，不仅句型多样、句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。Im writing to apply to join it, thinking that Im well qualified for the job.(2018浙江高考书面表达)To help them better understand our teadrinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced
223、 the history of teamaking and different kinds of tea and so on.(2018北京高考书面表达)The training schedule, apart from regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions.(2018天津高考书面表达)(八)简洁紧凑的with复合结构with 复合结构可以使文章简洁紧凑，一篇文章如果能恰当地使用一到两个with复合结构，
224、可以使文章增色不少。In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.(福建高考书面表达)With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them.(江苏高考书面表达)(九)整齐和谐的并列句型并列句型是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，在这一句型中需要注意连接
225、并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。写作中常用到的有以下几种：1not only . but (also) . 不仅而且Visiting this exhibition, we will not only enjoy the folk art works, but also learn a lot.(2017全国卷书面表达)It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten peoples lives.(江苏高考书面表达)By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with o
226、thers but also learn to express myself clearly.(浙江高考书面表达)2not .but .不是，而是So, from now on, lets not waste our time on unimportant things but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.(重庆高考书面表达) (十)平衡句式的it句型it在句子中可以作形式主语或形式宾语，代替真正的主语或宾语。It is necessary to hold an objective attitude tow
227、ards ratings.(it作形式主语)(2018江苏高考书面表达)First of all, bear it in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness.(it作形式宾语)(2018全国卷书面表达).用复合句完成下列句子1我最大的爱好是读书看报，这已经成为我日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。(定语从句)My favorite hobbies are
228、 reading books and newspapers, which_have_become_a_necessary_part_of_my_daily_life.2众所周知，由于全球气候变化，地球正变得越来越暖和。(定语从句)As_we_all_know/As_is_known_to_all,_the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to the global climate change.3我们到了一座小山，山脚下有一条小河在流淌。(定语从句)We arrived at a hill, at_the_foot_of_which_there_
229、flows_a_small_river.4只要我们有坚强的信念，就能够克服任何困难。(状语从句)As_long_as_we_have_a_strong_will,_well be able to get over any difficulty.5每当见到有人需要帮助时，我就会尽力去帮助他。(状语从句)Whenever_I_see_someone_in_need,_I will spare no effort to help him.6一个人要是不努力，就将一事无成。(状语从句)Nobody can achieve anything of real significance unless_he_
230、works_hard.7与逃逸的司机相比，我为我所做的感到自豪。(宾语从句)Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what_I_did.8不可否认的事实是：环境污染越来越严重了。(同位语从句)No one can deny the fact that_the_environment_is_getting_polluted_more_and_more_seriously.9使我印象最深的是他们都经过了专业培训。(主语从句与表语从句)What_impressed_me_most was that_they_had_had_professio
231、nal_training.10鞋在我们的生活中起着重要作用，因为它们能够保护我们的脚免受伤害。(状语从句)Shoes play an important role in our life, for_they_can_protect_our_feet_from_being_hurt.按要求升级下列句式1I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(用强调句型改写句子)It_was_when_I_entered_senior_high_school_that_I_realized_the_import
232、ance_of_English.2The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.(用倒装句改写句子)Only_in_this_way_can_the_children_grow_up_mentally_and_physically_healthy.3The local government didnt realize the problem until the river was seriously polluted.(用倒装句改写句子)Not_until_the_river_was_seri
233、ously_polluted_did_the_local_government_realize_the_problem.4Its time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.(用虚拟语气改写句子)Its_time_that_we_took/should_take_measures_to_protect_endangered_animals.5After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be
234、the winner.(用分词作状语改写句子)Having_practiced_playing_basketball_for_almost_two_months,_we_strongly_desired_to_be_the_winner.6As the society develops rapidly, its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.(用with复合结构改写句子)With_the_society_developing_rapidly,_its_necessary_for_us_to_h
235、ave_a_good_knowledge_of_English_and_computer.7They are experienced, knowledgeable, patient and understanding.(用not only . but also .并列句型改写句子)They_are_not_only_experienced_and_knowledgeable,_but_also_patient_and_understanding.8We should speak more English. We think it is very important.(用it作形式宾语改写句子)
236、We_think_it_very_important_to_speak_more_English.按要求升级下面的考生作文用定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、非谓语动词、倒装句、it作形式主语、独立主格结构、双重否定等高级句式升级考生作文。(2019苏、锡、常、镇二模)请阅读下面图画和文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容1上面图文信息中的Matti的情况实际上反映了一种社会现象，请以约30词阐述这种现象的主要内容；2你认为人们该以什么样的态度来对待这种社会现象？是将它当作一种社会问题加以干涉，还是当作一种正常现象给予理解？请给出理由论证你的观点(至少三点)。写作要求1写作过程
237、中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文1：These caricatures actually demonstrate a kind of social phenomenon in some people.Just like Matti, they would rather put themselves into discomfort or inconvenience than contact other people.From my angle, we should understand this p
238、henomenon in a sensible way, namely, treat it as a personal preference instead of a social problem.Just leave it as it is.To begin with, these people may be enjoying their lifestyle but not suffering from it.They dont seem to ask for assistance from the outside world.Moreover, despite their differen
239、t behavior from us, they do us no harm, so why should we bias against them? Isnt society with a variety of living styles more colourful? Admittedly, some imperfections like lack of selfconfidence or incompetence may exist and indicate their temporary difficulty in life, but it means not others inter
240、vention but their own maturation.To sum up, an accepting attitude is more humanistic to those special Mattis.参考范文2：As we can see from these caricatures, shy people like Matti, are reluctant to communicate with strangers, anxious about being with unfamiliar people in public places and even nervous ab
241、out meeting neighbors.Nowadays, this kind of social phenomenon is not rare.Actually, social anxiety is getting in the way of those peoples social life.It is a common psychological problem that interferes with peoples normal routine and causes tremendous distress on a regular basis.Thus, by no means
242、should it be ignored or treated merely as a normal social phenomenon.Instead, due attention should be given.From my perspective, a tolerant and understanding attitude towards those people is essential.Being a considerate companion instead of pushing them too hard will do little harm to them.Also, we
243、 should never be stingy with the credit they deserve, which will definitely play a crucial role in nurturing their high selfesteem and overcoming their sense of inferiority.写作周周练(一)(2019苏州一模)请阅读下面文字和图片，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。With the development of technology, various means of communication have enter
244、ed our lives. Data engineer and NYU teacher Fred Benenson raised over 3,500 online to fund his translation of Moby Dick into emojis titled “Emoji Dick”. He hired helpers and translated the 200,000 word classic completely into pictures. In February of 2013, the Library of Congress welcomed it as the
245、first ever emoji book in its collection. Heres the first sentence, “Call me Ishmael.”In 2017, a survey was conducted involving 40,000 Internet users and found that 82 percent of them used emojis in their conversations; 83 percent said that “happiness” and “smiley face” are the two emojis they use mo
246、st; 57 per cent said that they would rather use emojis than words.Good：Sad face：Love：写作内容1用约30个单词概括上述内容；2谈谈你的观点，内容包括：(1)赞成或反对emojis流行的现象；(2)用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文1：Emojis have found their way into our phones, computers and lives. Th
247、ey have become so trendy that someone even translated an English classic into an emoji version, which was accepted by a library.I think the use of emojis is probably the start of an exciting new era in communication and we should welcome it. When I send messages to my friends, emojis are necessary p
248、arts. I often use emojis to emphasize something, or to soften the tone. I find these “picture words” very helpful, for they can bring out my meaning and real intention much better and faster in written context than I ever could using just words. They are to written texts what facial expressions are
249、to face to face interactions. Without emojis, you could easily run into misunderstanding. Emojis facilitate efficient communication.Emojis are useful therefore inevitable. So stop being cynical and come join us in embracing the future.参考范文2：Emojis have found their way into our phones, computers and
250、lives. They have become so trendy that someone even translated an English classic into an emoji version, which was accepted by a library.Despite the seemingly wide appeal of emojis, I think emojis are ruining the English language. Emojis do offer a short cut to communication; with a tiny, cute pictu
251、re you might save the painful efforts of wording. However, no pain, no gain. This ease and comfort emojis offer may well lead to laziness and in the long run, undermine our ability of proper grammar and spelling, even resulting in illiteracy, with younger generations especially at stake. Emojis may
252、seem funky but are sure informal. You should never hesitate to avoid them in formal context.Therefore, we should limit the use of emojis in our communication. Young people should be warned against the danger emojis might bring to them.写作周周练(二)(2019扬州高三模拟)请阅读下面文字及图片，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。So Close, Yet
253、 So FarWhere am I？What am I doing？If youre one of my 500 friends online, youll always be the first to know.My phone and laptop are never out of touching distance, so Im constantly posting updates on social media whether Im having a coffee, on my way to school, watching TV . even when Im in the showe
254、r.I have a neverending flow of messages and updates from all the people I associate with online.I live in a university dorm with a couple of great roommates.Yet the truth of the matter is：I feel lonely.A few days ago, I went out for a dinner gettogether with some friends.My best friend left the tabl
255、e for 30 minutes because he had to make a call.Some spent the dinner bent over their phones, texting friends online but ignoring the one who sat right in front of them. And the extraordinary thing is no one thought this was rude; its just how life is nowadays.写作内容1用约30个单词概述上述文字所描述的现象；2用约120个单词分析造成该现
256、象的原因(两至三点)；3请你给Mark提两到三条建议。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文：Nowadays it is not uncommon to see people like Mark have this sensationclosely associated with so many “friends” online, yet feeling remote from people around them.Quite a few factors make for this
257、phenomenon, of which the most notable one, I believe, is peoples addiction to their smart phones, social media . in a word, the virtual world. By sharing and updating online, people seem to be most gratified to attract a great number of followers. Meanwhile, they find little freshness in their surro
258、undings.Thus, they are blind to and withdraw from the people and things in real life.As to Marks experience, I feel genuine sympathy for him. To get out of such a dilemma, I would suggest that he cut down on his time spent online, so that he can hang out with his friends more often. More importantly
259、, step forward first to communicate with others when they are deeply lost in the virtual world.写作周周练(三)(2019南京、盐城二模)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Film and television adaptations of classic literature works have held a longstanding appeal for audiences, reshaping our cultural landscape.In 2017, a nine
260、episode TV adaptation of Chinese literature classic, The Dream of the Red Mansion, featured young cast aged 612 portraying the characters vividly and won applause among faithful readers of this classic work.To them, these young performers have brought the characters alive again.“I was impressed by t
261、heir perfect acting in the TV series.I never expected they could play so well.It is as good as the 1987 TV adaptation，” a Douban user commented.Before the shooting of the 1987 TV version, all the actors and actresses received systematic acting training and guided study of the original work.This time
262、, Ouyang Fenqiang，who played the leading role, Jia Baoyu, in the 1987 version, was invited to instruct the young performers.However, this is only one of the very few cases of being faithful to the original literature.Recent years have witnessed a large number of poorquality film and TV adaptations o
263、f literature classics, spoiling the understanding of the original work.Whether classic literature works should be adapted into film or TV series is worthy of discussion.写作内容1用约30个单词概括上述文字材料的主要内容；2用120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：(1)支持或反对把经典文学作品改编为影视作品；(2)用23个理由或论据支撑你的观点。写作要求1表明个人观点，同时提供理由或论据；2阐述观点或提供论据时，不得直接引用原文中
264、的句子；3文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；4不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文1：支持：Adaptations of films and TV series from literature classics have created a brilliant culture.The Dream of the Red Mansion is a relatively successful example.However, still many are of poor quality.I am in support of adapting literature cla
265、ssics into films or TV series.Firstly, art takes various forms, and so does the appreciation of classic literature.The digital and commercial age offers us different ways to admire the beauty of literature classics.Adapted versions, if true to the original works and well produced, are undoubtedly a
266、cultural feast for either average viewers or faithful classic literature lovers.Additionally, sometimes when an adaptation turns into a hit, the audience may be driven to read the original work.Trapped in quickpaced life, we could barely spare time to sink into a sofa, reading peacefully.Film or TV
267、adaptations, featuring vivid characters and an appealing plot, bring literature classics back to life.To conclude, literature classics are worth adaptation.参考范文2：反对：Adaptations of films and TV series from literature classics have created a brilliant culture.The Dream of the Red Mansion is a relative
268、ly successful example.However, still many are of poor quality.Personally, literature classics should not be adapted into films or TV series.The value of classics lies in their very basic nature: the perfect employment of language and life philosophy between words.To cater to viewerstaste and gain mo
269、re profits, producers couldnt avoid making changes to the original work.Thus, viewers might be misguided and get a wrong picture of the original story, let alone miss the opportunity to appreciate literature on their own.Moreover, with an increasing number of poorlymade adaptations, viewers, especia
270、lly the young, tend to focus more on those goodlooking performers, ignorant of the real culture hidden in the literature works.To conclude, literature classics are not supposed to be adapted into films or TV series.写作周周练(四)请阅读下面文字和图表，并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Travel preference of Chinese tourists in 2019C
271、hinese tourism industry is relatively young but very attractive. With 288 billion dollars spent worldwide in 2019, Chinese tourists spending represents a quarter of global tourism spending.Nowadays traveling is easier than some years ago and visiting a foreign country is as common as moving in China
272、. For this reason when Chinese tourists plan their holiday, they often have the dilemma whether it is better to move abroad or to stay in China.China has the largest outbound (出境的) tourism market. Indeed, more than 71 million Chinese tourists traveled abroad in 2019, 15 percent more than the previou
273、s year. This phenomenon is due to different factors, the first one being rising incomes. The middleclass has the means to travel outside China. The second one is an increase in online information with a content of quality. Word of mouth and recommendations from friends are the most favored source of
274、 information of Chinese tourists. The third factor would be friendlier visa policies from foreign governments.写作内容1用约30个单词概括上述信息的主要内容：2结合上述信息，用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：(1)你对“境外旅游热”持什么观点？说明你的理由(至少两点)；(2)若你所在城市正大力推广本地旅游业，你认为应该采取哪些促进措施？写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范
275、文：According to the passage and diagram, rising income, abundant online travel information and friendlier visa policies have really boosted Chinese tourism industry in a totally convincing way, especially outbound trips.With our living standards improving, people have a preference for travelling abro
276、ad. However, I will undoubtedly choose to travel domestically. First of all, there may be language barriers even if you have learned a second language, and cultural impacts are very likely to ruin your vacation. Second, travelling abroad takes more time. You have to undergo certain processes to get
277、a visa and spend longer hours travelling from place to place.As an advocate for travelling domestically, I have some practical suggestions for the local government, which is determined to improve local tourism . Convenient transport is of primary importance as well as local infrastructure. Our local
278、 government should concentrate its efforts on bringing out our uniqueness rather than developing tourism aimlessly.写作周周练(五)(2019南京三模)请认真阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 The Palace Museum, as known as the Forbidden City, began selling souvenirs and other peripheral(周边的) products on Alibabas Taobao in
279、October 2010.The latest statistics show sales reached 1.5 billion yuan in 2017, said Shan Jixiang, the former museum curator (馆长)Meanwhile, the number of cultural and creative products available for sale at the Palace Museum increased from 195 in 2013 to 9,170 in 2016.“The income from the cultural a
280、nd creative industries made it possible for the Palace Museum to hold 60,000 educational activities in 2018, bringing more visitors to our museum，” Shan added.写作内容1用约30个单词概括图表及文字的内容； 2用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括： (1)故宫推出文化创作产品的意义(不少于两点); (2)你想为故宫文化创作推出一款什么样的产品(上图仅供参考)并作简要说明。写作要求1表明个人观点，同时提供理由或论据； 2阐述观点或提供论据
281、时，不得直接引用原文中的句子；3文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；4不必写标题。 评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文：The Palace Museum has witnessed a sharp rise in the sales of its cultural and creative products.Meanwhile, the number of visitors has increased dramatically in the past few years as well.The benefits we enjoy from promoting cultura
282、l products far exceed our imagination.Firstly, these inventive art works function as ambassadors to spread our splendid culture, extending Chinese cultural influence and building up our cultural confidence.In addition, profits gained from the sales of artistic souvenirs can be spent on the restorati
283、on of cultural relics and the organization of educational activities, which in turn will attract more visitors.To jump on the bandwagon of promoting Chinese culture, I will design a set of bookmarks with images of palaces or emperors on them.It not only is of practical use but also serves as a remin
284、der of sweet memories at the Palace Museum.I hope my design will be a useful addition to those cultural and creative art works.写作周周练(六)(2019扬、泰、南、淮、徐、宿、连三模)请阅读下面有关中国在线外卖现状调查的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。The scale of consumers of fast fooddelivery service in ChinaThe fast food delivery service, whic
285、h depends on the already existing restaurants, can cover a larger place with more customers without taking the seats of restaurants.Under the current economic and market condition, the fast food delivery service has been the new battlefield of the fast food giants in China.Even MacDonalds and KFC, t
286、he two international fast food giants are fighting against each other for more market share in Chinas fast food delivery industry.However, Jing Linbo, Deputy Director of the Institute of Finance and Trade Economics, the Chinese Academy of Social Science, thought that the fast food delivery is the ne
287、w growth point of fast food enterprises.But the fast food enterprises should have certain comprehensive strengths to do this service, which is thought to be different from the traditional food industry in some aspects.Besides, with the development of the new industry, there also emerge problems.And
288、some observers have given their warnings.They warn that if the fast food enterprises take no notice of the hidden problems, they will lose the customers in the competitive market gradually.写作内容1用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2结合上述信息，简要分析外卖盛行的主要原因；3请从消费者角度谈谈你对外卖的看法及建议，用23个理由支撑你的观点。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实
289、姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文：The number of the consumers of the fast food delivery service has increased steadily from 2011 to 2018.However, there may exist some potential problems with the new industry.A number of factors contribute to the increase.Not only can good quality and reaso
290、nable prices of fresh food be guaranteed to some extent but the service can also benefit those who are too busy to prepare meals themselves.Whats more, the development of the Internet has made it easy to decide on their favorite food and place orders, which is both timesaving and economical.As a consumer, Im convinced the fast food delivery service will witness a constant rise in the near future.We consumers should be careful to choose those restaurants whose quality of food is guaranteed.And fast food enterprises should actively take hidden problems into account and provide quality service.
