1、2016河南省尉氏县高考英语二轮书面表达品析(5)及参考范文读写任务(共1小题,满分25分) 阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 A little boy was playing in his sandbox. He had with him his box of toy cars and trucks and a red plastic shovel(铲). In the process of creating roads in the soft sand, he discovered a large rock in the middle of the sandbox
2、. The boy dug around the rock, managing to get it out from the dirt. With a little bit of struggle, he pushed the rock across the sandbox by using his feet.When the boy got the rock to the edge of the sandbox, however, he found that he couldnt roll it up and move it to the wall. Determined, the litt
3、le boy tried again, pushed, and shoveled, but every time he thought he had made some progress the rock rolled and then fell back into the sandbox. The little boy struggled, pushed, and pulled; but failed. Finally he burst into tears. The boys father watched him from his living room window all the ti
4、me. At the moment the tears fell, a large shadow fell across the boy and the sandbox. It was the boys father. Gently but firmly he said, Son, why didnt you use all the strength available? Defeated, the boy sobbed back, But I did, Daddy, I did! I used all the strength that I had! No, son, corrected t
5、he father kindly. You didnt use all the strength you had. You didn t ask me. With these words the father picked up the rock and removed it from the sandbox.写作内容1以大约30个词概括短文要点;2以约120个词就人生需要帮助的话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括: (1)你读完文章的感受; (2)以你的亲身经历谈谈帮助的重要性;(3)今后你是否也会帮助别人,为什么?写作要求1作文中可以使用自己亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接
6、引用原文中的句子;2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;评分标准 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务(共1小题,满分25分) A little boy had some difficulty in removing a big rock from the sandbox. Though he tried hard, he still couldnt move it. Finally his father helped him and he managed. After reading this passage, I think highly of the fathers
7、 words. He helped his son realize the importance of help. Similar things also occurred to me. I still remember last summer holiday when I travelled in Beijing on my own. Unfortunately, I lost my baggage, I was penniless and I couldnt go home. It was with the help of the local police that I was able
8、to return home safely. What I experienced has taught me a lot. Help is very important for us, and we will benefit from others help. There is no doubt that I will offer help as much as possible if I find someone who is in trouble. Help is a good virtue, which will make problems solved more easily, ma
9、ke people feel the warmth of others, and make our lives better and better.【2013界广东省惠州4月模拟】基础写作(共1小题.满分15分)你接受了一项写作任务,用英语写一篇简短的报道。【写作内容】上周末,义工组织“绿色家园”在滨江公园开展了回收利用的宣传活动。活动内容如下,回收的必要性:日常生活中,找们常过度消费资源,如:各类包装袋的使用回收的途径包装袋可多次使用等回收的作用:减少资源的消耗,保护环境【写作要求】只能使用五个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。参考词汇:绿色家园Green
10、Home 过度消耗overconsumption 【参考范文】基础写作:(One possible version)In Binjiang Park last weekend, a voluntary organization called “Green Home” launched a campaign to promote recycling. As can be seen in our daily life, overconsumption of resources has become a common practice, making it urgent to arouse peop
11、les awareness of recycling. There exists the popularity of various kinds of packing bags for goods and what we are supposed to do is to reuse them. In this way, we will consume less resource so the environment is protected to some extent. Besides, if we try our utmost to recycle everything reusable
12、in our life, we can also save some money.【2013界广东省惠州4月模拟】读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文Some post-80s graduates have given up the dream of working in a big city, and heading back home has become part of future job consideration. Two of the more common ones are trying to avoid the intense
13、competition and the pressure, and seeing unprecedented opportunities in the growing economies back home.Changping. a 22-year-old student from Hainan University, said that if he would decide on starting his business, hed certainly return to his hometown, Xiangfan ,in Hubei Province. That was because
14、he has his own network of people who could help him in every way. Also, he could get some good business ideas like setting up advanced kindergartens in small cities. If no one was doing that, the chance of being successful seemed higher.But Chen Haihua ,a college student from Guangzhou Medical Colle
15、ge, said that she would plan to stick to a big city, Guangzhou, instead of going back to her hometown, Zhanjiang, in Guangdong Province. She wanted to struggle in the big city for a more exciting, better life. She explained that she also could be a role model, letting the kids in her hometown work h
16、ard Io go to key universities.【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括该短文的内容;2.然后以约120个词谈谈你对就业方向的看法,内容包括: (1 ) 试分析在大城市和回家乡就业各自的有利因素; (2)如果你大学毕业了,你会选择在哪里就业?(3)选择的理由。【写作要求】 1.作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不 得直接引用原文中的句了2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇迮贯。【参考范文】读写任务:(One possible version) Post-80s graduates hold
17、different views towards job choices. Some, like Changping, will head back home to avoid the competition and pressure in big cities, while others, like Chen haihua, would prefer to stay in big cities to seek a better job.Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing, which means better opportu
18、nities and more conveniences. Its easier to find a well-paid job or a better platform to improve oneself. While in a small town, where there are not so many elites to compete with, one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life. As for me, a girl f
19、rom a remote village, I would rather struggle in a big city like Shenzhen to make a living than go back to my hometown. Though hard, struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business. Therefore, after graduation, I will choose a big city as the start of my career. Thanks to the inten
20、se competition, I can grow into an experienced and competitive person, which does good to my later development.(2014福建卷)第二节 书面表达(满分25分)如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. - Sir Winston, Churchil
21、l 内容要求: 1你对该引语的理解: 2你的相关经历: 3恰当的结尾。 注意: 1短文开头已给出,不计入总词数: 2文中不能出现考生的具体信息: 3词数:120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _.【考点】考察开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于开放性作文,要求考生根据丘吉尔的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.发表自己的理解,并举例说明。属于议论文的一种,主要使用第三人称和一般现在时。
22、在讲述各人经历时可以使用过去时。要点:1.该名言告诉我们:面对失败,我们不应该泄气,相反我们应该鼓足勇气充满热情继续努力。2.各人经历:学习骑自行车的例子。3.如果我们不尝试,我们就不可能成功,最重要的是我们要坚持下去。本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。【一句多译】回顾这一切,我感觉如果我失去信心,我就不能学会骑自行车了。(1)Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a b
23、ike had I lost heart.(2)When I looked back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike If I had lost heart.【参考范文】This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to contin
24、ue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it.