1、写作规范练(五)(限时35分钟)(见素养提升特训P191)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)Ill never forget the experience as a volunteer for an international marathon race.As one of the three volunteers from our school, I felt excited.In spare time I practiced a great deal of， especially in my spoken English to ensure the best servic
2、e.Then the day.Early in the morning I arrived the match would begin and found many volunteers already there preparations.During the match, I, with the others, busy helping the runners all the time.We were highly praised for we did, without which the race / have been a success.It was my first time to
3、 be a volunteer for important a sport event, which made me proud. 解析 此处volunteers与select之间为动宾关系，应用过去分词作后置定语。 解析 主语为I，此处指“在我的业余时间里”，应用my修饰time。 解析 a great deal可单独使用，也可用在形容词或副词的比较级前，表示“大量；许多”；a great deal of只能用在不可数名词前，表示“大量的”。此处用于修饰动词practiced，应用a great deal。 解析 作者做志愿者的事情发生在过去，应用一般过去时。 解析 arrived后为宾语从
4、句，从句中缺少地点状语，故用where。 解析 此处为“find宾语宾补”结构，根据句意可知，“做准备”的动作正在进行，故应用现在分词作宾补。 解析 本句主语为I, with the others为伴随状语，因此，谓语动词应用单数形式。 解析 for后为宾语从句，从句中缺少宾语，此处指“事情”，故应用what。 解析 根据句中的without which及句意可知，此处用双重否定表示肯定意义，故在could后加not或将could改为couldnt。 解析 important为形容词，应用副词so修饰；such用于修饰名词。第二节书面表达(满分25分)(2019广东揭阳期末)假设你是李华，你从
5、市校园网上得知，今年暑假，市一所小学将聘请澳大利亚的一些教师来给学校的学生培训口语，计划招10名助教。请根据以下要点，写封邮件提出申请。1口语能力；2组织能力；3沟通能力。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam, Ive learned from the city school website that your school is in need of ten teaching assistants to foreign teachers this summer vacation.Im writing to apply for the
6、 position.First of all, I have a good command of spoken English and can communicate freely with others in English.Whats more, years of experience of being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help keep the class in order.What is the most important is that I love kids, and Im confident that my patience and care will undoubtedly win their trust.All in all, I think my enthusiasm and full sense of responsibility will prove me a qualified teaching assistant.Id appreciate it if you could give me a chance.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly, Li Hua
