1、Section Writing介绍神秘现象技法指导1文体介绍本单元的写作主题为“介绍神秘现象”，可以通过“说明议论”的模式进行写作。首先，在说明的部分，应抓住现象的特征，以一定的顺序(如时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等)进行客观地介绍，并点明其神秘之处。其次，在议论的部分，应对该神秘现象做出解释。应注意解释或论证的逻辑要清晰，引用的观点要明确。最后，在结尾部分，可以简洁地说明作者自身的观点，或直接总结全文。2篇章结构(1)开门见山：解释神秘的现象，可以利用设问句的方式，引起读者的阅读兴趣。(2)渲染气氛：说明该现象在人们眼中的神秘之处，引发读者的好奇心。(3)分析或解释原因：可以引用民间传说或官
2、方说明来进行解释。注意：此部分应注意逻辑顺序和段落之间的过渡和衔接，可适当地运用一些衔接手段，如衔接词、句等。可以使用“总分”的结构，即以中心句明确段落大意，再展开说明、论证。(4)结尾：可以说明作者自身的观点或者直接总结全文。注意：结尾部分不要展开过多，避免啰嗦。3常用表示(1)介绍地点常用的词汇及表达：recommend, recommendation, mystery, mysterious, historical, according to, legend, witness, specific, location, lie in, remain, consist of, worldwi
3、deLocated in.，.still remains a mystery to scientists until today.位于，直到今天，对科学家来说仍然是个谜。Being one of the natural mysteries in the world, it has attracted much worldwide attention.作为世界自然之谜之一，它引起了全世界的广泛关注。(2)给出推荐理由并介绍奇异现象常用的词汇及表达：exist, existence, disappear, disappearance，discover, discovery, debate, une
4、xplained, natural, popular, structure, truth, convincing, evidence; phenomenon, amazing, frightening, trace back toThe most interesting phenomenon is that.最有趣的现象是For thousands of years, it is considered as one of the.几千年来，它被认为是之一。The description of.can be traced back to.对的描述可以追溯到According to the leg
5、end，.据传说What makes it mysterious is that.它的神秘之处在于(3)结尾段常用表达：Scientists conclude that the disappearance of it may be caused by.科学家得出结论，它的消失可能是因为Perhaps with the development of science and technology, the mystery of.can be explained.也许随着科学技术的发展，的奥秘可以被解释。精品展示假定你是某国际旅行社的导游李华，请你根据以下提示，向你带领的来自加拿大的游客推荐云南的迷
6、人湖。1位置：云南省原始森林；2规模：宽处150米，窄处60米，水深1.5米；3奇异现象：如果站在湖边说话，会立即下雨。声音越大，雨就越大。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：原始森林primitive forestsDear tourists，Today, Id like to recommend an amazing place, Miren Lake, to you._Yours，Li Hua审题谋篇第一步：确定时态和人称该写作为描写一个神秘的地方，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第二步：确定段落首段：向游客推荐一个神秘的地方中段：描述此神秘地方的
7、特色和神秘之处尾段：结束语，说明此地会让游客喜欢第三步：提炼要点1_位于2_ 在边缘3_ 研究4_ 爱上5_ 一就第四步：句式升级1迷人湖位于云南省的原始森林，是世界上最神秘的地方之一。(一般表达)Miren Lake is located in the primitive forest in Yunnan Province, and it is one of the most mysterious places in the world.(高级表达)_.(过去分词作定语完成句子的升级)2此处很神秘：当人们在湖边讲话时，天会下雨。(一般表达)It is mysterious, when peo
8、ple talk at the edge of the lake, it starts to rain.(高级表达)_.(用名词性从句合并进行升级)连句成篇_Section Writing介绍神秘现象审题谋篇第三步1be located in2.at the edge of3.do research into4.fall in love with5.the moment第四步1Miren Lake, located in the primitive forest in Yunnan Province, is one of the most mysterious places in the wo
9、rld2What makes it mysterious is that when people talk at the edge of the lake, it starts to rain连句成篇Dear tourists，Today, Id like to recommend an amazing place, Miren Lake, to you.Miren Lake, located in the primitive forests in Yunnan Province, is one of the most mysterious places in the world. With
10、the depth of 1.5 metres, it is 150 metres in width in some wide parts, while in some narrow parts, it is 60 metres. What makes it mysterious is that when people talk at the edge of the lake, it starts to rain. Furthermore, the louder the voice is, the heavier the rain becomes. Although many scientists have been doing research into this strange phenomenon, nobody can provide convincing factors to explain the mystery.I believe you will fall in love with this magic place the moment you get there.Yours，Li Hua
