1、表达 作文巧升格UNIT 3 FASCINATING PARKS景点介绍景点介绍是使用生动的语言对某一地点和某一环境进行具体逼真的描绘，属于说明文。基本框架第一部分：提出介绍或说明的景点。第二部分：景点及其中各项活动项目的功能或特点、地理位置、交通方式以及收费情况等。第三部分：对景点的总结，发出邀请。注意事项1景点一般由若干活动项目组合而成。介绍时可依照先概述景点，再分述活动项目，最后总述的顺序。分述活动项目可依照游玩路线进行。2介绍景点以说明为主，在说明中可以穿插描写和叙述。常用词块1be located in northern China 位于中国北方2a famous historic
2、and cultural city 一座历史文化名城3cover 154 square kilometers 面积 154 平方公里4be famous for its four wonders 以四大奇迹而闻名5a natural zoo and botanical garden一个天然动物园和植物园6with a history of over 30 years 有着 30 多年的历史7last from 1703 to 1792 从 1703 年持续到 1792 年8date from/back to 1534 始建于 1534 年9one of the most famous moun
3、tains in China中国最为著名的山脉之一10the largest and most complete ancient woodenstructure building中国最大、最完整的古代木结构建筑常用语句1介绍功能或特点The theme of the park is.这个公园的主题是You will enjoy doing/seeing.你会很高兴地做/看到Hangzhou has many places of interest,among which is the West Lake.Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake.杭州有许多名胜古迹
4、，西湖是其中之一。杭州以西湖而闻名。2介绍地理位置It is located/situated in the centre of.它位于的中心。It lies in the south/east of.它位于的南面/东面。On the top of the hill stands a splendid tower.山顶上耸立着一座壮观的塔。3介绍面积It covers an area of 1，000 square kilometres.它占地 1 000 平方公里。China is the third largest country in the world with an area of
5、9，600，000 square kilometres.中国是世界上第三大国，面积 960 万平方公里。4介绍历史The city has a long history of 1，000 years.该城市有 1 000 年的悠久历史。It is a modern city with a long history of 1，000 years and rich tour resources.它是一个有着 1 000 年悠久历史的现代城市，旅游资源丰富。5介绍交通方式You can reach the building/museum by.你可以通过到达大厦/博物馆。You can get th
6、ere a little more quickly by.你可以通过更快速地到达那里。6介绍其他情况It has a population of about eleven million.它大约有一千一百万人口。As for the weather,it never gets too hot or too cold.And it is at its best during the spring and autumn months.至于天气，它不会太热或太冷。在春天和秋天是最好的。升格示例假如你上周去北京旅游了，参观了长城，请根据以下信息要点写一篇英语短文，介绍该景点并谈谈你的参观感受。历史有两
7、千多年的历史 特点世界上最长的城墙，长 6 000 多千米；建筑材料主要为石头、砖头，修建工作都是人工进行的；主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台(watchtower)。现状世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_学生习作 The Great Wall with a history of more than 2，000 years.It is the longest wall in the world and more than 6，000 kilometers long.It is made of
8、stone and bricks and all work was done by hand.The wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders.There were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.Now，the Great Wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many visitors from all over the wor
9、ld every year.点评：1.该习作完全是对所给要点的翻译，没有重新组织材料。2.审题不仔细，缺少要点。3.词语不够亮丽，且句式不够丰富，缺少变化。4.文中出现了一些语言错误，如首句就没有谓语。升格作文As is known to all，the Great Wall，which is more than 6，000 kilometers long，is the longest wall in the world.It has a history of more than 2，000 years.It is made of stone and bricks and almost all
10、 the construction was done by hand without any machine.As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders，there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.Now，the Great Wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many visitors from all o
11、ver the world every year.If you have a chance to visit it，you will be delighted with the great tourist attraction.请根据以下要点，写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文，介绍香港海洋公园。1香港海洋公园，位于香港的南部，是一个著名的主题公园。2面积超过 87 万平方米，是世界上最大的海洋公园之一。3有 30 多年的历史，是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一。4游客可以体验惊险之旅和观看各种表演。5香港海洋公园还为其提供的教育项目而自豪。_参考范文Hong Kong Ocean Park,a famou
12、s theme park,is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.It is one of the largest marine parks in the world,covering more than 870，000 square metres.With a history of over 30 years,the Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.It is Hong Kongs favourite park,which attracts
13、 the most visitors.Visitors can experience adventurous trips and enjoy a wide variety of shows,such as dolphin shows.The park also takes pride in its educational programs.Hong Kong Ocean Park will fill your day with wonder,pleasure and excitement,and reward you with satisfying memories.点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
