1、 如果一篇文章中有较多的语法错误，即使词汇再亮、句式再高，也只能是欲盖弥彰、难掩其丑，将直接被打入低分“冷宫”。“欲想得高分，先保基本分”。所以，我们先从写对句子学起。第1招表达正确规避常犯的9大错误考生写作中常犯的错误主要表现在词性不明、措辞不当、用法不妥、重复累赘、句法混乱、中式英语、拼写与标点有误等。下面通过整理归类，列举正误例句，指出错误所在，总结其规律，以便帮助考生尽快提高英语书面语言的准确表达能力。一、词性不明1误：Everyone in my family is like the dog.正：Everyone in my family likes the dog.分析：作者的原意
2、是：我们全家都喜欢这只狗。但错误例句所传递的信息却是：我们全家都像狗。英语中的like主要用作动词(喜欢)、名词(爱好)、介词(像)。弄清“like的众兄弟”(like, unlike, dislike, likely, alike, look like, would like, feel like )的词性和搭配很有必要，以便做到触类旁通。2误：Those who strongly against the idea think animals will lose their freedom and nature if caged in the zoo.正：Those who are stro
3、ngly against the idea think animals will lose their freedom and nature if caged in the zoo.分析：误将介词作动词：against(反对)是介词而不是动词，用介词表达动作意义，要加系动词be; for为其反义词，意为“同意”。二、措辞不当1误：Not until I got back to the hotel did I realize I had forgotten my luggage in the taxi.正：Not until I got back to the hotel did I reali
4、ze I had left my luggage in the taxi.分析：表示把某物“遗忘，落下”，并且句中有地点状语时要用leave。2误：Under the help of my classmates and teachers, I managed to make up for the lessons I had missed.正：With the help of my classmates and teachers, I managed to make up for the lessons I had missed.正：Thanks to the help of my classm
5、ates and teachers, I managed to make up for the lessons I had missed.分析：思维方式差异：“在的帮助下”实则是“由于的帮助”， under常用于“under the leadership/protection of .”。三、用法不妥1误：Finally we were shown around the playground at the far back of the school, where there were some boys had a football game.正：Finally we were shown
6、around the playground at the far back of the school, where there were some boys having a football game.分析：there be sb. doing sth.是固定句式，ing形式表示主动关系。2误：I am delighted to tell you that great changes have been taken place in my hometown.正：I am delighted to tell you that great changes have taken place in
7、 my hometown.分析：不用于被动语态的动词(或短语)有：happen, occur, take place, break out, come about, come up, belong to, consist of, date from, look like, run out, turn out等。四、重复累赘1误：We did all what we could to help the elderly in the nursing home.正：We did all that we could to help the elderly in the nursing home.正：W
8、e did what we could to help the elderly in the nursing home.正：We did all we could (do) to help the elderly in the nursing home.分析：all/things thatwhat2误：The moment when I think of my motto, Ill become energetic and devote myself to what Im doing.正：The moment I think of my motto, Ill become energetic
9、and devote myself to what Im doing.分析：the moment/minute/instant .或each/every/next/the first time .等名词性短语作从属连词引导时间状语从句时，其后不再接when。五、句法混乱1误：Though it took us some time to help him, but we were happy anyway.正：Though it took us some time to help him, we were happy anyway.正：Though it took us some time to
10、 help him, yet we were happy anyway.分析：汉语复合句的关联词语要求完整，但英语复合句中的从属连词和并列连词不可并用，否则句子的类型无法确定。“because ., so .”亦属此类。2误：There is going to have an evening party at the meeting hall on the fifth floor of the office building.正：There is going to be an evening party at the meeting hall on the fifth floor of the
11、 office building.分析：“there be”和“have”均表示“有”，但前者表存在，后者表所属，两种句式不可杂糅在一起。六、中式英语1误：Grandpa is in his eighties, but his body is healthy.正：Grandpa is in his eighties, but he is in good health.分析：body可用来表示强壮的身体(a strong body)，但不能指健康状况。2误：I wonder if youre convenient to meet my uncle at the airport as its th
12、e first time that he has visited the USA.正：I wonder if it is convenient for you to meet my uncle at the airport as its the first time that he has visited the USA.分析：指物形容词impossible, necessary, difficult, convenient, satisfactory, dangerous等只能用来修饰限定事物，而不能指人。七、拼写错误1误：Nowdays voting on the Internet is
13、becoming more and more popular.正：Nowadays voting on the Internet is becoming more and more popular.分析：nowadays的书写是考生常犯的错误，一定牢记中间有a。拼写错误一般是漫不经心，自以为然而致。2误：I thought and thought, and suddenly a bright idea occured to my mind.正：I thought and thought, and suddenly a bright idea occurred to my mind.分析：常见的
14、辅音字母双写的动词有begin, equip, admit, forget, permit, regret, occur, prefer, refer等。“双写”必须满足三个条件：重读音节；闭音节；含有一个元音字母和一个辅音字母。八、标点有误1误：I am grateful to my English teacher for all the help and support he has given me, which has made me stronger and a better person。正：I am grateful to my English teacher for all t
15、he help and support he has given me, which has made me stronger and a better person.分析：中英文句号的符号截然不同。2误：This experience has also taught me that as long as. I never give up and keep trying, I can succeed.正：This experience has also taught me that as long as I never give up and keep trying, I can succee
16、d.分析：单词间随意乱点，疑似“帕金森综合症”。九、其他错误1误： It was hot and we were exhausted. However, we all felt happily.正：It was hot and we were exhausted. However, we all felt happy.分析：表示状态、变化或感官意义的连系动词后常跟形容词作表语。2误：The number of university graduates going to abroad for further study is increasing every year.正：The number
17、of university graduates going abroad for further study is increasing every year.分析：“冤家”聚头：英语副词前不可出现介词，如go abroad, come here, get there, return home等。 强化落实训练下面的考生作文中含有一些错误，请改正假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1主题：环境保护；2展览时间；3投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow 。注意：1.词数100左右；2可
18、以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。学生习作Dear Peter，I am exciting to tell you a good news.In order to protect the environment, our school photography club decided to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.Protect the environment is the theme of the show.They will start from June 15th till June 17th.If
19、 you are interest, you are welcome to participate.I know you are good at take good pictures and you always want to do something for the environment.I remember you showed me some photo on that theme the last time you visited our school. I advise you take this chance to have a try. You can sent your p
20、hotos to intlphotoshow .Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours，Li Hua我来纠错文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，请修改。excitingexcited; 去掉adecided前加hasProtectProtectingTheyItinterestinterestedtaketakingphotophotosyou后加tosentsend第2招表达规范正确使用6大句式句式(一)简约却不简单的“主语谓语(vi.)(状语)”结构1主谓结构中谓语常用来表示主语的动作或状态。这种句型中的谓语动词为不及物动词，后面可以
21、跟副词、介词短语、状语从句等。但不能接宾语，也没有被动语态。常见的不及物动词有：arrive, come, lie, shine, live, walk, fall, rise, happen, exist, ride, occur, agree, write等。2谓语动词也可以是不及物动词短语，如come up (被提出), run out (用完), get by (勉强生存), come out (出版), break down (出故障), drop by (顺便拜访), pass out (晕倒)等。注意不及物动词或短语后不能接宾语，要特别注意英汉表达的差异。他家昨晚发生了一场火灾。
22、His home broke out a fire last night. ()A fire broke out in his home last night. () (2020新高考全国卷写作)The racing route began at our school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill.比赛路线从我们学校门口开始，到南山脚下结束。(2019全国卷书面表达)An important volleyball match is approaching.一场重要的排球比赛即将来临。In the environment, teache
23、rs and students are living happily and working hard.在这种环境下，师生们生活快乐，工作努力。(2019全国卷书面表达)The upcoming music festival will take place in our school.即将到来的音乐节将在我们学校举行。 对点训练翻译句子(主语不及物动词)1(2020全国卷书面表达)上周末，我和我的同学骑自行车去新兴农场摘草莓。 Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Xinxing Farm by bike to pick strawberries.
24、2(2019全国卷书面表达)在比赛中友谊第一。Friendship always comes first in the competition.3(2019全国卷书面表达)比赛将于下午2点开始，大约持续3个小时。The competition will begin at 2 pm and last for roughly 3 hours.4(2019北京高考书面表达)第二天，我们一早就出发了。The next day, we set off early in the morning.5他做作业时，电脑突然坏掉了。The computer broke down when he was doing
25、 his homework. 句式(二)众人青睐的“主谓宾(状语)”结构“主谓宾”句型之所以受到中国英语学习者的青睐，是因为它跟我们的思维方式最接近，因而这个句型也是考生在写作中运用最多的。它的基本结构是：主语谓语(vt.)宾语(状语)1该句型中的谓语是及物动词，如respect, admire, ignore, provide, upset, appreciate等。其后可接名词、代词、动名词、动词不定式或从句等作宾语。2谓语动词也可以是及物动词短语，如 communicate with (交流), stand for (代表，象征), get on with (与相处), look for
26、ward to (盼望), come across (偶然碰到)，等等。(2020新高考全国卷写作) Both students and teachers hope to hold such activities again.学生和老师都希望能再次举办这样的活动。(2019全国卷书面表达) I would appreciate your taking my application into consideration.您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。(2019全国卷书面表达) I can communicate with visitors without difficulty.我可以毫无困难地
27、与来访者沟通。(2019天津高考书面表达) I am looking forward to enjoying your wonderful lecture.我期待着欣赏你精彩的演讲。 (1)有些“主谓宾”结构的句子虽然短小，但表达的含义更精确，语言更地道。写作中并不一定句子越长越好。I could not say any word.Words failed me.(单词虽然少，句子更精悍)(2)在写作中，同学们比较擅长使用主动语态。如果能灵活使用被动语态，会给句子添彩不少。例如：I am not sure whether all the college graduates can find j
28、obs after graduation.I am not sure whether all the college graduates can get employed after graduation. 对点训练翻译句子(“主谓宾”结构)1(2019全国卷书面表达)此外，我还可以详细介绍中国画。In addition, I can explain the Chinese paintings in detail.2(2019全国卷书面表达)此外，充足的睡眠和健康的饮食无疑会使我们获得胜利。Besides, enough sleep and healthy diet will unquesti
29、onably lead to our winning.3(2018全国卷书面表达)我相信你会玩得很开心。I have the confidence that you will have a good time.4(2017全国卷书面表达)我们学校的乒乓球队现在正在招收新队员。The Table Tennis Team of our school is looking for new players right now.5通过做兼职工作，我能得到一些宝贵的经验。By doing the parttime job I can get some precious experience.句式(三)独一
30、无二的“主系表”结构汉语没有表语这一说法，这样就显得英语的“主系表”结构比较有个性了，因此我们说此结构是独一无二的。它主要用以说明主语的特征、类属、状态、身份等。它的基本结构是：主语系动词表语1这种句型无被动语态，也无进行时态。谓语动词需用系动词，表语多为形容词，也可以是名词、介词短语或非谓语动词形式等。常见的系动词有be，还有感官系动词(sound, look, smell, taste, feel)；变化系动词(become, get, grow, turn, go, fall, run)；持续系动词(remain, keep, hold, stay)；表象系动词(seem, appear
31、, look)等。(2020全国卷书面表达)Regardless of the risk of getting infected, Uncle Li is responsible and devoted to his job.李叔叔不顾感染的危险，对工作负责，尽心尽力。(2019江苏高考书面表达)The traditional Chinese dress looks more beautiful and stylish.中国传统服装看起来更漂亮，更时尚。Now we feel released and very energetic in class.现在我们在课堂上感到轻松，精力充沛。2在主系
32、表结构中要注意英汉表达的差异，避免中式英语。如：这件外套很贵。The price of the coat is very expensive. ()The coat is very expensive.()The price of the coat is very high.()表示价格的词price可用“高”或“低”，即high或low来修饰，而不可像汉语一样用“贵”或“便宜”来形容。 对点训练补全句子(“主系表”结构)1(2019全国卷书面表达)我的目标是让中国走向世界，让世界了解中国。My aim is to let China go to the world and let the w
33、orld understand China.2(2018全国卷书面表达)最重要的是，你应该注意餐桌礼仪。Most importantly, its vital that you should mind your table manners.3(2018北京高考书面表达)收到你的来信并知道你要来北京，我很高兴。Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to Beijing.4(2017全国卷书面表达)它们看起来如此迷人和生动，以至于我想你可能对它们感兴趣。So attractive and alive do they look t
34、hat I think you could be interested in them. 5(2017全国卷书面表达)唐诗是我们下一节课将要学习的内容。Tang Poetry is what we are going to learn the next class.句式(四)一拖二的“主谓宾宾”结构“主谓宾宾”这类句型在写作中常常用到，具有独特的魅力。与单个的及物动词跟一个宾语结构相比，双宾语结构的独特之处在于一个动词与两个名词(短语)相互作用。它的基本结构是：主语谓语(vt.)间接宾语(人)直接宾语1间接宾语一般位于直接宾语的前面，如果间接宾语在直接宾语的后面，那么中间需要加上一个介词。可用
35、介词to来变换间接宾语的动词：give, offer, hand, show, throw, pass, pay, send, sell, tell, lend, write等。(如：give sb.sth.give sth.to sb.)However busy he is, he writes me an email every week.However busy he is, he writes an email to me every week.不管他多忙，他每周都会给我写一封电子邮件。Mr Smith gave me some advice and lent me an Englis
36、h dictionary.Mr Smith gave some advice to me and lent an English dictionary to me.史密斯先生给了我一些建议并且借了本英文词典给我。2可用介词for来变换间接宾语的动词：make, buy, cook, find, get, order, sing, spare, fetch等。(如：make sb.sth.make sth.for sb.)He bought me a bicycle.He bought a bicycle for me.他给我买了一辆自行车。Can you get me some stamps?
37、Can you get some stamps for me?你能帮我拿些邮票吗？注意ask, answer, take, cost等，这一类动词无法改变结构形式。May I ask you a question？我可以问你一个问题吗？ 对点训练补全句子/翻译句子(“主谓宾宾”结构)1(2019浙江高考写作)我祝你今后一切顺利，旅途愉快。I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.2(2019全国卷书面表达)开幕式将于上午9点开始，我们的校长将首先给我们发表讲话。The opening ceremony will
38、start at 9：00 am and our headmaster will give us a speech first.3(2018全国卷书面表达)希望我能提供给你一些有用的建议。Hopefully, I can offer you some helpful suggestions.4(2017北京高考书面表达)那确实给了我们一种极大的成就感。That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.5我记得你来我们学校访问时，你给我展示了一些关于环保的照片。I remember you showed me some photos on envi
39、ronmental protection when you visited our school.句式(五)缺一不可的“主谓宾补”结构“主谓宾补”句式结构中的谓语虽然是及物动词，但是只跟一个宾语还不能表达完整的意思，必须加上一个补充成分来说明宾语，才能使意思完整。宾语补足语是用来补充说明宾语的情况的，直接跟在宾语之后。宾语与宾语补足语之间有逻辑上的主谓关系。宾语补足语可以由名词、非谓语动词、形容词、副词或介词短语等充当。写作时应熟练掌握“名词作宾语补足语”这种高级表达形式。它的基本结构是：主语谓语(vt.)宾语宾语补足语1常用名词充当宾语补足语的动词有：call, name, elect, m
40、ake, appoint, leave, consider, keep, wish等。We all call him a living dictionary.我们都叫他“活字典”。2常用形容词充当宾语补足语的动词有：believe, think, get, keep, make, find, set, wish, consider, prove, leave, paint, drive等。(2020全国卷书面表达) It was Mr Liu who made me aware of the importance of learning English well.是刘老师使我意识到学好英语的重
41、要性。3常用现在分词和省略to的动词不定式等作宾补的及物动词有：see, notice, hear, watch, observe, leave等。He left me waiting in the rain.他让我在雨中等。Did you see him go out?你看到他出去了吗？4常用to do作宾补的及物动词有：advise, ask, command, encourage, forbid, permit, persuade, get等。Our maths teacher always encourages us to work out the questions by ourse
42、lves instead of being told the answers.我们的数学老师经常鼓励我们自己解决问题而不是被告知答案。5有些动词后常用it作形式宾语，而将真正的宾语放到宾语补足语的后面，这是英语中常用的句型，即“主语谓语it宾补真正的宾语”。常见的动词有：think, find, consider, feel, make等。The student has made it a rule to read English magazines every day.这个学生已经养成了每天读英文杂志的习惯。注意考生在写作时切忌好高骛远，在没有把握基本的简单句的情况下，不要轻易尝试很复杂的句
43、子。要从自己可以掌控的东西出发，先学会把自己的思想表达成为得体的简单句，进而对之进行再加工、转换，方能创作出漂亮的作文。 对点训练翻译句子(“主谓宾补”结构)1(2019全国卷书面表达)我想你能给予我们指导和鼓励。I would like you to give us your guidance and encouragement.2(2019浙江6月高考写作)父母认为这对于建立孩子的信心是很有用的。Parents think it very useful to build their childrens confidence.3作为一名高中生，我认为英语是一门非常重要的科目。As a hig
44、h school student, I consider English a very important subject.4事实上，他鼓励我在大学主修英语。In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college.5另外，网络使调研和选举容易又方便，不用顾及时间和空间。In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space.句式(六)存在于四海八荒的“There be”句型There be句型
45、表示“存在；有”，应用十分广泛和频繁，同时也是考生在写作中易犯错误的一个句型，考生经常会按照汉语的思维习惯写英语句子，导致语法错误。它的基本结构是：There be (be可用各种时态)名词地点状语(2020全国卷书面表达)Actually, there are many selfless people like Uncle Li around us, and they well deserve our respect.其实，我们身边还有很多像李叔叔这样无私的人，他们值得我们尊敬。(2019全国卷书面表达)There will be a wide variety of activities t
46、o mark this unforgettable occasion.为纪念这一难忘的时刻，将举行各种各样的活动。 对点训练用There be结构翻译句子/补全句子1(2020浙江7月高考写作)你没有必要为我们担心。There is no need for you to worry about us.2(2018江苏高考书面表达)毫无疑问，完全依赖消费排名是不明智的。 There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.3(2017全国卷书面表达)此外，还有一些著名的艺术家
47、将在现场表演如何剪纸。In addition, there are some famous artists performing how to cut paper on the spot.4如果还有什么其他我可以为你做的事情，请尽快与我联系。If there is anything else I can do for you, please contact me as soon as possible.5不可否认，它能增强人们的健康意识，但更有可能引起过度焦虑。There is no denying that it can enhance peoples consciousness of he
48、alth, but it is more likely to result in overanxiety.第3招写出文采正确使用并列句与复合句句型(一)独立又相依的并列句并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，这种简单句常被叫做分句。并列句中的各个简单句彼此独立，互不依从，但它们表达的意思之间有一定的关系，通常用并列连词连接起来。并列连词之前可用逗号，也可不用逗号。它的基本模式是：简单句并列连词简单句(一)常见并列句的类型及并列连词类型连词并列关系(递进关系)and, when, both .and ., not only .but (also) ., neither .nor .转折
49、关系but, yet, whereas, however选择关系or, otherwise, or else, either .or .，not .but .因果关系because, as, for, so, therefore, thus, due to对比关系while(2020全国卷书面表达)She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.她不仅教我们如何获得知识，也教我们如何成为一个好人。(2019江苏高考书面表达)Li Jiang recommends the traditi
50、onal Chinese dress while Su Hua prefers the school uniform.李江推荐中国传统服装，而苏华更喜欢校服。(2018北京高考书面表达)You may have trouble in adjusting yourself to the life in Beijing, so I suggest that you make full preparations in advance.你可能在适应北京生活方面有困难，因此我建议你提前做好充分准备。(2017全国卷书面表达) If youre interested in it, either you m
51、ay send an email to 12345 or you can sign up in person.如果你感兴趣，你可以发送电子邮件至12345或亲自报名。(二)使用并列句的注意事项1not only .but also .在连接两个并列分句时，如果not only置于句首，not only所在的分句需用部分倒装语序。(2018浙江6月高考写作)Firstly, not only can I speak fluent English, but also I have little difficulty communicating with foreigners.首先，我不仅能说一口流
52、利的英语，而且和外国人交流也毫无困难。(2018全国卷书面表达)Not only do we take volleyball and basketball courses, but our school also holds all kinds of competitions.我们不仅学习排球和篮球课程，而且我们学校还举办各种比赛。2表示“虽然但是”这一转折关系时，连接词but不能与though/although连用。虽然我当时很累，但是我感到非常幸福。Although I was very tired then but I felt very happy. ()Although I was
53、very tired then, I felt very happy. ()I was very tired then but I felt very happy. ()3表示因果关系的连词so不与because, as等表示原因的连词连用。因为他生病，所以他那天没去上学。Because/As he was ill so he didnt go to school that day. ()Because/As he was ill, he didnt go to school that day. ()He was ill so he didnt go to school that day. (
54、) 对点训练补全句子1(2020新高考全国卷写作)不一会儿，孩子们忙着爆玉米花，而他们的母亲出去买纸袋。Very soon, the children were busy popping the corn, while their mother went out to buy the paper bags.2(2019全国卷书面表达)如果你有问题，请不要犹豫，向我询问更多信息。Please do not hesitate and ask me for more information if you have questions.3(2019全国卷书面表达)为了赢得比赛，我们应该调整自己，努力练
55、习。因此，我们决定每天放学后训练两个小时。In order to win the match, we should adjust ourselves and practice hard.Therefore, we have made a decision that we train for two hours after school every day.4(2017全国卷书面表达)这次展览不仅可以帮助你更好地了解中国民间艺术作品，而且也可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。The exhibition can not only help you have a better understanding
56、of Chinese folk art works, but can also help you acquire some papercutting skills.句型(二)吸引眼球的定语从句定语从句的正确使用能够比较明显地反映出考生对于语言具有较高的掌握能力，所以建议考生一定要在写作中至少使用一个恰到好处的定语从句。(一)定语从句的类型1关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who, whom, whose, that, which, as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。(2020全国卷书面表达) He is a voluntee
57、r who works as a gate guard in our community during the epidemic of COVID19, and his main duty is to measure body temperature and check the passes for exit and entry.他是新冠疫情期间在我们社区担任门卫的志愿者，主要职责是测量体温和检查出入通行证。(2018北京高考书面表达)Last week, we took the foreign students to experience the authentic tea culture,
58、 which turned out to be extremely rewarding.上周，我们带领外国学生体验了正宗的茶文化，结果证明非常值得。2关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when, where, why引导的定语从句。(2020全国卷书面表达)A guide led us to the strawberry field, where we saw fresh inviting red strawberries.导游带我们到草莓地，在那里我们看到新鲜诱人的红草莓。(2019天津高考书面表达)The reason why I love western music is
59、that the piece of music named Fate Symphony by Beethoven has inspired me a lot to move on when I am in difficulty.我之所以喜欢西方音乐，是因为贝多芬的命运交响曲激励了我在困难中前进。3“介词which/whom”引导的定语从句(2020浙江7月高考写作) During your absence, our class participated in an oral English competition, in which we came first.你不在的时候，我们班参加了英语口
60、语比赛，我们得了第一名。(二)定语从句的写法定语从句是比较难掌握而又是考生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句，在写作时可采用“三步法”：示例第一步：写出两个简单句。The foreigner is from Canada.The foreigner visited our class yesterday.第二步：在句中找出一处要修饰的词汇：the foreigner。第三步：用句充当定语从句，the foreigner为先行词指人，且句中的the foreigner在句子中作主语，故用who或that作关系词。The foreigner who/that visited our class yester
61、day is from Canada. 对点训练用定语从句补全句子1比赛定于周六下午在市体育场举办，比赛旨在帮助我们与你的学校交流和增进友谊。The match is due to be held this Saturday afternoon in the citys stadium, whose aim is to help us communicate with your school and promote our friendship.2(2019天津高考书面表达)同时，我也有兴趣在你的讲座中学习一些民间舞蹈，这将有助于提高我的舞蹈水平。Meanwhile, Im also inte
62、rested in learning some folk dances from you in your lecture, which will help me improve my dancing.3(2019全国卷书面表达)另外，你会玩一个有趣的游戏，如果你赢了，你可以得到一份礼物。Also, you will play an interesting game, in which/where you can get a gift if you win. 4(2018全国卷书面表达)我们都知道，一起成长这部优秀的英文短片看起来很有趣。As we all know, the outstandi
63、ng English short film, Growing Together, is interesting to watch.5(2018浙江6月高考写作)我想申请这个职位的原因是我想提高我的英语口语水平，并且帮助外国学生更好地了解中国文化。The reason why I want to apply for the position is that I want to improve my spoken English and help foreign students have a better understanding of Chinese culture.句型(三)富有文采的状语
64、从句状语从句主要包括时间、地点、原因、条件、目的、结果、让步、比较和方式九类从句。1时间状语从句常用when (当时), as (当时), while (在过程中), before (在之前), after (在之后), since (自从以来), till/until (直到), by the time (that)(到时候), as soon as/the moment/the minute/the instant (一就)等连词引导。如：(2020全国卷书面表达)I still remember he once carried me on his back to the school c
65、linic when I got hurt playing football.我还记得有一次我踢足球受伤了，他把我背在背上去学校的医务室。(2019北京高考书面表达)The moment our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”， we all cheered up.当老师告诉我们这个以“劳动最光荣”为主题的活动时，我们都欢呼起来。2地点状语从句常用where (在地方), wherever (无论何地)等连词引导。如：(2019全国卷书面表达)Wherever our
66、team are training，we will try our best and we all want to be the winner.无论我们的团队在哪里训练，我们都会尽力而为，我们都希望能赢。3原因状语从句常用because (因为), as (因为), since (既然), now that (既然), seeing (that)(由于), considering (that)(考虑到)等连词引导。如：(2020天津5月高考书面表达)Personally, online learning benefits me a lot because so many learning ma
67、terials are available.就我个人而言，网上学习让我受益匪浅，因为有很多学习材料可用。4条件状语从句常由if (如果), unless (除非), as/so long as (只要), on condition that (在条件下), suppose/supposing/providing (假如)等连词引导。如：(2018北京高考书面表达)If you have further questions, please let me know.如果你还有其他问题，请告诉我。5目的状语从句常用so that/in order that (以便), in case (以免)等连词
68、引导。如：(2019全国卷书面表达)Here Id like to inform you of some detailed information so that you can make full preparations for it.这里我想告诉你一些详细的信息，以便你能做好充分的准备。6结果状语从句用so that (结果是), so .that/such .that (如此以至于)等连词引导。如：(2019全国卷书面表达)So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should present themse
69、lves punctually.这场比赛意义如此重大，以至于要求每个人都要准时到场。7让步状语从句常用though/although (虽然), even if/though (即使), no matterwhen/what/who/how .(whenever/whatever/whoever/however .)(无论何时/无论什么/无论谁/无论如何)等连词引导。如：Whenever/No matter when I am faced with challenges, I will think of him, and keep on.无论何时面对挑战，我都会想起他，并坚持下去。8比较状语从
70、句常用as .as .(和一样), not so/as .as .(不比)，more .than .(比更)等连词引导。如：I really hope you can overcome these difficulties as quickly as you can.我的确希望你能尽快地克服这些困难。9方式状语从句常用as (如，像), as if/though (似乎，好像)等连词引导。如：The old man runs very fast as if he were a young man.这位老人跑得很快，就好像他是一个年轻人。In the following exams, we di
71、d as what we had promised.在接下来的考试中，我们按照我们承诺的去做了。 对点训练用状语从句补全句子1(2019浙江6月高考写作)但不管它是什么，都应该根据具体情况给予表扬。But whatever/no matter what it is, praise should be given on a casebycase basis.2(2018天津高考书面表达)我们对比赛如此感兴趣，以至于我们组成了一个小组参加比赛。We were so interested in the competition that we formed a group to take part i
72、n it.3(2018天津高考书面表达)无论谁获得机器人技能竞赛的第一名都会被授予金牌。The gold medal will be awarded to whoever wins the first place in the Robotics Competition.4由于天气越来越热，在室内学习是个好主意。As the weather is getting hotter and hotter, it is a good idea to study indoors.5(2017天津高考书面表达)虽然这些天我在埋头读书，但为了提高自己，我仍然加入了几个学生俱乐部。Though/Although
73、 (I am) buried in books these days, I have still joined several student clubs in order to improve myself.句型(四)灵活好用的名词性从句名词性从句是高中阶段重要的语法项目之一，也是写作中常用的高级表达方式。它包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。(一)名词性从句的连接词1从属连词引导的名词性从句名词性从句的从属连词在从句中只起连接作用，不作成分，主要包括that, whether/if。One thing to remember is that its the process not
74、 the end product that matters.要记住的一件事是，重要的是过程而不是最终产品。2连接代词引导的名词性从句名词性从句的连接代词在从句中起连接作用，并在从句中充当主语、表语、宾语、同位语，主要包括what, which, who, whom, whose, whatever, whoever, whomever, whichever等。(2020浙江7月高考写作)What you have to do is have a good rest and follow the doctors advice.你要做的就是好好休息，听从医生的建议。3连接副词引导的名词性从句名词性
75、从句的连接副词在从句中起连接作用，并在从句中充当状语，主要包括how, when, why, where, however, whenever, wherever等。(2018全国卷书面表达)When you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food，which is where you should pay attention.当你享受这顿饭的时候，你需要避免咀嚼食物时发出声音，这是你应该注意的地方。(2018北京高考书面表达)Then I showed them how to make
76、 tea.然后我给他们展示怎样泡茶。(二)名词性从句的写法在写作中，如果能够把两个简单句合并为一个含有名词性从句的复合句，或者把一个简单句扩展成为含有名词性从句的复合句，对写作都是一种质的升华。名词性从句在写作时可采用“三步法”：示例第一步：写出两个简单句。He said a lot at the meeting.His words were very attractive.第二步：用句作主语从句，可转换为“他在会上所说的话”，即What he said at the meeting。第三步：把句转换的主语从句和句连在一起。What he said at the meeting was ver
77、y attractive. 对点训练用名词性从句补全句子1(2019全国卷书面表达)可以预测，这是一场势均力敌的比赛。It can be predicted that this is a close match.2(2019天津高考书面表达)我坚信这也给了我一些生活和学习的动力。I hold the firm belief that it also has given some other motivation of life and study.3(2018全国卷书面表达)我想强调的是你最好带一些礼物。What I want to stress is that youd better bri
78、ng some gifts.4(2018全国卷书面表达)然后消息传来我们学校将放映一部英文短片，它是一部关于我们学校历史的纪录片。Then came the news that an English short film will be shown in our school, which is a documentary on the history of our school.5(2018北京高考书面表达)这就是为什么我建议你申请北京大学，中国最好的大学之一。That is why I suggest you apply for Beijing University, one of the best universities in China.6(2017北京高考书面表达)我确实希望我的建议能对你有些帮助，也希望你在中国玩得开心。I do hope that my advice will be of some help to you and that youll have a good time in China.
