1、Section Writing a reflection学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠解参考范文名师论道Once there was a boy with a bad temper.His dad told him to hammer a nail into the fence every time he lost his temper.The boy learnt to control his temper because it was easier than hammering the nails into the fence.Then his dad asked him to pu
2、ll one nail out every time he was able to hold his temper.When the boy pulled out all the nails, his dad showed him the holes in the fence, telling him his anger had left “scars” that would never heal, like the holes in the fence.According to the story, it is important to learn how to control your t
3、emper so that you do not do or say anything that will hurt other people.So how can we control our temper? First, we can talk to someone we trust about how we feel.This is a good way of letting our anger out without hurting others.Second, we can go out doors and play team sports with our friends, bec
4、ause physical exercise provides an effective way to calm down.Third, we can shift our attention to other things such as reading a book or watching a film.Focusing on something else helps us to forget our anger.If we keep calm and stay optimistic, we can take control over our temper, which will benef
5、it throughout life.学语言1.时态：一般过去时和一般现在时2.人称：第一、三人称3.亮点词汇hammer .into .naillose/control/hold ones temperheallet .outcalm downshift ones attention totake control over4.高级句式every time引导时间状语从句现在分词短语作伴随状语It is important to do sth.so that引导目的状语从句动词ing形式作主语which引导非限制性定语从句学结构本文为一篇读后感，属于说明文的写作范畴。分为三部分：第一部分：故事
6、梗概(包括主要人物、时间、地点及情节)；第二部分：对故事的理解和感受；第三部分：从故事中悟出的道理和结论。佳句背诵1.There was a time when many people lived a hard life, with nothing to eat or wear.曾经有一段时期人们过着困苦的生活，缺吃少穿。2.This story tells of a young man who overcame various difficulties and finally achieved success through his own efforts.这个故事讲述了一个年轻人通过自己的
7、努力，克服各种困难最终取得成功。3.The little girl went through the forest, waded through the river, and found her own mother.那个小女孩穿过森林，趟过小河，找到了自己的亲生母亲。4.The crow thought that taking a bath every day would make him as white as a swan.It came to the river and kept bathing.乌鸦以为天天洗澡就能够变得像天鹅一样雪白。它来到河边不停地洗澡。5.After readi
8、ng the story, what impressed me most was that we should never give up easily.读完这个故事后，最让我印象深刻的是我们不应该轻易放弃。6.I think its our duty to take good care of the old.我认为照顾好老人是我们的责任。 仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍 题目要求请根据以下提示写一篇有关阿甘正传(Forrest Gump)的读后感。1阿甘天生智商低，肌肉有问题。通常，人们总是认为这种人做任何事都不会成功。2然而，在母亲和珍妮的爱下，这个不幸的男人取得了许多令人难以置信的成功。
9、他是足球明星，战争英雄，后来成了百万富翁！3我被他的坚强意志、善良和乐观所感动。4在他的一生中，有许多奇迹对他来说似乎是不可能的。但我知道这是合理的，因为他以高尚的人格赢得了它们。5这个故事向我们传达了这样一个信息：做好我们该做的事，生活就会回报我们。只要有毅力，就会有奇迹。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。仿写步骤Step 1一仿结构布局合理 第一段：介绍阿甘正传的故事梗概； 第二段：介绍对故事的感受；第三段：由故事得出的结论以及对自己的启示。 Step 2二仿语言规范美观 1阿甘天生智商低，肌肉有问题。Forrest Gump is born with a low
10、IQ and the muscle problem.2通常，人们总是认为这种人做任何事都不会成功。Usually, people always think that this kind of person cant succeed in doing anything.3然而，在母亲和珍妮的爱下，这个不幸的男人取得了许多令人难以置信的成功。However, with the love of his mother and Jenny, this unlucky man has achieved lots of incredible success.4他是足球明星，战争英雄，后来成了百万富翁！He
11、is a football star, a war hero, and later a millionaire!5我被他的坚强意志、善良和乐观所感动。I am moved by his strong will, kindness and optimism.6在他的一生中，有许多奇迹对他来说似乎是不可能的。There are many miracles all his life which seem impossible to him.7我知道这是合理的。他以高尚的人格赢得了它们。I know it is reasonable.He wins them with his noble person
12、ality.8这个故事向我们传达了这样一个信息：做好我们该做的事，生活就会回报我们。The story sends such a message to us: do well what we should do, and life will return us well.Step 3三仿句间过渡自然 用连词连接句6和句7There are many miracles all his life which seem impossible to him.But I know it is reasonable, because he wins them with his noble personal
13、ity.Step 4誊写 Forrest Gump is born with a low IQ and the muscle problem.Usually, people always think that this kind of person cant succeed in doing anything.However, with the love of his mother and Jenny, this unlucky man has achieved lots of incredible success.He is a football star, a war hero, and
14、later a millionaire!I am moved by his strong will, kindness and optimism.There are many miracles all his life which seem impossible to him.But I know it is reasonable, because he wins them with his noble personality.The story sends such a message to us: do well what we should do, and life will return us well.
