1、读后续写的结尾一篇优秀的读后续写除了语言的丰富、意境的优美、故事情节的新奇、逻辑的呼应衔接，还有一个重要的部分就是耐人寻味的故事结尾。高考读后续写要求充满正能量，也就是说，故事的结果应该是问题得到圆满解决。好的故事结尾应该是：合情合理，出人意料；寓情于景，情景交融；设置悬念，留白想象空间；合理推断，拔高立意；情感真挚，激发共鸣。好的故事结尾会起到“画龙点睛”的作用，反之就是“画蛇添足”。故事的结尾到底需不需要升华主题，这同样随文章来确定。读后续写文章的三个常见行文规律1.前文是过程渐进类，续写部分往往是叙述解决所遇到问题的过程。譬如浙江的夫妻吵架森林迷路，或者几个朋友一起去骑自行车旅游遇到狼。
2、遇到这种过程渐进式续写，要关注的就是如何把问题解决即可，即如何走出森林，如何狼口脱险。结尾就不需要升华主题，因为原文就是陈述一个故事，你把脱险讲清楚就行了。2.前文是背景介绍类，续写部分往往是叙述日常生活中意外收获或惊喜。譬如浙江熊口脱险，南瓜套头，一开始就说主人公的爱好是给动物拍照，或万圣节我们家有个做南瓜灯比赛传统。遇到这种续写日常生活中意外收获或惊喜，其结尾推荐首尾照应，譬如万圣节这次虽然没有往日的比赛结果，但是和大家一起分享生活中的尴尬事点滴何尝不开心呢?这也不需要主题升华，首尾呼应突出故事的完整性就可以了，不要画蛇添足。3.前文是心灵鸡汤类，续写部分往往是叙述通过解决所遇到的问题个人
3、受到的教益。譬如山东卷我们家有帮助人的传统，同时村子里有一家很穷。这种故事往往带有鸡汤类的说教味了，其结尾不仅要首尾呼应给人完整故事的感觉，还要揭示主旨。主旨的揭示方法有很多种，譬如直接点明;对话强调;触景生情。比如：（心灵鸡汤类）Missy,I called to my wife,did you put the banana skin on my desk?No, honey. Meghan probably did.As Id feared, she had missed my real purpose of the question which was to make it clear
4、to her that she hadnt done her job:defend my desk against the invader-our naughty girl. I abandoned the conversation.I sat here at the desk, and stared at the scream. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me,exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a reunion s
5、omewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old daughter, kept me company. Yet her plans that day seemed to go against mine.She followed a daily routine that was time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the carpet in her room, climbing up a
6、nd down her bed.At first I could concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked（分心的）.I had not counted on the arrival of the bib-bibs（bib-bibswere birds）. bib-bibs, bib-bibs!. Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I go with her to the windo
7、w.In a second. Just let me finish this question.I said. She pulled me by the hand (two fingers, actually)toward the window.I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the bib-bibs. And we did watch them. They chattered and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan wa
8、s absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work.Suddenly she rushed out from the room, and I heard her naked feet slapping against the wooden floor outside. She returned with her doll. Dumpty. She held him up to the window, stretching him out by his two arms and whispering into her
9、nonexistent ear,bib-bibs, Dumpty, bib-bibs!Then I left them in conversation and returned to my desk.Paragraph1:Unfortunately, she came again soon, with her shoes in hands and preparing for an outing.Paragraph2:Out of the corner of my eyeI could see the little girl sobbing becauseI didnt have time fo
10、r her.参考范文：Unfortunately, she came again soon,with her shoes in hands and preparing for an outing.Daddy, Id like to.“Not today, Megan.Im pretty busy today,you see.”Without even lifting my head from the paper, I interrupted her request impatiently.Just for a moment, pleaseshe tipped towards my desk a
11、nd plucked at my sleeves timidly. Somehow,afloodofragetookhold ofme, which drove me to yell at her,Go andplaywithyour Dunpy. Im busy with my work.She opened her mouth to say something but choked. She inched towards the door quietly.Out of the corner of my eye Icould see the little girl sobbing becau
12、seIdidint have time for her.Suddenly, a ripple of guilt touchedmy heart. I went over , bent down embraced her tightly.“How about the park now?”“Really?”she raised her head, with uncoveredchildish thrill in her still red eyes.I nodded and picked up her shoes. In a flash, she stood up and flew out che
13、erfully like a bird.Her twinkling eyes woke me up to the truth that parentssimple company can warm childrens heart, even lighting up their life.Possible Appealing Ending:1.点明主题A. No matter how busy we are, dont miss the best time to accompany our children. Parents company will nourish their hopes an
14、d happiness.B. Her twinkling eyes woke me up to the truth that parentssimple company can warm childrens heart, even lighting up their life.2.首尾呼应Her gleaming eyes andsunny smile made me realize that it was rewarding to accompany her, even as a fool.”呼应前文：In a second.Just let me finish this question.
15、I said. She pulled me by the hand(two fingers, actually)toward the window.I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the bib-bibs. And we did watch them.Her giggle brought every cell of the park to wake up. Surprisingly,I found accompanying her not that time-consuming and challenging, but pretty ble
16、ssing.呼应前文：She followed a daily routine thatwas time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the carpet in her room, climbing up and down her bed.3.触景生情Her sunny smile warmed the park. The desk that I was eager to return toamoment agodidnt attractme so
17、 much now.又比如：（意外收获类）Mei Mei frowned as she helped her mother and father set out the cooking supplies in the shiny steel kitchen. Her family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant, which was set to open in the next few days.Moving here was a stupid idea.I have lost
18、all my friends in San Francisco. What should I do now?Mei Mei grumbled,mostly to herself.Whats that?Her mother asked, opening a box and lifting out several pots and a wok.Nothing,Mei Mei mumbled. The girl had been complaining about the move, but her parents had made the decision and were now too bus
19、y getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints.The first few days at her new school hadnt been easy, either. She found it hard to talk to people she didnt know, and it seemed like the students hadnt even noticed her. Mei Mei sighed and got back to washing dishes.On the day of the
20、grand opening, Mei Meis parents were all smiles, welcoming customers into the restaurant, brightly decorated in gold and red. Even Mei Mei was in a good mood as she rushed around, seating guests, handing out menus, and pouring tall glasses of water. This was a big day for her family.At one of the ta
21、bles sat a family with two daughters who were about Mei Meis age. As she filled their glasses, Mei Mei realized the twins were in her class.Mei Mei ducked her head down so her long hair covered her face,and she turned away from the table.Mei Meis mother found her soon after,in the kitchen loading th
22、e dishwasher. Honey, what are you doing back here? We need you out front with the customers.Paragraph1:Mom,I dont want to be out there!Paragraph2:Mei Mei put a handful of cookies into a small plate and left the kitchen.参考范文：“Mom. I dont want to be out there!”Mei Mei murmured, head drooping. Feeling
23、Mei Meiin a bad mood, her mother asked her what was wrong softly. At that moment, Mei Mei couldnt help pouring out her troubles,“Without a friend, Im isolated here.”Realizing they failed to care about Mei Meis feelings in entirely new surroundings, hermother felt her heart sink. Holding her daughter
24、 in her arms, she apologized for her ignorance and suggested she make new friends by taking action first. What her mother said really comforted her and motivated her to take the first step. Suddenly, an idea popped into her head.MeiMei put a handfulof cookies into a small plate and left thekitchen.S
25、he went straight towards the twins table and put the plate on their table, saying the cookies were specially prepared for friends by her parents restaurant. Amazed, the twins had their mouths open, for they had never seen Mei Mei as a friend. Mei Mei added that she was new here and wondered if they
26、could be her tour guides on weekends. The twins nodded, sincerely inviting her to join them. Over chatting, Mei Mei found they shared the same interest-making pots.She pictured three little girls making pots , her face lit up and a smile curving her lips .1、陈述式结尾：What initially started as a challeng
27、e turned out to be a bonus（意外收获）.Mei Mei couldnt believe it. Wearing a bright smile on her face,she headedtowards the kitchen at a briskpace.2、触景生情With a sweet smile on her ace, shelooked around the restaurant confdently.The new city that she disliked before turned out to be a warm one.3、点明主题Suddenl
28、y, she understood it. Sometimeswe may be afraid of a new environment, but what matters most is to take the first step bravely rather than curl up in yourprevious comfortable zone.4、首尾呼应/对话强调A flood of happiness welled up inside.It may not be a stupid idea to move here,murmured Meimei, a secret smile spreading across her face,What a big day！
