1、高考英语书面表达指导课件1 General structure3 Advanced expressionsVarious structuresGraceful words2 Linking wordsElements of a passageTopic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence一、文章总体模板1.文章开头的总体交待 起（引出主题）A.Recently,we had a discussion about B.we carried out a survey of C.When it comes to the topic wh
2、ether 2.呈现不同观点的句式 转承（陈述观点）A.Some of them are in favor of the idea that However,others hold a completely opposite opinion.B.Some people firmly believe that.Others argue that 呈现论据时常用的连接词in the first place,_(原因一).Furthermore,in the second place,_(原因二).So it goes without saying that _(观点一).Some people h
3、old the idea that_(观点二).In their point of view,on the one hand，_(原因一).On the other hand,_(原因二).Therefore,there is no doubt that _(观点二).3.结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语 结（总结观点）As far as Im concerned,/From my point of view,/To sum up,方法一:使用多种句子结构1 If she is compared with other teachers,we find she pays more attenti
4、on to her way of teaching.(状语)Compared with other teachers,she pays more attention to his way of teaching.2 You should keep silent at the meeting unless you are invited to speak.(连词+分词)Unless invited ,you should keep silent at the meeting.3He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.(倒装/
5、强调)Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessIt was not until he returned home that he realized his foolishness.二、高分作文技巧4 We can achieve a satisfying grade by changing the way we study.(only倒装).5 How should we protect eyesight?It still remains a question among us.(主语从句)6 We should emp
6、hasize the importance of protecting our eyesight.(cant too much)Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade.How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.We cant emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight too much.方法二:善用高级词汇Which is better?1 周末我们会有很多作
7、业要做.A We have endless homework to do at the weekend.B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.2 在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象.A Of all my teachers,I still remember Mr Moore.B Of all my teachers,Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression.3 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。A.His wife came back home after the advan
8、ced training class,feeling very tired.B.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,feeling very exhausted.4.他没听我课上讲的东西。A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.B He didnt listen to what I said in the class.Topic:How to Lengthen Your CompositionWhen it comes to the issue of,t
9、he majority of people seem to get accustomed to the idea that However,attitudes towardsvary from person to person.some people firmly believe that,there are some factorscontributing to this attitude as follows,in the first place,in the second place,.On top of that,As a matter of fact,it is not often
10、the case.Others have a preference of,there are several remarkable reasons.For one thing,for another On my part,.1.利用模板方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明例一：这样更方便照顾父母。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。原因as they are getting older and older.Owing to/because例二：因广告过多，影片放映晚点。拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火。后果which made audience impatient an
11、d some of them even annoyed.making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.It will be much more convenient to look after your parentsThere were too many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明条件目的例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明，存在安全隐患(potential h
12、azard）。拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。In case of danger,it is difficult for the audience to escape.例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查We did a survey about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式In order to learn about how our high school students communicate with each other
13、during the holiday,we did a survey with the help of my classmates.The exit is not clear,so there will be potential hazard.方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明(1)表达不同原因的概括语There are several reasons for this.The reasons are as follows.The reason foris thatThe reason why is that(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：It goes
14、 without saying thatIts needless to say thatNeedless to say,Its obvious that3.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.3.添加谚语加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习We should focus our min
15、d on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should focus our mind on our studies.怎么添加谚语？方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容常用谚语(Proverb)Strike the iron while it is hot.趁热打铁。Think twice before you do.三思而后行。Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。Do
16、 as the Romans do.入乡随俗。Do it now.机不可失，时不再来。Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水难收。An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果，医生远离我。All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the ea
17、rth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water and energy.4.举例说明人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Many populated areas suffer from many natural dis
18、asters such as flood,hurricanes,droughts or other disasters.珍惜每一滴水Therefore,we should no longer be indifferent about this.To protect our valuable water resources,we should call on people to cherish every drop of water.Otherwise,maybe the last drops of water will be our tears.As middle school student
19、s,we also have a part to play.Do remember:we are not saving water,we are saving our own life.With everyone doing his bit,we can make a difference.5.结尾提出倡议或号召As students,we should start from ourselves.Here Id like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment.With everyone doing
20、his bit,we can change the present situation.参加俱乐部或活动Dont hesitate.It will be great fun!Dont wait.Join us now!Since it has so many benefits,what are you waiting for?Start to join us now!保护环境“短话长说”方法：1.利用模板2.附加成分作解释说明3.加谚语(Proverb)4.举例说明5.结尾提出倡议或号召写作任务现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章参考词汇：肥胖：obesity
21、垃圾食品：junk food要求：1.字数150左右 2.对所有要点要适当发挥，不要简单翻译。3.开头已给出，不计入总数Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._原因1.缺少运动2.饮食结构不合理建议1.多参加体育锻炼2.多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品3.要点分析如何起、转、承、结On my part,1.利用模板When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity,our parents are in great concern.Why are
22、 so many kids getting fatter and fatter?Some are,others areBecause of the popularity of TV and computers,and because students have so much homework to do,they are getting less exercise than before.1.缺少运动Because of the popularity of TV and computers,and students are burdened with so much homework,Bec
23、ause peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweight.2.饮食结构不合理In order to lose weight and stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or
24、 the computer and do more exercise.建议1.多参加体育锻炼As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables,and less fast food and junk food.2.多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule so that they can
25、balance our exercise and studies.3.制定合理的计划，时间表合成文章Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned.Why are teens getting fatter and fatter?In my opinion,there are two remarkable reasons for this problem.Firstly,because of the popularity of TV and computers,and students are
26、 burdeded with so much homework to do.They are getting less exercise than before.Secondly,because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweight.For another,On the o
27、ther hand,arousedFor one thing,On the one hand,In order to lose weight and stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits,vegetables,less fast food and junk food.Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.Thanks Bye-bye!
