1、范学云12/16/2017Unit 16 Writing NarrationHow to make an outline of a story Fan Xueyunstories of you Writing ThemeIn this class you will1.know some words by cooperation.2.translate and correct some sentences for the essay.3.write the outline of the essay,using the key words and phrases learnt in this un
2、it.Sheet One Words:相貌好看的中等个头的女孩机灵的，聪明的外向的乐观的精力充沛的坦率的乐于助人的好心的近视的满头白发的健康的；健全的有魅力的；迷人的幽默的心不在焉的独立的勤奋的，用功的 Activity One 有耐心的坏脾气的健谈的热心的因此Phrases:期待擅长,精通喜爱对.要求严格有很强的意志力过着幸福的生活因为在.方面取得进步给.树立好榜样有.天赋下定决心做专注于 Sheet One Words:相貌好看的 good-looking/pretty中等个头的女孩 a girl of medium height机灵的，聪明的 pretty/brilliant/smart
3、/intelligent/alert外向的 out-going乐观的 optimistic精力充沛的 energetic坦率的 honest/frank乐于助人的 helpful好心的 kind-hearted近视的 near-sighted满头白发的 grey-haired健康的；健全的be/keep healthy/fine/fit/in good health有魅力的；迷人的 charming/attractive幽默的 humorous/full of humor心不在焉的 absent-minded/be in the clouds独立的 independent勤奋的，用功的 dil
4、igent/hard-working有耐心的 patient坏脾气的 bad-tempered健谈的 talkative热心的 warm-hearted因此 consequently/as a resultPhrases:期待 look forward to 擅长,精通 be good at/do well in/be skilled in/have a good knowledge of喜爱be fond of/be keen on/adore/enjoy对.要求严格 be strict in sth/with sb有很强的意志力 have a strong will过着幸福的生活 live
5、/lead a happy life因为 because/because of/due to/thanks to/owing to 在.方面取得进步 make great progress in 给.树立好榜样 set a good example for有.天赋 have a gift/talent for 下定决心做 make up ones mind to do 专注于focus/fix ones attention on /concentrate ones effort on /put ones heart into/sb be bent on/sb be devoted to doi
6、ng Activity TwoSheet TwoTranslate:the more methods,the better1.他大约1.72米2.他又高又瘦，脸上还带着一副厚重的眼镜。3.他突然想到一个好主意。4.直到那时候我才明白这句格言的意义“助人乃快乐之本”。5.尽管我们很累，但很快乐。Correct:6.I was walking along the street while a terrible accident happened in the street.7.Without your endless help,I will not get a high mark in the C
7、ollege Entrance Examination this year.8.What a unforgettable event I had!Correct:6.I was walking along the street while a terrible accident happened in the street.when7.Without your endless help,I will not get a high mark in the College Entrance would Examination this year.8.What a unforgettable eve
8、nt I had!anTime for teamwork!(1)First,speak out six key factors in narration.(2)second,speak out the main idea of each para.(3)Then,try to add detailed information to the main parts.Activity three记叙文的六要素010203040506 whowhatwhenwherewhyhowKey factors 请以“One Thing Im proud/ashamed of/I will never forg
9、et.”为题，用英语写一篇120个词左右的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意、羞愧或难忘的事情。要求如下：1.记述事情的经过；2.简要说明你感到得意、羞愧或难忘的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入词数。IntroductionProcessThought经历的构思1.introduction:the introduction of you or your quote(simple tense)2.process:what happened(time sequence,past tense)3.thought:your reflection、inspiration or what y
10、ou have learnt from this story(simple tense)show your outlineActivity Four Model EssayEveryone has the pride,the deepest impression.Of course,I also have it.What Im most proud of is a very small thing,But it makes me feel proud.Im so proud of myself because Ive grown into a determined man.It was the
11、 first time for me to climb a high mountain alone.At first,I felt my body was filled with energy.As time went by,tiredness made my step slow down.For many times,the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind.But the saying“you can do it”,enabled me to move on.Though every step seems very weak
12、,I insisted on climbing to the top.Climbing to the top of the mountain makes me feel proud,and I also understand the truth:we will be successful as long as we preserve.Homework1.Finish your essay and then polish it with your partner.2.Try to remember the extended knowledge learnt in this class.Without vocabulary nothing can be conveyed.-Wilkins（1972）
