1、巧用高级句式,增添语言之美 对应学生用书P263句式单一、缺乏生气的文章,哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。考生在写作文时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句,并注意句式的灵活多变,让文章读起来抑扬顿挫,让深厚的语言功底得以体现,让作文拽起来!吸引眼球的4种句式句式1含非谓语动词的句子 /用非谓语动词会使句子显得更简洁、更高级,必能获得阅卷老师较好的印象,为自己的作文加分。示例1去年在洪水中被毁的那座桥已被重修了。一般句:The bridge which was destroyed in the flood last year has been rebuilt.升级句:The bridge destroy
2、ed in the flood last year has been rebuilt.(过去分词作定语)示例2我不喜欢排长队,那是浪费时间。一般句:I dont like waiting in a long queue.It is a waste of time.升级句:Waiting in a long queue is a waste of time.(动名词作主语)示例3我知道你喜欢古典音乐,所以我想邀请你参加一个中国古典音乐会。(2019全国卷满分作文)一般句:I know that you are fond of classical music,and Id like to invi
3、te you to participate in a Chinese classical music concert.升级句:Knowing that you are fond of classical music,Id like to invite you to participate in a Chinese classical music concert.(现在分词短语作状语)示例4虽然萨姆被一个人留在家里,但他一点也不害怕。一般句:Although he was left alone at home, Sam did not feel afraid at all.升级句:Left al
4、one at home, Sam did not feel afraid at all.(过去分词短语作状语) 句式2倒装句 /在写作中倒装句应用比较广泛,涉及的句型也比较多,包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见类型1:neither,nor,not until,never等否定词,以及由no构成的否定短语,如at no time,by no means等置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。示例1工厂绝不应该把废物往河海里倾倒。一般句:Factories should never pour waste into rivers or seas.升级句:Never should factories pour wa
5、ste into rivers or seas.示例2我的朋友直到昨天下午四点半才到。一般句:My friend didnt arrive until 4:30 yesterday afternoon.升级句:Not until 4:30 yesterday afternoon did my friend arrive.常见类型2:“only状语”置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。示例3只有改变我们的生活方式,我们才能拯救地球。一般句:We can save the earth only by changing the way we live.升级句:Only by changing the way
6、 we live can we save the earth.常见类型3:在so/such .that .结构中,当so/such .位于句首时,其后的句子用部分倒装。示例4他是如此诚实,我们都信任他。一般句:He is so honest that we all trust him.升级句:So honest is he that we all trust him.句式3强调句 /强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分,它是一种比较容易掌握的升级句表达方式。其构成:It is/was被强调部分that/who其他。示例我们用真诚和信任创造和谐的气氛。一般句:We created a ha
7、rmonious atmosphere with sincerity and faithfulness.升级句:It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.句式4高级复合句 /1as和which引导的非限制性定语从句定语从句有多种形式,引导词也有若干,但最容易掌握、最常运用的是as和which引导的非限制性定语从句。(1)表达“正如”这一含义时,我们常用as引导的非限制性定语从句,它常放在主句之前,有时也可放在主句之中或主句之后。常见的句式有:As we all know ./As
8、 is known to all .众所周知As he pointed out .正如他所指出的那样As the famous saying goes .正如名言所说例:As we all know,our friends lend us a helping hand when we need help and they help us get through difficult situations.众所周知,当我们需要帮助的时候,我们的朋友会伸出援助之手,帮助我们渡过难关。(2)which 引导的非限制性定语从句。which 在引导非限制性定语从句时,可以指代某个单词,也可以代指整个主句,
9、在从句中可以作主语或宾语。例:Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture,I suggest you apply for Peking University,which is one of the best universities in China.(2018北京卷满分作文)得知你对中国文化有兴趣,我建议你申请北京大学,它是中国最好的大学之一。2what和that引导的名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。其中what,that所引导的名词性从句是写作中常见的升级句表达方式。what在名词性从句中作主语、宾语、表语
10、或定语,而that在从句中不作任何成分,只起连接作用。例1:What you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.(主语从句)(2019浙江卷满分作文)你告诉我的关于你国家的事情开阔了我的视野,激发了我对外国文化的兴趣。例2:In addition,what may interest you most (主语从句) is that I am really nervous and upset (表语从句) when taking the exam.另
11、外,最使你感兴趣的是当考试的时候,我真的很紧张,难过。点睛之笔的前添后补方法1前面添一添,增强语气 /There is no doubt that .毫无疑问No one can deny . 不容否认It goes without saying that . 不用说It is clear/obvious that . 很明显示例(毫无疑问,)你们提供的交流生活动非常有意义。一般句:The exchanging student program offered by you is very meaningful.升级句:There is no doubt that the exchanging
12、student program offered by you is very meaningful.方法2后面补一补,丰富内容 /.for .considering that .in case . .for fear that.therefore .as a result .accordingly . .consequently .so that. .in order that. .if . .as long as .which .示例请留下电话号码(以防我们再和你失去联系)。一般句:Please leave your phone number.升级句:Please leave your phone number in case we lose touch with you again.4