1、初中英语写作指导课Advice on making your articles perfect写作文段要求 语言通畅，语句连贯，层次清楚，意思正确，紧扣主题。用词基本恰当，句子结构完整，语法正确，逻辑性强。能正确使用常用的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。书写规范，能正确地使用大小写、字母和标点符号。健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。travelstay at homevisit friends or p
2、arentsworkStyle(体裁)：_Person(人称)：_Tense(时态):_调查报告，记叙文第三人称一般现在时1.审(search):据实描写：适当发挥：度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲 A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel2.列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文
3、章的要点。A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.3.加(add)加首尾，使结构完整，突出主题。2.The body1.The beginningHow do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.3.The endingCome and enjoy y
4、our vacation.People who relax well work well.4.美（beautify）选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。Writing skills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用词汇Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.Which is better?周末我不出去，我待在家里面。A I dont go out and I stay at home on weekends.B I stay at home instea
5、d of going out on weekends.Which is better?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.方法二:活用多种句型Writing skills（“写”的技巧）她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young.She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is
6、so young that she cant carry the boxD She is not old enough to carry the box 方法三:妙用关联词Writing skills（“写”的技巧）for example,besides,whats more,such as,whats worse,moreover,in ones opinionhowever,but,yet,although/though,otherwise,orbecause of,as a result,because,so,therefore,sincefirst,then,next,afterwar
7、ds,finallyin a word,all in all,in short,generally speakingnot only-but also-,both-and-,either-or-,neither-nor-补充说明：结果：原因：先后顺序：转折：并列：Check the previewLets try _ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running a
8、nd hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadLike/such asFirstNextFinallyAt lastLets enjoy方法四:妙用Proverb（谚语）/sayingWriting skills（“写”的技巧）加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.As the sayin
9、g goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.When in Rome,do as the Romans do.三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。失败是成功之母。3.Where there is a will,there is a
10、 way.5.Failure is the mother of success.结尾：提出倡议或号召Lets Do it now!/Dont do it again!As students,we should start from ourselves.Dont wait.Join us now!Lets take action right now!Dont put it off!Become a volunteer today!Save animals!Save Ourselves!Save our planet!If everyone tries to protect the environ
11、ment,the world will be a better place!5.CheckuSpelling(拼写)uTense(时态)uGrammar(语法)uHandwriting(书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号)查：通览全文仔细检查卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！basic rules(写作考试规则)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)beautify(美：谚语/例子)check(查：通览全文仔细检查）课堂练习目前天长市正在积极创建全国文明城市，中学生也在为之努力。假如你是你是某中学的一名学生张华，请根据下列图表所示内容，给笔友John写一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。注意：1.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名等信息;2.词数70左右。3.参考词汇：civilized 文明的 respect 尊敬offer the seats to 主动让座spit 吐痰Secrets of learning English:Practice makes perfect.Hard work leads to success.
