1、大庆实验中学“Is it necessary to start learning English Is it necessary to start learning English from childhood?”from childhood?”A.handwriting B.structure(结构)C.content（内容）D.languageWhich of the following are necessary for an essay(论说文)?Lead-inHow can we polish our language?tips12345Pre-Polishing1Correct m
2、istakes in spelling and grammarcatchesmemoryworminviews2Remove repeated words in function功能,Remove repeated words in meaning语义3Replace easy words with advanced高级的onese.g.I enjoy learning English from an early age.am fond of/am keen on/am crazy aboutsatisfying/pleasing/pleasantcauses harm to/does har
3、m to/is harmful to 4e.g.You should get involved in class.activelyAdd modifying 修饰词 words(before n./v./adj.)e.g.His family has influence on him.positive/negativee.g.Too much homework makes children tired.extremely/really/rathere.g.On the other hand,some people think that it will make children tired.A
4、dd transitional 过渡词 words(between sentences and paragraphs)45e.g.They have much homework to do.They cant remember the English words.They have so much homework that they cant remember the English words.Having much homework to do,they cant With much homework to do,they cantThose who have much homework
5、 to do cant Vary sentence patternsby using conj./non predicate/clauses/special sentences/with-phrase5e.g.It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue.It will have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.It will not only raise the awareness of our mother tongue,but also have a positive eff
6、ect on students Chinese learning.Not only will it raise,(but)it will also havee.g.Childrens choice is important.It is Childrens choice that is important.What is important is childrens choice.1.correct 2.remove 3.replace4.add5.vary 1.改一改2.去一去3.换一换4.加一加5.变一变Polish the language of the essay.While-Polis
7、hing1.correct 2.remove 3.replace 4.add 5.vary Rewrite your own essays.Post-PolishingAn essay1.Finish your own essays first.2.Write another essay,whose topic is“Whether students should take cell phones to school.”HomeworkSelf-evaluatingI know how to improve my handwriting now.I am clear about the structure of a good essay now.I know how to write the content of an essay now.I know how to improve our language now.How many stars can you get?
