1、Unit 5Poems主题语境：人与社会(诗歌)【话题词汇】1.literature n.文学2.masterpiece n.杰作3.poem n.诗4.poetry n.(总称)诗5.lyric n.抒情诗6.essay n.散文；文章；随笔7.describe vt.描写，叙述8.description n.描述，描写9.draft n.草稿，草案vt.起草，草拟10.original adj.原创的n.原作11.publish vt.出版，发行12.translate vt.翻译13.classic adj.经典的，古典的n.文学名著，经典著作14.thrilled adj.兴奋的，激动
2、的15.thrilling adj.令人兴奋的；刺激的16.entirely adv.完全地【话题短语】1.give a vivid description of 生动描述2.classical literature/works 古典文学/作品3.ones masterpiece 某人的杰作4.bestloved and worldfamous 最受喜爱和闻名世界的5.highlyrespected and wellknown 备受尊敬和著名的6.bring sb.happiness 给某人带来愉悦7.be enthusiastic about.对充满热情8.in the traditiona
3、l Chinese style 按照中国传统风格9.attract/catch ones attention 引起某人的注意10.give/award a prize to.授予奖项【话题佳句】1.Reading poems widely enables me to have a chance to broaden my horizons.广泛阅读诗歌使我有机会开阔视野。2.It is the poem Song of the Parting Son that made me interested in poetry.是游子吟这首诗使我对诗歌产生了兴趣。3.Some classic works
4、 not only offer us joy and excitement,but alsoencourage us to think critically.一些经典作品不仅给我们带来欢乐和兴奋，而且鼓励我们批判性地思考。【话题练习】1.Poetry shows us a strong power and makes us feel subtle emotion.诗歌给我们展示了一种强大的力量，使我们感到微妙的情感。2.Nowadays,many famous poets in ancient China and their great works are still influencing
5、us,among whom Li Bai,Du Fu and Bai Juyi are my favourite ones.如今，中国古代许多著名诗人及其伟大作品仍在影响着我们，其中李白、杜甫、白居易是我最喜爱的诗人。基础回顾.重点单词1_ n.心情2_ n.百姓；民谣adj.民间的；民俗的3_ n.核心；(水果的)核4_ n.钻石；菱形5_ n.偏见6_ n.格式；版式7_ adj.业余的n.业余爱好者8_ adj.空白的；无表情的moodfolkcorediamondprejudiceformatamateurblank9 _ adv.复杂的10_ adv.首要的；占支配地位的11_ ad
6、j.精美的12_ adj.各自的；分别的13_ n.花朵；开花期vi.盛开；绽放14_ n.版本；说法15_ n.截止日期；最后期限complicateddominantdelicaterespectiveblossomversiondeadline.拓展单词1_ v相一致；符合_ n.通讯记者_ n.通信联系2_ v.变化_ n变体_ adj.各种各样的_ n.多样性3_ adj.天真的_ n.天真_ adv.天真地4_ adj.同情的_ n.同情_ adv.同情地5_ vt.&n.比赛；竞争_ n.参赛者_ adj.争论的；可争的correspondcorrespondentcorresp
7、ondencevaryvariationvariousvarietyinnocentinnocenceinnocentlysympatheticsympathysympatheticallycontestcontestantcontestable6 _ n戏剧_ adj.戏剧的_ adv.戏剧性地7_ n种族_ adj.种族的racialism n.种族主义8_ n悲伤_ adj.悲伤的9_ v理解；包含；由组成_ n.理解力；领悟力_ adj.综合的；广泛的；全面的10_ v.看护；照料；n.护士_ adj.幼儿园教育的_ n.护理；照料dramadramaticdramaticallyra
8、ceracialsorrowsorrowfulcomprehendcomprehensioncomprehensivenursenurserynursing联想拓展“al”为后缀的形容词速记racial adj.种族的digital adj.数码的historical adj.历史的physical adj.身体的mental adj.精神的vital adj.重要的essential adj.最重要的；不可缺少的；本质的d/de结尾动词变名词后缀为sioncomprehendcomprehensiondecidedecisionexplodeexplosionconcludeconclusi
9、onpersuadepersuasionexpandexpansioncollidecollision.核心短语1_ 由组成2_ 用光3_ 作诗4_ 尤其5_ 讲得通；有意义6_ 包括7_ 长度灵活8_ 尽管9_ 集中于10_ 给某人带来巨大成功11_ 试试；执行12_ 紧抓be made up ofrun out ofcompose poetryin particularmake senseconsist ofhave a flexible line lengthin spite offocus onbring sb.great successcarry outhold fast联想拓展“i
10、n名词”短语小结in hand 在手头；可供使用in return 作为回报in shock 震惊in relief 松一口气；如释重负in disguise 伪装in defence 防御；防守in advance 事先；提前in particular 特别in short/brief 总而言之无被动语态的动词短语聚焦consist of 由组成belong to 属于date from/back to 追溯到come true 变成现实take place 发生break out 爆发.重点句型1ing作方式状语It is easy to write and,like the cinqua
11、in,can give a clear picture and create a special feeling,_.这种诗易创作，而且就像五行诗一样，仅仅几个字，就可以展现一幅清晰的图片和创造一个特别的感觉。2“with宾语宾补”复合结构_，students may eventually want to write poems of their own.因为有如此多不同类型的诗可以选择，学生们最后可能都想写他们自己的诗歌了。using very few wordsWith so many different forms of poetry to choose from3表语从句The rea
12、son is _.原因是他们能感受到爱的温暖，而且享受到童年的纯真。that they can feel the warmth of love and enjoy the innocence ofchildhood课堂讲解高频考点探究.核心词汇1comprehension n理解力；包含【典型例句】When you are reading,place more focus on the correct pronunciation of the words you are reading rather than comprehension of each word.当你朗读的时候，把精力主要集中
13、在你所读的每个单词的正确发音上，而不是理解每个单词上。(1)beyond comprehension 令人费解have no comprehension of sth.对某事不理解a reading comprehension 一篇阅读理解(2)comprehend vt.(多用于否定句)理解；领悟(3)comprehensive adj.综合的；广泛的a comprehensive study 全面的研究a 1stclass comprehensive university 一所一流的综合性大学【练透考点】单句语法填空Dr Johnson undertook the task of writ
14、ing a _(comprehend)English dictionary last year.I did practice a lot to improve my English,for example,doing lots of reading _(comprehend)exercises every day.The infinite distances of space are too great for the human mind _(comprehend)He is such a _ man and always has _ on those homeless animals bu
15、t sometimes he can be _ to those he doesnt like.(mercy)comprehensivecomprehensionto comprehendmercifulmercymerciless2sympathy n同情；慰问；赞同【典型例句】We should express sympathy for the people who are unlucky,whether they are family members or complete strangers.我们应该对不幸的人表示同情，无论他们是家人还是完全陌生的人。(1)express/feel s
16、ympathy for sb.向某人表示体恤；对某人感到同情have no sympathy for 不同情in sympathy with 支持out of sympathy with sb./sth.不赞成，不支持(某人或事物)(2)sympathetic adj.同情的；赞同的need a sympathetic ear 需要诉苦【练透考点】单词拼写/单句语法填空To be a popular student，we must show our respect，concern and _(同情)for others.I dont have much sympathy _ herI thin
17、k shes brought her troubles on herself.To truly be _(sympathy),you must be able to see beyond your own pain to be witness to the pain.Ask her what happened and listen _(sympathy),and attentively.sympathyforsympatheticsympathetically3blank adj.空白的；空虚的；单调的n.空白；空虚；空白表格vt.使无效；使模糊；封锁【典型例句】Unsteadily he m
18、ounted the stage,adjusted the microphone,coughed,and went completely blank.他摇摇晃晃地走上讲台，调好麦克风，咳嗽了几声，接着脑子就一片空白。(1)ones mind goes blank 脑子一片空白ones mind is a blanka blank refusal/denial 断然拒绝/否认(2)fill in the blanks 在空白处填写(3)blank out 遮掩；抹去记忆【练透考点】单句语法填空I saw her on the bus this morning,but she totally _(
19、blank)me.My mind was _ blank and I couldnt remember her name.She stared _(blank)into space,not knowing what to say next.blankedablankly【佳句背诵】Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructors orders.But once I started the car，my mind went blank.在上车之前，我觉得我已经学会了教练教授的指令，但是我一上车，我觉得我的大脑一
20、片空白。4variation n.变化；变体；变奏曲【典型例句】The survey found a wide variation in the prices charged for canteen food.这项调查发现不同的餐厅出售食物的价格存在很大的差别。(1)vary v.改变，变更vary from.to.从到不同vary in sth.(大小、形状等)不同vary with.随变化/改变vary between.and.从到转变(2)variety n.变化，多样性，种类a variety of 各种各样的many varieties ofvarious kinds of(3)va
21、rious adj.各种各样的for various reasons 因为各种原因【练透考点】单句语法填空The exhibition not only shows _(vary)paper cuts in different regions,but also presents to us the history and development of papercutting in China.As in China，the climate in Canada _(vary)depending on the area.In the botanical garden we can find _(
22、vary)of plants that range from tall trees to small flowers.variousvariesvarieties【佳句背诵】Its up to the teacher to provide a variety of types of information in the classroom.教师负责在课堂上提供各种各样的信息资源。.核心短语5be made up of 组成，构成(多用于被动结构)【教材原句】Another simple form of poem that amateurs can easily write is the cin
23、quain,which is made up of five lines.另外一种初学者容易写的简体诗是由五行组成的，叫作五行诗。(1)make up 组成；化妆；弥补；编造(2)make其他短语make up ones mind 下定决心be made of 由制成(看出原材料)be made from 由制成(看不出原材料)make out 分辨出，勉强认出，理解make the best/most of 充分利用make it 做成功【练透考点】(1)写出make up在句中的意思In some languages,100 words can make up half of all wo
24、rds used in daily conversations._He took measures to make up his fault,which received our recognition._The beautiful maiden who saved his life is just a beautiful fairy tale made up by him,all deceiving._She was beautifully made up,beautifully groomed._占据弥补编造化妆(2)用make的相关短语填空Thanks to your encourage
25、ment，I made continuous progress in math,and finally _ to study it in the university.Its natural to have dreams of success and fame but only a few people in this world actually _.With a little imagination,you can create new challenges and _ the job you have.I could hear voices but I couldnt _ what th
26、ey were saying.made up my mindmake itmake the best/most ofmake out6make sense 讲得通，有意义【教材原句】The poems may not make sense and even seem contradictory.这些诗似乎是讲不通并且是矛盾的。(1)make no sense 讲不通，没道理(2)in a sense 在某一方面；就某种意义来说in no sense 决不(3)common sense 常识There is no/little sense in doing sth.做某事没道理(4)a sens
27、e of humour/responsibility 幽默/责任感【练透考点】(1)单句语法填空Did you make sense _ what the teacher said just now?_ no sense should you lose heart;keep trying and you will make it sooner or later.In _ sense winning the World Cup made Argentina famous in the world.ofIna(2)完成句子利用你的常识。如果一个报告看起来太好而显得不真实，很可能就是不真实。_.If
28、 a report seems too good to be true,probably it is.在我看来，现在为这事苦恼是没有意义的。As far as Im concerned,_.(3)一句多译她所提到的如此令人困惑以致于他们几乎不能理解它。What she referred to was so confusing that they could hardly _ it.What she referred to was so confusing that they could hardly _ it.Use your common sensethere is no sense in
29、getting upset about it nowunderstandmake sense of7hold fast坚守；遵守；紧紧抓住【典型例句】We can only try to hold fast to the ageold values of honesty,decency and concern for others.我们只能努力坚守那些古老的价值观：诚实、正派、关心他人。(1)hold fast to sth.坚持；坚守(梦想，信念)hold fast 紧紧抓住；别放手(2)hold on 别挂电话；坚持住；听一下hold up 举起；阻止hold back 踌躇；阻止hold
30、 out 维持；坚持hold off 推迟；战胜(3)hold ones breath 屏息；屏气sb.holds the belief/view that.某人坚定地认为hold a conference/sports meeting 举办会议/运动会hold a positive attitude 持有一个积极的态度【练透考点】单句语法填空Can you hold _ for a second?Ill see if hes here.Believe in yourself，hold fast _ your dream and never give up，and you will succe
31、ed sooner or later.So we dont hold _ much hope that they will respond positively to the latest findings.Do you think that mixedability classes hold _ the better students?The football match had to hold _ for about half an hour because of a driving rain.ontooutbackoff.典型句式精析8The reasons why.【教材原句】Ther
32、e are various reasons why people write poetry.人们写诗有各种各样的原因。【句式分析】(1)其常见的基本句式：The reason why/for which is/was that.，意为“的原因是”，why在定语从句中作状语。(2)reason当先行词时，且关系词在定语从句中作主语、宾语或表语，一般用that/which引导定语从句，作宾语时，还可以省略。【拓展延伸】句型比较：(1)This/That is why.为表语从句的常用句型结构，意为“这/那就是为什么”(2)This/That is because.“这是因为”，because从句表
33、示原因。(3)The reason why.is/was that.“的原因是”，why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句，注意此时表语从句用that引导，而不用because。【练透考点】单句语法填空/单句写作The reason _ the injection needs repeating every year is _ the virus often changes.From space,the earth looks blue.This is _ about seventyone percent of its surface is covered by water.Tom was v
34、ery lazy.That was _ he never achieved anything in his life.那就是我申请这个职位的原因。_汤姆开会迟到的原因是他病了。_whythatbecausewhyThats why I apply for the position.The reason why Tom came late for the meeting was that he was ill.9“with宾语宾补”复合结构【典型例句】With so many different forms of poetry to choose from，students may eventu
35、ally want to write poems of their own.因为有如此多不同类型的诗可以选择，学生们最后可能都想写他们自己的诗歌了。【句式分析】“with宾语宾语补足语”称为with复合结构，可位于句首或句尾，常作时间、原因、方式、伴随状语，亦可作后置定语。结构如下：(1)with宾语doing(doing表主动或正在进行)(2)with宾语adj.(adj.表状态)(3)with宾语adv.(adv.表状态)(4)with宾语done(done表完成或被动)(5)with宾语介词短语(6)with宾语to do(to do表将来，有时用主动形式表示被动意义)【练透考点】单句语
36、法填空/完成句子(用with的复合结构)With time _，they have grown into big boys and big girls.(pass)With ten minutes _，youd better hurry.(go)“I think we can leave _ our heads held high，”Kate said.问题解决了，质量也提高了。_，the quality has been improved.吉姆专心致志地听着讲座，所有注意力都集中在上面了。Jim was listening attentively to the lecture,_.他夹着一大
37、本书，走出了图书馆。He came out of the library,_.passingto gowithWith the problem solvedall his attention fixed upon itwith a large book under his arm随堂练习.高考能力同步化单句语法填空/单词拼写12020江苏卷I dont really understand every line he _(recite),but I believe he truly loves the poems himself.22019全国卷It turns out that just lo
38、oking at green，growing things can reduce stress，lower blood pressure，and put people into a better _(情绪)32020全国卷His friends _(tease)him about babysitting his sister and his interests were far different from mine.42020新高考全国卷 His judgment and references are decidedly American,as well as his _(精致的)stoma
39、ch.52019天津卷As I was unable to see through the outer surface of the tofu,these people are unable to see through the surface of _(偏见)recitesmoodteaseddelicateprejudice6Chinese people are concerned about the problem of international terrorism and show sympathy _ the countries and people that have suffe
40、red from the terrorist attacks.7Finally,Id love to express my heartful thanks to my tutor,who has _(polish)every page of my draft.8The final was closely _(contest)with both teams showing exceptional perseverance.9Gray describes in _(drama)and spellbinding detail the lives of these five ladies.10To o
41、ur _，we could sense that they were _ at the bad news.(sorrow)forpolishedcontesteddramaticsorrowsorrowful.必备知识试题化完成句子1_，he wont have time to go shopping this morning.有那么多文章要写，今天早上他没有时间去买东西了。(with的复合结构)2_.You must have _ some important information while copying it.我看不懂这篇文章。当你抄写的时候，你一定是落下了一些重要信息。With a
42、 great many articles to writeI couldnt make sense of the passageleft out3 His initial requirements are that students should speak good Putonghua and _.他最基本的要求是学生应该讲一口流利的普通话，尤其是对中国文化感兴趣。4_ people are fond of and obsessed with poetry.因为各种各样的原因，人们喜欢诗歌并对诗歌着迷。5Come to see me _.你什么时候方便，就请来看我。have an inter
43、est in Chinese culture in particularThere are various reasons whywhenever it is convenient to you.教材语篇高考化语法填空阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Some poems tell a story or describe something in a way 1._(give)the reader a strong 2._(impress).3._ try to convey certain emotions.Poets use different forms o
44、f poetry to express themselves.For example,the language of nursery rhymes is concrete but 4._(imagine),and they delight children 5._ they have strong rhythm and a lot of repetition.And list poems have a flexible line length and 6._(repeat)phrases which give both a pattern and a rhythm to the poem.to
45、 giveimpressionOthersimaginativebecauserepeatedAnother simple form of poem is the cinquain,7._ is made up of five lines and can convey strong 8._(feel)in just a few words.Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry that is made up of 17 syllables.And of course there are Tang poems from China which you may en
46、joy 9._ particular.With so many different forms of poetry to choose from,students may want to write poems 10._.whichfeelingsinthemselves话题与高考写作2017全国卷假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：(1)时间和地点；(2)内容：学习唐诗；(3)课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Leslie,_Yours，Li Hua【思路点拨】这道考题
47、最大的难度是题目给予的信息少而精，所以这就需要考生在考场上进行技术性细节拓展。写作时，考生需要思考哪些地方好拓展？哪些地方不易拓展？时间和地点不需要过多拓展；学习唐诗，做课前预习这2处这个内容可以拓展。拓展一：学习唐诗的目的：让老外了解中国文化；拓展二：课前预习的建议，即怎么做，或是如何做好准备。Step 1 斟酌打磨 丰富句式1精挑细选核心词汇想周全_ 在汉语学习上取得进步_ 体现了中国传统文化_ 体味汉语之美_ 课前做好充分准备_ 对有个简单了解make some progress in Chinese learningreflect traditional Chinese culture
48、have a taste of the beauty of Chinesemake full preparations before classhave a brief understanding of2遣词造句句式升级是亮点句式翻译：课堂上，你将主要学习唐诗。它反映了中国传统文化，深受中国人的喜爱。In the class,you will mainly learn Tang poetry.It reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.(定语从句)_当你学习唐诗时，你可以领略中国的美。When y
49、ou are learning Tang Poetry,you can have a taste of the beauty of Chinese.(状语从句省略)_In the class,you will mainly learn Tang poetry,which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.When learning Tang Poetry,you can have a taste of the beauty of Chinese.Step 2 逻辑衔接 连句成文 Dear Le
50、slie,_Yours，Li Hua读后续写专题之六 精彩结局 韵味无穷一、立意和结尾的重要关联性。读后续写能否拿高分某种意义上说全在于立意(theme)，而立意又在于能否给出一个好的结尾。但好的结尾绝对不能形成一套模式，而是要仔细审题，主题要量身定制。读后续写的文本分析一个重要的考量就是：writing purpose。二、续写结尾的重要性。小说结尾有很多种结尾方式，有的以故事结局为结尾，有的以景物描写做结尾，还有的以哲理性语言结尾等。在读后续写中，结尾发挥着至关重要的作用。除基本的揭示故事结局外，结尾还应与前文伏笔照应，使人觉得在情理之中；与前文形成对比，点明主旨，主题。在人物形象塑造上，
51、结尾应表现人物的心理、性格、品质、经历、命运、能力等。在故事情节上，小说的结尾还可以照应标题和开头，使小说结构完整。三、如何立意。在文章前几段仔细寻找立意点，仔细寻找作者的写作目的。写作目的千万不要主观生造，而要在材料中找到定位句，这个句子一般是观点句。这就涉及到读者如何去区分观点和事实了。简化为：第一步：找观点句，选择一个来作为theme的基础；第二步：根据情节发展去构思末句，通过末句来照应观点句，两种方法：支持观点句，并深层次升华；反对观点句，突出强烈的反差。About a halfmile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond.In summer,my
52、 brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there.The pond wore a collar of black mud.It was not a place for swimming.In late summer,the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum(起泡的浮渣).Sometimes a strong,unpleasant smell rose from it.We stayed away.When winter
53、came,the pond was once again an inviting place.One day when ice covered it,Harry said to me,“Try walking across.”The ice looked solid.No water showed through it,but I hesitated.“Go ahead.”Harry urged.“Try it.Youre lighter than I am.If the ice holds,we can run and slide carefully on it.Itll be fun.”I
54、 wanted to please Harry,and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice.I began to slide across the pond.In the middle of the pond,the ice gave way with a sudden crack(裂缝)!I stretched out(伸展)my arms.The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched o
55、n the ice.From my shoulders down I hung in icy water.I thought of the bottom of the pond.I knew it would be black and awful down there,full of mud and maybe rotting creatures.I tried to climb out of the hole,but when I got a knee on the ice,it broke like window glass.Again and again I tried to get o
56、ut.Again and again the ice broke into pieces.The hole widened.I was wearing a coat of heavy material.As it became completely wet,it dragged me down.I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.I looked at Harry on shore.He seemed rooted to the spot.“I cant get out！”I
57、screamed when I caught some breath.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Harry turned and ran from the pond._The moment I crashed through the kitchen door,sobbing,mum rushed over._立意技巧：观点句有三个：It was not a place for swimming.When winter came,the pond was once again an inviting place.I wanted to p
58、lease Harry,and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice.其它句子基本都属于fact，并不适合作为立意的发散点。到底哪一句适合theme呢？第一句，对应结尾即是：直到那一刻，我们终于明白了为什么它不适合游泳，也明白了大人们的警告的真正含义。(Not until then did we realize.)第二句，对应结尾即是：虽然侥幸逃过一劫，但是我不得不说，那个池塘还是吸引着我们，孩子的好奇心大人们是不懂的啊。(a narrow escape cannot deny the fact that.)第三句，对应结尾即是：
59、我终于明白了，我以后再也不能为了取悦他人去做一些冒险的事情，这难道就是成长的代价吗？无论哪一种结尾，都会让人感到有理有据，都是立意好的作文。范文赏析：He turned and ran from the pond.Staring at his familiar figure out of sight，I wondered:“Is he running for help,or is he running away and leaving me sliding to the bottom？”Dismay and scare beat me out of breath.The icy water p
60、ierced my skin with needlelike chill.I was anxious to climb out by myself,but countless previous failures froze me from struggling again.After what seemed to be centuries of fruitless waiting,I was on the verge of collapse.Just at that moment,here dashed Hary with a large,black,Vshaped oak branch.Fl
61、opping to his stomach,he pushed the branch before him and wriggled toward me.The moment a slender top branch was within reach,I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icy water by Harry.What a narrow escape!We stumbled home,with my clothes dripping(滴水)and my overshoes squishing
62、(发出嘎吱声)and squirting(喷出)water.I crashed through the kitchen door,sobbing，mum rushed over.Unbuttoning my coat，and stripping(脱去)my clothes from me,she gave me a quick bath and then nimbly wrapped a thick blanket over me to stop my teethchattering chill;meanwhile she gave me a cup of milk to warm me up
63、.I tearfully complained to her about all that had happened and Harry was lectured about getting a younger sibling into such a trouble.His head drooping,Harry murmured an apology to me.I was temporarily comforted and relieved but in fact,the pond was still a permanent temptation to young Harry and me
64、，especially when winter came again.四、结尾的方式1首尾呼应结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。但是注意一点，不要照搬开头的句子，要变化句式或者用词来表达相同的主题。高考链接(1)2017年浙江高考题开头：I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprises and amusements,all because of my motherloving,sweet,yet absentminded and forgetful.One strange family
65、trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.这篇读后续写的开头写到我有一个快乐有趣的童年都是因为有一个善良有爱但是健忘的妈妈。那么续写结尾的时候可以回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格，来深化主题。结尾：Despite moms being absentminded and forgetful，she was still a kind and nice mom.(2)2018年浙江高考题开头：It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never befo
66、re.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.(3)2016年浙江高考题开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.结尾：What a funny day.Arthur co
67、uldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious(搞笑的)experience.2主题升华为了点明记叙内容的意义，作者常常在记叙文的结尾，融入自己的观点和评价。精彩的结尾，可以凸显文章的主题，升华事件的意义，起到画龙点睛的作用。(1)引用名言警句(2)自己组织哲理性语言注意：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本具体分析。例子1：Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model.To me there is none other than my mom.She
68、has_beauty,_brains,_and one of the best hearts I know.Without her in my life,I would have no idea whether I can be a_famous_dancer.Someday,when_I_am_older_and have children of my own,I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.(母爱的深远影响)例 子 2：“Two reasons account for that you won，”the teacher an
69、swered.“First,youve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo.Second,the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm.It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match.As a proverb says,Every coin has two sides.Making full use of your stren
70、gth is your achievement.Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble.God is fair to everyone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题)乐观积极的名言警句(1)Without the dark,you would never see the stars.没有黑夜，你将永远无法看到星星。(2)The pessimist sees difficulty in every opportunity.The optimist sees opportunity in every
71、 difficulty.悲观主义者在每个机会里看到困难，乐观主义者在每个困难里看到机会。(3)Dont cry because its over,smile because it happened.不要因为结束而哭泣，要微笑，因为它曾经发生过。(4)You will never find a rainbow if you are looking down.如果你低着头，是看不到彩虹的。(5)Be thankful for what you have;youll end up having more.If you concentrate on what you dont have,youll n
72、ever,ever have enough.感激你所拥有的，最终你会得到更多。如果你总是对那些没有得到的东西耿耿于怀，那么你永远也不会满足。面对挫折的名言警句(1)Man is not made for defeat.A man can be destroyed but not defeated.人不是为失败而生的。人可以毁灭，但不能被打败。(2)What doesnt kill me makes me stronger.杀不死我的会让我更强壮。(3)Storms make trees take deeper roots.暴风雨让树木扎根更深。(4)Strength doesnt come f
73、rom what you can do.It comes from overcoming the things you once thought you couldnt.强大并不来自于你能做到什么，而来自于你克服了自己曾经认为不可战胜的艰难险阻。(5)Dreams that seem impossible can be realized with determination and persistence,no matter what the odds are.看似不可能的梦想可以通过决心和坚持来实现，不管实现的可能性有多大。关于爱的名言警句(1)Only by love,life is ke
74、pt together and moves forward.只有靠爱，生命才能维系在一起，不断前进。(2)True love is to give everything to each other without asking for anything in return.真正的爱情是给予对方一切而不求任何回报。(3)It is love that makes the world go around.是爱让世界转动。(4)Where there is great love,there are always miracles.哪里有真爱存在，哪里就有奇迹。3对话收尾(1)Chester said
75、 his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother,but both brothers had changed their last names.“He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that hes been looking for us ever since we lost contact，”he said.Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be reun
76、ited with Urrea as well.When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life,Chester said，“I got family everywhere,so it might lead to many more trips now.”(2)What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also movesothers.Ninas family had moved to a bigger apartment.“Ive heard
77、 amazing stories about dogs loyalty,but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me.Even now,I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，”said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again.I never grow tired of repeating thisanimals are the most d
78、evoted and loving creatures.They_need our love and care.”4自然结尾As I walked home one freezing day,I stumbled on a wallet in the street.I picked it up and looked inside to find some identification so I could call the owner.But the wallet contained only three dollars and a letter that looked as if it ha
79、d been in there for years.The envelope was worn and I could read only the return address on it.I opened the letter,hoping to find some clue.Then I saw the dateline.The letter was written almost 60 years ago.It was in a beautiful handwriting with a little flower in the lefthand corner.It was to a you
80、ng man named Michael,saying that the writer could not see him anymore because her mother forbade it.Even so,she wrote that she would always love him.It was signed,Hannah.It was a beautiful letter,but there was no way except for the name Michael,that the owner could be identified.After searching for
81、the return address on the envelope,I finally found that Hannah was now in a nursing home.I drove over to the nursing home.A nurse and a guard greeted me at the door.We went up to the third floor of the large building.In the day room，the nurse introduced me to Hannah.She was a sweet,silverhaired old
82、lady with a warm smile.I told her about finding the wallet and showed her the letter.The second she saw the envelope with that little flower,she took a deep breath and said,“Young man,this letter was the last contact I ever had with Michael.”She looked away for a moment deep in thought and then said
83、 softly,“I loved him very much.But I was only 16 and my mother felt I was too young.Oh,he was so handsome.He looked like Sean Connery,the actor.If you should find him，tell him I think of him often.And，”she hesitated for a moment,almost biting her lip，“tell him I still love him.”I thanked Hannah and
84、said goodbye.I took the elevator to the first floor and as I stood by the door，the guard there asked if I had any information from Hannah.I told him she had given me a clue.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。I took out the wallet,which was a simple brown leather case with red lacing on the si
85、de._On the eighth floor；I saw a man reading a book in the day room，who happened to be Michael Goldstein._自然结尾是顺着文中所叙之事的自然发展，以它的必然结果作结尾，没有套话，没有空话，简单、自然，可使文章的结构显得十分完整。作为读后续写的文章，常常不一定含有某种深刻的道理，这时只要将故事补充完整就足够，因此自然结尾法是续写故事中最常见的结尾方式。I took out the wallet,which was a simple brown leather case with redlacin
86、g on the side.The guard burst into excitement,declaring it belonged to Michael,who lived on the eighth floor.I thanked him genuinely and dashed to the elevator.I couldnt help thinking of their dustladen put deep love.Unfolded before me was a breathtaking scene when they met again.A warm glow spreadi
87、ng over my body,a smile lifted the corner of my mouth.On the eighth floor；I saw a man reading a book in the day room，whohappened to be Michael Goldstein.After telling the story and showing him the wallet，I was thrilled to see that his eyes became as wide as the sea，his throat shivered and his face t
88、witched with complex emotions.He was deep in thought and took a deep breath.Then he asked me to hide the truth to Hannah.Frozen on the ground，I saw him lifting himself up slowly,turning around,sighing deeply.Then he signed to me with his hand,stiffly.【解析】该篇文章的结尾恰当，顺其自然。该续写片段的线索也是从保安处得知。但作者没有对保安多作描写，
89、而是围绕自己的心理活动展开写作。作者期待着 Hannah和 Michael见面时的场景，一想到这份 dustladen but deep love(尘封已久但却深沉的爱)作者的心就被温暖包围着。(A warm glow spreading over my body，a smile lifted the corner of mouth.)到了八楼，作者满欢心喜地告知Michael一切，谁料到 Michael在经历一阵内心纠结后，深叹了一口气，对“我”挥一挥手。故事在这里停止，因为主要人物 Michael 对本次事件的反应已完成。此外，作者还引用了都德的最后一课的结尾he signed to me
90、 with his hand 老师在最后一节法语课上，和学生挥一挥手，心中纵使有再多的无奈，也已经来不及了，更是别有心意地加了一个副词stiffly，即僵硬地朝我挥了挥手，这一挥手，表现了Michael的无奈，更告诉我们往事已成追忆，剩余任由读者自己去想象，把自然结尾的作用发挥得淋漓尽致。自然性结尾式佳句欣赏(1)Laughing and smiling,Emma rushed out,shouting，“What are we waiting for?”(2)Satisfied,mum nodded at Emma,with a joy bubbling from her heart.(3)
91、The smile bubbled from heart showed Mums satisfaction.(4)Satisfied,Emma ate the cake，not only because of the surprise，but also for the pride bubbling from the bottom of her heart.(5)Heart beating(racing/pounding)wildly，Emma rushed to her mum and hugged her tightly.(6)Many years later,Abe still hold
92、this book.He couldnt forget how his stepmother loved him.(7)With tears dropping from his eyes,he ran to his mums warm hug,smiled and said gently“Mum,thank you.”(8)With my trembling hands,I opened the envelope，inside which I found seven dollars and a note.On the note there were the words,“Its for you
93、r honesty.”(9)At that moment,with tears，I hugged her tightly，saying thank you for her forgiveness.5以景结情以景结情是诗歌绝句的一种技巧，也是借景抒情的方式之一。它是指诗歌在议论或抒情的过程中，戛然而止，转为写景，以景代情作结，结束诗句，使得诗歌“此时无情胜有情”，同时意犹未尽，可以使读者在景物描写中，驰骋想象，体味诗的意境，产生韵味无穷的艺术效果，在记叙文读后续写中，使用以景结情，同样能以景作结，寓情于景，达到不言情而情无限、言有尽而意无穷的效果。Para.1:I took out the wa
94、llet,which was a simple brown leather case withred lacing on the side.Gazing at the wallet，uncertainly the guard told me that it might belong to Michael Goldstein.Surprise descending on me，I gaped at him,nervously asking where he was.At the moment he pointed at a room on the eighth floor，I dragged m
95、yself ahead with my heart beating wildly,even without leaving a“Thank you”Para.2：On the eighth floor；I saw a man reading a book in the day room，who happened to be Michael Goldstein.Cautiously,I slipped approaching him，slowly passing the wallet,breaking the message from Hannah.For a long time,he just
96、 stared at the blank before him,merrily,sinking in sweet memories in the past.Then,something like a smile wrinkled the corners of his eyes.Old as he was,he stood up and stepped downstairs swiftly,followed by me.In Hannahs room,they hugged tightly.Balmy breeze wiping my face,a sudden warmth just hit
97、me.【解析】该篇文章的结尾不错，以景结情，情境交融，营造了和谐温暖的画面令人回味。该续写片段衔接设计得当，从保安那里得知他想找的人可能在八楼，所以作者甚至来不及道声谢就急匆匆跑向八楼。在八楼，他如愿见到了Michael 并且把这个催人泪下的消息告诉了他。作者用了一个倒装句 Old as he was，he stood up and stepped downstairs swiftly，followed by me.来表现 Michael 迫不及待的心情。当他们相拥的那一刻，微风拂面，温暖袭人是再自然不过的事了。这个结尾给人一种水到渠成的感觉，也让人明白爱，温暖人心。该续写结尾将人物感动的心情
98、与微风拂面的环境相结合，同时与主题(爱)相称，融情于景，加深读者感受。但以景结情时一定要注意所写环境与人物心情相照应，避免空泛的景物描写。以景结情式结尾佳句欣赏(1)In the heavy snow,passion and love burnt as they hugged and smiled.(2)No matter how cold the winter was，all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth.(3)Everything went smoothly and quietly,so in the dark nig
99、ht,a boy was reading while his mother was seating，snows heavy outside though，it just couldnt stop the warmth filling up the whole room.(4)I believe in full blossom，Grandmas sitting peacefully in the sun，every flower carrying her previously hope,with Grandpa beside her,giggling like a child.(5)Being surprised and overjoyed a great deal,Jane held him tightly and told him how much she loved him.At the moment,the mountain was filled with love.
