1、第四讲用篇章技巧助力层级十一生动清晰的“时、语态”一篇文章的时态语态可以让文章要点表述清晰，语言生动，段落有条理，能烘托语境，创设情境，使文章的语言活起来，亮起来。美句输入一、时态一定要正确1.一般时态一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。There is going to be a papercutting exhibition in the Folk Art Museum on Sunday.(2017全国卷书面表达)星期日，在民间美术馆将有一个剪纸展览。2.进行时态现在进行时、过去进行时和将来进行时。I am writing to invite you to join a papercut
2、ting show to be held this Sunday.(2017全国卷书面表达)我写信是想邀请你参加本星期日举行的剪纸展。3.完成时态现在完成时、过去完成时。Im sure that it will interest you，for you have been enthusiastic about pingpong.(2017全国卷书面表达)我肯定这会使你感兴趣，因为你一直热衷于乒乓球运动。二、用英语的被动语态写作时可以多用被动语态，以使表达更生动。1.be过去分词(be可使用各种时态)或get过去分词The exhibition will be held from 9：00 am
3、 to 5：00 pm the day after tomorrow in Folk Custom Museum.(2017全国卷书面表达)展览将于后天上午9时至下午5时在民俗博物馆举行。2.情态动词be过去分词Internet voting is unfair，and cant be trusted.(2016江苏卷书面表达)网络投票不公平，不能被信任。佳句输出补全句子1.That weekend，we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.(2016北京卷写作)那个周末，我们去了附近的小区把
4、它们送给那里的人们。2.Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.我已请他带给你所要的油画。3.Im writing to tell you something about donating books to your class.我正写信告诉你向你班赠书的情况。4.The entrance to the parking place was too small and often got blocked.通往停车场的入口太小了，经常堵车。5.This book sells well in our
5、 province，and thousands of copies have been sold out now.这本书在我们省很好卖，现在已经卖出数千本了。6.Great changes have taken place in our school in the past two years.我们的学校近两年发生了巨大的变化。7.I didnt catch what our teacher said，because I was thinking about something else.我没有听懂我们的老师说的什么，因为我刚才在考虑别的事情。8.I will tell you the tru
6、th as long as you keep it to yourself.只要你不告诉别人，我就告诉你真相。完美文章(记人叙事)利用恰当的时态语态，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵1.A very terrible rainstorm hit our city (一场可怕的暴雨袭击了我们城市) last night and caused huge mudslides around West Village.In this disaster，nearly 2.ten houses were destroyed (十所房子被毁) and an office building was ruined.Wh
7、ats worse，3.it has already caused one death (暴雨已造成一人死亡)，leaving five persons missing.4.When trouble happens (当困难发生) at a place，help comes from all sides.Soldiers were sent to help out.And 5.a lot of villagers tried their best to help (许多村民努力帮助) search for the missing persons.It is said that the dire
8、ct economic loss caused by this heavy rainstorm 6.adds up to more than ten million yuan (总计一千多万元).Through everyones efforts，7.everything went on very well/smoothly (一切进展顺利).层级十二句顺意畅的“过渡语”能使书面表达的整篇文章浑然一体的就是一些过渡性词语的使用。这些衔接过渡性词语在句与句之间、段与段之间起承上启下、使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然的作用，从而提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点。美句输入1.表示起始关系的过渡性词
9、语above all，to begin/start with，today，now，nowadays，at present，currently，recently，generally speaking，according to，with the development of.等。To start with，I have been learning and speaking Mandarin for about 17 years.首先，我学说普通话已经17年了。(2015四川卷满分作文)2.表示时间顺序的过渡性词语firstly，first of all，to begin/start with，th
10、en，later，in the end，finally，at last，after that，afterwards，since then，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。Firstly，I have always been interested in reading books.Secondly，Id like to share my books with others as well.(2015重庆卷满分作文)首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。3.表示并列关系的过渡性词语and，or，also，as well as，neither.n
11、or.，not only.but also.，either.or.，not.but.等。She finally earned respect of them，who eventually became confident as well as wellbehaved.(2015广东卷满分作文)她最后赢得了他们的尊重，他们最终变得自信，表现也不错。4.表示转折关系的过渡性词语but，yet，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary，though，although，even if/though，despite，in spite of，regardless of
12、等。Some compromises were unavoidable，but the video turned out perfect.有些妥协是不可避免的，但视频结果是完美的。(2017北京卷书面表达)5.表示因果关系的过渡性词语because，as，since，for，thanks to，due to，as a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence等。Thanks to the assistance of the local media，he has found 32 time twins across 13 countries，w
13、ith 17 males and 15 females.(广东卷满分作文)多亏当地媒体的协助，他在13个国家找到了32对同年同月同日出生的人，其中17对男性，15对女性。6.表示递进关系的过渡性词语whats more，furthermore，moreover，besides，whats worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse still，on (the) one hand.on the other hand.，for one thing.for another (thing).等。Whats worse，I dont communicate
14、a lot with my parents and my friends.更糟糕的是，我不经常和父母和朋友交流。(2017天津卷书面表达)7.表示列举事实的过渡性词语such as，for example/instance，take.for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words等。The plan for the day is as follows：Firstly，its a custom to have dumplings on that day，so well make delicious dumplings with our o
15、wn hands rather than buy some for them.(2015全国卷满分作文)这天的计划如下：首先，在那天吃饺子是一项风俗，因此我们会亲手为他们做美味的饺子而不是去买。8.表示观点的过渡性词语in my opinion，in my view，from my point of view，as far as I am concerned，as for me，personally等。As far as Im concerned，all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the vario
16、us activities.(2016天津卷书面表达)就我个人而言，我的所有同学从交流和各种各样的活动中学到很多东西。9.表示总结的过渡性词语in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，all in all，on the whole，in general，actually等。In short，playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident.总之，打篮球丰富我的生活，使我更加自信。佳句输出用过渡词汇补全句子1.First of all/To begi
17、n with (首先)，the most significant thing is to set a goal，work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.2.Besides/In addition/Whats more/Moreover (况且)，listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.3.I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse/worse still (
18、更糟的是)，it became dark.4.Therefore (因此)，I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.5.In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief (总之)，we should take effective measures to protect our environment.6.Otherwise (否则) well have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.7.Swimming not only (不但) b
19、enefits our health，but also (而且) helps us have a strong will.8.On the contrary (正相反)，smart phones not only take up our valuable time，but also do great harm to our health.9.As far as I am concerned (在我看来)，only by studying hard at ordinary time can you succeed eventually.10.Therefore (因此)，I suggest we
20、 get up early to catch the bus.11.Actually(事实上), we cant succeed in everything we try.Whats important is that we should stick at it.12.In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as(例如) swimming, running and various ball games.13.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocke
21、d.So(所以) my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.14.In addition to(除了之外) reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.15.Finally(最后), we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently.They are really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.完美文章(
22、观点对比类)选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文however，besides，meanwhile，personally，additionally，on one hand，on the other hand，as far as Im concernedDear editor，Im writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the oneweek military training.Views vary from person
23、to person.Some hold that it is necessary.1.On one hand，it can improve students teamwork spirit，which will play an important part in their life and study.2.On the other hand，there is no doubt that they become stronger physically and mentally through the training.3.However，others have opposite views.They think it is a waste of time.4.Besides/Additionally，students get burnt easily without any protection in the sun.5.Personally/As far as Im concerned，though we may feel tired during the training，it goes without saying that the oneweek military training is meaningful.Yours，Li Hua
