1、表达 作文巧升格Unit 5 Revealing nature 观察日志 本单元写作项目是描写植物生长过程的观察日志。基本框架 1开头(beginning)写作目的；2主体(body)植物成长的过程；3结尾(ending)你的感受。常用词块 1growth condition of the plant 植物生长条件 2a hole large enough 一个足够大的洞 3put the earth back in the hole 把土回填到洞里 4up to 20 feet in length 长度达 20 英尺 5select proper seeds 挑选合适的种子 6a light
2、 application of fertilizer 使用微量的肥料 常用语句 精彩开头 1Do you have an experience of planting a kind of plant？你有过种植植物的经历吗？2Let me share you with the process about my experience of growing watermelon?让我和你分享我种植西瓜的经历。3I once lived in the countryside and planted some garlic in the garden.我曾经在乡村住过，在菜园里种过大蒜。丰满主体 1C
3、heck to see if there are any local requirements about digging.检查当地是否有关于挖掘的要求。2Take a suitable shovel and dig a hole that is 45 times the width of the root ball，more than enough so it will fit.用一把合适的铲子挖一个比球宽 45 倍的洞，足够大，这样就合适了。3Use the garden cultivator to loosen the dirt all around the hole to make i
4、t easier for the roots to spread.用园艺耕耘机把洞周围的泥土松掉，使根部更容易散开。余味结尾 1Seeing the flowers，I was too excited to express my feelings.看到这些花，我太兴奋了不能表达我的感受。2I cant wait to show my grandparents the fruit trees I have planted.我迫不及待地给祖父母看我种的果树。3No pains，no gains.不劳无获。假定你是正在英国留学的李华，在生物课上，老师要求同学们课后观察一种植物的生长过程，并用日志的形
5、式将该过程记录下来。请你写一篇日志介绍草莓的生长过程，内容包括：1幼苗(seedling)植入土壤；2两周后：幼苗叶子变大，呈伞状；3一个月后：长出花苞(bud)；4两个月后：雌蕊(pistil)变成草莓，约5天后，草莓成熟(mature)。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ _ _ _ 学生习作 Strawberries are many peoples favourite fruit.Some people want to plant strawberries.The growth process of them is pretty long.The leav
6、es of the seedlings grow into larger umbrellashaped leaves after they have been planted in the soil for two weeks.One month later，small buds begin to appear.It takes about two months for the pistils to grow into real strawberries.Five days later，we can enjoy fresh mature strawberries.点评：1草莓生长过程记述详尽；
7、2结尾处没有涉及感受；3句与句之间的衔接还不太紧凑。升格作文 Strawberries are many peoples favourite fruit and some people even want to plant strawberries by themselves.Actually，the growth process of them is pretty long.Here is my observation about them.The leaves of the seedlings gradually grow into larger umbrellashaped ones a
8、fter they have been planted in the soil for two weeks.One month later，small buds begin to appear.The following process is a little longer，taking about two months for the pistils to grow into real strawberries.And five days later，we can have fresh mature strawberries.Isnt it interesting to watch the
9、growth process?假如你是李华，请你写一篇短文，描述你种植绿豆(mung)的经历。1购买种子，种在菜园里；2几天后，绿豆长出地面；3又过了几天，长出绿叶；4给绿豆浇水，长得很好；5绿豆不断生长，三个月后终于开花结籽。注意：1.词数：80 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：长出地面 come up；长叶子 come into leaf；洒水 sprinkle water；开花结籽 go to seed _ _【参考范文】Last summer I planted some mung in my garden.First I bought some seeds from
10、a seedman.Then I sowed them in the garden.A few days later，I went to the garden and found the mung were beginning to come up.Another few days passed and the mung were coming into leaf.Now and then I sprinkled water on them so that they grew well.The mung I planted kept growing，and finally three months later they began to go to seed.I was very happy to see the fruits of my work.点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
