1、Section Guided Writing电子邮件Module 1 My First Day at Senior High写 作 技 法 指 导 一、基本结构 英文电子邮件一般分为三部分。开头部分：指明写邮件的目的；主体部分：详细介绍要谈的主要问题或事件；结尾部分：可以对主体内容进行总结或提出希望。电子邮件要符合书信的基本要求，但要简明扼要，目的明确，语言尽量口语化，使人感到亲切自然。二、增分佳句 A开头语 1表示高兴：I am so glad/pleased/happy to receive your letter dated May 1st.非常高兴收到你五月一号的来信。2表示感谢：Th
2、ank you for your wonderful gift/interesting letter.谢谢你精美的礼物/有趣的来信。3表示关心与询问：How are you these days？/How are you getting on these days?这些天你过得怎么样？4表示抱歉：I am sorry that I did not write to you soon but I have been very busy these days.很抱歉没有很快给你回信，只是这些天我非常忙。5表示遗憾：I am sorry to learn that you did not do we
3、ll in the examination.很遗憾你考得不好。B正文常用语 1Could you come to visit our school?你能来参观我们学校吗？2I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.如果你能接受我的邀请，我会非常感激。3Id love to come,but I cant，because I have much work to do.我很想来，但我不能，因为我有很多工作要做。4In my opinion,you should study hard.我认为你应该努力学习。C结束语 1Im loo
4、king forward to receiving your reply.期盼你的回信。2All my best wishes to you.给你最好的祝愿。3Good luck to you.祝你好运。五 步 写 作 规 范 题目要求 假定你是李华，最近收到你的澳大利亚笔友 Jack 的电子邮件，询问你的学校的基本情况以及你的高中生活。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：学校简介 百年名校，有教学班 48 个、教师 220 人、学生 3 000 人；校园整洁、美丽；老师教学认真，对学生有耐心。学习情况 所学主要课程有语文、数学、英语、物理等；最喜欢的科目是数学和电脑，英语学习有困难
5、。课余生活：听流行音乐、打篮球。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：教学认真 take teaching seriously Dear Jack，_ _ _ _ _ Yours sincerely，Li Hua 第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题 1确定体裁：本文为电子邮件，属于_；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为_；3确定时态：描述学校生活主要用_。应用文第一和第三人称一般现在时二、构思 第一部分，引入：说明写邮件的目的。第二部分，阐述：介绍学校的基本情况以及学校生活。第三部分，总结：对学校生活进行总结并期待对方的回复。
6、第二步：核心词汇想周全 1_ 收到某人的来信 2_ 有的历史 3_ 整洁、美丽 4_ 对某人有耐心 5_ 等等 hear from sb.have/with a history of tidy and beautiful be patient with sb.and so on 6_ 擅长 7_ 在方面有困难 8_ 在某人的业余时间 9_ 认真对待 10_ 期盼；盼望 be good at have difficulty in in ones spare time take.seriously look forward to 第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1我们的学校是一所著名的学校，有 100 多
7、年的历史。(and 连接两个并列句)_Our school is a famous school and it has a history of over 100 years.2校园整洁、美丽。(主系表结构)_3老师教学认真，对每个学生都有耐心。(and 连接两个并列句)_The school is tidy and beautiful.The teachers here take teaching seriously and are very patientwith every student.4我们学习语文、数学、英语、物理等。(主谓宾结构)_5我最喜欢的科目是数学和电脑，并且非常擅长它们
8、。(and 连接两个并列句)_We study Chinese,maths,English,physics and so on.I like maths and computer best and I am very good at them.6在课余时间，我喜欢听流行音乐，喜欢和同学们打篮球。(动名词作宾语)_In my spare time,I enjoy listening to popular music and playingbasketball with my classmates.第四步：句式升级造亮点 1用介词短语作定语改写句 1 _2用 as well as 改写句 2 _O
9、ur school is a famous school with a history of over 100 years.The school is tidy as well as beautiful.3用定语从句改写句 4 _The main subjects that we study include Chinese,maths,English,physics and so on.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 Dear Jack，_ _ _ _ Yours sincerely，Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Jack，I was so pleased to hear from you and
10、 now I am writing to tell you something about my school and school life.Our school is a famous school with a history of over 100 years.There are 48 classes,220 teachers and 3，000 students in it.The school is tidy as well as beautiful.The teachers here take teaching seriously and are very patient wit
11、h every student.The main subjects that we study include Chinese,maths,English,physics and so on.I like maths and computer best and I am very good at them,but I have difficulty in English study.In my spare time,I enjoy listening to popular music and playing basketball with my classmates.That is my school and my school life.How about you?Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 点击右图进入 英 美 文 化 欣 赏 Thank you for watching!
