1、表达 作文巧升格Unit 3 Family matters关于家庭的回忆本单元的写作项目是关于家庭的回忆，属于家庭叙事类的记叙文。在写作时可以从人物、时间、过程以及结果或感受等方面，对事件进行叙述。可以采用顺叙、倒叙或者插叙的方式。基本框架1开头交代事件的缘由：引起回忆的事物。2主体具体描述事件的经过：回忆的时间、地点、人物、事件、特点等。3结尾该事物引发的新的思考或愿望。好的结尾不仅仅有完美的结局，还能留下令人深省、回味的东西。常用词块1clean up the old clothes 清理旧衣服2make up for the lost time 弥补逝去的时光3instead of ma
2、king an apology to her for my words 而没有因我的话向她道歉4with time passing by 随着时间的流逝5be strict with my brother and me in study 在学习上对我和弟弟严格要求6be proud of the award I got in the speech contest 为我在演讲比赛中获奖而感到自豪7communicate with me heart to heart 与我推心置腹地交流了一下8book the train ticket online in advance 提前在网上预订火车票9re
3、mind me of the happy days spent with my close friends 让我想起和好朋友一起度过的快乐日子10teach me how to make dumplings 教我如何包水饺常用语句精彩开头1I was doing.when I found an old photo/a card/a diary.我在做时，发现一张旧照片/一张卡片/一本日记2The lovely memory came flooding back.美好的回忆涌上心头。3How time flies！时光飞逝！4I couldnt wait to share them with y
4、ou.我迫不及待地想和你分享。丰满主体1It was a special day.years ago.那是年前的一个特别的日子。2I decided to surprise.我决定给一个惊喜。3I was about to throw everything back when my mother came in.我正准备把所有东西都扔掉，这时妈妈进来了。4When I.，my eyes watered.当我的时候，我的眼睛湿润了。余味结尾1Love is indeed a magical ingredient.爱确实是一种神奇的因素。2I hope I will make.for her.我希
5、望我能为她做假如你是李华，你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经为了帮助你摆脱压力而写给你的一堆卡片。这些卡片让你开始了快乐的学习。请你写封电子邮件，把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友 Tom。注意：词数 80 左右。学生习作Dear Tom，This weekend I was cleaning up my bookshelf.I found a pile of cards.When I saw the words on each card，I cried.They made me think of something.The pressure was large at the beginning of
6、senior life.I was afraid of failing the tests.Mum was careful.She found my problem.She put a card on my desk every morning to encourage me.Gradually，I became happy again in my studies.Mum told me to work hard little by little and then succeed.Yours，Li Hua名师点评：1所使用的句子较简单，复杂句式较少；2描述事情仅限于过程的罗列，没能充分表达出回
7、忆的内容。升格作文Dear Tom，While I was cleaning up my bookshelf，I found a stack of cards.Reading the words on them my eyes watered.It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration.I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and was afraid of falling behind others.Soon Mum found my
8、 problem.From then on，I could find a special card on my desk every morning.Gradually，I became less anxious and found pleasure in my studies.Mum makes me understand that pressure cant be avoided.What counts is how to deal with it.Yours，Li Hua假定你是李华，你在整理书架时看到一张全家照，请写封信并寄出这张照片，把自己的家庭成员 给你的新朋友 Tom 介绍一下。
9、注意：词数 80 左右_参考范文 Dear Tom，This weeked I was cleaning up m y bookshell，I found a photograph of my family.There are five people in it.The tallest one is my father.He is fortyeight years old.My mother is standing beside him.She is not tall as my father.She is three years younger than my father.Sitting in front of them are my grandparents.My grandfather is that fat one with a pair of glasses.My grandmother is as fat as he.This little one is me.Im sitting betweet them.All of us love one another.I have a happy family.Yours，Li Hua点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
