1、请根据下列两幅图写一篇短文,短文内容应包括以下几个要点: 妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩; 儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理; 写作时要适当地发挥,语言连贯,要写出妈妈的惊诧,还要写自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点;词数:150左右。 认真看图,结合文字和图画,确立所要表达的主题是什么。这是在家庭教育中比较常见的现象:家长用双重标准去教育自己的孩子。根据基本的价值观,我们可以归纳出图画所要表达的主题是:As can be seen from the cartoons, it is a story about a bad example of family education .围绕确立的主题,仔细看图和文字,
2、列出图中的要点。人物:小男孩、妈妈以及跌倒的小女孩情景和动作:小男孩要去帮助小女孩,妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩,并对儿子说:“不要扶,否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。”人物:小男孩和妈妈情景和动作:妈妈看到儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理;小男孩对妈妈说: “我扶了,你会说是我碰倒的”妈妈很是震惊。遣词造句(注意多重表达)A boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground.A boy wanted to give a hand to a girl who fell over on the ground.His mother preven
3、ted him from helping the girl.His mother persuaded him not to do so.She said to his son “Dont do that, otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known”.She said to his son “If you did that, others would think it was you who knocked her known”.(注意虚拟语气的运用)Mom saw that her son ignored the
4、 fallen oil bottle on the ground . The boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet. The boy said to his mother, “If I had lifted the oil bottle, you would think that it was me who brought it down.” The boy explained to his mother that had he lifted the oil
5、bottle, she would think that it was him who brought it down. (注意虚拟语气的运用)Hearing his sons explanation, Mom was shocked/astonished/surprised.连贯成篇As can be seen from the cartoons, it is a story about a bad example of family education. In the first picture, a boy was trying to help a girl who fell over
6、on the ground while his Mom prevented him from doing so, saying “Dont do that, otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known”. In the second picture, the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet. “Why cant you straighten it up?” she asked
7、 angrily, but she was greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy, “If I had lifted the oil bottle, you would think that it was me who brought it down.” 围绕漫画主题自拟感想我对漫画中母亲的做法看法:不同意建议(解决的办法)父母是孩子的第一任老师,应该为孩子树立好榜样;父母不仅要关心孩子的身体,还要关心他们的思想;父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。遣词造句(注意多重表达)I disagree with what the
8、 mother did in the story. In my opinion, the mother shouldnt educate his son in this way.Parents are their childrens first teachers ,so they should set a good example to them.As their first teachers, parents should set a good example to their children.I think parents should not only care for their c
9、hildrens health, but their minds. For example, they should let their children 连贯成篇In my opinion, the mother shouldnt educate his son in this way. As we all know, parents are the first teachers, so they should set a good example to them. I think parents should not only care for their childrens health
10、, but their minds. For example, they should let their children know its a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. 【参考范文】一As can be seen from the cartoons, it is a story about a bad example of family education. In the first picture, a boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground whil
11、e his Mom prevented him from doing so, saying “Dont do that, otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known”. In the second picture, the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet. “Why cant you straighten it up?” she asked angrily, but she
12、was greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy, “If I had lifted the oil bottle, you would think that it was me who brought it down.” In my opinion, the mother shouldnt educate his son in this way. As we all know, parents are the first teachers,so they should set a good example to them. I think
13、 parents should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds. For example, they should let their children know its a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. 【参考范文】二As can be seen from the cartoons, it is a story about a bad example of family education. In the first picture, a boy wa
14、s trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground while his Mom persuaded him not to do so, saying “Dont do that, otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known”. In the second picture, the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet. Mom w
15、as greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy: “If I had lifted the oil bottle, you would think that it was me who brought it down.”I disagree with what the mother did in the story. As we all know, parents are the first teachers. I think parents should not only care for their childrens health,
16、but their minds. They should let their children know its a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. 【2011年南京市第二次模拟考试】请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面:1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。2. 是否同意他们的教育方式,并陈述理由。3. 对家庭教育提出建议。注意:1. 词数:150左右。 2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。参考词汇: 溺爱 spoil vt. 【参考范文】As can be seen in the cartoon, the y
17、oung couple educate their child in different ways. Father educates their child with a ruler but Mother with a bar of chocolate. What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him. They adopt strikingly inconsistent methods, which makes their child co
18、nfused.I subscribe to neither of their education methods. If we always give children severe punishment, they will become nervous and lack self-confidence or become violent and aggressive, following in the fathers footsteps. If we always love children too much, they will turn out to be self-centered
19、and dependent, tending to do whatever they want to. So far as I am concerned, it is better to use appropriate methods based on childrens individual personalities. Since praise and criticism both play vital roles in childrens education, it is essential that parents should try to maintain the balance
20、between love and strictness. Only in this way can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development. (157 words)【学生习作欣赏】一As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. The mother is smiling and wants to please the child with choco
21、late. On the contrary, the father who holds a ruler tightly looks angry and seems to urge his child to study. The small boy between his parents is frightened and confused.As far as I am concerned, I think it an effective way to educate children. On the one hand, a considerate mother can take care of
22、 her child carefully and devotes all her love, which will educate the child to be kind and selfless. On the other hand, a father who is always hard on the child can prevent the baby being spoiled. Moreover, the child can learn to struggle and be brave when facing difficulties.In conclusion, father a
23、nd mother are two important parts in family education. They cant spoil children too much or blame them too often, which will have bad effects on childrens growth. (149 words)【学生习作欣赏】二As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. The father of the child looks
24、extremely angry. He is holding a ruler in order to beat the little boy. Meanwhile, the mother is smiling to her child, with a bar of chocolate in her hand.However, I cant agree with either of them. Being strict to children may hurt their hearts. On the contrary, spoiling children too much could affe
25、ct their future development. Both of them are harmful to the growth of children during their childhood.In my opinion, parents are the first teachers of their child. What they say and do will affect their children deeply. First of all, parents need to have discussions on family education, which is ve
26、ry important to the education on their child. Then parents ought to treat the child equally and offer proper freedom and help when children turn to either of you. If they can continue to do so, children may have a healthy and warm family life. (156 words)【学生习作欣赏】三As can be seen in the cartoon, the y
27、oung couple educated their child in different ways. The mother provides tasty food, like chocolate for her child. On the contrary, the father holds a ruler, intending to punish his son who doesnt behave well.We cant ignore the fact that the education in China has many problems. The action of the you
28、ng couple is wrong, for they only pay attention to what their child has done rather than the reasons contributing to his action. The mothers spoil may lead to her sons pride and even make the boy develop some bad habits. However, the son would feel frightened if his father always punish him.In my op
29、inion, its time that we took action to improve the family education. On the one hand, parents should tell children the right ways to do things instead of punishing him. On the other hand, needless to say, it is crucial to give the child proper praises . In addition, parents should be informed of the importance of family education so that every child could be well educated. (166 words)