1、短文改错专题卷(二)A(2021江西赣州高三一模)In order to celebrate the eighty anniversary of the founding of our school, a big celebration was held in our school last Sunday. All the teachers and students attended a ceremony.Full preparations were being made in advance. We decorate our school with flowers and balloons,
2、 but we prepared some eye-catching programs. Finally, the day we had been looking forward came. In the morning, the opening ceremony was held on the playground as scheduling. After that, they attended a special class meeting .In the evening, the teachers and students gave different kinds of wonderfu
3、l performance. I was happily that I joined in the chorus of our school song.答案:In order to celebrate the eightyeightieth anniversary of the founding of our school, a big celebration was held in our school last Sunday. All the teachers and students attended athe ceremony.Full preparations were made i
4、n advance. We decoratedecorated our school with flowers and balloons,butand we prepared some eye-catching programs. Finally ,the day we had been looking forward to came.In the morning,the opening ceremony was held on the playground as schedulingscheduled.After that,theywe attended a special class me
5、eting.In the evening,the teachers and students gave different kinds of wonderful performanceperformances.I was happilyhappy that I joined in the chorus of our school song.剖析:表示“周年纪念日”应用序数词。故将eighty改为eightieth。前文中已经提到了庆祝活动,所以此处是特指。故将a改为the。此处是指准备都做好了,应用一般过去时的被动语态。故将being删掉。此处描述过去的事,应用一般过去时。故将decorate
6、改为decorated。逗号前后两个分句是并列关系,所以应用连词and。故将but改为and。look forward to意为“期盼”,为固定搭配。故在forward后加to。as scheduled意为“按照计划”,为固定搭配。故将scheduling改为scheduled。此处是指“我们”参加了一个特别班会。故将they改为we。根据“different kinds of”可知,此处应用可数名词复数。故将performance改为performances。在was后应用形容词作表语。故将happily改为happy。B(2021江西师范大学附属中学高三5月三模)Dear Eric,Tha
7、nks for lead me to some wonderful scenic spot in London.To begin with, I appreciated the unique landscape of London what I had only seen on the Internet or on TV before. Of all the tourist attractions we visited about, the Big Ben and the British Museum left me the deep impression. More importantly,
8、 this trip helps me learn more about the connections between Chinese culture and British culture.It was pity that we had only a day for our trip, which made me a little regret. How I wish you could have another trip soon. Thanks again but Im looking forward to our next trip together.Yours,Li Hua答案:D
9、ear Eric,Thanks for leadleading me to some wonderful scenic spotspots in London.To begin with, I appreciated the unique landscape of London whatwhich/that I had only seen on the Internet or on TV before.Of all the tourist attractions we visited ,the Big Ben and the British Museum left me the deepdee
10、pest impression. More importantly, this trip helpshelped me learn more about the connections between Chinese culture and British culture.It was a pity that we had only a day for our trip,which made me a little regretregretful.How I wish youwe could have another trip soon.Thanks again butand Im looki
11、ng forward to our next trip together.Yours,Li Hua剖析:在介词for后应用动词-ing形式作宾语。spot意为“地点”,为可数名词,在some后应用复数形式。分析句子结构可知,此处为定语从句修饰名词landscape,在定语从句中缺少宾语,且先行词指物,所以应用关系代词which或that。visit意为“参观”,为及物动词,其后不需要用介词。根据“Of all the tourist attractions we visited”可知,此处是指三者或三者以上的比较,应用最高级。根据上文可知,此处叙述过去的事情,应用一般过去时。“It is a
12、pity that.”意为“遗憾的是”,为固定句式,所以在pity前加不定冠词a。此处作me的宾语补足语,表示“遗憾的”应用形容词regretful。根据“Im looking forward to our next trip together”可知,此处是指多么希望“我们”能尽快有另一次旅行,所以应用人称代词we作主语。“Thanks again”和“Im looking forward to our next trip together”是顺承关系,所以应用连词and。C(2021云南昆明高三“三诊一模”摸底诊断测试)At lunch in the first day of my high
13、 school, I saw a girl sit alone. I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat. Late, we became close friends in following three years. One day, he shared something touching with me.“Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me, wearing a big smile?” she asked me. “I want you
14、 to know how much special you are. I was disappointing at that time ,but your smile made my day,”she added.I cant help smile each time I think of the scene, that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change lives greatly.答案:At lunch inon the first day of my high school,I saw a girl sitsitting a
15、lone.I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat.LateLater,we became close friends in the following three years.One day,heshe shared something touching with me.“Do you remember the day when you comecame over and sat next to me,wearing a big smile?”she asked me.“I want you to know how specia
16、l you are. I was disappointingdisappointed at that time,but your smile made my day,”she added.I cant help smilesmiling each time I think of the scene,thatwhich shows me that a simple act of kindness can change lives greatly.剖析:表示在具体的某一天用介词on。根据语境可知,此处考查固定用法see sb. doing sth.意为“看到某人正在做某事”,故把sit改为sitt
17、ing。结合语境可知,此处表示“后来,我们在接下来的三年成了亲密的朋友”,应用副词Later。late作副词时意为“迟,晚”,不符合语境。根据语境可知,此处特指接下来的三年,故在following前加定冠词the。根据上文中的“a girl”可知,此处应用代词she。此处应与and后的sat的时态保持一致,且由该句中的“remember the day”可推知,事情发生在过去,故用一般过去时。分析句子成分可知,how引导宾语从句,在从句中作状语,修饰形容词special,much多余,故删掉。此处修饰主语I,应用形容词disappointed,而disappointing往往修饰物,表示“令人
18、失望的”。sb. cant help doing sth.意为“某人忍不住做某事”,是固定搭配,故用 smiling。分析句子结构可知,此处引导非限制性定语从句,在从句中作主语,先行词为the scene,故用 which。D(2021四川成都七中高三上期末考试)There are many reasons why helping others are good. Not only does this behavior make us feel satisfying, but also this satisfaction leads to sense of belonging. I learn
19、 this lesson by helping a totally stranger out last Friday. When I was walking back home after school on last Friday, I came across an old man lain beside the street, who had tripped over because of stepping on a banana skin. By his side scattered his purchase out of a shopping bag. Seeing this, I q
20、uickly came to him and helped himself stand up. I didnt leave until I made sure whether he recovered. Now I think I did the easiest thing of all to make myself happy!答案:There are many reasons why helping others areis good.Not only does this behavior make us feel satisfyingsatisfied,but also this sat
21、isfaction leads to a sense of belonging.I learnlearned this lesson by helping a totallytotal stranger out last Friday.When I was walking back home after school last Friday ,I came across an old man lainlying beside the street,who had tripped over because of stepping on a banana skin.By his side scat
22、tered his purchasepurchases out of a shopping bag.Seeing this,I quickly came to him and helped himselfhim stand up.I didnt leave until I made sure whetherthat he recovered.Now I think I did the easiest thing of all to make myself happy!剖析:从句中主语为动名词短语helping others,故谓语动词应用第三人称单数。故将are改为is。此处为“make sb
23、.feel+adj.”句型,表示“让某人感到”,修饰人应用-ed结尾的形容词satisfied,表示“感到满意的”;satisfying用于修饰物,表示“令人满意的”。表示“一种归属感”,短语为a sense of belonging。故在sense前加a。根据后文“last Friday”可知,应用一般过去时。故将learn改为learned。修饰后文名词stranger应用形容词total,作定语。表示“上周五”,短语为last Friday,前面不需要介词。故删掉on。分析句子结构可知,lie在句中应用非谓语动词形式,与逻辑主语an old man构成主动关系,故应用现在分词作定语。故将
24、lain改为lying。purchase表示“购买的东西”为可数名词,其前无任何限定词,故应用复数形式。此处指扶起老人,应用代词him。此处为宾语从句,主句为肯定句,从句中不缺少成分,句意完整,故应用只起连接作用的that引导。E(2021安徽合肥高三第二次诊断检测)Last month I got a chance to take part in our school basketball match. I took the place with my classmate, Wang Bin, who had been serious injured before the match. Du
25、ring the match, I try my best to move and pass the ball. I shot a couple of time but I scored none, what made me very worried. All my teammates comforted me but they gave me a lot of encourage. We played as a team and did everything we could win the match. In an end, we won 65-63.It was a fantastic
26、memory that would be worth treasuring it forever.答案:Last month I got a chance to take part in our school basketball match.I took the place withof my classmate,Wang Bin,who had been seriousseriously injured before the match.During the match,I trytried my best to move and pass the ball.I shot a couple
27、 of timetimes but I scored none,whatwhich made me very worried.All my teammates comforted me butand they gave me a lot of encourageencouragement.We played as a team and did everything we could to win the match.In anthe end,we won 65-63.It was a fantastic memory that would be worth treasuring forever
28、.剖析:此处表示“我代替了我的同班同学”,take the place of意为“代替”,为固定用法。故将with改为of。修饰形容词“injured”要用副词,故改为seriously。根据文章第一句中的“Last month”可知,本文讲述的是过去发生的事,故此处要用一般过去时。time在本句中意为“次”,为可数名词,且根据其前的“a couple of”可知,此处要用复数形式。此处为非限制性定语从句,修饰前面的整个主句,故要用 which来引导定语从句。“All my teammates comforted me”与“they gave me a lot of.”之间为并列关系,故将bu
29、t改为and。a lot of意为“许多”,后接可数名词复数或不可数名词,故用名词 encouragement。此处的“we could”为定语从句,且从句省略了“do”,修饰“everything”,故要用“to win”作目的状语。in the end意为“最后”,为固定用法。“that would be worth treasuring”为定语从句,修饰“memory”,其中“treasuring”的宾语为“memory”,故it多余。F(2021陕西宝鸡高考模拟检测三)Mountain climbing is a kind of sport that I am very fond. L
30、ast Sunday where we had a short holiday, my classmates and I start off to climb. The morning air was so good to breathe but we felt really energetic. We could hear many bird singing while climbing. Half the hour later, we got to the top of the mountain. We felt happily because the scenery was amazin
31、g. Seeing from the top of the mountain, our school was looked so beautiful. Though our legs hurt, they had a good time that day.答案:Mountain climbing is a kind of sport that I am very fond of.Last Sunday wherewhen we had a short holiday,my classmates and I startstarted off to climb.The morning air wa
32、s so good to breathe butand we felt really energetic.We could hear many birdbirds singing while climbing. Half thean hour later,we got to the top of the mountain.We felt happilyhappy because the scenery was amazing.SeeingSeen from the top of the mountain, our school looked so beautiful. Though our l
33、egs hurt,theywe had a good time that day.剖析:be fond of意为“喜欢”,固定搭配。故在fond后加of。先行词为时间名词Last Sunday,在定语从句中作时间状语,所以用关系副词when引导。描述过去的事情,所以用一般过去时态。故将start改为started。前后是并列关系,而不是转折关系,所以用and连接。前面有many,所以用复数名词。故将bird改为birds。表示“半个小时”,用half+不定冠词+hour, hour以元音音素开头,所以其前不定冠词用an。此处作表语,所以用形容词,故将happily改为happy。see和句子主语之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词作状语。故将Seeing改为Seen。look“看起来”为系动词,不用于被动语态。故删掉was。根据“Though our legs hurt”可知,此处指“我们”,所以用we作主语
