1、F单元书面表达目录F单元书面表达1F1书面表达记叙文1F2 书面表达议论文4F3 书面表达说明文4F4 书面表达应用文4F5书面表达夹叙夹议文4F1书面表达记叙文【英语卷(解析)2015届山东省潍坊一中高三10月第一次月考（201410）】第二节 写作（满分30分）假设你将作为新华中学高三毕业生代表，请根据一下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一个告别演讲：1. 感谢家人，朋友和老师。特别举例感谢某个老师（不用真名，一律使用Mr.Zheng）,并写出原因； 2.回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动；3.展望未来。注意：120150词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers, fa
2、milies and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xinhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2014. _【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文【范文】Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xinhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 20
3、14.First, let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates. I also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment. My personal thanks to Mr. Zheng, you got me through Math when I had given up hope. Without Mr. Zheng, I wouldnt
4、 have made it through.Well, graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, military training, soccer and basketball games.However, graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in fro
5、nt of us. No matter what you plan next, I hope you can go about it positively. Each of you will create your own unique path. Lets remember the saying “ Attitude determines altitude”. Please always keep a smile on your face.Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2015. Thank you very much.【技巧点拨】1. 主意审题，
6、审清内容，时态，确定主题；2. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；3. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；4. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。 【英语卷（解析）2015届辽宁省沈阳二中高三上学期10月月考（201410）】请以“My hobby”为题用英文写一篇短文，内容要点如下：1. 最喜欢的爱好；2. 喜欢的时间及原因；3. 喜欢的程度；4. 未来的愿望和打算。注意：1. 根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在短文中；2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范；3. 词数120左右。【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文【范文】My favori
7、te sport is swimming. I first became keen on swimming when I was eight years old in primary school. Now I am a member of my school swimming team and I keep on swimming every day in the river near my home even in winter. I like swimming because not only can it help me build up my body, but it can als
8、o enrich my life in my spare time. So I can never stop my love for swimming. I admire Michael Phelps, who is one of the best athletes in the world and got 8 gold medals in Beijing Olympics. How I wish I could be an Olympic champion myself some day!【思路点拨】范文中运用到一些常见的短语keep on doing继续做某事；be knee on 喜欢；
9、like doing 喜欢做某事；I like swimming because not only can it help me build up my body, but it can also enrich my life in my spare time这个句子运用到not only but also 连接两个句子，第一个句子需要部分倒装。I admire Michael Phelps, who is one of the best athletes in the world and got 8 gold medals in Beijing Olympics这个句子运用到who引导的非限
10、制性定语从句；【英语卷（解析）2015届吉林省吉林市高三第一次摸底考试（201410）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）学校校报面向在校高三学生组织英语征文活动，请以“我的高三生活”为主题写一篇英语短文，具体内容如下：1. 生活安排2.学习计划3.理想的大学及专业注意：1. 字数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。My last year in theseniorhighschool has already started.【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文范文My last year in the senior high school has alrea
11、dy started.Ineed to balance both my life and study in order to make it colorful and meaningful.Istrongly believe thatdoing sports every day may build up my body. Besides, communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of great help to reduce my pressure. As for my study,Ive made a practical
12、 plan to follow strictly.Ishould also overcome my shyness to consult the teachers if theres something making me confused. Whats more, to improve physics is the most urgent becauseIhave to make a solid foundation for my dream university Cambridge, whereIwould like to major in physics.Ireally hope tha
13、t my dream will come true through mypersistence and diligence.【答案解析】此文通过英语提高的过程很好的把这几个词联系起来，形成一篇结构严谨，遣词造句很好的文章。文章中用了高级词汇和句子结构，如：动名词短语做主语communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of great help to reduce my pressure.；不定式做主语；状语从句；定语从句；to improve physics is the most urgent becauseIhave to
14、make a solid foundation for my dream university Cambridge, whereIwould like to major in physics.；衔接词：Besides, ；Whats more等。【英语卷(解析)2015届广西柳州市、玉林市、贵港市、百色市高三10月联考（201410）】第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华，家乡有一片湿地（wetland），每到春天，有很多鸟来此，包括一些珍稀、濒危鸟类。请根据下列要求和你的想象给WWF（世界野生动物基金）写一封信。1.鸟类经常受到伤害； 2.湿地面积减少；3.提出你的建议。注意：1.词
15、数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。Dear WWF, There are wetlands in my hometown._ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】【知识点】F1 书面表达记叙文 【范文】Dear WWF,There are wetlands in my hometown. And every spring, many birds come to live here, including several rare and endangered ones. With various birds everywhere, my
16、hometown looks very beautiful. However, the birds are being badly affected by our human activities. The harm to the birds is various. Eggs are often picked up. Worse still, people even catch or poison birds for meat. The size of the wetlands is becoming smaller and smaller due to farming. Pollution
17、from chemical factories is also a big problem. Fewer birds arrive here each year!I strongly suggest taking actions to save the birds. A wetland reserve should be set up to make sure no one shall harm the birds. We human beings should live with birds peacefully and happily. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【技巧
18、点拨】5. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；6. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；7. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；8. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。F2 书面表达议论文【英语卷（解析）2015届陕西省西安一中高三上学期二模考试（201410） 】第三节 书面表达（满分30分）你班同学在英语课上讨论毕业班学生是否可以把课本留给下一届学生使用这一问题。假如你是小组长,请根据小组讨论的记录用英语写一份报告, 陈述自己的看法或建议。报告要点如下：AdvantagesDisadvantages可以节省资源，减少浪费教材内容经常更新节约家庭开支不能在书上作笔记西方
19、国家普遍采用此作法注意：（1）报道必须包括所有要点，适当增加细节，使内容连贯、完整。 （2）报道的开头部分已写好，只需接着写。(不记入总字数)（3）词数100左右。 Is Recycling Textbook a Good Suggestion?【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Is Recycling Textbook a Good suggestion?On behalf of our group, Id like to give a brief summary of our discussion on the topic “Is Recycling Textbook a Go
20、od Suggestion?” As we know, when high school students graduate from school, their textbooks are thrown away, which are still in good condition. What a great waste it is! A suggestion has been put forward that we should recycle the textbooks. Some students in my group agree to this suggestion. For on
21、e thing, recycling textbooks can save a lot of natural resources, which are used to make textbooks. And it can also save plenty of family expenses. For another, in western countries, recycling textbooks is very popular and it gives us a good example. But some have different opinions about it, for th
22、e content of the textbooks are often renewed. Whats more, it is not proper to make notes in the textbooks. But in my opinion, this is a wonderful idea because this will do good to both the government and the families.【思路点拨】 范文围绕Is Recycling Textbook a Good Suggestion?这一主题展开。第一段用了“on behalf of our gr
23、oup” 来体现报告的写法。用What a great waste it is!一个感叹句表达了对高中毕业后，同学们扔掉教科书的看法。第二段先用一个suggestion.that同位语从句表明自己小组的观点;我们应该循环使用教科书。紧接着用For one thing， For another ，Whats more来论证自己组的观点，层次清晰，行文连贯。最后一段用状语从句表明自己的看法。整体来说，范文要点齐全，结构严谨，句式多变。【英语卷（解析）2015届江苏省盐城中学高三10月月考（201410）】第六部分：书面表达（共1题，满分20分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150字左右的英语短
24、文。There once was a little boy who had a bad temper. His father gave him a bag of nails and told him that every time he lost his temper, he must hammer a nail into the back of the fence.The first day the boy had driven 37 nails into the fence. Over the next few weeks, as he learned to control his ang
25、er, the number of nails hammered daily gradually dwindled down. He discovered it was easier to hold his temper than to drive those nails into the fence.Finally the day came when the boy didnt lose his temper at all. He told his father about it and the father suggested that the boy now pull out one n
26、ail for each day that he was able to hold his temper. The days passed and the young boy was finally able to tell his father that all the nails were gone.The father took his son by the hand and led him to the fence. He said, “You have done well, my son, but look at the holes in the fence. The fence w
27、ill never be the same. When you say things in anger, they leave scars just like these. And no matter how many times you say youre sorry, the wounds will still be there.”写作内容：1. 以“Anger management”为题约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 谈谈你的想法（120词），内容包括：（1）分析愤怒情绪可能产生的后果（至少两点）；（2）就如何控制愤怒情绪提出建议（至少两点）。写作要求：1. 不得直接引用原文中的句子
28、。2. 作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。评分标准：概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。Anger management 【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Anger managementA bad-tempered boy finally learned to properly manage his anger following his fathers advice-hammering nails into the fence. And he was also made to understand that venting anger can do irreversibl
29、e harm to others. (35)If anger is expressed in harmful ways, it can lead to problems, sometimes for you and often for others around you. People with poor anger management are more likely to have problems with personal relationships. Whats worse, they can experience anxiety, depression, even problems
30、 with alcohol. In a word, it can affect the overall quality of their life.To keep your anger in check, you need to recognize what makes you angry and identify the warning signs of anger in your body, so that when you are about to lose it, you can get out of the situation, taking a walk or using othe
31、r distractions from the situation. But if you feel your anger is out of control, dont hesitate to seek professional assistance from a psychologist or a support group. (131)【思路点拨】书面表达和2014年江苏卷的高考这题一样，需要根据所给内容概括要点。要求考生就“愤怒管理”这一现象谈看法，分析愤怒情绪产生的后果，并提建议。范文按照写作要点安排，是典型的三段论。第一段按照写作要求以“Anger management”为题用两句
32、话概括上文的主要内容。第二段采用分总来分析愤怒情绪产生的不良后果。用了一个if的条件状语从句和三个短句。最后一句用In a word,来总结上述内容。最后一段用了两个复合句给出控制不良情绪的建议。第一个句子包含了what的主语从句，when引导的时间状语从句以及非谓语动词。总体来说范文要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点框架并适当添加细节，行文连贯，句式多变，能够正确运用各种复合句。【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省双鸭山一中高三9月月考（201409）】第三节 书面表达（满分25分）最近，助人为乐成为人们关注的热点话题。最美的女教师张丽莉、最美的清洁工吴秀莹、最美的司机吴斌、“托举哥”周冲等每一
33、个耳熟能详的名字后，都有一个感人的故事。对此，你有何感想，请写一篇100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经帮你写好，不计入总词数。Recently more and more people focus on Zhang Lili, Wu Xiuying, Wu Bin, Zhou Chong and others alike, all of whom are highly thought of for what they did. 【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Recently more and more people focus on Zhang Lili, Wu Xiuying,
34、 Wu Bin, Zhou Chong and others alike, all of whom are highly thought of for what they did. In my opinion, theyre heroes from ordinary people. There is no doubt that their deeds are bound to move the whole China and leave us to deeper meditation. As is shown from their behavior, morality lies nowhere
35、 but just around us all the time. So we should no longer cast doubt on the existence of conscience and virtue. Besides, where there is love, there is hope. Only when everybody devotes even a tiny love, can our society be warmer and more harmonious.I do believe that happiness lies in offering help to
36、 others and were living and will live in a world full of love. Whatever trouble lies ahead for someone in need of help, I will also give him a hand just like these heroes mentioned above.【思路点拨】范文语言简洁，不拖拉，运用到一些常见的短语focus on集中精力于；There is no doubt that毫无疑问；where there is love, there is hope谚语，哪里有爱哪里就有
37、希望；As is shown from their behavior, morality lies nowhere but just around us all the time.这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句；Only when everybody devotes even a tiny love, can our society be warmer and more harmonious.这个句子运用only +状语+部分倒装 ；Whatever trouble lies ahead for someone in need of help, I will also give him a
38、hand just like these heroes mentioned above这个句子中whatever引导让步状语从句； 【英语卷（解析）2015届河南省实验中学高三上学期第一次月考（201410）】第二节 书面表达 (25分)李华本学期读高三了，开学初老师和家长都要李华住校学习，他却不喜欢住校，双方各持己见。假设你是李华，用英语把这个情况写信告诉中学生英语报请求帮助。有关信息如下：老师和家长的理由李华的理由1. 方便问问题2. 晚自习时间更能保证3. 培养独立生活的能力1. 晚上有更多自习时间2. 学习内容可以自由支配注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 信的开头已为你写好。 3.
39、 参考词语: 住校 board (v.)Dear Sir, Im a student of Senior 3. _【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Dear Sir, Im a student of Senior 3. I am writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether to board in the school or at home. At the beginning of this term, my parents and teachers asked me to board in the
40、school. They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. Besides, they think boarding will make it possible to make full of use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself. However, I have my own thought. Staying at home in the eve
41、ning, I will have more time to work at my lessons. At the same time, ，您身边的高考专家I can learn what I think Im not good at. I really dont know what to do. Please give me your advice! Yours Li Hua【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语At the beginning of在。开始时；it will be very convenient for me to对于某人来说做某事是便利的；make full of use
42、of充分利用；At the same time与此同时；I am writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether to board in the school or at home这个句子中weve had是the discussion定语从句；whether to board in the school or at home引导是about的宾语从句；Besides, they think boarding will make it possible to make full of use of my night
43、 time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself这个句子中think有两个宾语从句，其中第二个宾语从句中的that不可省略；Staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons这个句子运用非谓语动词做伴随状语。 【英语卷(解析)2015届安徽省黄山市屯溪一中高三上学期第二次月考（201410）】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）现在的孩子由于被父母管教,呵护太多,渐渐失去一些自我管理和生活能力。当独自一个人时就会难以
44、自律,甚至会加剧一些不良习惯。假如你一个人在家时,你觉得你该怎样做才能有利于自己的成长？请以Alone at home为题写一篇短文。要求：1内容需涵盖具体做法(如：树立目标；严以自律；帮做家务；学娱结合)2字数：120左右。【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Alone at home At present, most parents are worried a lot about their children, so they care about them too much. Under the parents control, the children have lost i
45、nterest in many things. When we are at home, we often lose control of ourselves, so our parents will feel more worried and promise never to let us alone at home. To comfort our parents, what should we do while alone at home? In fact, there is a lot interesting to do except surfing on the Internet, p
46、laying games and so on. In my opinion, we should read books and do our homework first. Then, we may listen to some music and read some books and newspapers. Also, we can take some exercise to keep fit. I believe that if we do so, our parents will give us more free time and never be worried about our
47、 being alone at home. 【思路点拨】 本文主要从父母对孩子管制太多以致于不敢让孩子单独呆在家里入手，引出孩子在家应该做些什么以让父母放心。第二段作者提出了自己的观点，单独一人在家应该做些什么，多做些有益身心成长的事情，这样父母就不会再为孩子担心了。 文中使用了under the control of，keep fit等高级短语；也使用了our being alone at home动名词短语作宾语；还使用了believe的宾语从句，从句中又加入了if条件句；还使用四次了不定式等等，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。F3 书面表达说明文F4 书面表达应用文【英语卷（解析）2015
48、届山西省山大附中高三上学期第四次月考试题（201410）】第二节 书面表达 （满分20分） 假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1. 遵守交通法规； 2. 注意举止文明。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 题目已经拟好，不计入总词数。 4. 参考词汇：“civilization starts from me”； sidewalk；traffic light；On the Way to School _【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文
49、】 On the way to school Recently , on my way to school,I have thought a great deal about the idea that “civization starts from me “. We all want to live in a society in which people follow rules and norms,but we cant only change ourselves.On my way to school, I leave my home, walk down my street, cro
50、ss at the crossing and wait for the bus. This process provides plenty of opportunities to act in a civilized way. For instance, I walk in an orderly manner along the sidewalk and I do not throw any trash onto the ground. These are good manners no matter where Im walking .Then , when I get to the cro
51、ssing , I wait until the intersection is clear and the traffic light has changed before I cross the street. These are the traffic laws, so I know that I should observe them. When waiting for the bus , I do not cut anyone else in line, on the bus , I take a seat politely and do not bother any other p
52、assengersCivilization clearly starts from me -I cant control others or perfectly understand their reasons for disobeying manners. But I am proud to follow the famous motto of Gandhi “Be the change you want to see in the world”【思路点拨】范文运用一些常见的短语For instance例如；waiting for等待；the reason for 。的原因；beproud
53、to do 自豪地做某事；We all want to live in a society in which people follow rules and norms,这个句子in which 引导society的定语从句；When waiting for the bus , I do not cut anyone else in line,这个句子waiting做伴随状语。【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省枣庄三中高三第一次学情调查（201410）】某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：Experience，本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficultie
54、s in Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。 注意：1. 词数不少于120字； 2. 短文中不能出现本人相关信息。【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】As high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. Everyone has their own way to deal with them. Here I would like to share mine. When I am faced with a difficulty
55、, I usually chose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages. In this way, I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself. However, when it is something beyond my competence, I turn to my classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes I also ask my pa
56、rents for advice. As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies. (108 字)【思路点拨】 本文是应用文，主要介绍自己在解决困难时的方法，故用第一人称和现在时。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用run into短语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了however，as a result等连接结构。文中使用了when引导的时间状语从句、不定式短语做定语等。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，
57、是一篇佳作。【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省莱州一中高三10月月考（201410）】第二节 写作(满分30分) 假如你是红星中学学生会主席李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教 师MrJack推荐一名学生助手(assistant)。请根据所给提示给MrJack写封推荐信。1欢迎Jack的到来；2推荐刘佳做学生助手；3刘佳的基本情况(18岁，高三 学生，学校十佳学生)；4刘佳的特点与特长(活泼、乐观；电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等)。注意：词数：120150；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear Jack,Im Li Ming, Chair
58、man of the students Union of Hongxing Middle School. Its great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.I was asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant. Liu Jia is a friendly, active and optimistic girl. She is also a smart
59、 girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. Whats more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken English is extremely excellent. Im sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China.If you have any questions about it, please co
60、ntact me.Im looking forward to your coming. Yours， Li Ming【思路点拨】本文是书信类作文，要求根据提示给Jack写推荐信，文章的要点也基本给出，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。Look forward to 盼望；have a gif 有天赋；Its great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.这个句子运用it做形式主语，真正的主语是后置的不定式；She is also a smart girl who can use the co
61、mputer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others这个句子中也运用到who引导的girl的定语从句。【英语卷（解析）2015届宁夏银川一中高三第二次月考（201409）】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假如你是银川一中高一新生李华，从学校贴吧(post bar)里获知学校广播部(the broadcasting station)正从高一新生中招收新成员，要求嗓音好、普通话标准且有奉献精神。你希望加入广播部。请用英语写一封申请信，要点如下：1. 个人基本情况及联系方式（电话：5103123，邮箱：lihuan101）；2.
62、满足加入广播部的条件；3. 加入广播部的目的(提升能力；拓宽知识)。注意： 1. 词数：120左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Sir/ Madam,Very glad to know in the post bar that our broadcasting station needs new members this term. _Yours faithfully, 【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文 【范文】Dear Sir/Madam,Very glad to know in the post bar that our
63、school broadcasting station needs new members this term. Im writing to apply to be one of you! I am Li Hua, a boy/girl from Senior One . I have ever been a broadcaster for one term before, and in Junior Three I gained the first prize in the contest of Putonghua of our grade. My friends around always
64、 tell me my voice sounds beautiful. Of course, I know clearly being a broadcaster calls for extra devotion and more hours after school are necessary for better performance. Perhaps, my high school life will be busier with such a task every day, but Id like to develop myself and hope to obtain more k
65、nowledge after class to make my new school life more fulfilling.Im eager for your reply and Ill be more than happy if you can consider my application. Please contact me by telephone at 5103123 or email at lihua101. Yours faithfully, Li Hua【思路点拨】范文是一封申请信，且给出了开头和结尾。范文的重点围绕写作要点展开，开篇用Im writing to apply
66、 to be one of you!点明写作目的。对要点的处理很得当，并没有按照要点123这样的顺序去写，而是根据申请信的特点，把联系方式放在最后一段。第二大段运用长短句交替来表达自己加入广播站的条件和目的，使用较多语法，如现在完成时，非谓语动词。【英语卷（解析）2015届江西省南昌二中高三上学期第三次考试（201410）】第二节 阅读表达(满分25分)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李华，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100120词的信，推荐
67、这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。 Dear Mr. Wang,_ Yours sincerely Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nat
68、ure in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written b
69、y masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Yours sincerely, Li Yue【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语in a simple and interesting way用一种简单有趣的方式；In ad
70、dition to除了之外 ；offer sb sth 提供某人某物；What we need most are popular science books.这个句子what引导主语从句；That is why I recommend another category of books这个句子why引导的是表语从句；They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.这个句子提到not only but also连接两个并列的谓语动词；【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省哈师大附
71、中高三第一次月考（201409）】假如你是你们班的班长李华。来自澳大利亚的高中生访问团一行20人明天上午将到你们班进行交流，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1. 班级简介2. 同学特点 3. 学校生活 4. 表达愿望注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 3. 不可使用你的真实姓名和学校的名字。 Dear friends,Good morning! Im Li Hua, monitor of our class._Thank you!【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文 【范文】Dear friends,Im Li Hua, monitor of our
72、class. On behalf of our class, Im much honored to give you a warm welcome.First, Id like to introduce our class. There are 50 students altogether, 23 boys and 27 girls. Were one of the top classes in our school. Every student is friendly, active, hard-working and confident. We have 4 classes in the
73、morning and 2 in the afternoon on weekdays. Besides studies, we have a variety of associations, such as the drama club, the music club and the reading bar and so on. We also take part in various sports in the afternoon.I hope well learn about each other and become friends through the communication.
74、I believe you will enjoy your stay here and have great fun.Thank you!【思路点拨】该文是一应用文，主要向外宾介绍自己班内的情况，并欢迎来访。 文中使用了be honored to do sth，have a variety of，hope和believe后跟宾语从句，as引导的非限制性定语从句等；还使用的高级词汇on behalf of，various等；还使用了first，besides，also等连接词，让文章一气呵成，等等这一切亮点都在告诉我们作者的英语功底深厚。【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省哈六中高三10月月考（2
75、01410）】第二节：书面表达假设你是张涛，你在澳大利亚的笔友Bill的生日即将到来，请你给他写一封电子邮件，表示祝贺。邮件要包括以下要点：1. 祝他生日晚会上玩得愉快；2. 介绍你班上周日的爬山活动；并附上几张照片3. 询问Bill的近况及大学专业的选择注意：内容包括所有要点，但不要逐条翻译 可适当发挥，使行文连贯。 词数100左右Dear Bill, Happy birthday! Yours, Zhang Tao 【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】【思路点拨】本篇作文要求写一封电子邮件来祝贺朋友生日，并且给出写作要点。邮件开头结尾已给出，写作重点放在要点的叙述上。范文开头第一
76、段点明写作目的并表达对朋友的美好祝愿。第二段的关键是把握好时态。介绍上周日的爬山活动要用一般过去时。本段长短句交替使用，且用到了where引导的非限定性定语从句，和“photos taken” 过去分词作状语。最后一段用what引导宾语从句来询问Bill大学选专业的情况。总体来说范文要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点，行文连贯。【英语卷（解析）2015届贵州省遵义航天高级中学高三上学期第二次模拟考试（201410）】第二节 写作（满分25分） 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见。请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件： 1建议他可以来中国； 2阐述你的理
77、由（就业机会多、专业受欢迎、不同的文化体验等）； 3承诺可提供帮助。 注意：1.词数：大约120字左右； 2文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear MikeIm very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week._Best wishes.Yours ,Li Hua 【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear Mike, Im very happy to have received the letter you sent me last week. I have been t
78、hinking about the question you asked me. From my point of view, you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies for the following reasons. For one reason, China development over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities for the young. Whats more, what you are studying is
79、badly needed in China. As a matter of fact, many big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, China is a country with so many different cultures and traditions from the west that many foreigners enjoy living and working here. I am sure you will adapt to the envir
80、onment quickly and enjoy your stay here.If you come, I will do what I can to help you. So what are you waiting for? Best wishes. Yours truly, Li Hua【思路点拨】范文中运用到一些常见的短语Whats more而且；As a matter of fact事实上；adapt to适应；wait for等待；Whats more, what you are studying is badly needed in China这个句子what引导主语从句；Fo
81、r another reason, China is a country with so many different cultures and traditions from the west that many foreigners enjoy living and working here这个句子考查so .that如此以致于；I am sure you will adapt to the environment quickly and enjoy your stay here.这个句子be sure后面跟着一个宾语从句； Li Hua【英语卷（解析）2015届广西省桂林中学高三10月月
82、考（201410）】第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue 写封电子邮件。写作要点：1. 对她表达感谢之意；2. 介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情；3. 希望了解她的近况。要求：1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；2. 短文词数不少于100 个(不含已写好的部分)；3. 内容充实，结构完整,语意连贯；4. 书写须清晰、工整；5. 邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。Dear Sue,Im Li Hua, one of your student
83、s in China._YoursLiHua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文 范文Dear Sue, Im Li Hua, one of your students in China. Its almost a month sinceyou left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.We are busy as usual.We had an English speech contest the otherday. I won the first prize!This again remi
84、nds me of all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behindthe school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree youplanted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name itSue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?How is everything
85、 with you lately? We hope to know more aboutyou and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch. All the best.【答案解析】此文通过英语提高的过程很好的把这几个词联系起来，形成一篇结构严谨，遣词造句很好的文章。文章中用了高级词汇和句子结构，如：what you did for us.介词的宾语从句；youplanted yourself定语从句；are very grateful for；reminds me of； keep in close touch.；句子简单实用
86、，接近学生的写作水平。F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【英语卷（解析）2015届江西省新余一中高三第二次模拟考试（201410）】第二节: 短文写作（共1题；满分30分）请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。作为高三学生的你，最近看了一则公益广告Family且深有感触。请用英语根据下面的图写一篇立志学习，感恩父母的文章,要求简要描述图片所表达的内容并谈谈你的感受。注意:不少于120词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father
87、, mother and I.When I was young, father was the most important person in my family.【答案】【知识点】F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【范文】As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I.When I was young, father was the most important person in my family. My mother took goo
88、d care of me and protected me from wind and rain. Later I grow up. I take on the responsibility to look after my parents. I realize that the family also means father and mother I love you.The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern. Undoubtedly, our parents have mad
89、e a lot of sacrifices. Its high time we took measures to show gratitude to them.。. whats more, we shouldnt take our parents love for granted. Instead, we are supposed to appreciate it from the bottom of our hearts.From my point of view, we ought to show our affection to our beloved parents. Now it i
90、s time for us to do what we can in return for their hard work. What can we do now is study hard and make progress in our studies. Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future.【答案解析】此文通过英语提高的过程很好的把这几个词联系起来，形成一篇结构严谨，遣词造句很好的文章。文章中用了高级词汇和句子
91、结构，如: take on the responsibility；take for granted ；show our affection；等。固定句型Its high time we took measures to show gratitude to them.；主语从句What can we do now is study hard and make progress in our studies；倒装句性Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged paren
92、ts in the future.；定语从句which has aroused our social concern. ；衔接词：whats more,；Instead；. From my point of view； 【英语卷(解析)2015届江苏省启东中学高三上学期第一次月考（201410）】第七部分 书面表达(满分15分)请阅读下面短文, 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。There is a story telling of a religious master who is said to be capable of moving mountains. A man came
93、to him asking for a demonstration. The master sat in front of a mountain for a moment, then went to the other said of it and declared the end of the demonstration. All the audiences were greatly puzzled and begged him for an explanation. He said, “There has never been a way of moving mountains; what
94、 you can do is to go to the mountain if it doesnt come.” One of my friends, though with the makings of a merchant, was bent on being a painter. He resigned from office and devoted himself entirely to painting at home. Several years, however, saw no progress in this regard. A painful retrospection bo
95、ught him to his senses. He made up his mind to take up business in place of painting. It took him only a few years to become a rich businessman. Meanwhile he spent his spare time exchanging experience and skills in painting and calligraphy. His works finally won acclamation by expert painters and we
96、re on sale in art gallery and grand hotels. He had his collections published and his dream of becoming a painter came true at last. 写作内容1. 概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右； 2. 就“山不过来，我就过去”为主题，发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右。 1）根据你的生活经历，当所面对的事实无法改变时，是否应该改变自己？ 2）简述一个改变自己的例子； 3）你认为有时候改变自己，才能最终改变属于自己的世界吗？ 写作要求
97、 你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 _【答案】【知识点】F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【范文】Today I read a story about a religious master and a painter who change themselves when they face something unchangeable and then achieve an eventual change of the world around them. 【技巧点拨】9. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；10. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；11. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；12. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。
