1、Section Reading for Writing写一篇语言学习的博客 学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠释教材原文Learning EnglishWang LeHey, everybody, what are your biggest problems with learning English？Liu WenHi! Ive been studying English since primary school. I used to get high marks in English, but now Im having a lot of trouble with my listenin
2、g.When I listen to native English speakers talking in a video, I can catch only a few words.I can never quite get the main idea.Any advice？Jia XinListening to English radio programmes helps me get used to how fast native speakers talk. I also repeat what I hear to help myself to experience the feeli
3、ng of the language.Sometimes I even record my voice so I can listen to myself and compare my pronunciation with the radio hosts! My biggest headache is how to be polite in English.Its so much easier to just say “Open the window！”， but in English that can sound really terrible.I have to think about w
4、ho Im talking to and then decide whether to say, “Open the window, please！” or “Could you open the window, please？” or even longer “Would you mind opening the window, please？”Li RuiYeah, thats really hard! I think it all depends on who youre talking to. If Im talking to a close friend, I can use sho
5、rt requests, like “Open the window”our relationship is close and were equals, so I only need a few words to bridge the gap between us. But if Im talking to someone who isnt very close to me, I must make my request longerand I must make it a question, not a demand, eg., “Could you open the window, pl
6、ease？” If Im talking to someone senior to me, then I should say, “Would you mind opening the window, please？” For me, vocabulary is my biggest problemthere are just SO MANY new words! I cant keep all the new vocabulary straight in my head, and I certainly cant remember how to use them all properly.H
7、ELP！名师论道学语言1.文章第二段使用了when引导的时间状语从句(When I listen to .)来举例说明作者在英语学习中存在的问题。2.文章第二段倒数第三句中使用catch一词要比使用understand更合适，形象地表达出了Liu Wen的英语听力水平。3.第三段使用了动名词短语作主语(Listening to English radio programmes)和宾语从句(what I hear)来表达作者的建议。同时在呈现作者英语学习存在的问题时也使用了宾语从句(who Im talking to)。4.文章第四段第三句中bridge一词是名词用作动词，表示“减小、消除两者间
8、的隔阂、鸿沟或分歧”；且本段作者运用三个if条件状语从句以及动名词作宾语(Would you mind opening .)等句式提出了“在使用英语时如何做到有礼貌”的建议。学结构第二段的作者Liu Wen运用并列连词but自然过渡到自己在英语学习中存在的问题。第三段的作者Jia Xin先分享了自己听力学习的经验，然后提出了自己在英语学习中存在的问题，逻辑清晰，层次分明。第四段作者Li Rui的写作风格与第三段作者Jia Xin的写作风格相同，也是先针对第一段的问题提出建议，而后表达自己在英语学习中存在的问题，逻辑清晰。佳句背诵一、开头部分常用语1.My name is .Im writing
9、 to you for some help.我叫，我写信向你寻求一些帮助。2.Im writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。二、寻求帮助常用语1.Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help.面对这么多的困难，我不得不向你求助。2.In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to .so that .Also, I would like you to .同时，我恳求你以便我也想让你3.I
10、would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。4.I have met with many difficulties in learning English.学习英语的过程中我遇到许多困难。5.I wonder whether you could do me a favor .我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙三、结尾部分常用语1.Im sure with your help I can make great progress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。2.I would gre
11、atly appreciate your timely help.我将非常感谢你及时的帮助。仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍题目要求假定你是李华，在光明中学读书。在高中学习英语的过程中遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助，并想给班级的英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：学习英语时遇到的问题生词多，记忆有难度 向英语老师提出的建议介绍一些学习英语的好方法，慢点授课注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear teacher，My name is Li Hua.Y
12、ours，Li Hua仿写步骤Step 1一仿结构布局合理 第一段：遇到的问题(生词多，记忆有难度)；第二段：寻求帮助并提出建议(学习英语的方法，慢点授课)；第三段：希望有所进步。Step 2二仿语言规范美观 1我给你写信寻求一些帮助。Im writing to you for some help.2我在学习英语方面遇到了许多困难。I have some difficulties in learning English.3我发现我们的课文满是生词。I find our texts full of new words.4对我来说记住这些生词很难。(memorize)The new words a
13、re very difficult for me to memorize.5课文太长，我难以背诵。The texts are too long for me to recite.6我面临着这么多的困难。I am faced with so many difficulties.7我不得不向您寻求一些帮助。I have to ask you for some help.8您能给我们介绍一些学习新单词的好方法吗？(Would you like .)Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words?9我请求您讲课文更
14、慢一点，以便我们能轻松地跟上您。(beg)I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that we can follow you easily. 10我确信我能在英语学习上取得很大的进步。Im sure that I can make great progress in my English study.Step 3三仿句间过渡自然 1用并列连词连接句3、句4I find our texts full of new words and they are very difficult for me to memorize.2用因果关系结构连接句6、句7
15、I am faced with so many difficulties, so I have to ask you for some help.Step 4誊写 Dear teacher，My name is Li Hua.Im writing to you for some help.I have some difficulties in learning English.I find our texts full of new words and they are very difficult for me to memorize.Besides, the texts are too l
16、ong for me to recite.I am faced with so many difficulties, so I have to ask you for some help.Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words? In addition, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that we can follow you easily.Im sure I can make great progress in my English stu
17、dy with your help.Yours，Li Hua1have trouble with sth在方面有麻烦；做某事有困难(教材p.66)I used to get high marks in English, but now Im having a lot of trouble with my listening.我以前英语成绩挺好的，但现在我在听力方面有很多麻烦。have trouble/difficulty with sth 做某事有困难have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth做某事有麻烦/困难佳句I am not good at Englis
18、h, and I have a lot of trouble with my grammar.我不擅长英语，我在语法方面有很多麻烦。练透单句语法填空If you have some trouble (in) getting (get) along with your friends, you can write to them.You cant imagine what trouble I had solving (solve) the problem.写美补全句子Whenever we have trouble with our studies, our teachers always he
19、lp us patiently.无论何时我们在学习上遇到困难，老师总是耐心地帮助我们。点津在使用have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth时，trouble/difficulty往往提前作为主句中的先行词，定语从句中谓语变为have doing形式。2equal n同等的人；相等物 adj.相同的；同样的vt.比得上；敌得过(教材p.66). our relationship is close and were equals, so I only need a few words to bridge the gap between us.我们的关系亲密，彼此平
20、等，因此我只需说几个字，就能消除我们之间的距离。(1)be equal to sth/doing sth等于/胜任(做)某事equal sb/sth in (doing) sth在(做)某事上比得过、敌得过某人/物without equalhave no equal无与伦比(2)equality n.平等；相等equally adv.相等地；同等地；均等地；同样地佳句Little joy can equal that of a surprising ending when you read stories.当你读故事遇到意外的结局时，那种乐趣是无与伦比的。练透 单句语法填空/一句多译Any m
21、an will be equal to the task, so long as he is careful.You should give it a try.No one equals him in courage, about which every one knows.尽管约翰很年轻，但是他却能胜任这项重要的工作。Young as he was, John was equal to the important task.(equal)Although he was young, John was fit for the important task.(fit)写美补全句子For anot
22、her, be positive and cheerful, for your mental health is equal to your physical health.其次，要积极向上、心情愉快，因为你的心理健康和身体健康同等重要。文化浸蕴All countries are equal, and UN members should take action to make the global governance system better reflect the interests of emerging markets and developing countries.所有国家都是平
23、等的，联合国成员国应该采取行动，推动全球治理体系更好地体现新兴市场国家和发展中国家利益。3demand n要求；需求 vt.强烈要求；需要 vi.查问(教材p.66)But if Im talking to someone who isnt very close to me, I must make my request longerand I must make it a question, not a demand.但是，如果我是跟一个与我不太亲近的人说话，那么我得把我的请求说得长一些我得把它变成一个疑问句，而不是一个要求(1)be in (great) demand (迫切)需求meet
24、/satisfy ones demands满足某人的需求(2)demand to do sth要求做某事demand that .(should) do sth要求做某事(3)demanding adj.苛求的；难满足的佳句The manager promised that they would try to meet their customers demands.经理许诺他们会尽力满足顾客们的需求。练透 单句语法填空/句型转换First, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China.My father ca
25、me down and demanded to know (know) what was going on.Get the technology that has proven to help the most demanding (demand) customers.The teacher demanded to be given my parents telephone number.The teacher demanded that he (should) be given my parents telephone number.写美补全句子What I want to stress i
26、s that some new members are in demand in our group.我想强调的是，我们队现在需要一些新成员。点津“要求某人做某事”不能用demand sb to do sth表达，但可以用demand of sb to do sth。文化浸蕴With the growth of Chinas economy and improvement of peoples living standards, the demand for the service industries has correspondingly risen.随着我国经济的发展和人民生活水平的提高
27、，对服务业的需求也相应增加。4relate vt.联系；讲述(教材p.67)Does each sentence relate to the main idea?每个句子都与主旨有关吗？(1)relate sth to sb向某人讲述某事relate to与相关；涉及；谈到(2)related adj.相关的be related to与有关(3)relation n. 关系；联系in relation to关于佳句He later related the whole story to me, which made me very happy.他后来给我讲了整件事的来龙去脉， 这使我很高兴。练透
28、单句语法填空The position calls for related (relate) experience in the field and good skills at using computers.I have a lot to say in relation (relate) to this affair.写美补全句子It is said that the short English film is mainly related to the development of our school.据说这部英文短片主要与我们学校的发展有关。维度一：品句填词1Without any s
29、truggle (奋斗), there is no progress.2I walked over to the mirror and stuck my tongue (舌头) out.3Sometimes they may play to passersby in the street or subway (地铁) so that they can earn some extra money.4At the age of 29, Dave was living in a small apartment (公寓) near Boston and wondering what to do abo
30、ut his future.5Im very glad to see that your vocabulary (词汇) is gradually building up.6His demand (要求) was that we should go to the training centre at once.7We must finish all these courses in this semester (学期).8The dog got in through a gap (开口) in the hedge.9My car broke down on the way to the bea
31、ch because it run out of petrol10She ran to the nearest house and begged for help.维度二：单句语法填空1Im not feeling well today, so Ill have him finish (finish) my work.2Tom and his father had some trouble with Chinese customs during the travel.3Going (go) to a British high school for one year was an excitin
32、g experience for me.4The scenery was so beautiful that it was almost beyond description (describe).5She demanded to see (see) the headmaster immediately to settle the problem.6I really appreciate having (have) time to relax with you on this nice island.7I would like to give my opinion in relation (r
33、elate) to this problem.8Learning to deal with the social world is equally (equal) important.维度三：固定搭配和句式1The more you know，the more you will love the world你知道得越多，你就会越爱这个世界。2I am really having trouble/difficulty (in) collecting information.我在收集信息方面确实有困难。3How silly it was of you to give up such a good chance!放弃这么好的一个机会，你多么傻呀！4The question is how to find him as soon as possible.问题是如何尽快找到他。5There are so many books in the bookstore；I dont know which one to choose书店有那么多书， 我不知道选择哪一本。6It is difficult for me to get used to the new school life对我来说适应新学校的生活很难。
