1、Section Reading for Writing写一封建议信学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠释教材原文10 September 2018Dear Worried Friend，You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much ti
2、me online.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students e
3、ven become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together？I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.All the best，Susan Luo名师论道学语言1.第一段第二句中使用anxious与terribl
4、e突出表现了对方的担忧心情。2.第一段连用三个句式： You wrote that .; I understand quite well that .; You think that .可以看出作者在建议信的开头，语气比较委婉礼貌，三个宾语从句的使用突显了作者使用高级句式表达的功底。3.第二段第三、四句中的focus on, become addicted to, concentrate on等短语鲜明地表达了花太多时间上网的危害。4.第二段运用it作形式主语(It is not unusual .to be attracted .)；动名词短语作主语(spending too much ti
5、me online is .)；it作形式宾语(. makes it very difficult to focus on .)；宾语从句(I think you should encourage .)以及why not动词原形(Why not discuss .)等高级句式突显出作者较强的语言功底。学结构短文由三部分组成，第一部分回应对方的问题；第二部分提出解决问题的建议；第三部分发出希望。第一段开头用“You wrote that .”引出对方的问题，接着用“I understand quite well that .”表达出自己对对方的理解，然后引出对方让作者解决的问题。第二段作者在提出
6、建议时，语气委婉，并运用but, and等连接词使句子之间层次清晰，逻辑鲜明，语意连贯。佳句背诵一、开头常用语1I know you have trouble in making friends after reading your letter.I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.在读了你的信后，我知道你在交友方面有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。2Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to lear
7、n Chinese.Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何学习汉语。下面是我的一些建议。3Im delighted to hear that youll be a senior student.Now, Id like to share my study tips with you.听说你将要成为一名高年级学生了，我很高兴。现在，我想和你分享我的学习秘诀。二、主体部分常用语1The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.我的建议如下。2In my opinio
8、n/Personally/As far as Im concerned, it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。三、结尾常用语1I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.我希望你会发现这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。2I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.Wha
9、tever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作顺利。3I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.Best wishes! 我真诚地希望我的建议能对你有所帮助，也希望你能享受你的新学校生活。谨致问候！ 仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍题目要求假定你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友詹妮的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，不知道如何去结
10、交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信：1表示问候和慰问。2提出以下建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)帮助有困难的同学。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jenny，Yours sincerely，Li Hua仿写步骤Step 1一仿结构布局合理第一段：写信的目的第二段：给出的建议第三段：发出希望Step 2二仿语言规范美观1你进入高中后情绪低落。You feel bad after entering high school.(动名词短语)2你的同学也面临着同样的问题。Your classmates are
11、 facing the same problem.3你不必太担心。You dont have to worry too much about it.4我认为你应该试着邀请你的同学一起参加一些活动。 (I think you should .)I think you should try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together.5这将有助于你们更容易相互理解。(make it形容词to do .)This will make it easier for you to understand each ot
12、her.6如果你能听从我的建议，你的同学会愿意和你交朋友。Your classmates will be willing to make friends with you if you can follow my advice.Step 3三仿句间过渡自然1用因果关系结构连接句2和句3Your classmates are facing the same problem, so you dont have to worry too much about it.2用并列连词连接句4和句5I think you should try to invite your classmates to tak
13、e part in some activities together and this will make it easier for you to understand each other.Step 4誊写Dear Jenny，I am sorry to hear you feel bad after entering high school.As far as I know, your classmates are facing the same problem, so you dont have to worry too much about it.Here are some sugg
14、estions to help you.First, I think you should try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together and this will make it easier for you to understand each other.Besides, help students who are in trouble.As time goes on, your classmates will be willing to make friends with you if yo
15、u can follow my advice.Yours sincerely，Li Hua1behaviour n行为；举止(教材p.18)I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.我建议你和你的朋友谈谈他的行为。(1)good/bad behaviour良好/不良行为(2)behave vt.& vi.举动；(举止或行为)表现behave well/badly to/towards sb对待某人好/不好behave oneself守规矩，表现得体(3)wellbehaved adj.表现好的badlybehave
16、d adj.表现差的佳句The child behaved so well in class that the teacher praised his good behaviour in front of others.这个孩子在课堂上表现得很好，老师在别人面前表扬了他的良好行为。练透单句语法填空This is a family where bad behaviour (behave) will be punished.The shop assistants behave very well towards/to customers.Students should be encouraged
17、to develop good habits and behave themselves (they).写美补全句子As far as Im concerned, all of us should mind our behaviour in public places.就我而言， 我们大家都应该注意在公共场所的举止。2attract vt.吸引；引起的注意(或兴趣)(教材p.18)It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.你们
18、这一代青少年被电脑游戏和网络世界吸引，这没有什么不正常。(1)attract ones attention/eyes吸引某人的注意力/目光attract sb to sth吸引某人关注某事be attracted to喜欢be attracted by被吸引(2)attraction n.吸引，有吸引力的人或事物a tourist attraction旅游景点(3)attractive adj.有吸引力的佳句Upon entering the farm, we were attracted by its cleanness and rich varieties of fruit.一进入农场，我
19、们就被它的清洁和丰富的水果品种所吸引了。练透单句语法填空The little girl was attracted (attract) by the beauty of nature, so she decided to spend another two days.Ice cream is very attractive (attract) to children.As the longest river in Asia, the Yangtze River has so many tourist attractions (attract).写美补全句子What attracts touri
20、sts most is the spectacular view of sunrise on the top of the mountain.最吸引游客的是山顶上壮丽的日出景色。3focus vi.&vt.集中(精力、注意力等)；(使)调节焦距 n.中心；重点；焦点 (教材p.18)But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.但是，花费太多的时间上网有损健康，也会让你们很难把精力放在生活中的其他事情上。(1)focus on
21、集中(注意力、精力等)于focus/fix ones attention on sth把注意力集中到(2)the focus of attention关注的焦点佳句As is known to us, health and environmental problems have become the focus of attention. 众所周知，健康和环境问题已成为人们关注的焦点。练透单句语法填空Today, many Chinese people are learning Western styles and theories rather than focusing on Chines
22、e traditions.With his attention focused (focus) on his homework, he forgot all about what I had told him.写美补全句子It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.这表明当今社会的一个普遍现象：孩子是家庭的中心，承载着父母的希望。4addicted adj.有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的(教材p.18)Some s
23、tudents even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.有些学生甚至上网成瘾，无法把精力集中在学校和家庭生活上。(1)be addicted to (doing) sth沉溺于；专心做(2)addict vt.使沉溺；使上瘾 n.对入迷的人；吸毒成瘾的人addict oneself to sth沉溺于(3)addictive adj.使人上瘾的(4)addiction n.瘾；入迷；嗜好佳句Li Ming is a game addict, and his fat
24、her has been trying to prevent him from being addicted to computer games which are very addictive.李明是一个游戏迷，他爸爸一直在试图阻止他沉迷于非常容易让人上瘾的电脑游戏。练透单句语法填空Her son addicted himself to smoking, which had a bad effect on his health.Teenagers who are addicted (addict) to the Internet are more likely to suffer from
25、depression.I discovered an addiction (addict) to housework which I had never felt before.写美补全句子Addicted to playing the violin, he didnt notice the teacher walk into the classroom.他沉溺于拉小提琴，没有注意到老师进教室。点津addicted多用于形容人，不用于名词前，一般作表语或后置定语； addictive多用于修饰物。1句型公式 make it形容词/名词for sb to do(教材p.18)But spendi
26、ng too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.但是，花费太多时间上网有损健康，也会让你们很难把精力放在生活中的其他事情上。“动词it形容词/名词for sb .”结构需注意：(1)常用动词：think, believe, make, find, consider, feel等；(2)it的特点：放于动词后，充当形式宾语，无任何意义；(3)宾语补足语的三种形式：形容词(短语)、名词(短语)和介词短语；(4)宾语的三种形式：不定式(短语)、动名词(短
27、语)及宾语从句。佳句The bad weather made it impossible for us to finish the task on time.恶劣的天气使我们不可能按时完成任务。练透单句语法填空I must make it clear that Ill always support you.He makes it a rule to get (get) up at six oclock every day.The professor considers it no good reading (read) without understanding.写美同义句转换They fin
28、d it is hard to finish the work in such a short time.They find it hard to finish the work in such a short time.(it作形式宾语)2句型公式 It is because .这/那是因为(教材p.19)I guess its because theyre adults and cant understand me.我猜测那是因为他们是成年人，不能理解我。This/That/It is because . 这/那是因为This/That is why . 这/那就是的原因The reaso
29、n why .is that . 的原因是佳句I know that/it is because I dont spend much time memorizing new words and phrases after class.我知道那是因为我在课后没有花大量时间记忆生词和短语。练透补全句子He missed the first bus and that was because he got up late this morning他没能赶上早班车，那是因为他今天早上起晚了。Ive got a cold; that is why I wouldnt like to have a meal
30、我感冒了，那就是我不想吃饭的原因。写美一句多译他病了，那就是他被送到医院的原因。He was sent to the hospital.Thats because he was ill.He was ill.Thats why he was sent to the hospital.The reason why he was sent to the hospital was that he was ill.维度一：品句填词1He told the students about his adventures (奇遇) in the Arctic.2Famous experts (专家) are
31、often invited to CCTV to make comments on the current situation.3I was a fairly good football player in my youth (青年时期).4On the table, there are some cakes and grapes on the plates (盘子).5The medicine is harmful to children but harmless to adults6As is known to us, there is a generation gap between t
32、he young and the old.维度二：词形转换1I think all of us should mind our behaviour (behave) in public places.2It is a popular tourist attraction (attract) with many local delicious snacks.3A lot of small companies are fighting for survival (survive) at present.4It is necessary for us to practise speaking (sp
33、eak) English every day.5We had great fun comparing (compare) our baby photographs.6People who are addicted(addict) to shopping should break this habit.维度三：固定搭配和句式1You need a break. Why not take a fortnight off from work？(why not)你需要休息，为什么不休假两周呢？2You have made rapid progress；this is because he helps
34、you a lot(this is because)你进步很快，这是因为他帮助你很多。3He considered it hard to find the person who was responsible for the accident.(it作形式宾语)他认为找到那个为这起事故负责的人是很难的。4Next time you come to see me，please bring me some books suitable for me.(next time)下次你来看我时，请给我带一些适合我看的书。5While walking in the park, he saw the child attracted by a bird. (attract)公园里散步时，他看到那个孩子被一只鸟吸引了。6Focus your attention on/upon your work and you will make progress.(focus)把注意力集中在你的工作上，你就会取得进步。
