1、Unit 5Revealing naturePeriod 5Developing ideas()写作培优课 写作素养提升观察日记(Observational journal)【写作指导】话题阐释观察日记是过去考察较少的书面表达话题,属于应用文的一种。但是,这个话题是高中课文的主要话题之一,内容涉及科学实验,环境保护等。文体概述观察日记通常包含三个部分,一般是以实验的三个时间节点或者步骤为主要的叙述对象,描述实验对象的具体特征或者状态。框架构建Week 1The _is _._has been_.Week 2Something has_.It grows in_.Week 3It has_to_
2、.It looks like_.【典题示例】假定你是学生李华,你在家种了一些蒜苗,请你围绕蒜苗的生长写一篇观察日记。要点如下:1.开始种的时间和状况;2.种下一周后的情况;3.收获时的情况。注意:1.词数100个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3.框架已经给出。Step 1谋篇立意体裁:应用文Tips:Day one:Week one:Week two:时态:一般现在时和现在完成时人称:第三人称Step 2语言支架1.蒜瓣被种进土中,尖头朝上。garlic cloves_尖头用with复合结构翻译句子:_蒜瓣sharp endsThe garlic cloves have been p
3、lanted into the soil,with the sharp ends facing up.2.浇水之后,把花盆挪到温暖的地方。要经常给蒜浇水。container _加水用被动结构完成句子:_ 花盆add waterWater has been added and the container was put in a warm place.The cloves arebeing watered regularly.3.蒜瓣上发出了小小的芽。芽绿绿的,长得很好。_bud_sprout用提示词翻译组句:_芽发芽A single bud has sprouted from each of
4、the garlic cloves.The buds are greenand grow well.4.为了促进生长,花盆已经被移到有阳光的地方。_For better growing移动到有阳光的地方 _ 用现在完成时翻译句子:_为了促进生长move to a sunny placeFor better growing,the container has been moved to a sunny place.5.蒜苗都已经长到了20厘米左右,绿油油的。到割苗的时候了。20厘米高 _ 到时候了_ 翻译组句:_20 centimetres tallIts time for.The garlic
5、 sprouts have grown to around 20 centimetres tall and are reallygreen.Its time for cutting.6.别担心,很快还会再长出来的。别担心 _ 快速生长_ 翻译组句:_Dont worrygrow quicklyDont worry.It will grow quickly again after cutting.Step 3润色组篇Day one:The garlic cloves have been planted into the soil,with the sharp ends facing up.Wat
6、er has been added and the container was put in a warm place.Thecloves are being watered regularly.Week one:A single bud has sprouted from each of the garlic cloves.The buds are green and grow well.For better growing,the container has been moved to a sunny place.Week two:The garlic sprouts have grown
7、 to around 20 centimetres tall and are really green.Its time for cutting.Dont worry.It will grow quickly again after cutting.【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记1.试验词汇:experiment(试验),observation(观察),日记(journal),test(测试),mix(混合),plant(植物),item(物品),container(容器)2.行为词汇observe(观察),add(添加),put(放置),move(移动),keep(保持),cut(切割)3.实
8、用短语put in.place(放在地方),do sth.regularly(经常做某事),add.to.(把加入),mix together(混合)话题好句背诵1.(2019北京高考)Whenever a person is added,everyone else pulls the rope with less force.每当添加一个人时,其他所有人都会用较少的力拉绳索。2.(2019天津高考)A dogs eating habit requires regular training before it is properly established.狗的进食习惯需要有规律的训练才能很好地形成。3.(2018全国卷)Remove the skin and place them in plastic bags or containers and freeze.去除皮肤,将其放入塑料袋或容器中并冷冻。本课结束
