1、层级二低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你书面表达得分在1119分之间的学生的写作特点：1.只使用简单的词或短语； 2.句式单一，单句较多； 3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子； 4.不会使用从句； 5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语； 6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。因此， 平时的写作训练中，要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登场”。第一讲靓化词汇学会运用高级表达学生用书P103英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或
2、较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。(2019北京卷书面表达)Im very glad to know that youre coming to tour in China.Im more than deli
3、ghted to know that youre coming to tour in China.(2019全国卷书面表达)I hope you can consider my application and allow me to be a volunteer.I hope you can take my application into consideration and allow me to be a volunteer.(2019全国卷书面表达)So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery
4、and I am sure that I am fit for the job. So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am convinced that I am qualified for the job. (2019全国卷书面表达)As a result, enough preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.As a consequence, adequ
5、ate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.(2019天津卷书面表达)I want to make my voice heard.I feel an urge to make my voice heard.Only when you do more reading and writing can you succeed in improving your English.Only when you do more reading and writing can you
6、make it in improving your English.To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and appealing, but our school life is also rich and colorful.To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.(2018全国卷书面表达)Great changes have taken place
7、 in our school in the last few years. And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years. And word came that a short film will be shown in our school.更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。(2018天津卷书面表达
8、)On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once took part in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in
9、the competition. I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.(2018全国卷书面表达)Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.Moreover，we will build a new st
10、adium and with the stadium set up，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.(2017全国卷书面表达)The team will hold many activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.The team will hold a range of activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.词汇运用，短语优先当单词和短语
11、表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。(2019全国卷书面表达)Besides, I know English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.Moreover, I have a good command of English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, whi
12、ch helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.(2019全国卷书面表达)For one thing, I know Chinese painting well, for my father is a Chinese painter.For one thing, I am quite familiar with Chinese painting, for my father is a Chinese painter.(2018天津卷书面表达)We desperately need your help.We ar
13、e desperately in need of your help.(2018北京卷书面表达)Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which proved to be extremely rewarding.Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out to be
14、extremely rewarding.用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。(2018北京卷书面表达)If you take my advice you are sure to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.So long as you take my advice you are bound to have the most unforgettable experience duri
15、ng your college in Beijing.(2017天津卷书面表达)Second，I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.Second，I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(全国卷书面表达)I should say sorry for being unable to go to the booksto
16、re with you on Friday afternoon.I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.二、写作的秘密武器24个高级词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualresultconsequenceeffectinfluence动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withun
17、derstandmake sense ofdeveloppromoteconsidertake intoaccount形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/ significantinterestingabsorbing/appealingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyin a flashnowadayscurrently连词sothereforeandas well as(2017全国卷书面表达)It is of i
18、mportance for you to understand the content，Tang poetry.It is of importance for you to make sense of the content，Tang poetry.It is of importance for you to be aware of the content，Tang poetry.(2017北京卷书面表达)Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.Thats why I think th
19、e trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult.In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.三、写作的顶级装备27个加分词汇表达关注的名词attention, focus, concern表达争论的名词discussion, debate, argument表达现象的名词phenomenon表达优缺点的名词advantage,
20、 disadvantage, strength, weakness表达增长或下降的动词increase, accumulate, decrease, decline表达导致后果的动词短语result in, lead to, bring about, contribute to, give rise to续表表达支持、反对的动词短语approve of, be in favor of, object to表达可能性的形容词likely表达有好处的形容词beneficial表达强调的副词particularly, especiallyThe picture shows a common phen
21、omenon these days.这幅图显示了这些日子的一个常见现象。The Internet has brought about many changes in the workplace.网络给工作场所带来了很多变化。Our teacher is likely to get angry when she sees the dirty floor.我们的老师看到地面这么脏时，可能会发火。学生用书P105 请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1Now I will inform you of some detailed information to help you fully prepar
22、e for it.答案：make_full_preparations_for2You are welcome to give performances too.答案：as_well3We were so interested in the competition that we formed a group to take part in it.答案：keen_on4Im very glad to learn that you are coming in September.答案：more_than5So，please spend some time taking a brief look a
23、t the history of the Tang Dynasty，which will help you prepare for your class.答案：Therefore;_make_preparations_for6In order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry，I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.答案：acquire7The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper
24、into different shapes on the spot.答案：various/a_range_of8Firstly，the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.答案：To_begin_with;_around_the_corner 9My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them.答案：polish10The tea
25、cher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses. 答案：challenging 习作升级练习假定你是李华，你想邀请你的朋友John在周六晚上去看科幻电影The Wandering Earth，请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1发出邀请；2介绍电影(主题：保护人类共同的地球家园；观众评价等)；3请求回复。_考生作文Dear John，I know that you are interested in science fiction, so Id like to invite you to see a fi
26、lm this weekend.The Wandering Earth is being shown these days. Its purpose is to save the earth and protect our common home. Viewers describe it as a breakthrough of the Chinese film industry and it has received many positive reviews so far. Shall we go to watch the film if you are free? How about t
27、his Saturday evening? Please contact me when you are free so that I can book the tickets ahead of time.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua我来提升1将文中加黑词汇升级(1)purposeaim(2)manya_wide_range_of(3)freeavailable(4)when you are freeat_your_earliest_convenience(5)ahead of timein_advance2将文中加黑句式升级(1)Kno
28、wing_that_you_are_interested_in_science_fiction,_Id_like_to_invite_you_to_see_a_film_this_weekend.(分词作状语)(2)The_Wandering_Earth_is_being_shown_these_days,_whose_aim_is_to_save_the_earth_and_protect_our_common_home.(定语从句)参考范文Dear John，Knowing that you are interested in science fiction, Id like to inv
29、ite you to see a film this weekend.The Wandering Earth is being shown these days, whose aim is to save the earth and protect our common home. Viewers describe it as a breakthrough of the Chinese film industry and it has received a wide range of positive reviews so far. Shall we go to watch the film if you are available? How about this Saturday evening? Please contact me at your earliest convenience so that I can book the tickets in advance.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua
