1、Unit 3 Travel journalSection Writing电子邮件文体感知电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样,也包括信头、正文和结尾部分。电子邮件写作要简单明了,便于阅读。所以像信尾敬语通常也很简明,常常只需一个词,如“Thanks”“Cheers”等。电子邮件的人称及时态则需根据所写的具体内容来确定。增分佳句It would be a good idea if you travel a lot in your spare time.如果在你的业余时间能进行多次的旅游实在是太好了。How is everything going with you?/H
2、ow are you getting on with everything?你最近一切都好吗?Id like to be your guide and sincerely invite you to come to my house.我很乐意做你的向导,并诚心地邀请你来我家里做客。As a native here,Id like to give you some recommendations of the scenic spots here.作为一个当地人,我很乐意就这里的景点向你提一些建议。Id like to share my travel experience with you.我很乐
3、意与你分享我的旅游经历。写作模板Dear,How happy I am to _(表明收到来信)Im much pleased to inform you _(简述个人的近况)Last week,we _(描述具体事情).The landscape was _(描写具体的景物)I felt _(描写感受)By the way,Im going to _(表明意愿与期望)Best wishes.Yours sincerely,写作要求(2019襄阳高一检测)假如你是王涛,暑假期间你和父母一起外出旅游玩得很开心,你想将你的旅游经历用邮件形式与你的英国笔友 Tom 分享。注意:词数 100 左右;开
4、头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Tom,Id like to share my travel experience with you._Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Wang Tao审题谋篇 词汇推敲1原本,起初_2欣赏_3历史的_4旅游经历_5一批;一些;许多的_6文化财富_7自然景观_8过得愉快_9旅行_originallyappreciatehistoricaltravel experiencea collection ofcultural treasuresnatural sceneryhave a wonderful timeg
5、o on a trip遣词造句1.完成句子我爸妈和我去了西藏首府拉萨旅行。_拉萨也是这个地区政治、经济和文化中心。_My parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet,Lhasa.Lhasa is also the political,economic and cultural center of the region.我们都对那儿的自然景观感到震惊。_那儿的自然景观让我们感到平静祥和。_我们首先参观了布达拉宫,它最初建于七世纪。_We were all surprised by the natural scenery th
6、ere.The natural scenery there made us feel peaceful and quiet.We first visited the Potala Palace which was originally built in the 7th century.2句式升级用定语从句连接_用定语从句连接_用非谓语动词提升_My parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet,Lhasa,which is also the political,economic and cultural center of
7、the region.We were all surprised by the natural scenery there,which made us feel peaceful and quiet.We first visited the Potala Palace originally built in the 7th century.妙笔成篇_One possible version:Dear Tom,Id like to share my travel experience with you.During this summer holiday,my parents and I wen
8、t on a trip to the capital city of Tibet,Lhasa,which is also the political,economic and cultural center of the region.We first visited the Potala Palace originally built in the 7th century.And then,we appreciated a rich collection of cultural treasures in Tibet Museum where we learned some useful hi
9、storical knowledge about Tibet.During those days,we were all surprised by the natural scenery there,which made us feel peaceful and quiet.I strongly suggest that you travel to Tibet with me next time and Im sure you will have a wonderful time.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Wang Tao假定你是李华,你收到
10、美国好友 Eric 发来的电子邮件,他询问你国庆节假期登泰山(海拔 1 500 多米)的情况。请你给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:1登山时间;2登山过程,包括所见、所闻等;3登山体会。注意:1词数 100 左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_One possible version:Dear Eric,Im glad to receive your email.Id like to share with you my travelling experience during National Day.At 8 am,my friend and I began to climb Mount
11、 Tai,whose altitude is more than 1,500 metres.We climbed,talking and laughing along the way.However,one hour later,I felt so tired that I could not continue any longer.My friend insisted on climbing slowly and encouraged me to move on.During thejourney,we heard some visitors speak highly of the hist
12、ory and scenery of Mount Tai.At 10:30 am,we finally got to the top of the mountain,where we got a good view of the whole city of Taian.The climbing was tiring,but through the experience,I have known only if you dont give up,will you succeed.If you have time,lets climb Mount Tai together.Yours sincerely,Li Hua按ESC键退出全屏播放本部分内容讲解结束