1、2020高考英语书面表达汇总：附点评+范文全国卷适用地区：河南、河北、山西、江西、湖北、湖南、广东、安徽、福建全国卷适用地区：甘肃、青海、内蒙古、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、新疆、陕西、重庆全国卷适用地区：云南、广西、贵州、四川、西藏全国新高考卷适用地区：山东全国新高考卷适用地区：海南2020年高考自主命题地区：北京、天津、上海、江苏、浙江2020年全国卷你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1. 人物简介;2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：1. 词数 100 左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。The person I respectThere are
2、 many respectable people around us. 点评：全国I卷书面表达要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题写一篇短文，引导学生关注身边平凡而又伟大的人物。范文1The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves h
3、is work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficu
4、lties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.范文2For me, the most respectable person round me is my best friend, Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in my class, who is crazy about re
5、ading, learning and helping other people.There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him. First and foremost, needless to say, he is good at English, for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student. Additionally, no one can deny he gets along well with all o
6、ur classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience, considering that he has been serving as vice monitor for many years.Hopefully, I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. I have the
7、confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.22020年全国卷上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：1. 农场情况;2. 采摘过程;3. 个人感受。注意：1. 词数 100 左右;2. 题目已为你写好。My Weeknd 点评：全国卷书面表达设置和同学一起去农场参加采摘活动的情境，引导学生在真实的生活体验中感受劳动的辛苦和荣耀，尊重劳动，认同劳动，并且愿意学习和参与劳动。My WeekendLast weeke
8、nd，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for p
9、icking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.32020年全国新高考卷请你
10、为学校举办的5公里越野赛跑活动写一篇报道，内容包括：1. 参加人员;2. 跑步路线;3. 活动反响 。注意：1. 词数80 左右;2. 题目已为你写好。范文：A 5000-metre race, part of the Sports Festival of our school, was held by the school students union last Sunday.150 participants from three grades were involved in the race. Among the most of the participants were student
11、s and teaching staff. The racing route started at the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill.It turned out to be a great success. Not only does it build up our body but it also enriches our school life.42020年全国卷假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1. 剧情简介;2. 指导内容;3.
12、商定时间地点 。注意：1. 词数 100 左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。范文Dear Miss Evans:I an Li Hua, and Im writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play.Our play will be based on the text horse. The text tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to
13、draw him a beautiful horse, misunderstood the artist, and in the end forgived him because of his effort. Me and my classmates are struggling with the lines of the play, as we always stumble over pronounciations. We will have a rehearsal next Wednsday afternoon in the school hall, and I hope you can
14、come and give us some advice.Please consider our request. I look forward to your reply.SincerelyLi Hua52020年北京卷作文一(应用文)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求;2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。注意：1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim, Yours,Li hua作文二(情景作文)假设你是红
15、星中学高三(1)班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：自律self-discipline范文第一节Dear Jim:I am very sorry to hear that you have to stay in Britain because of the coronavirus.As we are about to begin school, our English drama club needs a tempora
16、ry teacher to direct us. We need a teacher who is a native of English speaking countries and has experience in English drama. Could you recommend a teacher to us?Please do not loosen protective measures, and take care of yourself.Yours,Li hua第二节I am Li Hua, the class leader of class one, grade twelv
17、e. During the pandemic, students in our class carried outresearch about self-discipline. At first, the efficiency of the students were very low, and greatly affect the learning outcomes of students. To solve this problem, me and some of the students met offline for a brainstorm meeting. After coming
18、 up with possible solutions, all classmates had an online meeting during which we decided on a specific plan. After carrying out the plan, the study results of all classmates saw obvious increase, and our teacher was happy with the result.62020年上海卷假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，前几日，你邀请你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公园一起欣赏露天音乐会。面对天气恶劣
19、、交通不便等原因，王磊一直犹豫不决。假如你是李华，请写一封信说服王磊和你起参加。范文1Dear Wang Lei,Its been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was go
20、ing on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I amconcerned, its still worth our efforts.This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras wi
21、ll perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert!In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My fa
22、ther will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.I am looking forward to hearin
23、g your reply.Yours,Li Hua范文2Dear Wang Lei,How are you doing these days? Youve been hesitated to go with me to the open-air concert in the country park on Friday. It seems to me whats holding you back is the terrible weather and the inconvenient transportation, neither of which, in my opinion, is obs
24、tacles.Firstly, there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable, such as the weather condition. We can make plans ahead according to the weather forecasting. If you are not confident with it, we can plan for both rainy day and sunny day.Secondly, mobile navigation apps can help us choose the b
25、est way, saving us from the trouble of worrying about the traffic conditions and the subways service time. Lastly, the most important thing is that this concert is such a major event that you would regret if you didnt come.Besides, your favorite band will be performing! Wouldnt it be amazing to see
26、your idols face to face and even get a chance to talk to them!Hopefully you will take my suggestion into consideration. And Im looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishes,Li Hua72020天津卷书信：介绍成人礼。1.回顾成长历程;2.观看校友抗疫视频;3.自己的感受和未来期望。成人礼“特定表达：1、成人礼：coming-of-age ceremony2、Our ceremony fell on May 16. f
27、all on 在某一天举行3、 In China the age of 18 means we have grown up. 不能用18 years old 做主语4、During the ceremony, dressed in Hanfu, a traditional dress (costume)of Han Chinese people, we performed/observed a series of rituals. 注意“穿着汉服”“行礼”的表达。5、We got down on our knees/knelt down on the ground to our parents
28、 to express our thanks to them for raising us and bringing us up. 注意“下跪 ”的表达。6、We owe so many thanks to our parents. owe sth. to sb. “欠，欠恩、欠情”7、The ceremony is intended to make us understand the meaning ofmaturity and responsibility. be intended to do 旨在素材成人礼coming-of-age ceremony是在少男少女年龄满18岁时举行的象征迈
29、向成人阶段的仪式，它标志着告别孩童时代(childhood)，进入成年期(adulthood)。在成人礼上，通常都要进行成年宣誓(take an oath to adulthood)。在中国一些地方，成人礼上还流行穿汉服(traditional Han costumes)，祭拜孔子(consecrate Confucius)等习俗。coming-of-age ceremony就是成人礼，是在少男少女年纪满18岁时举办的象征迈向成人阶段的典礼。男孩要进行capping ceremony(冠礼)，女孩要进行hair-pinning ceremony(加笄礼)。举办成人礼示意一个人已经come of
30、 age(成年)，在阅历了puberty(青春期)之后，实现了从adolescent(青少年)向youth(青年)的改变。82020江苏卷BBC拍的杜甫纪录片，很受外国友人的欢迎。以中国题材纪录片为写作话题，要求学生分析中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。范文The documentary Dufu made by BBC, which deals with life experience and poetry creation of this great master, wins widespread recognition among foreigners. Its exquisite
31、production also captures Lijiang and Suhuas heart.Why does such Chinese documentaries as Dufu appeal to foreigners? Firstly, Chinas rising international status and groundbreaking development catch the whole worlds attention. These curious audiences long to probe the underlying reason behind. Therefo
32、re, they turn to some iconic figures like Dufu for an answer. By exposing themselves to this great poets life experience, foreign audiences are better acquainted with Chinese political, ideological and economical system, thus gaining a better insight into contemporary China and its rapid growth.Seco
33、ndly, the high-quality production of BBC also contribute to Dufus popularity. BBC poured tons of effort into translating Dufus poems, shooting his birthplace and famous historical sites such as Xian and inviting famous British actor Mckellen to cast as Dufu. All these efforts made the inaccessile po
34、ems easily understood by the western audience.To conclude,considering western viewers curiosity about China as welll as BBCs fine production, the popularity of Dufu among foreigners is no coincidence.92020浙江卷假如你是李华。你校爱尔兰外教Peter因病回国休假。请你给他写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1.询问Peter近况;2.告诉Peter班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右;
35、2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。范文1Dear Peter;Im Li Hua, a Chinese student from Class Three, Grade Three. I cant tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that you had to return to Ireland on sick leave. Im wondering if you are getting better now. And Im writing to show our genuine concern for your health.Through yo
36、ur tireless work, every one of us has made tremendous progress in English, especially in listening and speaking. So dont worry about our study and all you need to do now is have an adequate rest and a healthy diet. Besides, with the approach of the college entrance exams, we are busy making final pr
37、eparations. Good news is that we have achieved satisfactory results in a mock examination. We are sure that we will live up to your expectations.We earnestly hope you will recover soon and we are expecting your early return to China. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua范文2Dear Peter;Were very sorry to hear that
38、 youre ill in hospitalWere all worried about you. Have you been getting much better now?Please dont worry about your illness. What you have to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctors advice. You needn t worry about your lessons because the new lessons given these days are not so difficult.
39、When you get back, we are all willing to help you make up the missing lessons at the weekend. Our head teacher along with our class is going to the hospital to see you next MondayI hope you will recover soon. Best wishes for you!Yours,Li Hua一、坚持立德树人，关注学科素养书面表达部分落实了立德树人的根本任务，体现了高考的育人功能，考查学生在面对生活问题情境时
40、，运用科学的思维方式和方法去认识问题、分析问题和解决问题。应用文要求考生解决复学在即，外教滞留英国无法按时到岗的问题。情景作文要求考生解决中学生居家学习自律性差的问题。考生在面对问题情境时，需要运用科学的思维，合理的方法来解决问题。情景作文的题目设置也会使考生“照镜子”，反思自己居家时的自律情况，体现了高考的育人功能。二、贴近学生生活，注重英语的应用性书面表达的交际场合设置明确，符合考生的认知水平，交际语境符合学生身份，考查了考生的综合语言运用能力，引导考生使用英语做事情，体现了英语的应用性。应用文中，考生需要结合生活实际，合理地用英语写出被推荐人的条件和要求，贴近考生的生活实际，体现了用英语做事情。情景作文要求考生写一篇以“自律”为主题的调研活动过程，符合当前的疫情下学生居家学习的社会环境和学生的身份。三、体现开放，考查考生的思维能力书面表达继续保持选择性和开放性的特点，为考生展示个性、思维的多样性提供了广阔空间。应用文题目要求中涉及外籍指导教师的条件和要求，但是具体的内容并未罗列，这需要考生展开积极的、合理的、有逻辑的思考完成写作任务，为考生提供了展示自我能力的机会。情景作文需要考生不仅具备较扎实的语言功底和表达能力，也需要考生展开想象，提供合理的细节内容。
