1、四川彭州市2016高考英语【二轮】写作品析（3）及参考范文【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）随着社会对“富二代”各方面负面新闻不断的报道。最近你校学生就“金钱是否能带来幸福” 这一话题进行了一场激烈的辩论，辩论的结果如下表所示：正方 反方1钱非常重要，生活离不开钱； 1金钱不是万能的；2钱可以帮助我们解决很多问题 2. 金钱买不到幸福和健康；3钱使我们的生活更舒适。 3过分在乎金钱就会失去人生的意义请根据以上素材为某英语报刊写一篇英语稿件，介绍这次辩论的内容，并谈谈我们应该如何看待金钱。注意：1.词数 100 左右 2.开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 3.不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，以行
2、文连贯。Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness._ _ 【参考范文】书面表达Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness. Different students have different opinions. Some students think that money is so important that we couldnt survive without mone
3、y. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition , it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life. Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesnt mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to m
4、oney, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life. Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.【2014高考英语南京市、盐城市一
5、模】书面表达（满分25分）81.请阅读下面背景材料，并根据问题，用英文写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。In China, an online shopping festival falls on November 11 when millions of Chinese shoppers go to T and T. In 2012, Tmall and Taobao together made 19.1 billion in sales on that day. However, in 2013, the shopping festival kicked off with an even stro
6、nger start sales hit 100 millionyuan55 seconds after midnight and reached 35 billion at the end of the day. This is just one of many companies that did business on that day.What does this material reflect？What is behind the phenomenon? And what is your comment or advice on it?注意：1.词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总
7、词数。2.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。3.参考词汇：理性的rationalWith the swift development of the Internet, 【参考范文】A possible version:With the swift development of the Internet, we can see online shopping has become a new trend in our daily life.There are several factors behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is very co
8、nvenient for people to purchase what they want or like with the Internet easily accessible via computers or cellphones. Second, people shopping online have more choices of goods than they do in real shops and are able to save time as well. Third, the relatively low prices on the Internet also accoun
9、t for higher sales online.In my opinion, as the pace of life quickens, it is natural for people to choose online shopping to save time and energy. Butwhen we enjoy the convenience it brings us,we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed. Furthermore, wed better s
10、tay rational and just buy what we really need, otherwise it would cause a waste of money and resources. (150 words)【2014高考英语马鞍山市质量检测】书面表达（满分25分） 假如你是某英文杂志负责“与读者对话”栏目的编辑。请根据下面这封读者来信写一封回信，帮助解决读者来信中提出的问题。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数； 3. 可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Editor,I am going to take the college
11、 entrance examination soon. I have to work harder and harder to prepare for it so that I could enter a good college. However, its hard for me to understand what my teachers say in class. Though I tell myself again and again I should hold on, I have little confidence in myself. What should I do now?B
12、est wishes, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Li Hua,Thank you for your letter. As for the entrance exams, you have come too far and worked too hard to quit now. There are only a few months left until the exams so you can make a final push to get the best result you can. I have some tips for you and I hope they are
13、helpful.The first thing you should do is to make a good study plan. If you follow the plan and concentrate on what youre doing, it helps you study effectively. Besides, dont forget to include at least three hours of exercise each week to keep your mind sharp.Whats more, make the most out of class. P
14、review lessons before the class and it helps you follow the teachers in class and have a good knowledge of what is important but difficult. Do review what is done wrong and learn lessons from mistakes.Above all, building up confidence is essential to success. Only when you believe in yourself, can y
15、ou keep up your spirits and be successful.Now, take some time to be with your family and enjoy yourself for Spring Festival, then get to work.Best wishes, Editor基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分) 假如你是学校的校报记者。以下是南中国海的简介，请你根据以下内容，写一篇英文的简介，发表在校报上。地理位置: 位居太平洋和印度洋之间的航运要冲，在经济上、国防上都具有重要的意义。面积350多万平方公里，其中属于我国管辖范围的有210万平方公里左
16、右。气候特征：终年高温、雨量充沛。资源：中国南海海洋鱼类有1500多种，其中很多具有极高的经济价值。 由于气候适宜、雨量充沛，生长着200多种高等植物。 海底资源十分丰富，尤其是海底石油和天然气储量巨大。【写作内容】 请根据以上简介，写一篇南中国海的英文简介，内容包括： 1.地理位置； 2.气候特征；3.资源；【参考词汇】航运要冲 a major shipping juncture 【写作要求】只能使用5个英语句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。_【参考范文】基础写作：The South China Sea, located in the major shi
17、pping juncture between the Pacific and the Indian Ocean, has much economic and national defense significance. It has an area of 3,500,000 square km, 2,100,000 of which is officially under the rule of our country. The climate there is typical maritime, with high temperatures and abundant rainfall all
18、 year round. Because of this, there are more than 200 advanced plant species flourishing in the area. Moreover, more than 1500 fishes can be found here, most of which have high economic values, and with huge amount of oil and natural gas reserve, the area is exceptionally rich in maritime resources.
19、 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。The arrival of World Book and Copyright Day always draws public attention to young peoples reading, but mere temporary attention cannot increase the popularity of reading. The lack of reading books is becoming an increasingly severe problem in China. Ac
20、cording to a survey by the United Nations Educational Scientific and Cultural Organization (UNESCO), Shanghai residents read most in China, with only eight books read a year on average. About 1.3 billion Chinese people read less than one book every year, if textbooks are not taken into account. Nowa
21、days, childrens spare time is occupied by attending various tutorial classes, taking exam preparation training, and learning piano, painting, dancing, weiqi, or other techniques. Childhood is a good period for reading literature. Reading can wake up the true nature of children, and good education sh
22、ould fit childrens nature, said Zhou Yimin, who is also a teacher. Scholars are also worried about another adverse impact of the lack of reading. If a child had never read a book from beginning to end before the fourth grade, he or she may lack the ability to read an entire book, said Jiang Junjing,
23、 an experienced teacher. What is worse, it may result in a lack of the ability to grasp the whole situation. Children who lacked the ability to read an entire book in childhood may end up being unable to grasp the whole picture or manage the whole team when they grow up. 【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点。2. 以约
24、120词表达你就 “阅读书籍”发表看法，并要包括下列要点：（1）你认为阅读书籍重要吗？为什么？（2）请举例说明你的观点。【写作要求】1. 作文中你可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】任务写作：Reading booksAccording to a recent survey, the lack of reading books is a serious problem in China. Too busy with school wor
25、k and tutorial classes, children seldom have chances to read, which raises great concern among the scholars about the serious consequence. I strongly believe that reading books are very important. Firstly, as Francis Bacon put it, “reading makes a full man”. By reading different books, we perfect ou
26、rselves mentally. “Histories make men wise; poems witty; the mathematics subtitle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend”. Secondly, good books can delight, entertain and educate us. The importance of reading books is gaining new insight or perspectives on issues a
27、nd helps us to have a new understanding of the world around. We can apply the insight in everyday life or as a way of building upon the knowledge that already encompasses our mind and enrich our lives. One of my favorite book is Pride and Prejudice written by Jane Austen. Basically, this is a story
28、of courtship and marriage, but through the humorous, sometimes satirical tone of the author, I get to know about how women lived their lives and what the upper and middle class people centered around in the late18th century England. I smile at the wit of Mr. Bennet, laugh at the mindlessness of Mrs.
29、 Bennet. I am totally impressed by Lizzys eloquence when she debated with Mr. Darcy, and equally moved when Mr. Darcy finally admitted he had an affection for Lizzy. In a word, with this book, I temporarily escape from the 21st century world, entertaining myself and at the same time broadening my ho
30、rizon. We read books for pleasure. They entertain us. And we read them for profit. They enlighten us. Good books draw us into their imaginative worlds and engage us with the power of their invention. They enlarge our understanding of ourselves and deepen our appreciation of life. Therefore, I think reading books is very important.
