1、2020-2021学年广东省六校高三上学期第二次联考46. 假如你是学生会主席李华，你校为积极响应落实习近平总书记有关厉行节约，反对浪费的精神，学生会将举办一次以“光盘行动”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一个演讲稿，内容包括：1. 浪费食物的危害；2. 光盘行动的措施；3. 呼吁大家共同行动；注意：1.词数 80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：光盘行动 Clear Your Plate_【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen! It is my honor to have this opportunity to deliver
2、 a speech on “Clear Your Plate” campaign and present my opinions on food waste.Wasting food has irreversible environmental consequences. For one thing, it costs numerous water and energy for refuse disposal, which ultimately results in the increase of greenhouse gases. For another, excessive food wa
3、ste challenges food regulation and poses a potential threat to food security.Serious as the problems seem, “Clear Your Plate” campaign is a nationwide movement that is effective in reducing food waste. As individuals, when dining out, it is our responsibility to order reasonable amount of dishes and
4、 take leftovers home. In addition, schools should conduct some activities to demonstrate the significance of reducing food waste to our populous country and cultivate awareness of valuing food among students.By no means is reducing food waste a small piece of cake unless we all shoulder our responsi
5、bilities. For a green environment and a prosperous future, lets clear up our plates! Thank you!【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“光盘行动”为主题写一篇演讲稿。内容包括浪费食物的危害，光盘行动的措施及呼吁人们共同行动。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 浪费食物的危害；2. 光盘行动的措施；3. 呼吁大家共同行动。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
6、deliver a speech on; irreversible environmental consequences; pose a potential threat; Serious as the problems seem; is effective in; demonstrate the significance of; cultivate awareness of; By no means 第三步：连词成句1. It is my honor to have this opportunity to deliver a speech on “Clear Your Plate” camp
7、aign and present my opinions on food waste.2. Wasting food has irreversible environmental consequences. 3. For one thing, it costs numerous water and energy for refuse disposal, which ultimately results in the increase of greenhouse gases. 4. For another, excessive food waste challenges food regulat
8、ion and poses a potential threat to food security.5. Serious as the problems seem, “Clear Your Plate” campaign is a nationwide movement that is effective in reducing food waste.6. As individuals, when dining out, it is our responsibility to order reasonable amount of dishes and take leftovers home.
9、7. In addition, schools should conduct some activities to demonstrate the significance of reducing food waste to our populous country and cultivate awareness of valuing food among students.8. By no means is reducing food waste a small piece of cake unless we all shoulder our responsibilities. For a
10、green environment and a prosperous future, lets clear up our plates!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系： In addition 2.表转折对比关系：For one thing, For another连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 For one thing, it costs numerous water and energy for refuse disposal, which ultima
11、tely results in the increase of greenhouse gases.（由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2 Serious as the problems seem, “Clear Your Plate” campaign is a nationwide movement that is effective in reducing food waste.（形容词+as为部分倒装句，且由that引导的定语从句修饰先行词movement）高分句型3 As individuals, when dining out, it is our responsi
12、bility to order reasonable amount of dishes and take leftovers home.（it作形式主语，真正主语是to引导的不定式）辽宁师大附中2021届高三上学开学考试英语试题46. 假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到名叫Kelly的中学生发帖寻求帮助。请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。Kelly Started on 19 Feb. 2020Hi, everyone,My grandma smokes and my family comes by her home a lot. When we come, shes always
13、 smoking. I always go to another room where I cant smell the smoke, worried about my brother or someone else getting sick from second-hand smoke. What should I do?写作要点:1.结合亲身经历告诉 Kelly要怎样认识这个问题; 2.给Kelly提出建议。要求：1.词数80左右;2.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;3.书写清晰工整。_【答案】Dear Kelly,I know exactly how you feel. My mom wa
14、s a smoker and I couldnt stand smelling the traces of cigarettes in her breath.In my view, a direct and honest talk counts most. Firstly, not only did I tell her about my feelings that I was worried about her and family members health but also offered my suggestion that she kick her addiction to smo
15、king. Besides, we worked together to find solutions, such as chewing gums, doing exercise and so on. Eventually she quit altogether! I hope my personal experience will be of some help to you.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回帖给中学生Kelly，帮助Kelly并且给她提出一些建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时为主。结构：总-分-总法要点：1.结合
16、亲身经历告诉 Kelly要怎样认识这个问题; 2.给Kelly提出建议。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）a smoker；couldnt stand doing；cigarettes；in ones view；not onlybut also；worry about；offer suggestion；work together；solutions；such as；chew gums；do exercise；and so on；be of some help等第三步：连词成句1. My mom was a smoker and I couldnt stand smelling the traces
17、of cigarettes in her breath.2. In my view, a direct and honest talk counts most.3. Not only did I tell her about my feelings that I was worried about her and family members health but also offered my suggestion that she kick her addiction to smoking.4. We worked together to find solutions, such as c
18、hewing gums, doing exercise and so on.5 I hope my personal experience will be of some help to you.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly；Eventually；2.表并列补充关系：and；Besides；not onlybut also；连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
19、作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：My mom was a smoker and I couldnt stand smelling the traces of cigarettes in her breath.这句话使用了由and连接的并列句；not only did I tell her about my feelings that I was worried about her and family members health but also offered my suggestion that she kick her addiction to smoking.这句话使用了由no
20、t onlybut also的倒装句； I hope my personal experience will be of some help to you.这句话使用了省略了that的宾语从句等。文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。山东省2021届高三开学质量检测66. 假定你是李华，上周一你校举行了高三成人礼仪式。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1. 活动时间、地点：2. 活动内容：走龙门、成人宣誓等；3. 个人感悟。参考词汇：龙门Longmen；宣誓make an oath注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The Comin
21、g-of-Age Ceremony_【答案】One possible version:The Coming-of-Age CeremonyLast Monday witnessed an exciting Coming-of-Age Ceremony.All the Senior Three students gathered on the playground at 7:00 sharp in the morning. There were various activities to celebrate the coming 18-year-old birthday. One of them
22、 was walking across Longmen, which means a brilliant future waiting for us diligent students. What impressed me most was the moment when all of us made an oath about what should be done as civilized youths.Thanks to the ceremony, I realize I have grown up and I should be self-disciplined and respons
23、ible for my behavior.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，写一篇报道。【详解】第一步： 审题：记叙文 写一篇关于高三成人礼仪式的报道 人称：第三人称 时态：一般过去时 结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明学校举行成人礼仪式，第二部分叙述成人礼仪式的具体内容，第三部分表达自己的感悟。要点：1. 说明学校举行成人礼仪式2叙述成人礼仪式的具体内容时间、地点：上星期一，在学校操场，成人礼仪式的内容：各种活动，包括走龙门、成人宣誓3表达自己的感悟：自己已长大成人，应该自律、为自己的行为负责任第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）witness；gather；various activi
24、ties；celebrate；a brilliant future；wait for；impress；make an oath；civilized youths；thanks to；grow up；be self-disciplined；be responsible for 第三步：连词成句(1)Last Monday witnessed the exciting Coming-of-Age Ceremony. (2)All the Senior Three students gathered on the playground at 7:00 sharp in the morning. (3
25、)There were various activities to celebrate the coming 18-year-old birthday. (4)One of them was walking across Longmen.(5) Walking across Longmen means a brilliant future waiting for us diligent students. (6)What impressed me most was the moment.(7) At that moment, all of us made an oath about what
26、should be done as civilized youths.(8)I realize I have grown up(9)I should be self-disciplined.(10)I should be responsible for my behavior.根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)将第二个句子作定语从句，连接下面两个句子(4)One of them was walking across Longmen.(5) Walking across Longmen means a brilliant f
27、uture waiting for us diligent students. One of them was walking across Longmen, which means a brilliant future waiting for us diligent students. 将第二个句子作定语从句，连接下面两个句子 (6)What impressed me most was the moment.(7) At that moment, all of us made an oath about what should be done as civilized youths.What
28、 impressed me most was the moment when all of us made an oath about what should be done as civilized youths.用并列连词连接下面两个句子(9)I should be self-disciplined.（10）I should be responsible for my behavior. I should be self-disciplined and responsible for my behavior. I should be self-disciplined as well as
29、responsible for my behavior. I should be self-disciplined and responsible for my behavior as well.适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 witness；gather；various activities；celebrate；a brilliant future；impress；make an oath； thanks to；grow up；be self-disciplined；be re
30、sponsible for 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如There be句型的运用 There were various activities to celebrate the coming 18-year-old birthday；定语从句的运用which means a brilliant future waiting for us diligent students；主语从句的运用What impressed me most was the moment 等。2021届浙江省嘉兴市高三9月教学测试46. 假定你是高三（7）班学生李华，上周日你班部分同学到阳光儿童福利院开展志愿者活
31、动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.时间、地点、参与者；2.活动内容；3.简要评论。注意：1.词数80左右（文章标题已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Volunteering in the Sunshine Childrens Home_【答案】One possible version:Volunteering in the Sunshine Childrens HomeLast Sunday, some students from Class 7, Senior 3 went to the Sunshine Childrens Home for volunta
32、ry work. On arrival, they presented the kids with gifts. Then they involved the kids in activities. Some taught the older to draw pictures. Others told stories to the younger. Later they held a party, playing games, singing and dancing together. All day the kids were immersed in happiness. Voluntary
33、 work of this kind is significant. Not only does it enrich students life experiences, but it inspires their social responsibility.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇报道，说明部分同学到阳光儿童福利院开展志愿者活动情况并做出相关的评论。详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.说明志愿者活动的时间、地点及参与者。 2.介绍活动内容
34、 3.说明活动的意义。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）present sb. with. sth., involve sb in, be immersed in, enrich ones life第三步：连词成句Later they held a party, playing games, singing and dancing together.Not only does it enrich students life experiences, but it inspires their social responsibility.Then they involved the kids in ac
35、tivities. All day the kids were immersed in happiness.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,
36、3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中
37、使用了倒装句，如：Not only does it enrich students life experiences, but it inspires their social responsibility. 以及非谓语作状语，如：Later they held a party, playing games, singing and dancing together.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。常德市第二中学2021届高三开学摸底考试51. 假定你是李华，最近你发现一款向高中生提供大学课程的应用程序。请你
38、用英语写一封邮件，向你的交换生朋友Ann推荐这个程序。内容包括：1. 应用程序名称及课程设置；2. 使用该应用程序的好处。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右：2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。_【答案】Dear Ann,I have recently found a wonderful app named Pre-college Programs, which is aimed at high school students who want to learn more about college courses.The app offers courses on a variety of sub
39、jects, such as speech, literature, psychology, philosophy, history, biology, computer science, physics and math. I am now taking a course called Young Adult Literature and Its Readers.Pre-college Programs offers us a great opportunity to find out which field of study were really interested in, or wh
40、at we should expect in our college.I hope this app can provide you with a new learning experience.YoursLi Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封邮件，向交换生朋友Ann推荐一款向高中生提供大学课程的应用程序。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，个别表达需要用到现在进行时和现在完成时。结构：三部分：第一部分介绍应用程序名称，引出主题；第二部分介绍应用程序的课程设置和使用该应用程序的好处；第三部分表达希望这款应用程序能给朋友带来好的学习
41、体验。要求：1. 介绍应用程序名称及课程设置2. 介绍使用该应用程序的好处第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）recently (最近); wonderful (极好的，绝妙的); be aimed at (目的是，旨在); a variety of (多种的); such as (例如); take a course (学一门课程); offer sb. sth. (提供给某人某物); opportunity (机会); find out (发现); provide sb. with sth. (提供给某人某物)第三步：连词成句1. I have recently found a wonder
42、ful app named Pre-college Programs. 2. The app offers courses on a variety of subjects, such as speech, literature, psychology, philosophy, history, biology, computer science, physics and math.3. I am now taking a course called Young Adult Literature and Its Readers.4. Pre-college Programs offers us
43、 a great opportunity to find out which field of study were really interested in.5. I hope this app can provide you with a new learning experience.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
44、2. 表并列补充关系：Whats more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only but also; as well as; bothand3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand, on the other hand; some, while others4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus;
45、therefore; as a result; why 5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。I have recently found a wonderful app named Pre-college Programs.本句用来介绍应用程序的名称。可以使用定语从句，进一步介绍这款应用程序有什么用途。润色修
46、改为：I have recently found a wonderful app named Pre-college Programs, which is aimed at high school students who want to learn more about college courses.【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：I have recently found a wonderful app named Pre-college Programs, which is aimed at high school students who want to learn more about college courses.，这句话为which引导的定语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：be aimed at; a variety of; provide sb. with sth.等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如recently; wonderful; opportunity等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
