1、1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Ding Guangquan, an old master of crosstalk, has been teaching this unique art form to foreigner since 19
2、89. Dings classes,that are held in Beijing, gain much popularity among foreign students. Ding is always happily to take on new foreign students. His initial requirements are that students must speak good Putonghua but have an interest in Chinese culture. The students begin their training by listenin
3、g and copying traditional pieces of crosstalk. Then they move on to create crosstalk dialogues in the pairs with other students. Finally, when Ding Guangquan think they have attained enough skills, the foreign students can create dialogues with him. Once polished their skills, some of his students g
4、o on to become quite well-known himself.2、假定英语课.上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线() 划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词: 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分. Welcome to the Great Wall. Measured more than 6,000 ki
5、lometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the long wall in the world. It has a long history of more than 2,000 years.That is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is main made of stones and bricks, and all the construction was done by hand. Though it was used to protect the country from forei
6、gn invaders, every few hundred meters along with the Great Wall,there was a watchtower. Now, as symbol of China, the Great Wall will become one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world. It is no wonderful that the Great Wall attract hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every year.3、假
7、定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and ha
8、rdly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myse
9、lf down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有十处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其该词下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错
10、的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。As we all know,everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of diseases,both mentally and physically.As a
11、result,doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor,helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult,I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true,I have told me over and over again that Ill concentrat
12、e more to studies.After all,only by working hardly can one succeed.5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Andrew, Id like to invite you to
13、the coming Christmas party, what will take place on the second floor of the dining hall as expect. It is the celebration for the Christmas Eve. But you are welcome to make the short speech. After that well have some funs together, singing, dancing and playing games. Then well enjoy a candle light di
14、nner, tasting a variety of delicious food. Finally, members of the English club will exchange gifts. Im sure it will be a warmly get-together. Id appreciate if you could come and join us. The party will start at 6:00 p.m. and lasts about three hours. Wed like to meet you at the school gate at 5 :50
15、p.m. on this evening. Were looking forward to you reply.Yours, Li Hua6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Alice, my closest friend, devotes m
16、any energy to her lessons all day long. She is always one of the top student in our class. She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy some pop songs in her spare time. Alice is always willing to help other, and she often helps us with our lessons. As an enthusiastic volunteer, she
17、has successful organized varieties of voluntary activities. We paid visit to a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school. That we did was warmly welcomed by the staff in the nursing home. Win honor for our school, Alice is admired by our classmates. 答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案： Ding Guang
18、quan, an old master of crosstalk, has been teaching this unique art form to since 1989. Dings classes, are held in Beijing, gain much popularity among foreign students. Ding is always to take on new foreign students. His initial requirements are that students must speak good Putonghua have an intere
19、st in Chinese culture. The students begin their training by listening and copying traditional pieces of crosstalk. Then they move on to crosstalk dialogues in pairs with other students. Finally, when Ding Guangquan they have attained enough skills, the foreign students can create dialogues with him.
20、 Once their skills, some of his students go on to become quite well-known .解析：1.第一处:考査名词的单复数。句意:丁广泉自从1989年一直教外国人说相声。foreigner是可数名词,根据句意可知用复数。故foreigner改成 foreigners。2.第二处:考査定语从句。此处为非限制性定语从句,which指代上文的Dings classes,定语从句中缺少主语,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,故that改成which。3.第三处:考査形容词。be动词is后面接形容词作表语。故happily改成happy。4.
21、第四处:考査连词。句意:他最初的要求是学生必须说好普通话而且对中国文化感兴趣。这是并列关系,故but改成and。5.第五处:考査介词。listen是不及物动词,后面接介词to才能接宾语 traditional pieces of crosstalk。故listening 后面加上to。6.第六处:考查非谓语动词。move on to doing sth.意为“继续做某事”,to是介词,后面接动名词。故create改成creating。7.第七处:考査冠词。in pairs为固定搭配,意为“成双成对”。故去掉the。8.第八处:考査主谓一致。这篇文章使用一般现在时,而且主语是Ding Guang
22、quan,谓语用第三人称单数。故think改成thinks。9.第九处:考查非谓语动词。some of his students和polish之间是主动关系,用现在分词作状语。故polished改成polishing。10.第十处:考査代词。这句话的主语是some of his students,后面的反身代词应用themselves。故himself 改成themselves。 2答案及解析：答案： Welcome to the Great Wall. more than 6,000 kilometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the w
23、all in the world. It has a long history of more than 2,000 years. is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is made of stones and bricks, and all the construction was done by hand. it was used to protect the country from foreign invaders, every few hundred meters along with the Great Wall, there wa
24、s a watchtower. Now, as symbol of China, the Great Wall become one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world. It is no that the Great Wall hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every year.解析：1. Measured改成Measuring.考查非谓语.the Great Wall与measure之间是主谓关系,所以用现在分词在句中做状语. 2. long改成longest.考查最高
25、级.长城是世界上最长的墙,所以用最高级. 3. That改成what.考查名词性从句.本句是主语从句。从句中缺少主语,所以用what引导. 4. main 改为mainly.考查副词.此处用副词修饰动词made, mainly是副词主要地. 5. Though改为As.考查连词.本句是表示原因,所以用as引导. 6.去掉with.考查介词.沿着长城用介词along,所以去掉with. 7. 加a.考查冠词.根据句意是作为一个中国的象征,所以用不定冠词a. 8. will改为has.考查时态.根据句意长城已经成为世界上最著名的旅游景点之一,所以用现在完成时. 9. wonderful 改为won
26、der.考查名词.它是世界奇迹,所以用名词wonder奇迹. 10. attract改为attracts.考查时态.主语是长城为第三人称单数形式,所以用attracts. 3答案及解析：答案： Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, he works from morning till night. Hard work made him very ill. “He has ruined hi
27、s . We are worried about him.” That is other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the we had taken together. I understood that
28、 he missed us just as as we missed him.解析：1.固定搭配spend time on sth.意为“花时间在某事上”。2.文中With little sleep and hardly any break在句中作状语,后面一句是主句,因此需要去掉so。3.hard work作主语时谓语动词用单数。4.此处应该用名词作ruin的宾语,而healthy是形容词。5.此处用what引导表语从句,what在从句中作say的宾语。6.此处pay a visit to sb.为固定短语,意为“拜访某人”。7.根据前面him可知此处是his。8.结合语境可知,此处应该用一
29、般过去时。9.picture是可数名词,由前面的some of可知此处应用复数形式。10.此处much是程度副词,修饰missed,而many修饰可数名词。 4答案及解析：答案： As we all know,everyone a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life rapidly, many people suffer from different of diseases,both mentally and physi
30、cally.As a result,doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor,helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor very difficult,I will do whatever I can to keep everyone .To make my dream come true,I have told over and over again that Ill concentrate
31、more studies.After all,only by working can one succeed.解析：1.everyone强调个体,谓语动词用单数。故把have改为has。2.enter(进入)是及物动词,后面跟宾语不用介词。故删除into。3.此处考查“with+宾语+宾语补足语”复合结构。宾语modern life与宾语补足语go之间是主动关系,用现在分词表示主动。故把go改为going。4.kind(种类)是可数名词,由different修饰用复数。故把kind改为kinds。5.句意:我的梦想是成为一名好医生。这里表示“一名”且泛指,故在successful前加a。6.句
32、意:尽管成为一个好医生是很困难的,但是我将尽我所能让人人健康。由主句使用一般将来时可知,从句用一般现在时,故把was改为is。7.healthy是宾语补足语,说明宾语的特征,用形容词。故把health改为healthy8.句意:为了梦想成真,我反复告诉我自己我要更加专心学习。 主语和宾语是同一人,宾语用反身代词。故把me改为myself。9.concentrate on(集中;专心)是固定搭配。故把to改为on。10.句意:毕竟,只有通过努力学习,一个人才能成功。hard“努力地”;hardly“几乎不”。根据语境,故把hardly改为hard。 5答案及解析：答案：Dear Andrew,I
33、d like to invite you to the coming Christmas party, will take place on the second floor of the dining hall as. It is the celebration for the Christmas Eve. you are welcome to make short speech. After that well have some together, singing, dancing and playing games. Then well enjoy a candle light din
34、ner, tasting a variety of delicious food. Finally, members of the English club will exchange gifts. Im sure it will be a get-together. Id appreciate if you could come and join us. The party will start at 6:00 p.m. and about three hours. Wed like to meet you at the school gate at 5 :50 p.m. on this e
35、vening. Were looking forward to reply.Yours, Li Hua解析： 第一处:whatwhich【解析】分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，指代先行词Christmas party，为事物，且在从句中作主语，故将what改为which。第二处：expectexpected【解析】as expected为省略结构,补充完整为as it is expected,意为“如期待的那样/如预期的那样”。第三处：ButAnd【解析】句意为：这是圣诞节前夜的庆祝活动， 并且欢迎你给我们作个简短的演讲。由此可知，前后句是顺承关系，不是转折关系，故将But改为An
36、d。第四处:thea【解析】make a speech为固定搭配，意为“作演讲”。第五处:funsfun【解析】fun意为“乐趣”，为不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将funs改为fun。第六处：warmlywarm 【解析】根据前面的冠词a可知，get- together为名词，意为“联欢会”，应用形容词修饰，故将 warmly 改为 warm。第七处：在appreciate后加it【解析】Id appreciate it if为固定句型，意为“如果我会非常感激”，其中it为形式宾语，不可省略。第八处：lastslast【解析】根据其前的and可知，此处应与will start构成并列谓语，故将
37、lasts改为last。第九处：删除on【解析】this, that, last, next等用于evening之前时， 其前不加介词。第十处:youyour【解析】reply为名词，意为“回复”，此处应用形容词性物主代词，故将you改为your。 6答案及解析：答案： Alice, my closest friend, devotes energy to her lessons all day long. She is always one of the top in our class. She loves the music so much that she / it a rule to
38、 enjoy some pop songs in her spare time. Alice is always willing to help, and she often helps us with our lessons. As an enthusiastic volunteer, she has organized varieties of voluntary activities. We paid visit to a nursing home last month, we picked up rubbish near our school. we did was warmly we
39、lcomed by the staff in the nursing home. honor for our school, Alice is admired by our classmates.解析： 第一处：manymuch【解析】energy意为“精力；能量”时，为不可数名词，故将many改为much。第二处：studentstudents【解析】“one of +可数名词复数”为固定结构，意为“之一”，故将student改为students。第三处：删除the【解析】music为抽象名词，其前不加冠词。第四处：在made前加has或mademakes【解析】根据本句中的loves并结合
40、句意可知，此处描述一般性事实或强调到目前为止已经发生的事情，故在made前加has或将made改为 makes。第五处：otherothers【解析】此处是说艾丽斯总是乐于帮助其他人,“其他人”为复数意义，故将other改为others。第六处：successfulsuccessfully【解析】分析句子结构可知，has organized为谓语，故应用副词successfully修饰 第七处:在visit前加a【解析】pay a visit to 为固定短语，意为“看望；参观”。第八处:soand【解析】结合句意可知，“ 我们去了养老院和 “捡了学校附近的垃圾”为并列关系，故将so改为and。第九处:ThatWhat【解析】分析句子结构可知，本句为主语从句，从句的谓语动词did后缺宾语，故将That改为What。 第十处:WinWinning【解析】本句已有谓语is admired,且无连词连接其他谓语，故此处应用非谓语动词主语Alice与 Win之间为逻辑上的主动关系，因此应用现在分词形式作伴 随状语，故将Win改为Winning。
