1、2021高考英语读后续写专题（十三）一：典题技法指导This story happened to me many years ago but I can still remember it well. When I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents home in Missouri for Christmas. On my way, I found that my car was running out of gas. So I stopped at a gas station
2、about 50 miles from from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to a couple(夫妻) who were also paying for gas and they responded with their warm smiles.I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black sm
3、oke poured from the back of my car. My car just broke down. What a trouble! I stopped and was wondering what I should do next when a car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friends. We chatted happily on the way to the city, a
4、nd when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card.Arriving home, I wrote to him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterwards, I received a Christmas present from them. In their note they said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful.Years later, I drove t
5、o a meeting in a nearby town in an early morning. The road condition was quite poor on the way and it was said that cars broke down frequently there. Anyway, I got there safe and sound. After the meeting, I returned to my car and found that Id got a flat tire(瘪胎). I was at a loss when I noticed that
6、 the Friendly Ford Dealership- a shop selling Ford cars- was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the shop.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: I entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I couldn
7、t believe my eyes. Paragraph 2: After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it. 二、写作思路1. 确定主题：大主题是人与社会-良好的社会关系与社会交往。主旨是乐于助人，人生才有意义。原文中第三段最后一句-helping me had made their holidays meaningful-体现全文的主题。所以结尾处须有点题。I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is meaningfu
8、l when you can give a hand to those in trouble.2. 时空变化：第一段情节发生的时间是会议结束以后after the meeting. 地点是in a shop selling Ford cars，第二段情节发生在作者的小车边，时间是第一段以后不久after a while。3. 续写难点：第一段情节比较简单，第二段开头提示语理解有难度-After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it. 应该思考的一个问题是they指代the couple还是the
9、 two salesmen；另一个问题是轮胎漏气为什么要启动汽车started it。下水时，最后安排启动汽车听发动机的声音，先检查汽车发动机是否有问题，确保汽车不会在路上break down。检查发动机以后，再补轮胎这样的情节安排应该是合理。另外，原文的the husband在续写时应该给出姓名，原因是 the husband gave me his business card. Arriving home, I wrote to him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterwards, I received a C
10、hristmas present from them. 所以续写时the husband以多年未见的好友(Arthur)身份出现。三、写作提纲Paragraph 1: I entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I couldnt believe my eyes.1. Surely, it was my long-lost friend, Arthur, always wearing a warm smile.2. What a coincidence that Arthur would appear in front of
11、me when I had trouble! I thought.3. For a second, I stared at him in disbelief, my mouth hanging open.4. In the meanwhile Tom instantly recognized me and he gave me a huge hug.5. “What brings you here?” he asked with a puzzled expression on his face.6. So I told him that my car got a flat tire and t
12、hat considering the poor road condition, it might broke down on my way back home.7. Knowing what had happened to me, he said that he would be glad to give me a hand again.Paragraph 2: After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it.1. After listening to the sound of the en
13、gine, Arthur told me that there was nothing wrong with it.2. And then they started to fix the tire and we chatted happily.3. Arthur told me that the thank-you note from me inspired him to live a meaningful life by helping others.4. Soon afterwards, he got the tire fixed.5. He got up, wiped the sweat
14、 from his face and wished me a pleasant journey.6. I couldnt thank him enough.7. Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble. 四：参考范文Paragraph 1: I entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I
15、couldnt believe my eyes. Surely, it was my long-lost friend, Arthur, always wearing a warm smile. What a coincidence that Arthur would appear in front of me when I had trouble! I thought. For a second, I stared at him in disbelief, my mouth hanging open. In the meanwhile Tom instantly recognized me
16、and he gave me a huge hug. “What brings you here?” he asked with a puzzled expression on his face. So I told him that my car got a flat tire and that considering the poor road condition, it might broke down on my way back home. Knowing what had happened to me, he said that he would be glad to give m
17、e a hand again.Paragraph 2: After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it. After listening to the sound of the engine, Arthur told me that there was nothing wrong with it. And then they started to fix the tire and we chatted happily. Arthur told me that the thank-you not
18、e from me inspired him to live a meaningful life by helping others. Soon afterwards, he got the tire fixed. He got up, wiped the sweat from his face and wished me a pleasant journey. I couldnt thank him enough. Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is mean
19、ingful when you can give a hand to those in trouble.二：课后练习读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Stevewas the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis, and he was my cousin. By the age of 19, Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted to be exactly like him. So when Steve
20、asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota, I was excited!After planning the trip, we gatheredclothesandsupplies, and began our great adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening. On our way to thecampsite, Steve pointed to a s
21、mall house faraway in one of the mountains, saying that it was theranger station(护林站) where theforesterworked.Finally, after a long walk, we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper. After we gathered enough wood f
22、rom theforest, he started the campfire using only stone and steel no matches. For supper we feasted on freeze-dried beef, wild rice and pea soup. I ate greedily after all that work.Tired enough, we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day. We were stil
23、l talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up; the temperature dropped and it began to snow. Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log (原木) from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire. Then he wrapped (包裹) aluminum foil (铝箔) around the log. The h
24、eat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent. Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams.The snow had stopped, but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dyingfire. I was abruptly awakened by Steve. Our tent was on fire. Frightened, I ran out of the t
25、ent immediately. The tent collapsed (倒塌) with Steve inside. Without any thought of endangering myself, I reached into the burning tent and pulled him to the icy lake. Fortunately, we were not seriously hurt.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1: Later, as we stood by the burning
26、tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation._Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we heard a noise in the forest._参考答案：参考范文：Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation. Ourcampsitewas in the deep of theforest, really far away from the highway. We were in
27、 the middle of nowhere, wearing only underwear, with oursuppliesburnt into ashes, including our cellphones. EvenStevewas unsure what to do next. The only thing we could do was just sitting in the cold air and wondering how to get out of the forest.Suddenly, we heard a noise in the forest. Anxiously
28、we listened and stared into the darkness. A jeep appeared. Aforesterhad spotted the light from thefire and had come to have a check. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to theranger station, where we were givenclothesand were able to call our parents. Steve and I had many more campingadventuresfrom then on, but it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal, rather than a youngercousin. Our friendship continues to this day.
