1、2015高考英语短文改错及书面表达练习（6）及答案短文改错What should you do when your parents become1. _angry? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation2. _with them about it . Remembering not to shout 3. _at them. They usually will try to change, but they will 4. _take some time because they get angry all their life
2、, and that 5. _is all they know . You might have to change for your6. _method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your7. _parents that they dont expectlike cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean 8. _the floors. If this doesnt work , bring in friend that you 9. _feel comfortable,
3、and have him or her help you.10. _答案及解析1. 此行无错。2. got 改为get。通读全篇， 可知道本文基本时态应为一般现在时。3. Remembering 改为 Remember。本句为祈使句， 表示建议， 主语省略。4. they 改为 it。they 前为转折连词 but， 表明其后为一个句子， 这里应用 it 代表前面整个句子。如： Toms mother kept telling him that he should study harder， but it didnt help。此处的代词 it， 代替“Toms mother kept tel
4、ling him that he should study harder”这一句子的内容。5. life 改为 lives。这是考查名词的数， life 是可数名词单数， 句子主语用的是they， 与其一致应用lives。6. 删去 for。因为 change 作“改换”讲时为及物动词。如： Can you change me one yuan note?你能兑换一元零钱给我吗?而 change for作“转换车到”解。如： Where should you change for Guilin? 你在什么地方转车到桂林去?7. any 改为 some。any 一般用于疑问句、 否定句、 条件从
5、句中， 而 some 一般用于肯定句中。此处为祈使肯定式， 故用 some。8. clean 改为 cleaning。应与 cooking， doing， washing 一致， 作介词宾语。9. friend 前加 a。friend 为普通可数名词单数， 其前应加不定冠词 a。10. comfortable 后加 with。comfortable with 意为“与自在/愉快”。例如：She feels comfortable with those who speaks English。她和讲英语的人谈话觉得很自在。短文改错I used to love science classall of
6、 them1. _biology, chemistry ,geography, physics. I think I 2. _liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 3. _understand what the world works. For example, when4. _I was a child , the rain was a mystery (奥秘). In one5. _class, I learned it rained. I think science classes 6. _clear up myster
7、ies. But then there is always more 7. _mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class? 8. _That was maths. After learn the basics of the subject, 9. _nothing else seemed very practically to me . I never 10._saw how I could use it in my daily life.答案及解析1. class 改为 classes。class 为可数名词， 根据下文， 这里
8、 class 为复数， 故改为 classes。2. 此行无错。3. it 改为 they。这里指代上文的 those classes。4. what 改为 how。work 此处为不及物动词， 不可用连接代词 what 作宾语， 只可用连接副词 how 作状语。5. 删去 rain 前的 the。此处 rain 为泛指。6. it 前加 why。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在课上， 我明白了天为什么会下雨”。7. is 改为 are。8. look 前加 to。需用不定式作定语。9. learn 改为 learning。此处 after 为介词， 后需用动名词作宾语。10. practica
9、lly 改为 practical。seem 在此句中作系动词， 其后应用形容词作表语。【2014高考英语湖北省汉阳市联考试题】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）请根据以下提示并结合一个事例，就“潜能无限”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。As we all know, ones potential is limitless. Especially in times of crisis, you can never imagine how powerful ones potential will be. Therefore, its unwise to set limits to your potenti
10、al. 注意：1） 不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；2） 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数120以上。 【参考范文】Potential is limitlessIts universally acknowledged that a persons potential is limitless. When exposed to various pressure or challenges, many people will be sceptical of themselves, thinking they are incapable. Perhaps, never have they
11、 realized how powerful a persons potential will be.An interesting story will never fade from my memory though I heard of it many years ago. An injured soldier was informed that he would spend his rest life on the wheelchair. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in drink ever
12、y day. It never rains but pours.One day, hardly had he got out of a pub when he was robbed by three guys. Unwilling to give in, he struggled against them, however, which set off the robbers anger and therefore they set fire to his wheelchair. Just when the big fire was endangering his life, he sudde
13、nly jumped out of his wheelchair and ran through a whole street swiftly. Then he stopped to take breath, only to find that he should walk and even run normally.The story makes me firmly believe that our potential is limitless. Consequently, its of vital importance for us to spread the wings of our m
14、ind and grow our potential to the fullest. 第2套短文改错When I first learned to write in English， I ran into 1. _many difficulties. The main problem was in that I 2. _always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _I followed her advi
15、ce and should put down 100 words 5. _or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _One day I wrote a little story and showed to my 8. _teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _They all said the story was
16、 a good one. Their word were 10. _a great encouragement to me.答案及解析1. 此行无错。2. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构， 此处为表语从句。3. anything 改为 everything。此处为肯定句， anything 意为“任何一件事”， 侧重个体； 而 everything 意为“一切事情”， 侧重整体。4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语， 意为“记日记”。5. 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。6. talk 改为 talking。enjoy do
17、ing 为固定用法。故此处必须用动名词作宾语。7. me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。8. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词， 后面应接宾语。9. reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。10. word 改为 words。根据句意， 此处应为“他们的话语， ”用 words。短文改错My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.He did not want share things with other people. For
18、 1._example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 2._in a secret place where I couldn t find it. Then he 3. _ate it all by himself. He never helped other. 4. _He said he is busy. That is, a game of 5. _tennis making him very busy. He did not care 6. _if something he did made people angry. Fo
19、r 7. _instance, on one night he played strong and 8. _loudly music till four oclock in the morning. But 9. _he is difference now. He often helps grandma 10._with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps hisclassmates with their lessons.答案及解析1. want 后加 to。want to do sth. 为固定搭配。2. them 改为 it。依据上下文，
20、 前句 a chocolate cake 为可数名词单数， 后边的代词显然用 it， 而不是 them。3. where 改为 which/that 或删去 where。此为定语从句， 先行词 place在从句中作 find 的宾语， 只能用关系代词 which 或 that 或省略。4. other 改为 others 。不定代词 other 指另一个， 而 others 指另一些。5. 第一个 is 改为 was。此题考查动词的时态。6.making 改为 made。本句缺少谓语， 需要把making 改为 make 的一般过去时态。7. 此行无错。8. 删去 on。one night 前
21、不需要任何介词。9. loudly 改为 loud。loudly 是副词， 此处修饰名词 music， 应用形容词。10. difference 改为 different。应用形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。【2014高考英语吉林省实验中学一模试题】书面表达（满分 25分）作文：最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论.讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况.60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1.不应收门票1.应收门票，但票价不宜高2.公园是公众休闲的地方2.支付园林工人工资3.如收票,需建大门,围墙,会影响城市形象3.购新花木注意: 1
22、. 信的开头已为你写好. 2. 词数: 100 左右. 3. 参考词汇: 门票- entrance fees【参考范文】Dear editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60 of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public
23、 park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40 think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly Li Hua
