1、2013版英语高考专题辅导与训练精练精析（大纲版）：专题强化测评（二十四）短文改错、书面表达（四）(限时45分钟/每组)（一）第一节: 短文改错（1）The Internet is an useful tool and you can do a lot1. _of thing on it. For example, you can chat with some 2. _friends online. Some of them lived in another city3. _or even another country. Make friends online gives4. _you a
2、chance to get to know more people, so you5. _need to be very carefully about these friends. It is6. _important for you not to give much too information, 7. _like your phone number and so on. It may dangerous. 8. _Friends on the Internet can never take the place of9. _your friends in reality, who are
3、 important in my life. 10. _（2）While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. 1. _A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. He2. _took me off the bus, found out where the doctors office， 3. _and took me to there himself. The next day, he came 4. _to visit me. I didnt speak French well
4、, so I cant talk with5. _him very much. However, even if we couldnt talk, but 6. _we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks 7. _to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern 8. _for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned 9. _that communication can take place without muc
5、h actual language at all. 10. _第二节: 书面表达请根据下面提示写一篇短文，简要介绍网络红人朱之文。1. 一位勤劳的农民、才华横溢的歌唱家，轰动了全世界。2. 由于出身贫寒，他几乎没有受过正规的学校教育，但是却对音乐十分痴迷。不论风雨严寒，他总是在当地的小树林里纵情歌唱。3. 他心地善良，扶危济困。对周围的动物情有独钟，院子里的鸡、鹅成了他的忠实听众。4. 他的毅力和决心终于有了回报，继英国版的苏珊大妈之后，他获得了中国苏珊大叔的称号。苏珊大妈 Aunt Susan 苏珊大叔Uncle Susan要求：100词左右。（二）第一节: 短文改错（1）Dear Abby
6、， How are you？Today Ive got a wonderful news to tell you1. _I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my2. _farther educationOne hundred and twenty students took exams3. _for it，but only a few was chosen and I was one of themHowever，4. _my parents are not happy about itThey are s
7、trong against me5. _going thereThey say it is too far away that they will not see me6. _for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonelyThey7. _cant imagine a girl so young live aloneThey advise me to study8. _in the capital insteadThen Ill be able to continue living with9. _themHow can I
8、persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up？10. _Best wishes. Yours truly, Jane（2）My car just wouldnt move any further. It was complete1. _dead, and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold 2. _wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting Id3. _have to spend the night in
9、 the car. Maybe I can find a4. _telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before I5. _found a small house standing on a field with a light6. _shone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and7. _was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the8. _door but listened to my story carefully. He
10、 said he had9. _no telephone, and it wasnt one within walking 10. _distance, but offered to come and look at my car. 第二节: 书面表达假设你是李华，昨天你收到好友Mike的来信，他邀请你参加他的生日聚会，但你因故不能赴约，现在请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信：1. 表示歉意；2. 解释原因：照顾突然生病的父亲； 3. 邮寄一份生日礼物表示祝贺。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。_答案解析（一）第一节（1）1.【解析】ana 冠词使用错误。useful以
11、辅音音素开头。2.【解析】thingthings thing为可数名词。由a lot of可知此处应用复数形式。3.【解析】livedlive 从全文可知本文通篇使用的是一般现在时。4.【解析】MakeMaking 此处应用动名词作主语。5.【解析】sobut 此处应用but表转折。6.【解析】carefullycareful 此处应用形容词作表语。7.【解析】去掉too much too修饰形容词或副词，不能修饰名词information。8.【解析】may后加be。 句子缺少系动词。9. 10.【解析】myyour 人称指代错误。（2）1.【解析】traveledtraveling 该句为
12、省略结构。完整结构为 While I was traveling. . . 。2.【解析】well-dressingwell-dressed 穿着良好的。3.【解析】office后加was where the doctors office was 为宾语从句。4.【解析】去掉to there为地点副词，所以前面不需要加to。5.【解析】cantcouldnt 此处应为一般过去时。6.【解析】去掉but even if/even though不能和but连用。7.【解析】myselfmy my此处为形容词性物主代词作定语。8.【解析】tofor thank for sth. 为固定搭配。9.【解
13、析】healthyhealth my health意为“我的健康”。10. 第二节【参考范文】Zhu Zhiwen, a diligent farmer and brilliant singer, is really a hit throughout the world. Born in a poor family, he received almost no school education at all. However, he has wildly devoted himself to music. Regardless of wind, rain or cold, he has bee
14、n practising singing in the local forest. In addition to his devotion to music, he is also kind-hearted. Not only is he ready to help those in trouble, but also he has a great passion for animals. The hens and geese in his courtyard become his devoted audience. His persistence and determination have
15、 paid off with a famous title-the Chinese “Uncle Susan”, named after the English “Aunt Susan”. （二）第一节（1）1.【解析】去掉a news作“消息”讲时，是不可数名词，前面不用冠词a。“一条消息”是a piece of news。2.【解析】have后加been 本句的谓语动词要用被动形式。现在完成时的被动形式为“havebeen过去分词”。3.【解析】fartherfurther further education继续教育；进修。4.【解析】第一个waswere 这里a few后省略了复数名词s
16、tudents，谓语动词要用复数形式。5. 【解析】strongstrongly strong是形容词，不能修饰动词。这里要用副词strongly修饰句子的谓语are against。6. 【解析】tooso so. . . that. . . 是一个固定句型，意思是“如此以至于”。7.【解析】去掉of be afraid of后要接名词或代词，不能接从句。be afraid后接从句。8.【解析】liveliving imagine表示“想像，设想”，后面要接动名词作宾语。例如：Can you imagine him cooking the dinner？（你能想像他做饭的情形吗？）9. 10
17、.【解析】fact后加that 本句中I have grown up是名词fact的同位语从句，要用that引导， that不能省略。（2）1.【解析】completecompletely 词性分辨的错误。这里应该是副词修饰系表结构。2.【解析】去掉far 多余词汇的错误。a few miles已经表示了距离。3.【解析】walk前加to 非谓语动词形式的错误。动词 decide后接不定式而且to不省略。4.【解析】cancould 一致关系的错误。文章是叙述过去发生的事情，应用过去时。5. 6.【解析】onin 词语搭配的错误。in a field是习惯搭配。7.【解析】shoneshini
18、ng 非谓语动词形式的错误。结构with a light shining中宾语light和宾补之间是主动关系，用现在分词。8.【解析】delightingdelighted 非谓语动词形式的错误。这类词汇当主语是人时，应用过去分词作表语。9.【解析】butand 连接手段的错误。两个动作之间不是转折关系。10.【解析】itthere 这里应是表示“存在，有”的there be句型。第二节【参考范文】Dear Mike, First of all, thank you for inviting me to attend your birthday party. I would like to a
19、ccept your warm invitation but I cannot because of an unexpected thing. My father suddenly became ill this morning. The doctor said he would stay in hospital for five days. My mother has gone abroad and she will be back in seven days. So I have to stay there to look after him. Anyway, I feel sorry for disappointing you. Please wait to receive the surprising gift on your birthday which I have posted. Many happy returns of the day. Yours, Li Hua
