1、Module 3 The Violence of NatureSection Guided Writing自然灾害类文章写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导自然灾害或灾难性事件主要是指自然灾害或人类行为导致的灾难性事件。写作时,要说明灾害发生的时间、地点和危害以及对自然灾害的补救措施、经验教训和建议,注意要采用客观态度,避免主观色彩。亮点句式1灾害的发生:There was/is a terrible earthquake/flood in.A terrible earthquake/flood hit/struck.happened/took place/broke out.2灾害的影响:Tho
2、usands of people were made homeless.The disaster caused.deaths/injuries.The flood/earthquake caused great damage/losses to.3采取措施及建议:At present,fresh water,food and shelters are badly needed.Fortunately,international societies offered their helping hands shortly after the earthquakedonating clothes,f
3、ood and medicine.In the meantime,people nationwide are taking an active part in raising money for disaster areas.Measures have been taken to help.满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务根据以下提示用英语写一篇关于某地地震情况的文章。题目为“A Severe Earthquake”。受灾情况:1一万多人遇难,两万多人失踪;2地震引发海啸(tsunami)与核电站爆炸(a nuclear power station explosion);3引发很多问题:电力供
4、应短缺,还出现饮用水安全危机4经济损失:估计已超过 2 000 亿美元。注意:词数 100 左右参考词汇:救援队 rescue team;估计 estimate审题谋篇体裁说明文时态一般过去时为主 主题自然灾害人称第三人称 结构第一部分:遇难及失踪人数,引发海啸;第二部分:电力供应短缺,饮用水危机;第三部分:经济损失。遣词造句.对接模块词汇1发生2地震3对造成损失4灾难5造成occurearthquakecause damage todisastercause.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1一场强地震突袭,引发了很严重的海啸。A huge earthquake occurred sudde
5、nly,and 2更糟糕的是,出现了核电站爆炸,增加了人们的恐慌。_,there was a nuclear power station explosion,and it added to peoples panic.Whats worsesent a high tsunami(二)句式升级3用现在分词短语作结果状语升级句 14用非限制性定语从句升级句 2A huge earthquake occurred suddenly,sending a high tsunami.Whats worse,there was a nuclear power station explosion,which
6、added to peoples panic.妙笔成篇【参考范文】A Severe EarthquakeA huge earthquake occurred suddenly,sending a high tsunami,causing great damage to people there.According to the recent report,more than 10,000 were killed and over 20,000 were missing.Whats worse,there was a nuclear power station explosion,which a
7、dded to peoples panic.Though lots of countries sent many rescue teams to help them,they were still in trouble.The unexpected disaster resulted in plenty of problems,such as the shortage of electricity supply.Moreover,the nuclear power station explosion polluted the fresh water in some areas,which was unfit for babies to drink.But as days passed by,it was hoped that the situation would get better.As is estimated,this disaster has caused a loss of more than 200 billion dollars.英 美 文 化 欣 赏 点击右图进入 Thank you for watching!