1、Module 4 Sandstorms in Asia写作专项突破应用文：提出建议【题目要求】随着人类对自然资源的不断开发和利用，生态环境日益遭到破坏，环境保护刻不容缓。请以地球的口吻给人类写一封信，劝告人们要保护我们赖以生存的环境，并提出具体的建议。内容要点包括：1表达你对目前环境现状的担忧；2提出你的建议。注意：1.格式正确，条理清晰，书写认真；2词数 120 左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_一、构思谋篇二、关键词语对造成破坏do damage to.环境污染environmental pollution适合居住(be)suitable to live in再生材料recycled
2、materials环保的environment-friendly呼吁call upon三、连词成句1你们给我造成了那么多的破坏，以至于我得了很严重的病。Youve done so much damage to me that I have got a terrible disease.2树木在控制二氧化碳方面起着重要作用。Trees play an important role in controlling carbon dioxide.3节约用水可以使环境更适宜居住。Saving water can make the environment more suitable to live in.
3、4我认为使用再生材料是恢复自我健康的最好的办法。I think using recycled materials is the most useful way for me to recover.5我要呼吁越来越多的人向我伸出援手。Id call upon more and more people to give me a helping hand.四、连句成篇Dear humans，Do you know how I feel now?Youve done so much damage to me that I have got a terrible disease.Im suffering
4、 from environmental pollution.Im worried about my life in the future.My happiness depends on your activities which can protect the environment.First,it is generally believed that planting trees is an effective way to protect the environment.Trees play an important role in controlling carbon dioxide.
5、Second,saving water can make the environment more suitable to live in.For example,youd better turn off the tap in time when youre not using water while you are taking a shower.Finally,I think using recycled materials is the most useful way for me to recover.For example,whatever sport you do,you can
6、make it healthier by using environment-friendly equipment and buying products made from recycled materials.In a word,it is time for you to do something to protect me.Id call upon more and more people to give me a helping hand.I hope you will spare no effort to help me.Whatever measures you take,you
7、should try your best to do it better,for me,and also for yourselves.Yours sincerely，Earth【亮点点评】亮点一：本文以地球的口吻用书信的形式说明了地球受到破坏以及保护地球的方法，并呼吁更多的人行动起来参与环境的保护。文章思路清晰，结构完整。亮点二：信中、和恰当地运用了第一人称和第二人称，把人类与地球的命运紧密相连。亮点三：First、中的 Second 和中 Finally 的运用使行文更加有条理，思路更加清晰；动名词短语planting trees、中 saving water 和中 using recycled materials 的运用指出了具体的保护环境的措施和方法。亮点四：、用 for example 引出两个保护环境的实例，更加具体地说明了如何用实际行动保护环境。亮点五：文中成功运用了使文章结构更加紧凑的句子和短语。中 your activities 用来引出下一段介绍的人类哪些行为可以保护环境；In a word 用来总结并补充上文内容，呼吁人们行动起来，保护环境。
