1、浙江省2011年高考英语仿真模拟试卷3说明：1. 考试时间为120分钟，卷面满分为120分。 2. 请将答案写在答卷上，写在试卷上无效。第卷(共80分)第一部分:英语知识运用(共两节，满分30分) 第一节:单项填空(共20小题；每小题0.5分，满分10分) 从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。1. Hey, you havent been acting like yourself. Everything OK? _. A. Sure, it is B. Im fine, thanks C. Thats good D. Its a pleasu
2、re 2. A proverb says that _ new broom sweeps clean, but _ old one knows all the corners.A. a；the B. a; an C. the; an D. the ; a3. _ in the last examination, she was more confident of another success in the coming one.A. To succeed B. To have succeeded C. Having succeeded D. succeeding4. Could you te
3、ll me how to get to Victoria Street? Victoria Street? _ is where the Grand theatre is.A. Such B. There C. That D. This5. She was over the age limit and _, her application for the job was rejected.A. as a result B. in conclusion C. worse still D. whats more6. A report by the Chinese Academy of Social
4、 Science said _ among new graduates grew to over 12 percent last year at 1.5 million of the global economic crisis. A. disagreement B. enlargement C. unemployment D. encouragement7. The long and tiring talk, filled with arguments and quarrels, ended in disorder, _ no agreement at all.A. reaching B.
5、reached C. to reachD. being reached 8. Skipping breakfast can also cause you to overeat. To make matters worse, _ your body is in a slow state, it will not be able to burn the extra calories very efficiently.A. unless B. though C. since D. before9. Mum, I really think Dad should have a break and get
6、 relaxed.Yes. He _ too long.A. read B. has been reading C. had read D. is reading10. The central government is sparing no efforts to _ the officials overuse of power to make up a healthier party. A. keep off B. keep down C. keep out D. keep on11. I dont think Rosemary will be upset about it, but Ill
7、 go to see her in case she _.A. is B. will be C. does D. need12. Before its first voyage, _ that the ship Titanic was the most advanced and safest one in history. A. this was declared B. they were declaredC. it was declared D. that declared13. If it were not for Literature, the well-known writer J.K
8、. Rowling _nowhere in life.A. could go B. must go C. would have gone D. should have gone14. It was reported that as many as 50% of patients do not take medicine _ directed, _ has drawn doctors attention.A. when; it B. as; what C. as; which D. that; and15. Having retired from business, he now _ himse
9、lf with the welfare of the disabled.A. adapts B. charges C. associates D. occupies16. I expect everything will turn out as you wish. Thanks._. （原创） A. Of courseB. The same to you C. All right D. Its up to you17. The lawyer seldom wears anything other than a suit _ the season. （原创） A .wherever B. wha
10、tever C. whenever D. however18. Even on his last day at the White House -when the thinning hair and grey face of a cancer patient were so _-he stressed how much he loved his job . （原创）A. energetic B. enjoyable C. evident D. impressive19. In times of war, different parties tend to _ their political d
11、ifferences to fight against foreign invaders shoulder to shoulder. （原创） A. set up B. set down C. set aside D. set off20. Experts predict that the earthquake and tsunami will rank among the costliest natural disasters on record. （原创） A. clarify B. group C. separate D. rank第二节：完形填空（共20小题；每小题1分，满分20分）（
12、原创）阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从2140各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。One morning I wasted nearly an hour watching a tiny ant carry a huge feather. Several times, it came across several obstacles（障碍） in its 21 . And after a momentary pause it would make the necessary detour（绕道）. At one point, the ant had
13、 to cross a crack about 10mm wide. After some 22 thoughts, the ants laid the feather 23 the crack, walked across it and picked the feather up on the other side, then 24 on its way. I was attracted by the 25 of this ant. It was only a small insect, lacking in size yet 26 a brain to reason, explore, d
14、iscover and 27 . But this ant, like the other two-legged creatures living on the earth, also shares human 28 .After some time the ant finally reached its 29 a flower bed and a small hole that was the entrance to its 30 home. It was there that the ant met its 31 . How could that large feather possibl
15、y 32 such a small hole? Of course, It couldnt. So the ant, 33 all this trouble and using great brightness, overcoming problems all along the way, just 34 the feather and went home. The ant had not thought the problem through after it began its journey and in the end the feather was 35 more than a bu
16、rden. Isnt our 36 like that?We worry about our families; we worry about the 37 of money; and we worry about all kinds of things. These are all 38 the things we pick up along lifes path, and 39 them around the obstacles and over the cracks that life will bring, only to find that at the destination th
17、ey are 40 and we cant take them with us.21. A. holeB. familyC. lifeD. path22. A. rightB. shortC. magicD. tired23. A. onB. inC. overD. down24. A. continuedB. stoppedC. wanderedD. slept25. A. carefulnessB. bravenessC. clevernessD. cruelness26. A. equipped withB. offered withC. come up withD. worked wi
18、th27. A. beatB. overcomeC. succeedD. struggle28. A. happinessB. sadnessC. successD. failures29. A. wayB. endC. destinationD. place30. A. lonelyB. bigC. undergroundD. comfortable31. A. partnerB. matchC. friendD. parent32. A. fitB. suitC. holdD. fill33. A. beforeB. whenC. afterD. until34. A. picked up
19、B. gave upC. take upD. put up35. A. everythingB. nothingC. somethingD. anything36. A. studyB. dreamC. workD. life37. A. useB. wasteC. lackD. worth38. A. burdensB. worriesC. obstacleD. difficulties39. A. takeB. bringC. carryD. drag40. A. usefulB. uselessC. valuableD. practical第二部分：阅读理解（第一节20小题；第二节5小题
20、；每小题2分，满分50分）第一节：阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。A When someone gives you advice, listen without judgment, try to find value in what youre hearing, and say: “Thank you”. This wise advice is easy to understand yet hard to practice. Ill give you an example from my life when I totally
21、 blew it in terms of practising what I teach.In my work I travel constantly. I always put off going to the airport until the last second. My wife, Lyda, was sitting next to me in the front seat. I was racing along and not paying much attention. Lyda cried out! “Look out! There is a red light up ahea
22、d.”Being a trained behavioral science professionalwho teaches others the value of encouraging adviceI naturally screamed at her: “I know there is a red light up ahead! Dont you think I can see?” When we arrived at the airport, Lyda didnt speak to me. I wondered why she seemed mad at me.During the fl
23、ight to New York, I did a cost-benefit analysis. I asked myself: “What was the cost of just listening when Lyda called out the warning? Zero.” I then reasoned: “What was the potential benefit? What could have been saved?” Several potential benefits came to mind, including her life, my life, and the
24、lives of other people.20090507I landed in New York feeling ashamed of myself. I immediately called Lyda and told her my cost-benefit story. I convinced her: “The next time you help me with my driving, I am just going to say, Thank you.”A few months passed, and I had long forgotten the incident. Agai
25、n, I was racing off to the airport, when Lyda cried out: “Look out for the red light!” I was embarrassed, and then shouted: “Thank you!”Im a long way from perfect, but Im getting better. My suggestion is that you get in the habit of asking the important people in your life how you can do things bett
26、er. And be ready for an answer. Some people may tell you things like “Look out for the red light.” When this happens, remember that there is possibly some potential benefit. Then just say: “Thank you.”41. What do we know about the author?A. He is expert at behavioral science.B. He is gifted in cost-
27、benefit analysis.C. He seldom takes his wifes advice.D. He often runs the red traffic light.21世纪教育网21世纪教育网42. The underlined part “blew it” in Paragraph 1 probably means “ ”.A. became annoyed with the adviserB. forgot the practical methodC. failed to say “Thank you”D. lost personal judgment43. It ca
28、n be inferred from the passage that people .A. tend to be defensive when given adviceB. intend to follow others suggestionsC. had better study behavioral scienceD. should give their opinions patiently44. The purpose of the passage is to advise people to .A. do a cost-benefit analysis in daily life B
29、. treasure others suggestionsC. learn from the authors experiences D. discover potential benefits BHere are some of the worlds most impressive subwaysThe Tokyo Metroand Toei LinesFeatures: The Tokyo Metro and Toei lines that compose Tokyos massive(庞大的)subway system carry almost 8 million people each
30、 day, making it the busiest system in the world. The system is famous for its oshiya literally, “pusher” who pushes passengers into crowded subway cars so the doors can close. And you think your commute (上下班路程) is hell. The Moscow MetroFeatures: The Moscow Metro has some of the most beautiful statio
31、ns in the world. The best of them were built during the Stalinist era and feature chandeliers(枝形吊灯), marble moldings and elaborate murals(精美的壁画). With more than 7 million riders a day, keeping all that marble clean has got to be a burden.The Hong Kong MTRFeatures: The Hong Kong MTR has the distincti
32、on of being one of the few subway systems in the world that actually turns a profit(利润). Its privately owned and uses real estate development along its tracks to increase income and ridership. It also introduced “Octopus cards” that allow people to not only pay their fares electronically, but buy st
33、uff at convenience stores, supermarkets, restaurants and even parking meters. Its estimated that 95 % of all adults in Hong Kong own an Octopus card.Shanghai MetroFeatures: Shanghai is the third city in China to build a metro system, and it has become the countrys largest in the 12 years since it op
34、enedShanghai Metro has 142 miles of track and plans to add another 180 miles within five years. By that .point, it would be three times larger than Chicago “L”. The system carries about 2.18 million people a day.The LondonMetroFeatures: Londoners call their subway the Underground, even though 55 per
35、cent of it lies above ground. No matter when youve got the oldest mass-transit system in the world, you can call it anything you likeTrains started in1863 and theyve been running ever since. Some 3 million people ride each day, every one of them remembering to “Mind the gap”.45. Which one can provid
36、e the riders some wonderful decorations at the stations? A. The Tokyo Metro and Toei Lines B. The Moscow MetroC. The London Metro D. The Hong Kong MTR46. _ is done with the purpose of making money A. The Tokyo Metro and Toei Lines B. The Moscow MetroC. The London Metro D. The Hong Kong MTR47. We can
37、 learn from the passage that Shanghai Metro_ A. carries the most people each day B. is the worlds largest C. may be larger than the Chicago “L” in the future D. is the busiest in the world48. How many subways carry more than 5 million people per day? A. 2 B. 3 C. 4 D. 549. What do we know about the
38、Hong Kong MTR?A. It is not owned by state.B. It has become the countrys largest subway since it opened.C. It carries the most people every day .D. It is the busiest system in the world. C (原创) The Friday after the American holiday of Thanksgiving is called Black Friday. Its said that its the day tha
39、t store ledgers(分类账)move into the black and companies become profitable.On that day, retailers slash prices to get consumers to buy. It is also a time when many Americans start their Christmas shopping. VOAs Elizabeth Lee tells us how the economy may affect consumers on that bargain day. This day sh
40、ould be a shoppers dream. “Its just the deals, the sales and everything you can get for a lesser price,” said Sandy Thomas, a shopper. But its a nightmare for others. “I think its crazy. Ive done all of my shopping throughout the week so I dont have to go out on Friday,” she said. Its called Black F
41、riday, the start of the traditional Christmas shopping season in the United States. Every year its the day after the Thanksgiving holiday. Stores open before sunrise and there are deep discounts everywhere you look.While the lead up to Christmas is known as the season of giving, Black Friday can get
42、 ugly.Last year a crowd of bargain-hunters killed a Wal-mart worker in a New York suburb. This year, many stores are increasing security while they slash prices. “This is a huge time for the retail stores,” said Fred Joutz from George Washington University. “This is when they begin making their prof
43、its for the year.”Economics professor Fred Joutz says how Americans spend the weekend after Thanksgiving is a good indication of how consumers feel about the future.With the unemployment rate above 10 percent, Joutz says Americans are saving more and spending less. “Credit is still strictly controll
44、ed whether through credit cards or through borrowing from banks,” he said. Some retailers are attracting consumers by opening on Thanksgiving Day, when shops are traditionally closed. Other stores open their doors anywhere from midnight to four in the morning.And shoppers will be lining up in front
45、of the doors in order to be one of the first ones to walk through and get a big discount. Electronics like flat screen TVs are usually the first items to go. Sandy Thomas says its an annual family tradition and well worth it. “I just save maybe half of what I would have spent on a regular, you know,
46、 shopping trip,” she said.Economists say U.S. consumers will spend money this Black Friday, but they will spend it more carefully. 50. By saying “This day should be a shoppers dream”, the writer means A. shoppers have longed for this day for a long time B. the shops will be very crowded on that day
47、C. the shops will keep open until the daybreak of next day D. shoppers can buy many items at low prices on that day51. Why are many stores increasing security according to the passage?A. Because there are too many people saving more and spending less.B. Because its a time when they begin making thei
48、r profits for the year.C. Because last year a crowd of bargain-hunters caused an accident.D. Because many stores open their doors from midnight to four a.m.52.From the passage we know that_A. Christmas shopping is traditional time and this year it is no exception.B. Electronics like flat screen TVs
49、are usually least discounted.C. The economy only affects consumers on that bargain day.D. Thanksgiving is a good indication of how consumers feel about the future.53. We can find this passage in A. a science fiction B. a travel brochure C. newspaper D. a book on psychology54. Why American people cal
50、l it a black day? A. Because they organise activities in honor of some great person. B. Because there are too many people going out shopping for Christmas. C. Too many people are celebrating Thanks giving.D. The sky is black that day.D“Mom, I have cancer.”These four words catapulted my son and me on
51、 a journey that lasted two years. On that dat I felt a wave of paralyzing fear.Scott was the oldest of my four children. He was 33 years old and a successful assistant principal at SamRayburn Hifht School in Pasadena, Texas. He and his wife Carolyn were busy raising four active children. Scott was 6
52、2, weighed 200 pounds and had never been sick a day in his life.A few month earlier a mole（痣） on his neck had changed color. “Dr.Warner called,” Scott said that spring morning. “Its melanoma.（黑素瘤）” I tried to comfort him, naming all the people I knew who had survived skin cancer. Yet, I felt small t
53、entacles of fear begin to wrap around my chest.Our next stop was MDAnderson, the famous cancer hospital in Houston. Scott had surgery at the end of May and was scheduled for radiation treatments over the summmer recess. “There is an 80 percent chance it wont reoccur,” the doctors said. At the end of
54、 summer, all his tests came back negative and Scott was back at school in the fall. However, in December, Scott discovered a lump on his neck. It was examined and the result came back “malignant.（恶性的）” We now relized that Scott fell into the 20 percent category. I could feel the tentacles tightening
55、 around my chest. He entered the hospital for an aggressive treatment, a combination of interferon and interleukin.After five months of treatment, he had radical surgery on his neck. The test results were encourging, only three of the 33 lymph nodes（淋巴结） removed were malignant. We were very hopefull
56、.For the next six months, Scotts follow-up visits went well. Then in October, X-ray revealed a spot on his lung. The spot was removed during surgery and the doctors tried to be optimistic. It was a daily battle to control the fear and panic each setback brought.In January, he was diagnosed as having
57、 had a “disease explosion.” The cancer had spread to his lungs, spine and liver and he was given three to six months to live. There were times during this period when I felt like I was having a heart attack. The bands constricting my chest made breathing difficult.When you watch your child battle ca
58、ncer, you experience a roller coaster of emotions. There are moments of hope and optimism but a bad test result or even an unusual pain can bring on dread and panic.Scott was readmitted to the hospital for one last try with chemotherapy. He died, quite suddenly, just six weeks after his last diagnos
59、is. I was completely destroyed. I had counted on those last few months.The next morning I was busy notifying people and making funeral arrangements. I remember having this nagging feeling that something was physically wrong with me. It took a moment to realize that the crushing sensation in my chest
60、 was gone. The thing every parent fears the most had happened. My son was gone. Of course, the fear had been replaced by unbearable sorrow.After you lose a child, it is so difficult to go on. The most minimal tasks, combing your hair or taking a shower, becoming monumental. For months I just sat and
61、 stared into space. That spring, the trees began to bloom; flowers began to pop up in my garden. Friendswood was coming back to life but I was dead inside. During those last weeks, Scott and I often spoke about life and death. Fragments of those conversations kept playing over and over in my mind.“D
62、ont let this ruin your life, Mom.”“Make sure Dad re models his workshop.”“Please, take care of my family.”I remember wishing I could have just one more conversation with him. I knew what I would say, but what would Scott say? “I know how much you love me, Mom. So just sit on the couch and cry.” No,
63、I knew him better than that. Scott loved life and knew how precious it is. I could almost hear his voice saying, “Get up Mom, Get on with your life. Its too valuable to waste.”That was the day I began to move forward. I signed up for a cake decorating class. Soon I was making cakes for holidays and
64、birthdays. My daughter-in-law told me about a writing class in Houston. I hadnt written in years, but since I was retired I decided it be time to start again. The local college advertised a Life Story Writing class that I joined. There I met women who had also lost their children. The Poet Laureate
65、of Texas was scheduled to speak at our local Barnes and Noble. I attended and joined our local poetry society. I never dreamed that writing essays and poems about Scott could be so therapeutic. Several of those poems have ever been published. In addition, each group brought more and more people into
66、 my life.I dont believe you ever recover from the loss of a child. Scott is in my heart and mind every day. However, I do believe you can survive.Scott fought so bravery to live and he never gave up. He taught me that life is a gift that should be cherished, not wasted. It has taken years to become
67、the person I am today. The journey has been a difficult , painful process but certainly worth the effort and I know that my son would be proud.55. What might be the best title of the passage ?A. Life is valuable B. Grieving and RecoveryC.Love and sorrow D. Alive or dead56. How old was Scott probably
68、 when he died? A. 33 B. 35 C. 37 D. 4057. What does the underlined sentence “ The bands constricting my chest made breathing difficult” probably imply?A. It implies that Scotts mother was likely to have a heart attack.B. It implies that there was something wrong with Scotts mothers chest.C. It impli
69、es that Scotts mother was very upset and panic because of Scotts severe illness.D. It implies that the cancer had spread to her chest just like her son.58. Which of the following statements best shows the authors feeling about Scotts dath?A. It was a daily battle to control the fear and panic each s
70、etback brought.B. She felt a wave of fear.C. She felt a feeling of fear begin to wrap around her chest.D. The fear had been replaced by unbearable sorrow.59From Scott and his mothers conversation, we can know that Scott is _.A. considerable B. humorous C. determined D. sensitive60The author intends
71、to tell us that_.Ait takes a long time to make a person recover from the shock of losing a childBScott is proud of his motherClife is full of happiness and sorrow.DWed better make our life count instead of counting your days.第二节：信息匹配 (共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分)以下是网站提供的信息，请阅读以下上网者的信息，然后匹配上网者和他她要查询的网站A. http:/
72、www.k12.wa.us/: This is a web site for the state office of the superintendent(负责人) of Public Instruction with extensive information about individual schools and districts, including: an archive(档案)of demographic( 人口的)information, and a breakdown of the states academic standards.B. http:/www.just4kid
73、s.org/en/washington/: Student achievement data for every school in the state can be found at the web site. Researchers use test-score data to measure each schools “opportunity gap”, or the difference between a schools performance and the average of the highest-performing schools in the state with si
74、milar or more challenging student populations.C. http:/www.fwps.org/cur/plc/: Is your child learning everything he should know in kindergarten , first grade and beyond? Many districts have further improved the states broad academic standards with more specific grade-level standards. The Federal Way
75、School District offers a complete list of specific learning expectations by grade level on its web site. Select the grade you are interested in under “grade-level expectations.”D. http:/www.washingtonpave.org/: Check out the web page for Washington Parents are vital in Education, which works to prom
76、ote independence and future opportunities for people with disabilities.E. http:/www.naeyc.org/: The National Association for the Education of Young Children offers many free and low-cost publications(出版物)that discuss the care and education of children.F. http:/www.talaris.org/: the Talaris Institute
77、 studies early brain development in children from birth to age five. The institutes duty is to sponsor scientific studies on early brain and behavioral development and then translate the research finding into useful tools and information for parents, caregivers and others.61.Jack. has a son who is s
78、tudying in grade one. As a father, he wants to know how to help him meet the grade level learning expectations.62.Margaret. is a young mother whose son has some trouble with his legs. She needs to look through web sites to find out how to help her son help himself.63.Alice. is a mother whose daughte
79、r is now at school. She wants to learn how to care about and educate her children without any payment.64.Peter. is an education researcher and he wants to learn about what differences exist between schools. And he is longing for the test-score data of the students.65.Lynne.has a two-year-old child.
80、She wants to find something about childs development in brain and behavior.第卷（共40分）第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）（原创）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文，文中共有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（），并在该词下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改1
81、0处，多者（从11处起）不记分。例如：It was very nice to get invention to spend weekend with you. Luckily theI was completely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at am around 8 pm in am onFriday evening. Attention please,everyone. We have accepted the weather forecast on the radio this morning that
82、there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure shut the windows and doors untilyou leave your classrooms. A sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow will beput off. After it becomes fine, we will make other announcement. They will have classes onWednesday as usual. Since it is colder tomorrow,
83、 please dress on more clothes in time.Those who came to school by bike, dont keep your umbrella open while riding.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）（根据2010.江苏卷改编）假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下列信息，用英语写一篇发言稿。1、 对自己英语学习情况的简单介绍，包括学习英语的目的、方法、课外自学的途径。2、 对自己学习英语的长远打算。3、 对学校的英语教学提出建议。注意：1、 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词。2、 文中不得提及考生所在
84、的学校和本人姓名。Dear teachers and schoolmates, its a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you._Thank you for listening.2011年高考模拟试卷 英语参考答案及评分标准一、 单项选择：（每小题0.5分，共10分）1 5 BBCCA 610 CACBB 1115 ACCCD 1620 BCACD二、 完型填空：（每小题1分，共20分）2125 DBCAC 2630 ABDCC 3135 BACB
85、B 3640 DCADB 三、 阅读理解：（每小题2分，共50分）4144 ACAB 4549 BDCAA 5054 DCACB 5560 BBCDAD6165 CDEBF四、 短文改错：（每小题1分，共10分）Attention please,everyone. We have accepted the weather forecast on the radio this receivedmorning that there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure shut the windows and doors until be to wheny
86、ou leave your classrooms. A sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow will beput off. After it becomes fine, we will make other announcement. They will have classes on another WeWednesday as usual. Since it is colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time. putThose who came to school b
87、y bike, dont keep your umbrella open while riding. come umbrellas五、书面表达：（满分30分）一、评分原则1、本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响
88、交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点：(略)三、各档次的给分范围和要求：第五档次（很好）：（25-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖所有内容要点。-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）（19-24分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致。-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使
89、全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（13-18）基本完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（712分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。-语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。-较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（1-6分）未完成试题规
90、定的任务。-明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。-较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少、无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。四、说明1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分One students possible version:Dear teachers and schoolmates, its a great pleasure for me to be here today and s
91、hare my experience of learning English with you. As is known to us all, English is playing a more and more significant role in our daily life.Ive tried every means in English learning throughout these years with the popose of passing the entrance exam and communicating with foreigners in the long ru
92、n. To my delight, Ive made great progress with the help of my teachers. The most important way of learning English, I think, is listening and reading. Apart from reading the texts and materials given by our English teachers, I also spend a great deal of time reading English magazines and newspapers,
93、 say, 21Century. Of course, keeping diaries contribute a lot to my English learning.Nothing is difficult to a willing heart. My dream is to be an English teacher,so English has become part of my life.I hope my dream can come true one day .As for my suggestions to our schools English teaching, a good English speaking atmosphere is important to improve both teachers and studentsspeaking and listening. So such activities as “English Corners” ,where students are encouaged to take part, are benefical to us. Thank you for listening.
