1、浙江慈溪市2016高考英语短文改错二轮基础演练（3）及答案2016高考训练：短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Jack,How is everything going recently? Im writing to tell you something
2、more about my birthday. The other day we hold a party to celebrate my 18th birthday. I received many presents from my friends and parents, including cards, books, CDs or so on. During the party we sang and danced, having good time. I thanked my friends for his help and company. At the meantime, I sh
3、owed my sincere appreciation to my parents for bringing me up. Now I grow up, that means I should shoulder more responsibilities. Ill try my best to share more houseworks to reduce their burden. Its high time that I do something to repay them.How did you celebrate your 18th birthday? Im looking forw
4、ard to hear from you soon.Yours Sincerely Li Jin短文改错：Dear Jack,How is everything going recently? Im writing to tell you something more about my birthday. The other day we hold a party to celebrate my 18th birthday. I received many heldpresents from my friends and parents, including cards, books, CDs
5、 or so on. During the andparty we sang and danced, having good time. aI thanked my friends for his help and company. At the meantime, I showed my sincere their Inappreciation to my parents for bringing me up. Now I grow up, that means I should whichshoulder more responsibilities. Ill try my best to
6、share more houseworks to reduce their houseworkburden. Its high time that I do something to repay them. did(或do前加 should)How did you celebrate your 18th birthday? Im looking forward to hear from you soon.hearingYours Sincerely Li Jin2016高考英语选练 (2015新课标全国)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the cit
7、y.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already becom
8、e a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.1解析考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。答案第2句：thinkthought2解析考查冠词的用法。in the countryside (在乡村)为固定
9、短语。答案第3句：countryside前加the3解析考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。答案第4句：orand4解析考查介词的用法。with the development of.为一固定短语，意思是“随着的发展”。答案第5句：onwith5解析考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。答案第6句：去掉been6解析考查形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。答案第6句：seriouslyserious7解析考查不可数名词
10、的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。答案第7句：airsair8解析考查代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数，故用many。答案第8句：MuchMany9解析考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。答案第9句：foundfind10解析考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。答案第9句：yourour短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面
11、写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Well never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers.It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers，grass and
12、trees anywhere.We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot.We understood them farther.On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we have a very good day.We really hoped that we could get more chances of leave school and learn social
13、 experience.答案：Well never forget the day my classmates and I paid a visit to a factory last week.It was a one with nearly 2,000 workers.It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers，grass and trees .We also visited some workshops and saw workers very hard.We talked with them and learned a lot
14、.We understood them .On the way home we felt .We all thought that we a very good day.We really hoped that we could get more chances leave school and learn social experience.模拟短文改错N Of all my teachers ,Mr. Moore is the one who impress me 1_most. He is 34, so he looks young for his age. And hes one of
15、 2_the most popular teacher in our school. Mr. Moore pays more 3_attention to his way of teaching, comparing with other teachers. 4_He tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively. 5_In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but understand 6_“why”. So, instead giving us answers
16、 immediately, he encourages us 7_to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, 8_weve learned from how to settle problems. He leads us to such a 9_wonderful world of “why” as we all admire and respect him. 10_【参考答案及解析】1. impress改为impresses考查主谓一致。此处先行词one前有the，故其后定语从句的谓语动词应和on
17、e保持一致，用单数。 2. so改为but考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处应为转折关系。 3. teacher 改为teachers 考查名词的单复数。根据句中的one of 可知，后面的名词应用复数形式。4. comparing改为compared 考查固定短语。和。相比应用compared with/to。 5. actively改为active考查形容词的用法。此处make 后接形容词作宾补。6. 正确 经分析本句正确。7.instead后加of考查固定短语。根据后面的giving可知，其前应用介词of。8. myself改为ourselves考查代词指代一致。根据文意反身代词应和us相
18、一致。故用ourselves。 9. 去掉from考查动词的用法。learn from意为：向。学习，此处不合文意。10. as改为that 考查固定句型。此处考查such。that。句型。短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Some people
19、prefer to living in a city rather than in a country.There are several reasons.Firstly，a city can provide more opportunity to people who want to realize their dreams.Secondly，the city life，that offers people tall buildings，huge departments and another facilities，attracted millions of people.Thirdly，l
20、eading a city life means living in comfort.Under the help of buses and subways，people find life there much easily.This is why more and more people choose to live in a city.答案：Some people prefer to in a city rather than in country.There are several reasons.Firstly，a city can provide more people who want to realize their dreams.Secondly，the city life， offers people tall buildings，huge departments and facilities， millions of people.Thirdly，leading a city life means living in comfort. the help of buses and subways，people find life there much . is why more and more people choose to live in a city.
