1、Section Writing兴趣爱好类说明文本单元的写作话题是“描写最喜欢的运动”,在体裁上属于说明文。描写自己或他人的兴趣或爱好的一项运动时,应主要使用说明的方法,也可以穿插一些记叙和议论。写这类作文,要注意说明的语言和顺序。一、注意事项1结构:在结构上,宜采用三段式,即总分总的结构。先说明自己最喜欢的运动,然后说明最喜欢的理由,即该项运动带来的好处,最后作一个简单的总结。2时态:通常用一般现在时,具体情况具体分析,采用恰当的时态。3语言:运用生动形象、简洁明了的语言。二、基本结构1开头对某项运动的总体认识。2主体描述该项运动的运动规则,中间可适当加些议论。3结尾该项运动的好处。三、增分佳
2、句(一)开头部分1Of all the sports, I like basketball best.在所有的运动中,我最喜欢篮球。2Volleyball is my favorite sport.排球是我最喜欢的运动项目。3If you ask me which sport I like best, I have to say the swimming.如果你问我最喜欢哪项运动,我必须说是游泳。4The first time I saw pingpong, I fell in love with it.我第一次看到乒乓球运动,我就喜欢上了它。(二)主体部分1I like playing ba
3、sketball because it is like our lives full of competition.我喜欢打篮球,因为打篮球就像我们的生活一样充满了竞争。2The reason why I like jogging is that it is a moderate exercise.我喜欢慢跑是因为它是一项温和的运动。3At the age of 10, I showed great interest in basketball.十岁时,我就对篮球有了极大的兴趣。4Whenever I have time, I will go to the playground to prac
4、tice running.我一有空就去操场上练习跑步。5Im planning to take part in a pingpong club, where I can learn a lot from others.我打算参加一个乒乓球俱乐部,在那里我可以向别人学习许多东西。(三)结尾部分1I hope in the future I can compete in the Olympic Games as a swimmer.我希望在将来我能作为一名游泳运动员参加奥运会。2I really want to be a basketball player in the national bask
5、etball team when I grow up.当我长大后我非常想进入国家篮球队。3I become more and more stronger and healthier by playing football.通过踢足球我变得越来越强壮和健康。题目要求请根据以下要点,以“The sport I like best”为题用英语写一篇短文。1乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一项艺术;2有人认为打乒乓球不用花力气,我却不这么认为;3打乒乓球时,我们需要判断球的方向,并用力把它打回去;4打乒乓球时,你还会发现球快速运动,运动员的动作也很美;5虽然我打乒乓球打得不是很好,但是我对这项运动很感兴趣
6、,它能使我们强身健体。注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。The sport I like bestOf all the sports, I like table tennis best. 第一步:审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁:本文为说明文;2确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第一人称;3确定时态:本文的主要时态应用一般现在时。二、构思开头:对乒乓球的总体认识。主体:乒乓球的运动规则。结尾:打乒乓球的好处。第二步:核心词汇想周全1not only.but also.不但而且2strength 力气;力量3judge 判断4directio
7、n 方向5hit it back 把它打回去6build up our bodies 使我们强身健体第三步:由词扩句雏形现1我认为乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一项艺术,因为它是需要力气和技巧的。I think it is a sport and an art, because it needs strength and skill.2有人认为打乒乓球不用花力气,我却不这么认为。Some people think that playing table tennis needs little strength, but I dont think so.3打乒乓球时,我们需要判断球的方向,并用力把它
8、打回去。When we play table tennis, we should judge the direction of the ball, and hit it back with great strength.4一场比赛过后,如果你尽力的话你会感到很累。After one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best.5打乒乓球时,你还会发现球快速运动,运动员的动作也很美。In the game, you can often find the ball moving quickly, and the players m
9、ovements are very beautiful.6虽然我打乒乓球打得不是很好,但是我对这项运动很感兴趣,我认为它能使我们强身健体。I cant play table tennis very well; I still show great interest in it. I think it can build up our bodies.第四步:句式升级造亮点1用not only.but also改写句1,同时要包含一个定语从句I think it is not only a sport but also an art, because it is a game that needs
10、 strength and skill.2用状语从句的省略改写句3When playing table tennis, we should judge the direction of the ball, and hit it back with great strength.第五步:过渡衔接联成篇The sport I like bestOf all the sports, I like table tennis best. I think it is not only a sport but also an art, because it is a game that needs stre
11、ngth and skill.Some people think that playing table tennis needs little strength, but I dont think so. When playing table tennis, we should judge the direction of the ball, and hit it back with great strength so that we can win the game. So after one game you will be very tired if you have tried you
12、r best. However, as a sport, I think it is more like an art. In the game, you can often find the ball moving quickly, and the players movements are very beautiful.Though I cant play table tennis very well, I still show great interest in it. I think playing table tennis can build up our bodies, keep us healthy and train our brains.