1、第2讲 应用文(二)(邀请信&道歉信&申请信)【典例】(2020浙江1月高考)假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友 George 写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间;2.演讲话题;3.报名方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_ _ 技法探究素养提升【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:邀请信(2)时态:一般将来时和一般现在时(3)人称:第二、三人称(4)要点:比赛时间;演讲话题;报名方式。【要点盘点】1.第一段点题:邀请对方参加外国学生中文演讲比赛Im writing to _(邀请你来参加一个即将举办的中文演讲比赛).2.第二段主体段落展开:比
2、赛时间、演讲话题、报名方式比赛时间地点The competition _(将于1月17日下午6点在学校演讲大厅举行).invite you to participate in a Chinese Speech Contest to be heldwill be held in the school lecture hall at 6 p.m.on January 17演讲话题The theme of the competition is“_(中国传统文 化)”.报名方式Please _(1月15日前登录学校网站报名).Traditional Chinese Culturesign up for
3、 it on the school website before January 15th3.第三段期待参加与祝愿_(期待你的参与)._(祝你成功)!Looking forward to your involvementWish you great success【我来升级】1.句用非谓语动词形式增加邀请George的原因,即George的优势_.2.用同义短语代替句的谓语部分_.Knowing you are quite fluent in Chinese,Im writing to invite you toparticipate in a Chinese Speech Contest t
4、o be heldThe competition is scheduled in the school lecture hall at 6 p.m.on January173.以介词短语的形式将句与句组成一个句子_.4.句增加条件状语从句,使语气更加委婉_.5.将句和句用and连接组成并列句_!On the theme of“Traditional Chinese Culture”,the competition is scheduledin the school lecture hall at 6 p.m.on January 17If you are interested in it,pl
5、ease sign up for it on the school website beforeJanuary 15thLooking forward to your involvement and wish you great success【五档满分范文】Dear George,Knowing you are quite fluent in Chinese,Im writing to invite you to participate in a Chinese Speech Contest to be held.On the theme of“Traditional Chinese Cul
6、ture”,the competition is scheduled in the school lecture hall at 6 p.m.on January 17.Undoubtedly,your outstanding presentation skills will allow you to win out in the contest.So if you are interested in it,please sign up for it on the school website before January 15th.Looking forward to your involv
7、ement and wish you great success!Yours,Li Hua 【阅卷老师点评】1.该题目写作时容易犯的错误:(1)时间地点不明确,作为被邀请人不明白何时何地参加。(2)活动安排要么写得过细过杂,不够条理;要么写得过于笼统,被邀请人不明白演讲比赛的主要特色和活动安排。(3)邀请对方报名参加的措辞过于生硬:Please sign up for it on the school website before January 15th.2.委婉建议的表示方式有:I hope you will not mind.I wonder if you could.It would
8、be nice to.Passage 1 (2020金华三模)假定你是李华,得知外教Mr Smith喜欢中国传统文化,你想邀请他到你家过端午节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:1.时间;2.一同过节的家人;3.活动。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。新题精练素养应用_ _ _ _ 【参考范文】Dear Smith,Glad to know you are interested in Chinese culture,Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival
9、 on May 5.Its traditionally a time for family reunion,so my parents and my brother will all be there.Well make zongzi together and have a big dinner.Well also race dragon boats in memory of Qu Yuan,which will surely leave a deep impression on you.Its really a nice opportunity to learn about this fes
10、tival.We do hope you can come.Yours,Li HuaPassage 2 假如你是李华,上周在外教Mr Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现,手机被收走。请给外教写一封道歉信,内容应包括以下要点:1.表示道歉;2.解释上课使用手机的原因;3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。注意:1.可适当添加细节使文章连贯,词数80左右;2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr Jackson,_ _ _ Yours sincerely,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mr Jackson,Im really sorry about my using the mo
11、bile phone in your class last week.Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.I know any word might sound a made-up excuse.But I didnt use the mobile phone for no reason.Last week I was trying to apply to some companies for my aunt,aged 48 and out of work,and that day,I got an o
12、ffer and they needed her further information immediately.Therefore,I had no other choicebut to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.I promise it will never happen again.But I do need my phone back to get in touch with others.Will you be kind enough to give it back to me?Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
