1、Section WritingSection Writing Write an e-mail answering questions.写一封回答对方遇到问题的电子邮件。阅读 Li Hua 写给 Su Hua 的信。假设你是 Su Hua,请根据信中的具体内容给 Li Hua 回复。注意:开头和结尾已经写好,词数不少于 150。Section Writing Dear Su Hua,I need your help.In last weeks oral English Competition,I was asked this question,“If you are asked to donat
2、e an hour every day,what would you do and why?”I just replied that I would use the hour to relax myself as we have been working very hard in school and that I would also use the hour to learn to play the piano as it has been my childhood dream.However,the judges commented that my answer to the quest
3、ion was not to the point.As a result,I didnt get the award as expected.Can you tell me why my answer was not to the point?How will you answer this question?Look forward to hearing from you.Best wishes,Li HuaSection Writing 思路提示 素材积累 实战成篇 这是一封回答对方遇到问题的电子邮件。写作时应注意以下几点:1.确定文体。这是一篇应用文,是学生熟悉的电子邮件。电子邮件的格式
4、同一般的书信,多用非正式语言。2.主体时态:一般现在时为主。3.主体人称:第一人称。4.内容要点:1)分析对方遇到的问题;2)你的回答。Section Writing 思路提示 素材积累 实战成篇 参考表达词汇:spend time doing sth.pick up rubbishget to the pointhelp sb.with too busy to do sth.be of some help to sb.常用句式:1).which has something to do with.2)If I were you,I would.3)First,.Second,.4)By doi
5、ng so,I not only.,but also.Section Writing 思路提示 素材积累 实战成篇 Dear Li Hua,Thank you for your email about the question“If you are asked to donate an hour every day,what would you do and why?”I agree with the judges that your answer is not to the point.From your reply,I can see you misunderstand the word“
6、donate”,which has something to do with helping others.You may get to the point if the question is put like this:“If you can spend an hour every day helping others,what would you do and why?”If I were you,I would answer the question like this.Section Writing 思路提示 素材积累 实战成篇“If I am asked to donate an
7、hour every day,I will do two things.First,I will spend half an hour walking around the school,picking up rubbish.As students we all wish to live and study in a clean environment.Second,I will use another half an hour to help my neighbours son with his lessons because his parents are too busy to do so.By doing so,not only can I help others,but also benefit a lot.”I hope my answer will be of some help to you.Best wishes.Su Hua
