1、雅安市20192022学年第一学期期末高一质量检测英语应用文写作汇编（共三年）154（2020雅安高一期末）假如你是李华，是星光中学一名高一学生，得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Teacher（ （最美老师），你想推荐你校的刘英老师。请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下：1. 介绍被推荐人（刘英老师）的基本信息（如外貌，性格等）；2. 说明推荐理由。注意 1.词数70左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；Dear Editor,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua155（2022雅安市高一期末）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友John发邮件询问你最喜爱的运
2、动，请给他写封回信，内容要点如下：1. 你最喜爱的运动是什么；2. 喜爱的原因;3. 这项运动给你带来哪些好处。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear John,_156（2021雅安市高一期末）假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Peter一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你寒假的打算，请你给他回封邮件。内容要点如下：1. 你的寒假打算：做一个关于社区的社会调查；读一些名著；.;2. 你做这些事的目的。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,_Yours,Li Hua154Dear Editor，
3、Im a senior high school student in Xing Guang Middle School and I happen to hear that you are hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Teacher. It is my great honor to introduce you one of my favourite English teachers, Liu Ying.First of all, Miss Liu , who is young, good-looking as well as
4、enthusiastic, always makes her class lively and interesting. Secondly, she is not only strict but also patient in her teaching. Whats more, she is always willing to help us with our problems. Last but not least, she is so easygoing that we are friends after school.Therefore, I here strongly recommen
5、d her to you with all my heart and I look forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua155One possible version:Dear John,Im delighted to hear from you. As for my favorite winter sport, nothing favors me more than figure skating.Actually, figure skating has fascinated me with its grace and skill
6、 since I was quite young, and I will never forget my first try. When I started to skate, my legs trembled as fear crept upon me. I fell many times. However, with the passion in heart, I kept my perseverance. Eventually, I was able to move smoothly by myself. Now, I keep skating as a way to relax and
7、 a reminder for courage. Whats your favorite winter sport? I am expecting your visit to Beijing in 2022, and then we can enjoy sports together. Looking forward to your reply.156Dear Peter,How is everything going? Ive been preparing for the final exams these days. In your letter, you asked me for my
8、plans on summer vacation. Now I am writing to share the details with you.To begin with, doing a survey about our community is my dream. I hold the belief that it will be a wonderful opportunity for me to gain some social experience. Besides, I intend to read some great books, which can broaden my ho
9、rizon. Finally, it is a great idea to visit my grandparents in the countryside. I really hope I can accompany my family during the vacation. What about your holiday plan? Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua评分原则：1. 本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3. 词数少于6
10、0从总分中减去2分，多写原则上不扣分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(1720)分完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全完成了试题规定的任务。第四档(
11、1316分)完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(912分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(58分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(14分)未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
