1、返回目录 Great People and Great Inventions of Ancient China Module 5 返回目录 Section Writing人物介绍返回目录 写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents 返回目录 写作技法指导人物介绍属于记叙文的写作范畴，写作时要围绕人物组织材料，同时还要注意所写短文中应该包括人物、时间、地点以及主要事件等内容。在介绍人物时要注意选用合适的时态，上下文衔接要做到自然流畅。返回目录 一、基本结构介绍人物的短文属于记叙文，时态通常是一般现在时。在结构上通常分三部分来写。第一部分：指明要介绍的人物是谁。第二部分：介绍人物的具体情况(如性
2、格、优点等)。第三部分：最后呼应文章开头，完美收尾。返回目录 二、增分佳句1给某人留下好印象：He leaves a good impression on/uponShe makes a good impression on/uponHe leaves me a good impression.2介绍优点：He is enthusiastic and full of energy.She is an active lady.She is very patient withHe has the following advantages.返回目录 佳作构建示例题目要求请 根 据 下 面 的 提 示
3、 写 一 篇 题 为“My New English Teacher”的短文。1李老师年轻，漂亮，热情，有活力；2讲课清楚，有耐心，总是鼓励我们；3她教我们刚刚两个星期，但已经成为最受我们欢迎的老师。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。返回目录 审题谋篇第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为介绍人物的_；2确定人称：本文的主要人称为_；3确定时态：以_为主。记叙文第三人称一般现在时返回目录 二、构思第一部分：指明要介绍的人是谁我的新英语老师：李老师。第二部分：详细描述李老师的性格特征、优点。第三部分：介绍李老师对我们的影响及我们对她的喜爱。返回目录 第二步：核
4、心词汇想周全1_ 印象2._热心的3_精力充沛4_ 对非常耐心5_鼓励6_避免7_尴尬的impressionenthusiastic full of energy be very patient with encourage avoid embarrassed 返回目录 8_犯错误9_活跃的10_受欢迎的make mistakes active popular 返回目录 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1李老师是一位年轻漂亮的女士。(主系表结构)2李老师热情、精力充沛。(主系表结构)3她总是鼓励我们，当我们犯错的时候会不让我们感到尴尬。(主谓宾结构；时间状语从句)Mrs Li is a beautifu
5、l young lady.Mrs Li is enthusiastic and full of energy.She always encourages us and avoids making us feelembarrassed even when we make mistakes.返回目录 4在她班上，每个学生都非常活跃。(主系表结构)5到目前为止，李老师教我们仅两个星期。(so far；主谓宾结构)6她已经是我们班最受学生欢迎的老师。(主系表结构)Every student is very active in her class.So far,Mrs Li has been teach
6、ing us for only two weeks.She has already become the most popular teacher with allof the students in our class！返回目录 7有李老师教我们，我能肯定我们会学到很多知识。(宾语从句；with 复合结构)I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs Liteaching us.返回目录 第四步：句式升级造亮点1用形容词作状语合并句 1 和句 22用 so 把句 3 和句 4 合并成一句话Mrs Li is a beautiful y
7、oung lady,enthusiastic and full ofenergy.She always encourages us and avoids making us feelembarrassed even when we make mistakes,so every student isvery active in her class.返回目录 3把句 5 和句 6 合并成 but 并列句So far,Mrs Li has been teaching us for only two weeks,but she has already become the most popular t
8、eacher with allof the students in our class！返回目录 第五步：过渡衔接连成篇My New English TeacherMrs Li is my new English teacher.She has left a very deep impression on me.Mrs Li is a beautiful young lady,enthusiastic and full of energy.Now I know that she is a really wonderful teacher.She explains everything clea
9、rly and is very patient with us.She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes,so every student is very active in her class.返回目录 So far,Mrs Li has been teaching us for only two weeks,but she has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class!I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs Li teaching us.
