1、经历感受类写作该类写作描述个人经历，常以短文或日记等文体呈现；以一般过去式为主，按照事件发展的顺序来记叙。可以用一些与时间相关的副词如then，later，next衔接句子。至于感受部分，同学们平时可以多积累相关的单词或短语。基本框架1开头(beginning)引出主题2主体(body)介绍事件3结尾(ending)发表感受常用词块1an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历2to my joy/delight 令我高兴的是3see sb. off为某人送行4a fiveday tour 为期五天的旅行5live a.life过着样的生活6win the first
2、 prize获得一等奖7think highly of高度赞扬8set a good example for sb.给某人树立好的榜样常用语句精彩开头1Last week I went to Mount Emei in Sichuan Province with my family.上周，我和家人去了四川省的峨眉山。2I will never forget the experience when I went to Beijing last year.我永远不会忘记去年去北京的经历。3Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I hear
3、d a loud noise.昨天晚上我正忙于准备考试，突然我听到一个很大的声音。正文佳句1On the hot afternoon of last Saturday，Li Yu went downtown and walked from one store to another.上周六炎热的下午，李玉去了市中心，从一家商店逛到另一家商店。2I looked in the direction of the call and saw a boy falling into the river.我朝呼喊的方向看去，看见一个男孩掉进河里。3Throwing the fishing pole，I das
4、hed over like an arrow，jumped into the river and swam very quickly towards the boy.我扔下钓竿，像箭一样冲了过去，跳进河里，飞快地向男孩游去。余味结尾1However，maybe all of my efforts are not made in vain.然而，也许我所有的努力都没有白费。2How I wish I could go back to enjoy middle school life once more!我多么希望我能再次回到中学生活中去！3But they will remain a happy
5、 memory all my life.但它们会成为我一生的快乐回忆。人人都在渴望幸福，人人都在感受幸福。请用英语写一篇短文，描述你体验幸福的一次经历，并谈谈你对幸福的理解。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。I still remember _学生习作I still remember the late afternoon when it was cold and showering.I didnt have an umbrella to shelter me from the heavy rain.I had to stand still and wait for my
6、father.My father finally arrived.I was about to rush home.I found that my English teacher，Miss Wang was also waiting for the rain to stop.I went to her and gave my umbrella to her.She accepted it.I smiled with happiness.点评：1要点不完整，只是叙述了一次经历，缺少对幸福的理解。2文章松散，缺少有效的衔接。3句式单一，没有复杂句式。升格作文I still remember the
7、 late afternoon when it was cold，and it was showering.Without an umbrella，I had to wait for my father.After seemingly long hours waiting，he arrived.I was about to rush home when I found my English teacher，Miss Wang was also waiting for the rain to stop.Without any hesitation，I gave my umbrella to he
8、r.Surprised but happy，she accepted it.Seeing Miss Wang walking in the rain with my umbrella，I smiled with happiness.In fact as long as we are willing to share，well find happiness everywhere.你校英文报正在举办主题为“A moving experience”的征文活动，你有意参加。请你用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次让你感动的经历，并谈谈你的感悟。注意：词数80左右。_【参考范文】Last Sunday，while
9、 eating in a restaurant，I noticed a bowl full of dumplings on the table next to ours.They must have been left by someone.Just then，an old man entered. Judging from his clothes，I believed he was poor.He saw the dumplings left on the table.Looking shy，he sat down and started eating. The others around
10、looked at him，puzzled，and some even laughed.However，after finishing the dumplings，he went up to the donation box on the counter，put one hundred yuan in it and left，which left us all shocked and ashamed.We shouldnt judge a person just from his or her appearance. A person with a loving heart is the richest in the world.
